Create Your Own Wuxia Character! Game

[TommyH]

Next time, try to read the profiles people took time to make up, ok?
The info is all in Li Xiao Sheng's profile.
Her martial arts were taught by her mother and godfather. She learned martial art since young. Not only father can know martial art, ok?

Hua Wuque was 17 when he entered Jiang Hu (from the Flower Palace) and he's freaking powerful. SPT also learn a lot of martial art when he's around 18-19. Most JY protagonist are in their late teen to early 20s. Ah Jiang is only 20 and he just learn DG9J and JYY.

I don't mean LXS should be superpower. I don't mind her being captured (her 6MSJ not fully mastered yet). But just annoyed at the discontinuity. She was preparing to use 6MSJ. Has started directing her internal energy. But suddenly she didn't use it. Neither did she try to use her Ling Bo Wei Bu when she just use it moments ago to avoid the gang leader's attack. She just 'try hard to fend off men who were closing in on them'. Maybe the stupid girl suddenly think it's fun not to use any advantages kungfu (like the long-distant 6MSJ) but just wait until the people close in on her, than then use some lousy kungfu to ''try hard to fend off the men'.

And Bao Hua isn't all that weak either.

sorry i didn't intend to make them that weak.

[kidd]

Here's the profile of the female characters again.

Name: Bao Hua
Age: 21-25 (unsure of date of birth)
Martial Arts: Jiu Yin Zhen Jing, studied at E-Mei Sect, and learned Ancient Tomb sect skill... etc.
Internal Power: up to par with Huang Rong
Weapon: a fan, a flute and poison needles - from the fanfic itself
Info: 5ft 6 inches, Weighs between 100lb- 10lb, shy, beautiful (but not like Xiao Long Nu, possibly looking like Cheng Ying), smart like Huang Rong, and yet a bit devious.

Name: Siu Xiang
Age: 20
Martial Arts: Sui Xiang uses a saber and whips as her weapon
Height & Weight: around 5ft 6 inches, 51 kg
Weapon: a sabre givin by her aunt, and a chain whip.
Martial Arts: can expertly wield a sabre, and trained at ErMei sect.
Traits: Gets shy when there are men around, is loyal and always trying to help. She's very gentle and is very beautiful.
Bio: She suffers from tramatizing events from her childhood, her parents were killed for unknown reasons. Siu Xiang was then living on her own until a mesterious woman came by and picked her up then dropping her at ErMei. Siu Xiang mastered all of ErMei kungfu in a short time, now she wanders the world.

Name: Li Xiao Sheng (李小笙）
Age: 17
Physical appearance: Not drop dead gorgeous but pleasant looking and has a pair of phoenix eyes. Has a light smal scar near the left eye. 5'6" tall and slim.
Personality: Generous and friendly because parents are those humble generous kind of people who likes to do charity. Because she grows up with 6 brothers and are close to them, she won't get all shy and blush just because some guy talks to her (that doesn't mean she's easy and will throw herself at guys or sleep with a guy before marriage).
Intelligence: Above average intelligence but has reading difficulty due to dyslexia.
Martial Arts: LXF's catch anything martial art (does this martial art has a name?), basic sword skill and 'qin na shou' (all taught by mom) and Ling Bo Wei Bu (taught by wandering godfather). Currently learning '6 Mai Shen Jian'.
Internal Power: Level 5
Weapon: None <-- new addition for clarification's sake.
Brackgound: Comes from a rich merchant family. Both parents are alive and has 6 older brothers. No dark past. Grow up normally and lives a generally happy life.

[TommyH]

Szema Mok uncovered the faces of the two men. They didn't look like a regular Chinese person. "These must be the followers of that Korean swordsman."

The others nodded in approvement...

[kidd]

He looked for his Dugu Sword and realized that two men were holding onto it, along with the other two ladies' weapon. He glanced at Li Kang who was saving the two girls then he leaped forward and attempted to palm one of the men holding onto the weapons.

Correction:

Li Xiao Sheng doesn't use a weapon.
She knows basic sword skill, but she doesn't carry any weapon with her. She mostly fought barehanded. That's why I mentioned Bao Hua and Ah Jiang taking out their weapons but did not mentioned Xiao Sheng doing so.

You really should read other people's part more carefully.

I'll pretend that sentence doesn't exist. I'm not going to give Xiao Sheng a weapon just because of your 1 sentence.

haha sorry! but i'm just wondering how LXS learned her martial arts? she's 17 (really young) and i thought her father didn't know martial arts...

Her father not knowing martial art was my unwritten background info for her. But, because it was not written down in her bio, it can change. Since her father is so up to date with the wulin/jianghu news and has a bunch of scouts working for him (Extremer88's story input), he's certainly no ordinary merchant.

