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    Hi everyone,

    I'm crazy fan of TOB, after watched so many times of this series I decided to write a fanfic.

    I original wrote it in vietnamese and Spring (my angel from internet) helped me to translate it in English.

    If anyone interest read it in English, please go to http://www.liqian.info . It is post under the title of "Little Angel".

    I hope some of you will enjoy this fanfic of mine.

    P.S. to webmaster: If you think I shouldn't post this story here, please let me know, I will discontinue post it.

    Cast:

    Raymond Lam Fung as Lam Jong (La^m Tro.ng, 林仲)
    Ron Ng as Lam Tien (La^m Thie^n, 林天
    Li Qian as Sung Chi Qian (To^'ng Chi' Ti`nh, 宋致情)
    Leila Tong as Sung Seng Seng (To^’ng Song Song, 宋双双)
    The rest of cast will introduce later.

    Chapter 1

    Mot mua he tung bung nao nhiet da troi qua nhanh chong, Hong Kong University lai bat dau ron rang nhung sinh vien tap nap qua lai trong san truong chuan bi cho mua hoc ke tiep. HKU la truong noi tieng nhat o HK, nhung sinh vien duoc chon vao deu la nhung hoc sinh uu tu nhat tu` nhung truong trung hoc. Cac hoc sinh duoc chon vao di nhien rat hanh dien nhung co the hoc o HKU lai la van de khac vi hoc phi o day rat cao, thuong chi co con cai gia dinh giau co moi co kha nang chi tra. Hang ngay truoc cong truong ddo^~ la.i la` nhung chiec Limousine dua cac tieu tho cung cong tu toi truong. Chinh vi vay dan dia phuong goi ten truong nay la "Con o^ng cha'u cha University". Tuy nhien khong phai la khong co ngoai le, Lam Thien chinh la mot ngoai le.

    Ha('n cung nguoi anh ten Lam Trong luc nho song trong ngheo kho o mot noi xa thanh thi, cha me mat som vi dich ta nen hai anh em thuong bua doi bua no xin an hay dao cu song qua ngay. Nhung vi ha.n ha'n nen dan chung trong lang tu tu di qua noi khac kiem an. Hai dua be' ho. Lam cung quyet dinh ra di, chu'ng di bo hay bam theo cac chiec xe do` lan lan cung di toi duoc thanh thi. Canh phon hoa o thanh thi lam cho hai dua be choang ngop, truoc mat chung la` tung doan xe qua lai tap nap tren duong pho, moi nguoi deu an mac lich su dep de so voi canh o thon que. Chu'ng tung tang chay nhay du gion ngam nghi'a moi thu tren duong pho cho toi khi hai cai bung be nho bat dau keu doi. Truoc mat chung la cong vien, co rat nhieu gia dinh dang to chuc picnic o do. Hai dua be lan la xin duoc nhung cai banh to tuong (doi song cua dan thanh thi sung tuc hon so voi thon que), chung sung suong an nhung chiec banh va quyet dinh thanh pho nay se la noi cho hai anh em chung lap nghiep.

    Hom do la sinh nhat tam tuoi cua Lam Thien. Lam Trong da^~n em di len khu nha giau co nhat o HK hy vong la se xin duoc nhung mon an ngon hon binh thuong coi nhu la to chuc sinh nhat cho em minh (vi` hai dua con qua nho nen xin viec lam khong duoc). Nhung chung khong ngo nhung nguoi o cua cac gia dinh giau co lai qua ngang tang va hach dich, hai anh em di mon men ca nua buoi ma chang xin duoc gi` ca nguoc lai con nghe rat nhieu cau mang tuoi len dda^`u:

    “Ddo an xin ban thiu, cut mau, do ba^?n nghe`o nan nhu vay thi xuong xom duoi ma an xin, len khu nay chi to^? tra’c tra^’u vao mat, cho’ o khu nay co`n sa.ch hon hai dua bay, cu’t mau, cu’t mau khong tao cho cho’ ra ca('n bay gio, cu’t mau!!”

    Tu nho da quen xin an va cung bi khong it nguoi mang nhung chua bao gio hai anh em bi mang nang loi nhu the, bi so sanh thu ca cho’. Tro.ng mim moi nam chat tay em nga^?n mat noi: “Cho’ co sa.ch cung la cho’, chung toi tuy do ban nhung la con nguoi. Sanh ra trong ngheo kho khong phai do chung toi cho.n, nhung toi the^` se co ngay nhat dinh anh em chung toi se vao o noi nay. ”

    “Ddu’ng, nhat dinh hai anh em toi se co ngay o day!!!” Lam Thien nhan manh sau anh minh.

    Noi xong hai dua be quay minh tim duong di ra de^? la.i ten gia dinh ha’ mo^`m nhin theo hai cai lung nho be’ nhung bat khuat cho toi khi bien mat, han then minh khong co y' chi kien cuong nhu hai dua nho nen suot doi phai lam cong cho nguoi khac.

    Ddi duoc nua con duong bo^?ng hai dua be nghe tieng goi ben tai: “Na`y, na`y, dung lai, khoan di mau vay.”Chung quay lai thi thay mot co be’ khoang sa’u bay tuoi mac chiec vay trang, toc that hai cai bim tro^? Xuong vai dang hap tap chay toi truoc mat ho, trong tay co be dang cam cai boc trang bang khan to dua ra truoc mat nhoen nu cuoi noi: “ne`, cua em cho hai anh do, an di, ngon lam do”. Co be vua noi vua mo cai khan, trong do la hai cai banh bao to lon trang tinh dang boc khoi. Ca? hai anh em dung chet tran, tro mat nhin, mot ddu'a thi nhin vao doi mat to den lay nhu hai vi sao cua co be, con mot dua thi nhin vao cai mieng xinh xan nhu hoa hong he nu dang cuoi khuc khit truoc cu chi ngay ngo cua ho.

    Bong nhien: “Oot….oot…”tro^’ng bu.ng cua Thien keu la du doi. Co be cam mot chiec banh len va dua cho Thien noi: “Anh an di, cai bung cua anh keu qua troi, em nghe cung biet anh dang doi lam.” Co nhet cai banh con lai trong boc vao tay Trong tiep: “Em phai vao nha roi, mai mot hai anh ddung toi day an xin nua, em tin rang se co ngay hai anh se duong duong chinh chinh vao o noi nay de choi voi em. Co gang len nhe’.” Noi xong co be dua doi mat to den lay cua minh nha’y mat cu`ng hai nguoi roi quay lung buoc di, de lai hai dua be trai dang tro? da~i.

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    I don't read fanfic anymore but Vietnamese is already hard as it is. Without the accent marks, it'll be even harder. Maybe you should download the VPS software to type in the accent marks as well. You know, to make it easier for people who wants to read.
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    even though i understood what i read, yes even without accent marks, but just reading the first line, i turned like this @[email protected], uhg no offense, i don't know if your story is bad or not, haven't finish, but sorry, can't help u.
    I might not look smart under the eyes of a genius, but rather intelligent in front of an idiot's perspective. Then, what are you, an idiot or a genius?

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