Wolfe, I would appreciate it very much if you point out those mistakes to me (why wait until James and his team tackle it? ) I am not offended, but I will be if you don't point the mistakes out. Neither English nor Chinese is my first language, so I still have a lot to learn. But as Redfirefly noted, the original structure might require me to translate some phrases as I did.
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Moved to Chapter 30 - Reverend Yideng