Found another one:

Siu Xiang, Li Shen Si, and Wang Zhi Min dashed into the scene half a minute later and helped Li Kang untie Bao Hua and Li Xiao Sheng. Bao Hua and Li Xiao Sheng leaped up into the air, towards Ah Jiang. Upon sighting them Ah Jiang threw their weapons towards their owners.

TommyH. Please change your sentence. Li Xiao Sheng does not own a weapon.

[Allen D]

Next time, try to read the profiles people took time to make up, ok?
The info is all in Li Xiao Sheng's profile.
Her martial arts were taught by her mother and godfather. She learned martial art since young. Not only father can know martial art, ok?

Hua Wuque was 17 when he entered Jiang Hu (from the Flower Palace) and he's freaking powerful. SPT also learn a lot of martial arts when he's around 18-19. Most JY protagonists are in their late teen to early 20s. Ah Jiang is only 20 and he just learned DG9J and JYY.

I don't mean LXS should be superpower. I don't mind her being captured (her 6MSJ not fully mastered yet). But I'm just annoyed at the discontinuity. She was preparing to use 6MSJ. Has started directing her internal energy. But suddenly she didn't use it. Neither did she try to use her Ling Bo Wei Bu when she just use it moments ago to avoid the gang leader's attack. She just 'try hard to fend off men who were closing in on them'. Maybe the stupid girl suddenly think it's fun not to use any advantages kungfu (like the long-distant 6MSJ) but just wait until the people close in on her, than then use some lousy kungfu to 'try hard to fend off the men'.

And Bao Hua isn't all that weak either.

i think the discontinuity may be because players are allowed to play god. In other words, they get to control someone elses character. so one writer may have the character doing something and the next writeer will come along and suddenly change things.

[Extremer88]

I think we should alter the rules for the second coming rpg game.

[kidd]

i think the discontinuity may be because players are allowed to play god. In other words, they get to control someone elses character. so one writer may have the character doing something and the next writeer will come along and suddenly change things.

Given the nature of this game, it actually can't be helped that the players will play god a little to move the story forward. To achieve complete no god-playing, all the players would have to be present at the same time so that they can provide input on what their characters were doing in a particular scene. This is not very possible in this environment.

But, when playing god, players should at least understand the characters they are controling and read the previous input carefully as not create discontinuity.

I think most discontinuity happen like this. A writer has the next plot all thought up. Then he noticed someone else has just put in his/her plot while said writer was thinking up his plot. So, he quickly skimmed through that input (not paying much attention to details) and continue where the last sentence left off with his own originally thought up plot.

[kidd]

Profile of male characters

Name: Szema Mok
Age: 36
Martial Arts: Many different sword techniques, Hong Long 18 Zhang, etc.
Internal Power (from a scale of 1 to 10): High (8)
Info: Tall (6 feet), light but macho (150 pounds), handsome, nice & generous, seeking powerful martial arts opponent

Name: Wang Zhi Min
Age: 30
Status: Secret disciple of ZWJ
Martial Arts: 9Yang, QKDNY, TaiJi Quan etc. (inherited all of ZWJ's martial arts)
Info: 1.85m tall, Lean yet well bulid, cool and relaxed expression, scar on left forearm, in possession of the 9 Yang Holy Scripture and the Ming Cult's Holy Scepters

name: tien ming dao ren (have not appear in the story yet)
age: 90
martial arts: creator of 8 star sword technique, tien ming sun gong,
info: recluse taoist priest, resides in moutain of tien ming, has 8 top elite martial arts students

Name: Long(dragon)
AGE: 20
Physical appearance: Butt ugly. But has a very nice body from all the walking and wandering, cause I dont' have a home.
Personality: Mean, rude. Likes to make fun of people. Likes to beat up women(but always end up getting beat up by them instead.). Always thinking on how steal and rob people.
Martial Arts: None. Can't even beat up a girl!
Internal Power: None. I'm one of those unfortunate characters who can't find a bad *** manual, or a decent sifu.
Wealth: None...Poor as hell.
Intelligence: Below Average, some might consider stupid. Never went to school. And probably don't like to go to school if given a chance.
Goal in life: To be rich without ever have to work hard for it. To have 20 wives who will obey to my every command.

Name: Lau Yat Lang (I don't think he has appeared in the story either).
Age: 32
Martial Arts: Self-taught
Internal Power: Unknown
Height/Weight: 179 cm, 71 kg
Appearance: Buried under a black mantle with long white hair; tormented
Info: Dark and pesimestic.

