Thread: A step into the past - 寻秦记 - by Huang Yi

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    Hi everyone, the translation monster is going to Europe to help save the Euro for 18 days. Be back on the 6th and hopefully can clear my jet lag to start translating on the 7th.

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    Chapter 06 - Panic

    Inside the main tent.

    When the two men are properly seated, Qu Dou Qi’s faced tightened as he inquired: “I heard Grand Tutor is making a last minute decision to alter the journey. May I know the reason?”

    Xiang Shaolong thought: Even King Zhuangxiang has given him a free hand to do whatever he wants, why am I being questioned by a Major? He recognizes that he has no authority within the Qin army. He is at most a civil official and Lu Buwei’s assistant.

    Checking his temper, he turned the tables: “Has Major Qu heard about Lord Yangquan’s plot against us?”

    Qu Dou Qi pretended to realised what is going on and replied: “If this is your concern, Grand Tutor can rest assured. Master Meng Ao has given instructions. I have deployed riders over the past ten days to scout our surroundings. If there is anyone trailing us, I will be the first to know.”

    Xiang Shaolong smiled: “Has Major Qu know that this travel route has been fixed a long time ago?”

    Qu Duo Qi is a smart man and knows the meaning behind this question. He answered: “Although the route has been fixed a long time ago, except for myself, General Lu and Grand Tutor, even Premier Lu has no idea about the details. So Grand Tutor need not worry about someone leaking out our travel route. ”

    Xiang Shaolong wanted to tell Qu Dou Qi that he will do whatever he wants and it is not up to him to challenge. Ultimately, he swallowed his pride and plainly state: “All we need is a spy who will leave clues for the enemy to follow us. When they find a right spot, they will ambush us. These areas near the Han border are especially dangerous.”

    Unaffected, Qu Dou Qi countered: “In this case, we will still be ambushed even if we change the route. They can also ambush us near the Zhao border. I suggest we stick to the old route. Even if we are defeated, we can still escape.”

    Xiang Shaolong curiously mentioned: “Major Qu is strongly against my changing of the route. May I know the reason?”

    This is a great move. If Qu Dou Qi cannot explain himself, Xiang Shaolong can punish him for disobeying martial law.

    Qu Dou Qi was slightly taken aback. His eyes shining with anger, he coldly replied: “Master Meng has given me the responsibility of ensuring the safety of Grand Tutor. I will naturally put safety as my top priority.”

    Xiang Shaolong was pi55ed and coldly smiled: “Now, I am not sure who is in charge, Major Lu or you? Earlier, he has received my command but now, you seemed to disregard it. Can you explain yourself?”

    Qu Dou Qi was shaken, knowing the Xiang Shaolong is mad at him. Softening his voice, he humbly said: “I dare not disobey your order, but...”

    Xiang Shaolong impatiently cut him off: “We are crossing the river tomorrow. Have you sent someone to swim over and have a look?”

    Qu Dou Qi was dumbfounded. He uttered: “The rafts are not ready and the water is so cold...”

    Xiang Shaolong stood up in a huff and went to the opening of the tent. “Jing Jun!” He shouted.

    Jing Jun stopped his swords duel with Meng Wu immediately. Walking over, he responded: “What orders does Grand Tutor have?”

    Xiang Shaolong commanded: “Find a few brothers at once and swim opposite the river. Check on the surroundings and remain discreet. If there are any discoveries, do not alert the enemy. Clear?”

    Jing Jun happily received the order and left to execute it.

    Qu Dou Qi lowered his head with dissatisfaction. Xiang Shaolong’s action is to highlight his inadequacy and negligence.

    Xiang Shaolong was amused. They came well prepared and one of their secret weapons is the waterproof wet suit made according to Shan Rou’s specifications. He did not expect to use it so soon.

    Originally, he did not want to investigate what is opposite the river. He was reminded by Xiao Yuetan that Lord Yangquan may send someone to assassinate him. While bickering with this disrespectful Qu Dou Qi, he was inspired to use this method to put him down.

