Thread: A step into the past - 寻秦记 - by Huang Yi

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    Quote Originally Posted by tweety365 View Post
    I never thought I would be so addicted to politics, scheming agendas, battle strategies, etc. Huang Yi is such a good story teller.

    Can't express how much I appreciate your translation efforts, Justin!
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    Thanks girl. I enjoy adding value to your life and to everyone else here as well.

    Don't fret! It's only 4 days unlike my Europe trip which is 18 days.

    You can always re-read some of the earlier chapters and I'll be back before you know it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by tweety365 View Post
    Can't express how much I appreciate your translation efforts, Justin!
    Only 4 days left until your vacation. Yes, I'm counting down
    4 days, that would mean ... *counting* ... at least 8 chapters???!!! YAYYYYY
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    Thanks Justin13. Great work and what suspense you have left me with wanting to read more all the time.

    I too will be counting down the minutes of your leave + return
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    Wow!!...Like reading unabridged...lost for word man....Kowtow monster

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    Dear sunn, I tried to meet your expectations ha ha but this is such a long chapter!

    Gqonmars2, happy counting and happy reading!

    Crydee, please rise!

    Chapter 06 – Before the funeral

    Xiang Shaolong returned to the Wu residence.

    The fire that night only burned down a rice granary. The rest of the buildings are not affected.

    Over the past ten days, two thousand of the elite family warriors entered Xianyang City separately, increasing their fighting prowess.

    Riding Jifeng, he rode through the main gates with Teng Yi, Jing Jun and the Guardians. The air is filled with loud noises as the warriors are busy erecting sentry posts and other fortifications.

    Xiang Shaolong was feeling great and jumped down his horse, wanting to inspect their work. Tao Fang came up and welcomed: “Lord Longyang is waiting for you in the main hall.”

    Teng Yi glanced at the huge courtyard in front of the residence and did not see any horse carriages or escorts. Puzzled, he asked: “He came alone?”

    Tao Fang nodded.

    Xiang Shaolong is excited to see him as well and know more about matters in Wei, including news about Zhao Ya. With Tao Fang, he entered the hall to see Lord Longyang.

    He did not put on a fake beard this time but was dressed as a commoner to keep a low profile.

    Tao Fang left the two men alone and Lord Longyang happily exclaimed: “I am delighted to see Brother Xiang doing well.”

    Xiang Shaolong smiled: “From your tone, it seems that I should count my blessings to be able to stay alive.”

    Lord Longyang faintly sighed: “Countless people inside and outside of Qin are dying to kill you. There has been news that you are opposing Lu Buwei. With Lu Buwei’s growing influence, even I am worried for you!”

    Xiang Shaolong is already used to this drag queen’s emotional outbursts. He bitterly smiled: “Paper cannot contain a fire. Nothing can be concealed from the world.”

    Lord Longyang was astounded and asked: “What is paper?”

    Xiang Shaolong kicked himself, remembering that paper is only invented during the Han Dynasty. He lied: “It is my hometown dialect which refers to silk material.”

    Lord Longyang ‘understood’ and added: “I am here to pay my last respects to your late king. It is strange to have two kings die within four years. Everyone is heavily suspicious and Lu Buwei is really brave.”

    Xiang Shaolong knew that he is trying to trick him and sighed as well. Changing the topic, he asked: “How is Prince Xinling doing?” Lord Longyang coldly replied: “This traitor got his just desserts. I don’t think he will ever recover his former glory. My spies reported that he is indulging in women and wine and even disband many of his family warriors. Under these circumstances, the King should not make things hard for him anymore.”

    He lowered his voice and revealed: “Zhao Ya is very sick!”

    Xiang Shaolong was stunned and exclaimed: “What!?”

    Lord Longyang sighed: “When she was sick, she kept calling your name. Prince Xinling was so furious he did not step into her bedroom at all.”

    Xiang Shaolong was grieved upon hearing this. How he wished he can grow two wings and fly to Daliang straight away.

    Lord Longyang assured: “Brother Xiang can rest easy. I have petitioned the King and brought her into the palace and send the best physicians to take care of her. If Brother Xiang is willing, I can send her to Xianyang City but you must wait till she gets better.”

    Xiang Shaolong was taken aback: “She is so sick that she cannot travel?”

    Lord Longyang intimately replied: “Lovesickness is the hardest to cure!”

    Xiang Shaolong could not be bothered about the double meaning in his words. Impulsively, he declared: “No! I am going to Daliang to fetch her.”

    In a gentle voice, Lord Longyang advised: “Brother Xiang, do not let your emotions overwhelm logic. Xianyang City is now the battleground for all the strongmen of every state. If you leave like this and return to find your family annihilated, it will be too late for regrets.”