Ah Jiang
Male
Age: 20
Height & Weight: 169cm, 52 kg (he's thin because poor)
Weapon: a large axe that he his father left (used by farmers). Just acquired DG Sword.
Martial Arts: simple wrestling, able to wield an axe. Just learn Dugu 9 Sword and Yi Jen Jing
Traits: Loyalty towards friends, eliminate all tyrants in Chang Jiang, a bit talkative, nervous when their are girls around.
Some background:
He was born at a village beside the Chang Jiang river, hence both his peasant parents name him Ah Jiang, a simple yet familiar name for them. Ah Jiang lost both his parents when he was only 4 years old. They were killed by the local tyrants whom his parents accidentally offended when they did not pay the protection fee. They did not left any money left for him, he and his uncle both joined the Beggars' Clan. He is a lowly member of the Beggars' Clan at the moment.

Name: Li Shen Si
Age: 23
Martial Arts: Originated from the Tian Ling Jiao Sect. Studied there but now travels the world learning more martial arts.
Internal Power (from a scale of 1 to 10): Unknown
Height and Weight: About 6 feet 1 inch. Weighs at 160 pounds.
Info: Growing up, he had to rely on himself. His parents had died from unknown causes when he was just a infant, giving the responsibility over to Li's shifu who had taken him in. Justice and purity was what he grew up believing in. Now, he travels the world, experiencing life and learning new techniques. He tries to find the answer to the questions he is unknown of. He is calm and kind most of the time and skilled in the way of the sword. He chooses not to fight but if it comes down to it, he is not hesitant.
Weapons of choice: Two swords

Name: Wu Feng Fu
Age: 24
Height: 5'9
Build: Medium build, toned muscles.
Apperence: Considered to be average looking.
Personality Traits: Sociable and friendly.
Martial Arts:
- 49 Techniques of the Hurricane Sabre
- Palms of the Swift Wolf
- Basic and Intermediate Shaolin Inner Energy Cultivation Techniques
-Basic and Intermediate Shaolin Martial Arts
- Various Techniques learnt
Internal Energy: 5
History: When WuFeng Wu was born, his father was a disciple of a renowned sabre specialist, however not being blessed extrodinary martial arts talent he could only master 36 of the 49 tecniques of the Hurricane sabre and 3/4 of the palms of the Swift Wolf. Having befriended Lin Yuantu (Founder of the Fortune Prestige Escort House in Smiling Proud Warrior - User of the 72 Evil Resisting Sword Art - plus an ex shaolin monk) WuFenFu's father joined Lin Yuantu's newly started Fortune Prestige Escort Agency. Throughout WuFengFu's childhood he never showed extraordinary talent in martial arts and was
only a mediocore. His father passed away when he was 14 during an attack by bandits whilst escorting. Having grasped the martials arts taught by his father and some basic internal cultivation skills he trained for two years where he joined the escort agency under Lin Yuantu. There he has worked up until now. Over the years Lin Yuantu has taught WuFengFu his Shaolin martial arts and has given pointers of his fast sabre techniques, however Wu is considered a very average fighter but over the last 3 years he has made tremedous improvements in his martial arts due to 'roaming' jiang hu and befriending the
people of jiang hu and has learnt various techniques from them, although these techniques were not anything out of this world they have aided Wu in his understanding of martial arts theory therefore he is able to use his martial arts to its maximum potential and can often defeat opponents above his level however his inner energy cannot be considered anything extraordinary.

Name: Unknown - known by peers as nameless one
Gender: Male
Appearance: Masked face, 170cm tall, medium build, black hair.
Age: Appear to be in 20s based on movements and vitality, no one know for sure
Personality: Dark, secretive, solitary (works alone) - hence little is know about his character,
thought to be chivalrous but no one has actually seen him perform any heroic acts.
Attire: Long hair tired to the back, well dressed, but mostly seen in colours of black, grey and white.
Items: Carries a metal flask and a metal flute.
Martial Arts Style/Techniques: Largely unknown. Believed to be self invented. Few have seen him fight. Those who have seen him only witnessed him using a few palm strokes which immediately overpowers his opponents.
Internal Energy: Unknown, thought to be proficient given the fierceness and controlled palm strikes
Lightness Kungfu: No one has seen him utilise any lightness kungfu, but commoners reported that he disappears in front their eyes.
Other Info: Outlawed, constantly hunted (unsuccessfully) by the govenment officials. Reason undisclosed by the officials. Very little else known about him including family history and social history.
Will learn more as he is introduced and the story progresses.