    Since he will not accept reasoning, Xiang Shaolong will use hard tactics and force him to submit.

    Insubordination is a big military taboo.

    If Qu Dou Qi or Lu Xiong continue to create problems, he will make use of King Zhuangxiang military decree to dismiss both of them and put Teng Yi in charge.

    He is no longer interested to argue with this man. He icily said: “That’s all. Major Qu can continue to do whatever you are doing. Except for you and Lu Xiong, not a third person must know about the route change. Violators will be dealt according to military law. Tomorrow morning, I will tell you which path to take.”

    Qu Dou Qi kept quiet and stood up. Bowing to Xiang Shaolong, he left unhappily.

    The sky is darkening

    After Xiang Shaolong finished explaining the reason for changing the destination to Qi, Ji Yanran marvelled: “Mister Li Si is indeed extraordinary to analyze the six states so meticulously. He is especially experienced with the Qi people to know about their boasting and debating culture. I did not expect there to be such a man in Premier’s residence. Can Shaolong introduce him to me?”

    Xiang Shaolong understood her character and is happy to have someone chat with her. He nodded: “I will invite him later to meet you.”

    Ji Yanran joyfully cooed; “What surprised me even more was your foresight. You intentionally got him to join our trip.” Xiang Shaolong was feeling guilty. What foresight does he possess?

    Zhao Qian was worried: “But hubby has informed Lady Ya in Daliang and they are waiting for us. If we go to Qi and Chu first, wouldn’t they have to wait like an idi0t for a long time?”

    Xiang Shaolong bitterly smiled: “This cannot be helped. I will send Jing Jun to find them in Daliang first. When we are leaving Qi for Chu, we can meet them halfway. At most, it will be a three month wait!”

    Zhao Qian thought that this is reasonable and kept quiet.

    At this moment, Xia Ying added some rice for Xiang Shaolong. He smiled and asked her if the journey is manageable.

    Other the other side, Qui Ying laughed: “When we were in Xianyang City, Miss taught us to ride horses and practice archery. This trip is easy compared to what we do!”

    Wu Tingfang smiled and proudly state: “Under my training, these ladies are doing very well.”

    Abruptly, disturbing noises can be heard from outside the tent. Teng Yi shouted from outside: “Third Brother, please come out!”

    Xiang Shaolong noticed that his tone is heavy. Sometime must be amiss and he dashed out from his tent.

    A crowd is forming near the empty area near his tent. Even Lu Xiong and Qu Dou Qi were present.

    Jing Jun had just come back from the spying and excitedly exclaimed: “Grand Tutor! We have captured an enemy soldier. Please do not hold it against me. The moment we got out of the water, we ran into this fellow relieving himself. We were forced to act.”

    Xiang Shaolong was traumatized. He looked over to the crowd and everyone has a serious expression on their faces. Qu Dou Qi’s face is guilt-stricken.

    Wu Yan Zhu and Wu Shu, leaders of the twelve elite brothers brought a man before Xiang Shaolong and forced him to kneel down. The man is wearing farming clothes and his hands are bound behind him. Still dripping wet, his face is deathly grey due to the cold.

    In a deep voice, Teng Yi questioned: “Who are you?”

    His lips shivering, the spy lowered his head and rudely shot: “My name is Deng Jia, a Han farmer. I was just passing by. Why did you resort to force and imprison me?”

    Still in his wet suit, Jing Jun countered: “Don’t believe him. He is armed with a sword, a bow and arrows. He is up to no good.”

    Teng Yi passed a sword to Xiang Shaolong and commented: “From the design of the sword, this man is likely to be from Yan.”

    On his side, Xiao Yuetan exclaimed: “What!?”

    Xiang Shaolong was blown away as well. He did not forecast his enemy to be related to Yan. Puzzled, he thought hard and ordered: “Get him some dry clothes. I’ll personally interrogate him.”

