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    Outside the house night had fallen. The moon was at its zenith, drawing out grotesque shadows under the gnarled trunks of the mulberry trees in the yard. Amidst their leafy canopies a figure shrouded in black darted from one branch to another with silent swiftness, until he was within reach of the red-tiled roof. Only the eyes of the figure could be seen. At the moment their pupils began to contract, as the figure deftly drew out the sword he had carried on his back. There was nothing particularly interesting about the sword, but the way it was held could send shivers down the spines of the best fighters. There was a dull glow about it hinting that were it to taste blood tonight it would hardly be the first time...

    This cloaked figure dashed into the dark and quiet inn (it was nighttime). No one was there to notice him. He lifted his sword and swiftly walked out to the backyard...he was after the Escort Agency's goods. He had heard rumours of it for a long time already and he was bound to get an answer tonight.

    He looked around and spotted a small room lit with light...could it be the barrack of the inn? He walked soundlessly up to the door and pushed it open. Two figures from inside the barrack immediately responded to this and picked up their weapons and swung it at the cloaked figure. The figure easily warded off their blows by blocking it with his sheathed sword. He twirled the sword in his hand then unsheathed it cooly. He then thrusted his sword forcefully towards once of the men...

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    A daggar flew from the darkness from the opened door, flying straight at the cloaked figure's sword, hitting the blade and knocking the sword out of the figure's hand. The daggar bounced off the blade, like a ball, and hit into a wall, remaining stabbed in the wall. The wind blew into the room, while a foot stepped through the door then another foot, revealing the face of Li Shen Si. His two swords still remained sheathed behind him as his face looked calm, without fear.

    Li Shen Si slowly leaned against a wall, revealing the opened door and the setting behind it. The stars shone brightly with the moon luminating the sky. Li sighed as he looked out the door, watching the stars. "The night is a beautiful thing if you let it be." A moment of silence occured before Li pushed himself off the wall and faced the cloak figure. "You know, an escort agency running through town isn't a small thing. I would have figured bandits would try to rob the goods."

    Li's face stood at a distance, staring deep into the darkness of the figure's face. "If it's money you want, I can give you some. Just leave these two workers alone and leave, they have done nothing to deserve death."

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    Originally posted by Jampack200

    A daggar flew from the darkness from the opened door, flying straight at the cloaked figure's sword, hitting the blade and knocking the sword out of the figure's hand. The daggar bounced off the blade, like a ball, and hit into a wall, remaining stabbed in the wall. The wind blew into the room, while a foot stepped through the door then another foot, revealing the face of Li Shen Si. His two swords still remained sheathed behind him as his face looked calm, without fear.

    Li Shen Si slowly leaned against a wall, revealing the opened door and the setting behind it. The stars shone brightly with the moon luminating the sky. Li sighed as he looked out the door, watching the stars. "The night is a beautiful thing if you let it be." A moment of silence occured before Li pushed himself off the wall and faced the cloak figure. "You know, an escort agency running through town isn't a small thing. I would have figured bandits would try to rob the goods."

    Li's face stood at a distance, staring deep into the darkness of the figure's face. "If it's money you want, I can give you some. Just leave these two workers alone and leave, they have done nothing to deserve death."
    Startled by a presence of a powerful martial artist and his ability to knock his sword out of his hand, the figure immediately gave two palm strikes to the two workers. The force of his palms carried the two workers towards Li Shen Si as he went to retrieve his sword.

    Li Shen Si however was not at all surprised by the vicious move of the figure. He simply move forward, avoided the two incoming workers intending to prevent the figure from reaching his sword. But he was a second too late as now the figure had his sword.

    "The way he holds his sword... He seems one with it... But at such an odd angle." Thought Li Shen Si.

    "Ah such a lovely night! Is it really necessary to view it with bloodly shed and death?."

    Both the figure and Li Shen Si looked at the direction of the voice. But only darkness greeted them.

    "Such powerful internal strength!To be able to project it as if it is only a whisper!"
    Thought Li Shen Si.

    Knowing that more powerful martial artists were present in the inn, the figure hastily made his escape with his qing gong.

    Li Shen Si chose not to pursuer the figure but rather to check on two injuried workers. They were dead yet their bodies did not leave behind any marks. Li Shen Si then observed a minute of silence for them before covering them with a large blanket.

