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    thanks a lot, Mandred. Truly appreciate it.

    I was thinking to include Kong Fung in the fanfic, but it might be too melodramatic to have both reunions at the same fic. I like to think that Kong Fung eventually ended up with Lok Wan, perhaps after a decade or so. Or perhaps after Li Sai Man's death, perhaps KF visited his grave and then eventually forgave him...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mandred Skavenslayer View Post
    Very well done. However, on a personal note I would have loved to see Kong Fung put in an appearance as well. Always wondered what happened to him.
    Regarding Kong Fung, he left the martial world after the fight with LSM. He would likely live in a cave by himself regretting his decision of leaving Sik Sik. He would watch the rainbow beside the river/lake after the rain.

    Quote Originally Posted by Icha Parvati View Post
    thanks a lot, Mandred. Truly appreciate it.

    I was thinking to include Kong Fung in the fanfic, but it might be too melodramatic to have both reunions at the same fic. I like to think that Kong Fung eventually ended up with Lok Wan, perhaps after a decade or so. Or perhaps after Li Sai Man's death, perhaps KF visited his grave and then eventually forgave him...
    I don't think Kong Fung would end up with Lok Wan, ever. He did not have any feeling for her in a romantic way. He always love Sik Sik even after her death. He told Lok Wan before she left her brother. I don't think Kong Fung will ever forgive LSM. LSM destroyed Ho Tin Mun, killed all his martial brothers, killed the love of his life Sik Sik, betrayed his friendship, etc.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Icha Parvati View Post
    thanks a lot, Mandred. Truly appreciate it.

    I was thinking to include Kong Fung in the fanfic, but it might be too melodramatic to have both reunions at the same fic. I like to think that Kong Fung eventually ended up with Lok Wan, perhaps after a decade or so. Or perhaps after Li Sai Man's death, perhaps KF visited his grave and then eventually forgave him...
    How about we do the Kong Fung project together.

    You can do the plot and dialogue and I'll do the action. Check out some of my work on the fanfic and see what you think.

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    Any links to your fanfictions? Would love to read some.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Icha Parvati View Post
    Any links to your fanfictions? Would love to read some.
    Here's my first ff

    http://www.spcnet.tv/forums/showthre...-the-Lost-Duel

    and most recent one

    http://www.spcnet.tv/forums/showthre...the-Blood-Moon

    Would love to have your opinion.

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    Thanks Mandred. I have read some chapters of the two fics. I have written one comment on the Swordsman ff, I'll post and paraphrase it here.

    You deliver excellent fighting scenes; I have to learn a lot from you. I got the hang of it since my first ff, but I admittedly only have 2-3 fanfics with some focus on fighting scenes. Describing fighting scenes is difficult, and you deliver it very well, Mandred. Kudos!

    I also love your narrative style. I think you are good at creating nuances, which is important in giving a mental setting to the readers.

    I do think that you might need to put more punctuation such as commas (,) to give the readers a bit of a breather. For instance (from your Dragon Gazes Upon the Blood Moon - love that title btw!):

    However the ringing of temple bells accompanied the unsheathing of the sword and skilfully engraved script, in ancient Sanskrit ran along the black blade.
    might be better to move the comma forward after 'However' to make it easier to read and add 'where' as such:

    However, the ringing of temple bells accompanied the unsheathing of the sword, where skilfully engraved scripts in ancient Sanskrit ran along the black blade.
    I still can picture the beauty of that sword, though, so kudos on your narratives. And it seems you're a native speaker, and I'm actually not a native speaker, so you naturally find better wordings than me, and you'll make less grammatical mistakes than me. I just happened to pay a lot of attention to punctuation marks during my thesis writing days, and it sticks. (the "Eats, Shoots & Leaves" book by Lynne Truss is a very good grammar and punctuation guide book I love to use).

    I will reply to the KF project suggestion in a PM.

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    I posted another MV:

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...iubarbara.html

    Featuring Jinny Ng's song with the same title from Line Walkers 2014, this MV combines love stories of Li Sai Man & Chun Sik Sik (The Foundation 1984), Chor Lau Heung & Song Siu Ching (The New Adventures of Chor Lau Heung 1984), and Szeto Man Mo & Lam Chor Yin (Fearless Duo 1984). Enjoy.

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    made another MV, this time with clips from Chor Lau Heung 1984 and Fearless Duo as well:



    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...ung-wuxia.html

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    I've made another fan-fiction of The Foundation here, expanding from a scene between LSM and SS in Ep 9 (after LSM learned that SS used to date Kong Fung):

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...tion-1984.html

    I should also add that it's R-rated...
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    What if Sai Man decided a different course of action the day he was about to kill Sik Sik?

    Part 1 of the 2 or 3 instalments.

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...enix-part.html

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    I still think he wanted to be in power too much as his father favor the older brother.

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    Possibly. It might be that I am just too-wishful thinking about LSM...

    Anyway, part 2 is here:

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...x-part_29.html

    I'm slowly returning LSM to Chang'an...

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    part 3 of Runaway Dragon and Missing Phoenix is here:

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...enix-part.html

    With the link to a deleted scene in this chapter 3.

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    Part 4 of Runaway Dragon and Missing Phoenix is here:

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...enix-part.html

    I've linked Chun Sik Sik to a historical figure in Li Sai Man's real life. Link to a deleted scene TBA.

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    Part 5 of Runaway Dragon and Missing Phoenix is here:

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...x-part_17.html

    Next one (chapter 6) will be the last instalment... I hope. I think so.

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    The last instalment of the 'Runaway Dragon and Missing Phoenix' is here:

    http://riverandlakerealm.blogspot.co...part.html#more

    I have included the Xuanwu Gate Incident in the chapter. Thanks to all who have read the fanfic series. Although I receive very few comments, the ones I do receive are very encouraging, and I do have a lot of reads for the series.

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