    Wu Yan Zhu and Wu Shu received the order and dragged the spy away.

    Xiang Shaolong faced the onlooker soldiers and coldly snorted: “Get back to your posts and be extra alert. Will the two majors, please stay behind.” Turning to Ji Yanran and company, he instructed: “Please wait for me in the tent.”

    Only Teng Yi, Jing Jun, Xiao Yuetan, Lu Xiong and Qu Dou Qi were left. Xiang Shaolong simply mentioned: “If this man is really from Yan, we are in serious danger.”

    Everyone is dead serious and kept quiet.

    Under the illumination of the camp lanterns, the snow continue to fall and the atmosphere is solemn.

    Qu Dou Qi gave a dry cough and kneeled down begging: “I have neglected my duties and am willing to accept Grand Tutor’s punishment.”

    Lu Xiong could only helpless kneel down and beg for mercy as well.

    Xiang Shaolong was glad at this turn of events. Unwittingly, he managed to put down these two men. However, they are in danger now and he cannot be as happy as he wanted. Stepping forward to help them up, he promised: “As long as we work together to manage this crisis, I will not begrudge you.”

    His underlying meaning is: If you go against me, I will make sure you regret it.

    Both men resembled the proud cock that has just lost the cock fight. They stood there crestfallen.

    Xiao Yuetan advised: “Let’s discuss further after we have interrogated Deng Jia! But if I am in his shoes, I will not confess. If I confess, it is as good as signing my own death warrant.”

    Teng Yi smiled: “Leave this to me. Fortunately, the weather has just turned cold. Let me go digging in the nearby burrows to see if I can find a helper.”


    Finishing, he left the camp, leaving everyone bewildered.

    As Xiao Yuetan had foretold, Deng Jia refused to admit that he is a spy.

    Xiang Shaolong knew Teng Yi very well and is certain that he has a good plan. He prevented Qu Dou Qi and the rest from torturing him and tied him in one of the tents with an elite brother standing guard.

    In a short while, Teng Yi returned with a cloth sack. The sack contains something soft.

    Everyone in the tent including Xiang Shaolong was mystified. Only Jing Jun understood. Laughing, he left saying: “Let me get a small basket!”

    Teng Yi ordered his men: “Get him to stand up!’

    Wu Yan Zhu and Wu Shu supported Deng Jia up on two sides.

    Deng Jia was horror-struck. Staring at Teng Yi holding the cloth sack in front of his face, he was also unsure about that animal moving in the cloth sack.

    Qu Dou Qi enquired: “What does Mister Teng plan to do?”

    Teng Yi put his hand into the sack without hesitation. His well-trained hands produced a black and flurry field rat. Holding the rat to Deng Jia’s face, he smiled: “Are you confessing or not?”

    Watching the struggling and squealing giant field rat held up by Teng Yi, even the clever Xiang Shaolong and Xiao Yuetan had no idea how this will help in getting a confession.

    Deng Jia arrogantly countered: “I am just a farmer. What is there to confess?”

    Xiao Yuetan icily smiled: “You had better confess. You have a Yan accent when you speak. Moreover, a farmer in your shoes will be frightened to death and not arrogant like you. Who are you still trying to deceive?”

    Deng Jia heard his words and realised that he has revealed his background. He persisted: “I have no idea what you are talking about. If you still do not believe me, feel free to check the Deng village opposite the river.”

    In this instant, Jing Jun returned with the bamboo basket. “Take off his pants!” he cried.

    Everyone present was stunned.

    In a few quick movements, Wu Yan Zhu did as instructed. Deng Jia was half naked below the waist and everyone look on.

    Jing Jun personally cover his groin area with the bamboo basket. Using a rope that goes behind to Deng Jia’s buttocks, he secured the basket.


    Deng Jia was terrified: “What are you trying to do!?”

    Teng Yi smiled: “You will know in a short while.” To Wu Yan Zhu and Wu Shu, he ordered: “Hold him in a seated position!”