    Having done that Li Shen Si then proceed back to the front of the inn where Zhi Min was sitting alone drinking a cup of wine.

    "Hullo Swordsman Li! Such a lovely night! Care to join me for a drink?" offered Zhi Yan.

    "Could it be him that intervened just now?"

    Li Shen Zi then sit at down at the table opposite of Zhi Min.

    "That figure in black is not your average bandit, Swordsman Li. Judging from his holding of the sword, i would say he is at his peak of his sword arts." said Zhi Min as he continued to drink his wine in small sips.

    "(Sigh) Much as happen recently in the realm of Wulin. I must speak with all of you at first light. Ah look at the time! Its getting late. would you excuse me for a couple of hours Swordsman Li?" With that Zhi Min stood up and left for his room...

    Leaving Li Shen Si alone, deep in thoughts...
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    Szema Mok got some food from the kitchen and brought it up to Bao Hua's room. His heart beated twice as fast now...

    He knocked on the door three consecutive times and waited for Bao Hua to respond.

    "Who is it?" came Bao Hua's sweet voice.

    "It's me. Szema Mok. I brought you some food," said Mok quickly. He was really desperate to see Bao Hua. I'm becoming a pervert, thought Mok.

    "Come in," said Bao Hua.

    Szema Mok pushed the door into Bao Hua's room and he saw Hua resting on the bed. He laid the tray (with the food inside) on the table and he went over to the bed to help Hua up. "Are you alright?"

    "Yes. Just a little tired. Thanks for helping me earlier," said Bao Hua as she got out of bed and walked over to the table.

    Szema Mok helped her over to the table then he took a seat next to her. He looked at her. "No need to thank me. I said I'd never let my loved ones be hurt. That includes you."

    Bao Hua blushed and she slowly turned her face so she faced her food. She prepared to eat.

    Szema Mok grabbed Bao Hua's hand and he looked at her. He just held onto her cold hands...unwilling to let go.

    Bao Hua felt happy yet shy...this was the first time she had ever been this close to a man. She felt the warmness of Szema Mok's hands and she slowly fell into his shoulders. She hugged tightly. This was the happiest moment of her life.

    Szema Mok also held onto Bao Hua, but gently. He didn't want to hurt her. His smile was so large...so happy...
    Bao Hua rested her head against his chest. Overwhelmed by the feelings she almost burst into tears. This was a moment she'd wanted to last forever.
    "I... I'd never thought I could be this happy...." Her voice trailed off. Her voice turned pink and just stayed like that for a few minutes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Da Bao
    Bao Hua rested her head against his chest. Overwhelmed by the feelings she almost burst into tears. This was a moment she'd wanted to last forever.
    "I... I'd never thought I could be this happy...." Her voice trailed off. Her voice turned pink and just stayed like that for a few minutes.
    Siu Xiang went upstairs to bring food and check up on BAo Hua, she knocked a few times. "Hello?"

    Bao Hua went to open the door when Siu Xiang just opened it slamming it on Bao Hua. "What?" She'd just noticed Bao Hua "Ah! I apologize, let me help you up." Siu Xiang helped Bao Hua back onto the bed, when she noticed Szema Mok was also there with some food.

    "I'm sorry for innterupting!" She quickly went back downstairs. She thought "How clumsy of me."


    OOC: I think I'll have Siu Xiang be the person who innterupts those private moments, and I think she's going to fall in love with one of the characters, bit i don't know who yet.

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    Li Shen Si sat at the table, staring at the table top. He shook his head as he leaned back against his chair, yawning. He closed his eyes, remembering every movement and action made by the cloaked figure. The memory played over and over again in his head like a movie while Li just watched and remember, learning and embracing.

    Suddenly, Li opened his eyes and smirked. I met a clever opponent. In that case, I must get stronger, faster, and wise. Li yawned once more, before looking out the window at the moon.It's getting late. I should just clear my mind for tonight and await Zhi Min's words tomorrow. Li stood up and tossed a bag of coins to the Innkeeper for a room. The Innkeeper smiled politely and pointed out his room. Thanking the innkeeper, Li Shen Si went into his room and set all his stuff down, then laid on the bed and looked up at the wall.

