I think the discussion have made it clear how difficult it is to translate and appreciate the works of foxs_ and JamesG and the rest of the team even more.
Frankly, I didn't even blink when reading the translation because I think the intent of the author has been capture very well. The other thing is done well is the capture of each of the characters' personality through the language that is used. For example for HR, her style seems to be more playful yet intelligent while with Guo Jing, it is the more simple language.