    Everyone finally understood and was convinced that his method is a hundred times more malicious than beating him up.

    Teng Yi lifted a cover on the side of the basket. Putting the rat into the basket, he shut the cover.

    As the rat was moving inside, the basket and Deng Jia started to shake violently.

    Deng Jia screamed: “Xiang Shaolong, you are so vicious!”

    Squatting down, Lu Xiong questioned: “How does Brother Deng Jia know that he is Xiang Shaolong?”

    Deng Jia knew that he has let the cat out of the bag but he cannot be bothered to answer him. His eyes followed the rat as it moves around inside the basket.

    Among those in the tent, he has the best experience in ‘interacting’ with the field rat.

    Squatting down besides Lu Xiong, Xiang Shaolong patted his face and softly coaxed: “Why don’t you confess obediently. Once we have your confession, we will release you after we have left.”

    Teng Yi observed his heaving chest and advised in a deep voice: “When the rat is tired of walking, it will start to look for food. Don’t tell you are waiting for that to happen!”

    Jing Jun laughed: “By then it will be too late. The earlier you confessed, the higher chance your birth organ and urinating organ can remain intact.”

    Without their hard and soft tactics, Deng Jia understood what is befalling him. Petrified, he groaned: “Get this thing away from me first!”

    Qu Dou Qi shook his head: “If you do not start confessing, that thing will stay inside the basket for good.”

    Xiao Yuetan smiled: “You want to drag this further? Idi0t!”

    Either as a result of Deng Jia being scratched or bitten, he tragically shouted: “I confess! We are here on the orders of the Prince. Get it out now!”

    Xiang Shaolong knew that he has fully submitted. He winked at Teng Yi to retrieve the rat. Frankly, he himself is afraid of the rat. If he retrieves the rat himself, all his goose pimples will pop out.

    Shaking his head, Teng Yi roared: “Speak!”

    Without a choice, Deng Jia revealed everything he knows. Without a doubt, this is the fastest interrogation in the world.

    By the time Teng Yi took out the rat, Deng Jia is totally soaked in his own sweat and urine despite the cold weather. This ‘torture’ strategy is truly marvellous.

    From his confession, Xiang Shaolong and Teng Yi understood Yan’s plot as well as the assassination of Lord Longyang outside Handan City.

    Yan’s Prince Dan has been besieged by Lian Po in the capital city. He can only hold his fort and cannot lift the siege. He was forced to send his famed general Xu Yi Luan and three thousand brave soldiers to break out of the siege. They entered Zhao secretly and hope to create chaos to force Zhao to recall their soldiers.

    For a start, they tried to assassinate Lord Longyang. When that failed, they killed the Qi spy and pushed the blame to Tian Dan.

    When this plan failed as well, they conjured up another scheme.

    Prince Dan has friends all over the world. With his well-thought strategies, he has spies in every state. He heard about Xiang Shaolong’s mission to Wei and informed Xu Yi Luan to disguise as Zhao soldiers to kill Xiang Shaolong.

    Xiang Shaolong is representing King Zhuangxiang. If he is killed, Qin will not take it lying down. When Qin attacks Zhao, the siege of Yan’s capital will be lifted. What a clever plan!

    Xu Yi Luan is a wise and capable man. On Xiang Shaolong’s journey to Wei, he deployed sentries and await the perfect opportunity. He decided to attack them as Han soldiers when they are crossing the river tomorrow. When the river crossing has failed, Xiang Shaolong will not dare to enter Han anymore. He will have to divert his route towards Zhao. In Zhao, Xu Yi Luan can utilise his full army strength to ambush them. Once Xiang Shaolong is dead, their mission will be accomplished.

    Everyone is frowning deeply upon hearing this news.

    These Yan soldiers are not in the own country and can behave recklessly. On the other hand, Xiang Shaolong could not bear to alert Zhao and Han about their journey and create unnecessary trouble. He is very troubled about the current situation.