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    Quote Originally Posted by druid
    Szema Mok and Ah Jiang went out... Wang Zhi Min, Li Shen Si and Wu FengFu sitting downstairs... Bao Hua upstairs... Siu Xiang went out finding Kong Long Zi.
    Rain stopped

    Dead bodies outside...
    Thanks druid.
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    和諧唔係一百個人講同一番話,係一百個人有一百句唔同嘅說話,而又互相尊重 ~ - 葉梓恩

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    Zhi Min opened the door to his room and step in. He knew he was not alone.

    "Yes? How can i help you Ah Jiang?"

    "Ermm... well i was wondering if I could stay in your room for the night... I have no more money left... Ermm i spent it on beancurd..." replied Ah Jiang.


    "Why sure! I think you would also not like to sit below with Kong Long Zi lest Szema Mok and Bao Hua happens to go down for a meal or a drink yes?"

    "Well... yea..."

    "Relax my friend, stay here for the night then. Come tomorrow morning we much to do." With that Zhi Min proceed to the chair to mediate for a couple of hours.

    "Take the bed my friend. I do hope you dont snore though." said Zhi Min with a small smile.

    Ah Jiang saw the smile and laugh. Soon he was dreaming of beancurd and Bao Hua..

    the night was ending soon... the rays of the sun were beginning to push back the darkness as the moon began to give way to the sun...
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    Originally posted by kidd

    Thanks druid.
    No problem man... but i dont think it helps much since the story has progressed further... so when are you introducing your character to the story?

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    Quote Originally Posted by druid
    No problem man... but i dont think it helps much since the story has progressed further... so when are you introducing your character to the story?
    That's my headache. I don't when to come in and how to interact with the other characters.
    什麼是朋友?朋友永遠是在你犯下不可原諒錯誤的時候,仍舊站在你那邊的笨蛋。~ 王亞瑟

    和諧唔係一百個人講同一番話,係一百個人有一百句唔同嘅說話,而又互相尊重 ~ - 葉梓恩

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    Quote Originally Posted by druid
    Zhi Min opened the door to his room and step in. He knew he was not alone.

    "Yes? How can i help you Ah Jiang?"

    "Ermm... well i was wondering if I could stay in your room for the night... I have no more money left... Ermm i spent it on beancurd..." replied Ah Jiang.


    "Why sure! I think you would also not like to sit below with Kong Long Zi lest Szema Mok and Bao Hua happens to go down for a meal or a drink yes?"

    "Well... yea..."

    "Relax my friend, stay here for the night then. Come tomorrow morning we much to do." With that Zhi Min proceed to the chair to mediate for a couple of hours.

    "Take the bed my friend. I do hope you dont snore though." said Zhi Min with a small smile.

    Ah Jiang saw the smile and laugh. Soon he was dreaming of beancurd and Bao Hua..

    the night was ending soon... the rays of the sun were beginning to push back the darkness as the moon began to give way to the sun...
    ...and the small town started to come alive again.

    A young girl about 17 was walking hastily towards Yi Jian Ke Zhan. This morning, she heard from a servant that there was a great fight in Yi Jian Ke Zhan and some people were killed. She has to go and see whether her friend Uncle Kong was alright or not. She was out of town yesterday and only reached home at near nightfall and no one told her about the incident until this morning.

    On the way, she saw Long being slapped by a girl and then scurried a way to a side alley.

    "Sign..He never changes."

    She has tried to help him by offering him a job at her father's clothes dyeing workshop before, but he left after 3 days.

    Li Xiao Sheng continued on her way to Yi Jian Ke Zhan.

    When she reached the inn, she found it was closed.

    "The inn should be opened by this time already"

    She knocked on the door and called out

    "Uncle Kong. It's me. Xiao Sheng. Are you in there?".