Name: Li Kang
Sex: Male
Age: 34
Martial Arts: Demon's Waltz Swordplay and Japanese Iaido sword art.
Weapon: Bamboo sword
Appearance: 165cm tall. Fair facial features and scruffy facial hair. Long black hair tied in a pony-tail. Lean Build. Always carries a white jug of rice wine with him.
Internal Power Rating on a Scale of 1-10: 9
Lightness Kung Ku Rating: 7
Info: Spent last 5 years in Japan where he integrated Japanese Matial Arts with Chinese Martial arts. Suffers from tuberculosis. Frequently using his nei gong to fight the disease, which stops him from using his nei gong at optimal power. Integrated Iaido Swordmanship with his own in an effort to not draw out battles that could negatively affect his illness.

[Allen D]

...A few moments later...

"Brother Szema, it seems you are quite proficient with the sword. How about we have a friendly duel?"

Everyone looked at Li Kang like he was the enemy.

[yittz]

I think I will carry my character into the next rpg. There is no way to keep up with this one.

Is it ok with characters here to start another rpg soon, while the 1st one is still going on?

I think we need some rules and guidelines as well. Also can we have each starting character state their goals so somehow the story can finish and posters dont piss each other off.

[kidd]

...A few moments later...

"Brother Szema, it seems you are quite proficient with the sword. How about we have a friendly duel?"

Everyone looked at Li Kang like he was the enemy.

...except for Li Xiao Sheng, who has a look of surprise on her face.

She still remembered that this man has not long ago saved her from the sneak attack by the gang leader, so, did not harbour any animosity towards him. Instead, she was more curious at his identity and was surprised that he knew Szema Mok's name. So, she spoke up.

"This master (zhi wei gong zi), thank you for helping little sister just now," Xiao Sheng said while clasping her fists in greeting "may I know master's good name?"

[kidd]

I hope SilkenFox come back soon. I want to know why Siu Xiang wanted to stop Szema Mok from attacking the last 2 guys and I want to see her blows up at the arrogant Szema Mok.

This guy is just all about himself. Never listen to people.

[Allen D]

"My name is Li Kang. I've been following you guys for quite some time. I was mainly interested in the origin of this young brother's martial arts *gestures towards Ah Jiang*

[TommyH]

"My name is Li Kang. I've been following you guys for quite some time. I was mainly interested in the origin of this young brother's martial arts *gestures towards Ah Jiang*

Szema Mok looked at Ah Jiang with an interested look. "Since when did you learn such martial arts?"

Ah Jiang looked at Szema Mok then the others who didn't know that he inherited the Dugu 9 Sword Skills. He then started to explain...

[TommyH]

Correction:

Li Xiao Sheng doesn't use a weapon.
She knows basic sword skill, but she doesn't carry any weapon with her. She mostly fought barehanded. That's why I mentioned Bao Hua and Ah Jiang taking out their weapons but did not mentioned Xiao Sheng doing so.

You really should read other people's part more carefully.

I'll pretend that sentence doesn't exist. I'm not going to give Xiao Sheng a weapon just because of your 1 sentence.


Her father not knowing martial art was my unwritten background info for her. But, because it was not written down in her bio, it can change. Since her father is so up to date with the wulin/jianghu news and has a bunch of scouts working for him (Extremer88's story input), he's certainly no ordinary merchant.

Found another one:

TommyH. Please change your sentence. Li Xiao Sheng does not own a weapon.

sorry. i changed it . we should be having the Master of all these thugs appear soon in the next two pages. or what do you guys think?

[kidd]

sorry. i changed it . we should be having the Master of all these thugs appear soon in the next two pages. or what do you guys think?

You only change 1 part.
This part you still have not changed. It's near the beginning of post #393

"He looked for his Dugu Sword and realized that two men were holding onto it, along with the other two ladies' weapon. He glanced at Li Kang who was saving the two girls then he leaped forward and attempted to palm one of the men holding onto the weapons."

[Extremer88]

I think we need some rules and guidelines as well. Also can we have each starting character state their goals so somehow the story can finish and posters dont piss each other off.

I agree with this totally.

[kidd]

Szema Mok looked at Ah Jiang with an interested look. "Since when did you learn such martial arts?"

Ah Jiang looked at Szema Mok then the others who didn't know that he inherited the Dugu 9 Sword Skills. He then started to explain...

"It's Master..."

But then he suddenly stopped.

"Master Kong pass me the duty of guarding the Dugu 9 Sword Manual. It's important that I keep the manual safe. I shouldn't reveal about it to strangers. I can't tell them about YJJ either. It will incriminate uncle." pondered Ah Jiang.

"It's a secret. I cannot tell you guys. Sorry".

[kidd]

Extreme88. You haven't been participating in the story for a long time already.

[Extremer88]

Extreme88. You haven't been participating in the story for a long time already.

Yep, actually I find that the plot is getting a bit wayward, a bit confusing now.

Btw, I thinking of starting a next wuxia rpg. Maybe we could set out the rules and regulations for the next round?