    Xiang Shaolong was not fully convinced and insisted: “I will send someone to fetch her. Can Lord please send someone capable to come along as well?”

    Lord Longyang agreed: “No problem. Prince Zhen has an excellent opinion of you. If he knows it is to help you, he will do his best. The King agreed to take care of Zhao Ya also because you rescued Prince Zhen.”

    Xiang Shaolong put Zhao Ya’s issue aside and asked: “Except for Tian Dan, Li Yuan and General Pang, who are the other representatives?”

    Lord Longyang disclosed: “Prince Dan represents the state of Yan and your old friend Han Chuang is here. Everyone is eager to collaborate with Lu Buwei and you better watch your back. They dare not do anything in Xianyang City but if Lu Buwei sends you out of Qin, there will be people trying to kill you.”

    Xiang Shaolong was wondering if he should tell Lord Longyang that his assassins are led by Yan’s Xu Yi Luan when Lord Longyang continued: “Li Yuan brought Chu’s youngest Princess along and hoped to match-make her with Prince Zheng. Lu Buwei has agreed on his behalf but Lu Gong, Xu Xian and Du Bi are voicing strong objections. If the matchmaking fails, Lu Buwei’s prestige will be affected.”

    Xiang Shaolong commented: “The success of the matchmaking depends on the Empress’s decision. However, Lu Buwei will use some devious method to make her agree with his suggestion.”

    Lord Longyang whispered: “I heard that the Empress favours you greatly. Why don’t you sow discord and destroy Li Yuan’s plans?”

    Xiang Shaolong feared seeing Zhu Ji. If things go wrongly and they got together, he will have a guilty conscience and it also affects his standing and reputation. He sighed loudly: “It is because she favours me that it is difficult for me to say anything.”

    Lord Longyang knew his character and concluded: “I came here in secret and cannot stay too long. Tomorrow morning, I will send someone to look for you. His name is Ning Jia and he is my trusted subordinate. He is capable and smart. With him accompanying your man to Daliang, the trip will be a success.”

    Xiang Shaolong thanked him profusely and sent him out.

    Coming back into the house, he held a discussion with Teng Yi and Tao Fang.

    He originally wanted Jing Jun to fetch Zhao Ya but he needed all the men he can muster now. Finally, he got Wu Guo to fetch her with five hundred elite warriors.

    In the middle of the conference, Qin Qing actually sent someone to find him.

    The three men were caught by surprise. Has this pure and virtuous beauty finally fallen in love?

    By the time Xiang Shaolong, Teng Yi, Jing Jun and the original Eighteen Guardians reached her place, it was nightfall, adding to the ambiguity of the situation. Everyone got seated at the simple main hall and two pretty maids begin to serve tea. Second Uncle Fang, the housekeeper, brought Xiang Shaolong, Teng Yi and Jing Jun into the inner hall.

    Jing Jun was elated that his beauty treats him as an important guest while Xiang Shaolong is disappointed that this visit has nothing to do with their personal romance.

    Men are like that. Even if they are not interested, they would not mind women falling in love with them as long as it is trouble-free.

    Still in her mourning clothes, Qin Qing has a serious expression on her face. She greeted them and sat down in the host’s seat.

    Upon knowing that they have not taken their dinner, she instructed her maids to serve cakes to them and the Guardians.

    Xiang Shaolong and his men did not hold back their appetites and munched on the cakes. The cakes are delicious and Jing Jun is full of praise for them.

    Noticing her furrowed brows, Xiang Shaolong could not help but ask: “Why is Grand Tutor Qin looking for me?”

    Qin Qing faintly sighed: “I may be thinking too much but something has happened today that I don’t feel good about.”

    The three men were shocked. Putting their cakes down, they stared at her.

    Qin Qing is uncomfortable with three men staring straight at her, especially Jing Jun’s shifty eyes. Lowering her head, she described: “I went to the royal temple today to change the flowers at the late king’s altar. When I was about to leave, I was waylaid by Premier’s guest-advisor Lao Ai.”

    The three men’s expression grew heavy as well.

    Jing Jun was incensed: “How daring! I must teach him a lesson. Who cares where is he from.”

    Teng Yi questioned: “Doesn’t Grand Tutor Qin have any warriors escorting you?”

    Qin Qing responded: “Not only do I have warriors escorting me; even the two Premiers are at the Royal Temple. When they heard my cries, they ran out.”

    Jing Jun coldly smiled: “Now Lu Buwei is in trouble!”

    Teng Yi kicked him under the table.

    Qin Qing faced Teng Yi and sincerely pleaded: “Brother Teng, please do not regard me as an outsider. Sister Yanran and I click very well. That’s why I invited everyone here to discuss this.”