    P.S. The italic sentences are thoughts.
    Last edited by kidd; 03-30-06 at 01:38 PM.
    什麼是朋友?朋友永遠是在你犯下不可原諒錯誤的時候,仍舊站在你那邊的笨蛋。~ 王亞瑟

    和諧唔係一百個人講同一番話,係一百個人有一百句唔同嘅說話,而又互相尊重 ~ - 葉梓恩

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    Characters Profile Update

    Name: Szema Mok
    Age: 36
    Martial Arts: Many different sword techniques, Hong Long 18 Zhang, etc.
    Internal Power (from a scale of 1 to 10): High (8)
    Info: Tall (6 feet), light but macho (150 pounds), handsome, nice & generous, seeking powerful martial arts opponent

    Name: Bao Hua
    Age: 21-25 (unsure of date of birth)
    Martial Arts: Jiu Yin Zhen Jing, studied at E-Mei Sect, and learned Ancient Tomb sect skill... etc.
    Internal Power: up to par with Huang Rong
    Info: 5ft 6 inches, Weighs between 100lb- 10lb, shy, beautiful (but not like Xiao Long Nu, possibly looking like Cheng Ying), smart like Huang Rong, and yet a bit devious.

    Name: Kong Long Zi
    Age: 60
    Martial Arts: Dugu 9 Swords
    Internal Power: Level 6
    Info: 180cm, 80kg, Dull and boring, Keeper of the Dugu 9 Swords Manual.

    Name: Wang Zhi Min
    Age: 30
    Status: Secret disciple of ZWJ
    Martial Arts: 9Yang, QKDNY, TaiJi Quan etc. (inherited all of ZWJ's martial arts)
    Info: 1.85m tall, Lean yet well bulid, cool and relaxed expression, scar on left forearm, in possession of the 9 Yang Holy Scripture and the Ming Cult's Holy Scepters

    name: tien ming dao ren
    age: 90
    martial arts: creator of 8 star sword technique, tien ming sun gong,
    info: recluse taoist priest, resides in moutain of tien ming, has 8 top elite martial arts students

    Name: Long(dragon)
    AGE: 20
    Physical appearance: Butt ugly. But has a very nice body from all the walking and wandering, cause I dont' have a home.
    Personality: Mean, rude. Likes to make fun of people. Likes to beat up women(but always end up getting beat up by them instead.). Always thinking on how steal and rob people.
    Martial Arts: None. Can't even beat up a girl!
    Internal Power: None. I'm one of those unfortunate characters who can't find a bad *** manual, or a decent sifu.
    Wealth: None...Poor as hell.
    Intelligence: Below Average, some might consider stupid. Never went to school. And probably don't like to go to school if given a chance.
    Goal in life: To be rich without ever have to work hard for it. To have 20 wives who will obey to my every command.

    Name: Lau Yat Lang
    Age: 32
    Martial Arts: Self-taught
    Internal Power: Unknown
    Height/Weight: 179 cm, 71 kg
    Appearance: Buried under a black mantle with long white hair; tormented
    Info: Dark and pesimestic.

    Ah Jiang
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    Age: 20
    Height & Weight: 169cm, 52 kg (he's thin because poor)
    Weapon: a large axe that he his father left (used by farmers)
    Martial Arts: simple wrestling, able to wield an axe.
    Traits: Loyalty towards friends, eliminate all tyrants in Chang Jiang, a bit talkative, nervous when their are girls around.
    Some background
    He was born at a village beside the Chang Jiang river, hence both his peasant parents name him Ah Jiang, a simple yet familiar name for them. Ah Jiang lost both his parents when he was only 4 years old. They were killed by the local tyrants whom his parents accidentally offended when they did not pay the protection fee. They did not left any money left for him, he and his uncle both joined the Beggars' Clan. He is a lowly member of the Beggars' Clan at the moment.

    Name: Siu Xiang
    Age: 20
    Martial Arts: Sui Xiang uses a saber and whips as her weapon
    Height & Weight: around 5ft 6 inches, 51 kg
    Weapon: a sabre givin by her aunt, and a chain whip.
    Martial Arts: can expertly wield a sabre, and trained at ErMei sect.
    Traits: Gets shy when there are men around, is loyal and always trying to help. She's very gentle and is very beautiful.
    Bio: She suffers from tramatizing events from her childhood, her parents were killed for unknown reasons. Siu Xiang was then living on her own until a mesterious woman came by and picked her up then dropping her at ErMei. Siu Xiang mastered all of ErMei kungfu in a short time, now she wanders the world.