    Besides Xu Yi Luan, Lord Yangquan may have conspired with Han to destroy them. They are travelling with over one thousand men in their party. With such a huge amount of travellers, they become an easy target for any attackers. Even escaping will be difficult.

    If they come across any fortifications that they can use to defend themselves, they may stay alive for the time being but will likely be trapped like a caged animal. In the end, it will be worse as they cannot visit any of the states.

    Xiang Shaolong and company had a long discussion outside the tent. Nobody could think of a good idea to handle this crisis.

    Qu Dou Qi suggested: “Since we know that Xu Yi Luan is hiding in a mountain opposite the river, why don’t we swim over under the cover of the night and eliminate them in a surprise attack?”

    Xiao Yuetan rejected: “That is too risky. I have heard of this man. He is good at military warfare and must have soldiers spying on us in secret. The disappearance of Deng Jia will cause him to be suspicious. Moreover, their army is three times as big as ours. Rushing over now will only send us to our deaths.”

    Lu Xiong’s face is turning green and his lips are turning white, he quavered: “Why don’t we escape at once and leave our empty tents here. By the time the Yan army discovers this, we will be long gone.”

    Although Xiang Shaolong hated his guts, he had to agree with his plan. Nodding, he agreed: “We must definitely escape. However, we must plan how to escape. With only a thousand soldiers, we can move pretty quickly but it is only a river between us and them. They will catch up sooner or later.”

    Qu Dou Qi nodded: “No matter whether it is Zhao or Han territory that we are entering, we must be extremely careful. We must send spies to scout the roads and avoid meeting Zhao and Han soldiers. Thus, our paths will not be as smooth as we want. This will slow down our speed. An intelligent man like Xu Yi Luan will catch up to us very soon.”

    Keep quiet all this while, Teng Yi suddenly spoke up: “I have a suggestion. We will break up our formation and divide our soldiers into smaller groups and travel on different routes. This way, the enemy will not know which group to pursue. It will also make our escape more nimble.”

    Everyone became quiet and digested what he had just recommended.

    Xiang Shaolong concluded: “This is the best way. Let’s do it.”

    The snow fall is getting heavier and heavier

    The killing aura of the wilderness is becoming stronger and stronger.

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    Wow this is so interesting, Thanks Justin13.
    Have a great time on your trip.

    I see the foreshadowing of some great action to come from the "killing aura" mentioned.

    Its time for some...
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    And thank you guys for confirming on Meng Tian's details. But it sounds like he is still a young lad.
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    We'll miss you Justin! Have fun in Europe and don't break too many hearts
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    Damn. This is so intense. Laughing hard on this part:

    "Without a choice, Deng Jia revealed everything he knows. Without a doubt, this is the fastest interrogation in the world."

    I can imagine him mumbling words with his eyes following that "manhood eater" rat. Hahhaa...

    Another XSL lucky break that this spy knows everything about Xu Yi Luan's brilliant plan. Please care to remind me, who is this Xu Yi Luan again? I kind of lost track on names.

    Thanks to Justin13 "The Translation Monster", and to Slyphiad (still need to find his title, yet). Also, last but not forgotten, Ms. "Lady Learn" Jean.

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    And "Ren Wo Xing"

    You guys are the best!
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    Quote Originally Posted by balikpapan View Post

    Another XSL lucky break that this spy knows everything about Xu Yi Luan's brilliant plan. Please care to remind me, who is this Xu Yi Luan again? I kind of lost track on names.
    I think this is the first time he got mentioned in the novel. A famed general of the state Yan, he is under the command of Yan's Prince Dan. Yan's capital is being besieged by Lian Po's army of Zhao,so he has been sent out to create some chaos to distract Zhao. XLS will meet him and his master Prince Dan later in the book.

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    Thanx, xlandhenry. Yeah, Xu Yi Luan's name didn't ring any bell. That's why.

