that was a GREAT translation!!!! and to cap that you were self taught!!! thanks a lot for the translations, you made me realise lots of things there cause i never regarded xiao long nuu as being strong cause she only knew one type of martial arts(yangguo knew something like 5, at least i think).
and you mind giving me some pointers on how to actually selt teach your self in chinese, like i learn 3 words today and by tommorrow i forget 2 of them .