    Name: Li Shen Si
    Age: 23
    Martial Arts: Originated from the Tian Ling Jiao Sect. Studied there but now travels the world learning more martial arts.
    Internal Power (from a scale of 1 to 10): Unknown
    Height and Weight: About 6 feet 1 inch. Weighs at 160 pounds.
    Info: Growing up, he had to rely on himself. His parents had died from unknown causes when he was just a infant, giving the responsibility over to Li's shifu who had taken him in. Justice and purity was what he grew up believing in. Now, he travels the world, experiencing life and learning new techniques. He tries to find the answer to the questions he is unknown of. He is calm and kind most of the time and skilled in the way of the sword. He chooses not to fight but if it comes down to it, he is not hesitant.
    Weapons of choice: Two swords

    Name: Wu Feng Fu
    Age: 24
    Height: 5'9
    Build: Medium build, toned muscles.
    Apperence: Considered to be average looking.
    Personality Traits: Sociable and friendly.
    Martial Arts:
    - 49 Techniques of the Hurricane Sabre
    - Palms of the Swift Wolf
    - Basic and Intermediate Shaolin Inner Energy Cultivation Techniques
    -Basic and Intermediate Shaolin Martial Arts
    - Various Techniques learnt
    Internal Energy: 5
    History: When WuFeng Wu was born, his father was a disciple of a renowned sabre specialist, however not being blessed extrodinary martial arts talent he could only master 36 of the 49 tecniques of the Hurricane sabre and 3/4 of the palms of the Swift Wolf. Having befriended Lin Yuantu (Founder of the Fortune Prestige Escort House in Smiling Proud Warrior - User of the 72 Evil Resisting Sword Art - plus an ex shaolin monk) WuFenFu's father joined Lin Yuantu's newly started Fortune Prestige Escort Agency. Throughout WuFengFu's childhood he never showed extraordinary talent in martial arts and was only a mediocore. His father passed away when he was 14 during an attack by bandits whilst escorting.
    Having grasped the martials arts taught by his father and some basic internal cultivation skills he trained for two years where he joined the escort agency under Lin Yuantu. There he has worked up until now. Over the years Lin Yuantu has taught WuFengFu his Shaolin martial arts and has given pointers of his fast sabre techniques, however Wu is considered a very average fighter but over the last 3 years he has made tremedous improvements in his martial arts due to 'roaming' jiang hu and befriending the people of jiang hu and has learnt various techniques from them, although these techniques were not anything out of this world they have aided Wu in his understanding of martial arts theory therefore he is able to use his martial arts to its maximum potential and can often defeat opponents above his level however his inner energy cannot be considered anything extraordinary.

    Name: Li Xiao Sheng (李小笙)
    Age: 17
    Physical appearance: Not drop dead gorgeous but pleasant looking and has a pair of phoenix eyes. Has a light smal scar near the left eye. 5'6" tall and slim.
    Personality: Generous and friendly because parents are those humble generous kind of people who likes to do charity. Because she grows up with 6 brothers and are close to them, she won't get all shy and blush just because some guy talks to her (that doesn't mean she's easy and will throw herself at guys or sleep with a guy before marriage).
    Intelligence: Above average intelligence but has reading difficulty due to dyslexia.
    Martial Arts: LXF's catch anything martial art (does this martial art has a name?), basic sword skill and 'qin na shou' (all taught by mom) and Ling Bo Wei Bu (taught by wandering godfather). Currently learning '6 Mai Shen Jian'.
    Internal Power: Level 5
    Brackgound: Comes from a rich merchant family. Both parents are alive and has 6 older brothers. No dark past. Grow up normally and lives a generally happy life.
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    The door opened after a minute. Standing behind the door was Kong Long Zi. "Ahh! It's you!"

    "Haha! Same as always, huh? I came to check out the fight that people told me about," said Xiao Sheng.

    "Ehh...wait...come in," said Kong Long Zi. "Don't be too loud. Last night an escort agency slept here overnight and a 'bandit' attacked. The escort agency is getting ready to leave now."

    "Ohh...I heard there is a lot of powerful martial artists here, right?" asked Xiao Sheng.

    "Ehh...yes...Xiao Sheng, does your father know of you coming here?" asked Kong Long Zi suspiciously.