    @ gqonmars, your avatar is awesome. WHat is it? Looks like a pair of woman's thighs holding a box, and a big 'sausage' sticking out.

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    ah.....
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    This is such a great novel. I wish they make a show out of it. ( I know there is a TVB version but it is missing alot of things )

    Thanks all the translator!!!! You guys are so cool.

    I wish I can read Chinese ( I am Chinese btw loll! )

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    Quote Originally Posted by herman285 View Post
    This is such a great novel. I wish they make a show out of it. ( I know there is a TVB version but it is missing alot of things )

    Thanks all the translator!!!! You guys are so cool.

    I wish I can read Chinese ( I am Chinese btw loll! )

    One option would be using a text-to-speech engine. Are you interested in helping out with the translation?

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    hi guys. i'm back again. sorta anyway.

    just wanna let u guys know i'll be busy till end of this mth.
    helping my family with a few things.

    but i'll be back to help out with translating again after that.

    awesome work so far!! very surprising we get this far.

    won't be long before we reach the end of the series. hehehe...

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    Thanks for the latest update Justin! Have a great time in Europe!

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    Hi All,

    I'm back! Will start work tomorrow as I will be busy distributing all the gifts and souvenirs. Hang on for an exciting confrontation!!!

    Justin

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    Looking forward to it! Welcome back Justin.

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    Worst part I ever translated... 1st half of Chapter 07.

    Chapter 07 – Pine Forest Ambush

    Snowflakes fell relentlessly from the sky.

    On the dark snowy plains, everyone is silently packing up the tents and getting ready to leave.

    Xiang Shaolong, Teng Yi, Jing Jun, Xiao Yuetan, Li Si as well as the twelve elite Wu family warriors are prone on the riverbank, scanning for any suspicious activity on the opposite shore.

    Beyond the black pine forest, there was no other sign of life. If not for the capture of Deng Jia and knowing the enemies’ ambush from his confession, it will be hard to imagine that there were three thousands enemies spying on them with ill intentions.

    Xiao Yuetan coldly snorted: “Yan really stooped so low just to relieve the siege by the Zhao army.” However, Xiang Shaolong thought that it is rather common for such despicable acts during these warring times.

    Lu Xiong appeared and reported: “Grand Tutor! Everything is ready. We can set off anytime.”

    Xiang Shaolong gave the order to depart.

    The one thousand Qin soldiers were split into two groups of five hundred each. Pulling their horses and carriages, one group went upstream while the other group went downstream. Lighting their lamps, they resembled numerous fireflies.

    Ji Yanran, the other girls and the three hundred Lu Family warriors retreated among the darkness into the red pine forest.

    The stillness of the night was shattered by the galloping sounds of the horses and the movement of the carriages.

    Teng Yi eyed the black forest opposite the river and laughed: “If I am Xu Yi Luan, I will be having a bad headache now.”

    Xiao Yuetan asked in a deep voice: “Will he be tricked?”

    Jing Jun replied in a low voice: “We will know soon enough!”

    It is difficult to navigate the paths in the dark and the armies moved at a snail’s pace. It was only two hours later that both groups are considerable apart from each other.

    As agreed, they will meet twenty days later at Mount Yangchang which is situated besides Qinshui and at the Zhao-Han border. If they did not meet up after three days of waiting, they will meet up again at Mount Wang Lung Ling at the Zhao-Qi border.

    The Qin army has undergone strict training and everyone is highly skilled in archery and horse-riding. With a smaller force, it is much easier to escape in this uninhabited territory.

    Teng Yi softly whistled: “The enemy is moving!”

    Footsteps and hoof beats sounded from a hill on the opposite shore. Hundreds of torches were lit and two groups of men chased upstream and downstream like two fire dragons.

    Xu Yi Luan guessed that he has been discovered that there is no more need to keep hiding.

    When the two fire dragons have gone far, Xiang Shaolong ordered: “Little Jun, please investigate the opposite shore again. If everyone is really gone, we will cross the river at dawn tomorrow.”

    Jing Jun grunted a reply and led the twelve elite Wu family warriors across the river on two hidden rafts. Li Si and Xiao Yuetan went along with them.

    Xiang Shaolong and Teng Yi returned to the red pine forest leisurely.

    This surprise ambush by the Yan army has caused them some panic but everything is resolved for the moment.

    Xiang Shaolong was about to say something but he interrupted by what he sees in front of him. Trembling, Teng Yi shouted: “Not good!”

    The edge of the red pine forest is filled with a thousand red flaming torches. Closing in like a fan towards the centre of the forest, the air is filled with battle cries and the attack is earth-shattering.

    Both men thought of the assassination of Lord Longyang. The colour disappearing from their faces, they drew their swords and ran madly towards the red pine forest.

    There were at least five hundred invaders and they had approached the forest in silence. When they were discovered by the sentries of the Lu Family Warriors, they charged straight into battle.

    From the start, the Yan army has ambushed Xiang Shaolong’s entourage from three sides – upstream, downstream and within the red pine forest. Even if they wish to escape now, the river will block their escape.

    In such freezing weather, jumping into the river is as good as committing suicide.

    Their opponent employs the most vicious, bloodthirsty and well-planned strategies to kill them all.

    Killing sounds filled the air as men and horses fell alike. Ji Yanran was directing the family warriors and was protecting Wu Tingfang, Zhao Qian and the four maids. Together with the Meng brothers, they escaped towards the river.

    Luckily, the forest is very dense, the ground is uneven and it is dark at night. Otherwise, they would have perished under the arrows of the enemy.

    However, they were being forced to the river by the attackers and they may not survive anyway.

    Countless enemies are streaming over from all over. The Lu Family warriors may be top fighters and fought with their lives but the overwhelming majority of enemies soon overcome them.

    Barely leaving the forest, Chun Ying gave a tragic cry. A long arrow has pierced her back and she died on the spot.

    Wu Tingfang and the other maids wailed in agony.

    Coolly, Ji Yanran pulled Zhao Qian and yelled: “Follow me!” Snaking through the edge of the forest, she advanced towards a small hill besides the river.

    Only about a hundred warriors are with her. Half of them re-entered the forest to re-engage the enemy. The remaining sixty-odd men covered their retreat and rushed up the hill together. The snow-covered slopes only caused their ascent to take twice as long.

    Behind them, torches can be seen everywhere and the forest is shining red like blood.

    On the side, ten odd enemies disguised as hunters came assaulting. Mad on her killing spree, Ji Yanran pierced continuously with her lance and killed several men in a row, creating an opening.

    Another enemy chopped down at Zhao Qian who is behind Ji Yanran, disregarding the fact that she is female and powerless.

    Ji Yanran’s lance is embedded into another enemy’s chest and cannot rescue her in time. Meng Tian who is on her right dashed over and his sword flashed, severing the man head from his body.

    As they are about to reach the hilltop, a shower of arrows rained on them and another ten family warriors were felled.

    The enemies scrambled over and chopped furiously at those hit by arrows to ensure their deaths.

    Qiu Ying slipped and fell onto the ground.

    Xia Ying and Dong Ying were as close to her as real sisters. They turned back to help her up. With this lapse, a gang of unscrupulous invaders broke through their defences and in the chaos, murdered all three of them. It was a heart-breaking sight.

    Wu Tingfang nearly fainted upon seeing this. Supported by Meng Wu and Meng Tian, they reached the hilltop.

    The remaining thirty family warriors utilise their advantageous terrain height and managed to hold the attackers at bay but not for long too.

    At this crucial moment, Xiang Shaolong and Teng Yi arrived to help them. Noticing the maids’ absence, they could guess what had happened.

    Xiang Shaolong exclaimed: “Get to the river. Jing Jun is there!”

    Wu Tingfang wailed: “Hubby!” Meng Wu interrupted her and dragged her away.