    A guilty look moved across Xiao Sheng's face.

    "NO!? YOU DIDN'T TELL HIM?" yelled Kong Long Zi.

    "Well...I left a letter," said Xiao Sheng quickly.

    "Ohh...okay then. You might as well stay here for a few days. Haven't seen you in one month!"

    Xiao Sheng smiled. She sat down at a table and watched as members of the escort agency packed their belongings and their chests together. By the time the sun was up the escort agency have left.
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    As the the escort agency began to leave, Wu Feng Fu and Li Shen Si bide their farewells.

    Soon afterwards, Wang Zhi Min and Ah Jiang arrived downstairs for their breakfast. They joined Li Shen Si at his table.

    Kong Long Zi then introduced Xiao Sheng to the swordsman and Ah Jiang.

    Soon, Siu Xiang, Szema Mok and Bao Hua arrived with Siu Xiang blushing rosely.

    "I bet she just "happened" to walk past Mr. Szema Mok and Miss Bao Hua room when they came out." Joked Li Shen Zi.

    All three at the table laughed.

    Soon breakfirst was served and at the end of it, Szema Mok stood up and asked;

    "Swordsman Wang, i belive you have something to say to us all?"

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    This game is getting more interesting with each passing post...

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    Quote Originally Posted by druid
    As the the escort agency began to leave, Wu Feng Fu and Li Shen Si bide their farewells.

    Soon afterwards, Wang Zhi Min and Ah Jiang arrived downstairs for their breakfast. They joined Li Shen Si at his table.

    Kong Long Zi then introduced Xiao Sheng to the swordsman and Ah Jiang.

    Soon, Siu Xiang, Szema Mok and Bao Hua arrived with Siu Xiang blushing rosely.

    "I bet she just "happened" to walk past Mr. Szema Mok and Miss Bao Hua room when they came out." Joked Li Shen Zi.

    All three at the table laughed.

    Soon breakfirst was served and at the end of it, Szema Mok stood up and asked;

    "Swordsman Wang, i belive you have something to say to us all?"
    "I guess it is Heaven's fate that brought us all here. I'm here under my Master's order to investigate these various cases of kidnapping. Just yesterday I found out that these people in yellow have been causing these trouble. If only I knew who they are..."

    Everyone looked at Wang Zhi Min.
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    Originally Posted by Druid

    "Is it luck, fate or heaven's will that brought all these Pugilists here in this inn so that i might meet them? Perhaps it is time to tell of Master's request and the kiddnappings..." with that, Zhi Min approach the table where Li Shen Si and Wu FengFu were sitting trying to determine their purpose at being at the right place at the wrong time...
    Hey TommyH could you edit part of your post above? with reference to my post above... sorry mate...

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    Hey all! I'm starting work again... so wont be online much... someone please help take care of my character? thanks in advance....

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    TommyH, can u change the 2 years to 1 year or less?

    Quote Originally Posted by TommyH
    "Ohh...okay then. You might as well stay here for a few days. Haven't seen you in two years!"
    My initial setup up was Xiao Sheng met Kong Long Zi quite often because she lived in the same town where the inn was situated. That's why she can reach the inn so early and also knew Long. After your part of the story, I have to change my own background of Xiao Sheng and made her live in a neighbouring town (she can't live too far away because she heard about the fight in the morning and reached the inn the same morning). But not meeting 2 years was too long for someone living nearby.
    什麼是朋友?朋友永遠是在你犯下不可原諒錯誤的時候,仍舊站在你那邊的笨蛋。~ 王亞瑟

    和諧唔係一百個人講同一番話,係一百個人有一百句唔同嘅說話,而又互相尊重 ~ - 葉梓恩

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    Quote Originally Posted by kidd
    TommyH, can u change the 2 years to 1 year or less?


    My initial setup up was Xiao Sheng met Kong Long Zi quite often because she lived in the same town where the inn was situated. That's why she can reach the inn so early and also knew Long. After your part of the story, I have to change my own background of Xiao Sheng and made her live in a neighbouring town (she can't live too far away because she heard about the fight in the morning and reached the inn the same morning). But not meeting 2 years was too long for someone living nearby.
    okay i'll change it to 1 month

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