    Ji Yanran cried: “Don’t get caught up in the fighting!” Leading the four persons, they ran down slope towards the river.

    Teng Yi had reached the hilltop. Waving his heavy sword, he massacred everyone in his sight.

    Xiang Shaolong cut off the pursuers of Ji Yanran and began his own killing spree. The fighting is simply horrendous.

    As another hundred of attackers swarmed up the hill, someone shouted: “Xiang Shaolong is here!”

    Xiang Shaolong just disembowelled two men. Scanning his surrounding, he can see more enemies advancing. Except for Teng Yi, there is no other survivor. He knew that if he still continued to fight, he will meet his end here. Roaring loudly, he brandished his sword and fought his way to Teng Yi, bellowing: “Go!”

    By now, their bodies are filled with sword wounds. Teng Yi nodded and swept his sword, killing another two men.

    Fighting as they retreat, they were hard pressed and found it hard to slip away.

    Eyeing the countless fighters coming out of the red pine forest and climbing the hill to engage them, Xiang Shaolong called out: “Let’s roll down!”

    Pulling Teng Yi, they bend down and rolled down the hill slope.

    Thanks to the heavy snowfall, the ground was wet and soft and they rolled safely to the bottom of the hill.

    Like madmen, the Yan army chased down the hill.

    As they got up, Teng Yi grunted. His right shoulder was pierced by an arrow.

    Ten odd enemies are rushing over from both sides.

    Xiang Shaolong pulled out his flying needles and shot them out in succession. Before they knew what happened seven men were strike dead. The remaining men scrambled to safety.

    Suddenly, the fiery torches dimmed.

    The snowy slope is extremely slippery. Several of the torch-bearers slipped and fell into the snow, extinguishing the flames.

    Teng Yi reached behind him and held onto the arrow. Pulling the arrow out with some of his flesh and blood, he struck the arrowhead into the throat of another attacker.

    With his armour protecting him, the arrow only entered his flesh by a few inches and his organs are unharmed. Otherwise, he may lose his life.

    Taking advantage of the low visibility, they charged into a group of enemies and break out of the encirclement. Once freed, they sped towards the river.

    Behind them, three groups of men carrying torches were trailing closely and battle cries filled their ears.

    In an instance, they reached the river shore, Jing Jun leapt over and happily cried: “Let’s go!”

    Leading them, he ran along the river.

    The first raft carrying Ji Yanran and the rest had just left. The other raft is waiting for them.

    Jumping of the raft, they rowed towards the opposite shore.

    As they reached the centre of the river, the pursuers came to the river bank. Taking out their bows, they rained arrows on Xiang Shaolong and company.

    The twelve elite Wu Family Warriors formed a human wall and used their swords to deflect the incoming arrows.

    Tragic calls were heard.

    One man was hit and he fell onto Xiang Shaolong.

    Grieved, Xiang Shaolong and Teng Yi yelled at the same time: “Get down!”

    Another three men were hit by arrows.

    The rafts finally left the firing range of the arrows and arrived at the opposite shore.

    The enemies were cursing helpless. To think they let them escape even in such a disadvantageous situation.

    Xiang Shaolong had just leapt onto shore when Wu Tingfang heartbreakingly leapt into his blood-stained embrace.

    Jing Jun suddenly cry out: “Third Princess!”

    Xiang Shaolong trembled uncontrollably as he looked over. Zhao Qian was in Ji Yanran’s arms with an arrow protruding from her chest and she has breathed her last.
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    Agreed.

    This part just seems so poorly written compared to the rest of the story.

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    Zhao Qian is dead ... nooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!

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    Welcome back and thanks for the update Justin!

    Really, XSL shouldn't be bringing his women out in time of war. So far, besides Ji Yanran, Shan Rou, and maybe Zhao Ya, none of his other women help him in anyway. I thought Wu Tingfang knows martial arts. Why is she falling apart and not help with the fighting?

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