    Teng Yi was embarrassed and awkwardly agreed: “Sure! How did Lu Buwei handle this affair?”

    Qin Qing’s expression became more serious and slowly described: “Lu Buwei did a good job. In front of Premier Xu and myself, he got Lao Ai to kowtow and apologise. He even publicly censured him.”

    Xiang Shaolong could guess what is coming next as it is recorded in history. He sighed: “Did he proceed to send him into the palace to be a eunuch?”

    Bewildered, Qin Qing asked: “How did you know?”

    Teng Yi and Jing are even more fascinated. They have been with Xiang Shaolong the entire day. If there is anything he has seen or heard, they should seen it or heard it as well.

    Even if Philosopher Shi is reborn, he may not even guess that Lu Buwei is ‘punishing’ Lao Ai in such a manner.

    Xiang Shaolong was in a fix, knowing that he has a slip of the tongue and revealed Heaven’s Secret. No matter how he tries to explain, no one will believe that he is that lucky.

    Qin Qing had thought that Xiang Shaolong has spies in the palace who told him. But witnessing the look of amazement on the faces of Teng Yi and Jing Jun, she had a big shock and interrogated with disbelief: “Grand Tutor Xiang only made a guess?”

    Xiang Shaolong composed himself and pretended that it is nothing significant and sighed: “This is quite easy to predict. Lu Buwei’s top priority is to get Empress Ji to support him fully. In Xianyang City, there is no one who knows her weakness better than him. Lao Ai is his strongest pawn. He will make Lao Ai a fake eunuch and let him enter the palace and seduce Empress Ji. In terms of scheming, we are way inferior compared to Lu Buwei.”

    Teng Yi and Jing Jun began to see some light but were still in awe about Xiang Shaolong god-like prediction.

    Qin Qing stared viciously at Xiang Shaolong. After some time and still unconvinced, she commented: “I spend a long time thinking about this matter before I reach this conclusion. Before I could finish speaking, Grand Tutor Xiang knows everything as if he is also present as well. I think Grand Tutor’s intelligence is sky-high and the inferior Lu Buwei is therefore jealous of you.”

    Xiang Shaolong was feeling guilty and worried at the same time.

    Zhu Ji and Lao Ai are like dry wood and fire. Nobody can stop it. What should he do next?

    Jing Jun suggested: “Let me sneak into the palace and deliver a cut to him, making him a real eunuch.”

    Qin Qing cannot tolerate his coarse words and her face turned red. Displeased, she chided: “Brother Jing, we are talking about important issues!”

    Teng Yi shot Jing Jun an angry look but Jing Jun is dissatisfied. Xiang Shaolong spoke coarsely too but this widow did not blame him. Xiang Shaolong knew that he has deceived them and relaxed. He was inspired and replied: “”Grand Tutor Qin thinks too highly of me. It is a pity that nobody can stop them.

    Qin Qing was taken aback: “But Empress always listens to Grand Tutor!”

    In a frank and agonized manner, Xiang Shaolong replied: “The problem is that I cannot replace Lao Ai and thus, lose my advantage.”

    Momentarily, Qin Qing does not understand his meaning. After realising, she lowered her head and bit her lip, pondering: “I understand but this is no small matter. Not only does it concern the reputation of the palace, it will allow Lu Buwei to be even more aggressive. Isn’t Grand Tutor Xiang worried at all?”

    Xiang Shaolong earnestly suggested: “Why don’t Grand Tutor Qing head to Bashu and accompany Lady Hua Yang and lead a peaceful life?”

    Qin Qing was shaken and stared at him. With mixed expressions on her face and lost for words, she finally lowered her head and dismissed in a low voice: “I have my own life and Grand Tutor need not worry. It is late! Thanks for coming!”

    The three men did not anticipate her to end the discussion so abruptly and were disappointed. As they left, Qin Qing did not bother to see them off. The night wind is blowing strongly as they left her residence.

    Teng Yi could not hold back and asked: “Third Brother is not going to expose Lao Ai and Lu Buwei’s scheme to Empress Ji?”

    Xiang Shaolong sighed: “For Empress Zhu Ji, it is like fresh water after a drought. Who can resist?”

    Jing Jun praised: “Fresh water after a drought. Lu Buwei is really good.”

    As he held his horse, Teng Yi sighed deeply: “If Lao Ai manages to control Empress Ji, can we still survive in Xianyang City?”

    Xiang Shaolong icily state: “Firstly, Empress Ji is not so easy to be controlled. If fact, we can make use of this to support Lao Ai and make him break away from Lu Buwei. When that happens, Lu Buwei will be in trouble, not us.”

    Teng Yi and Jing Jun were awestruck while Xiang Shaolong has leapt onto Jifeng and rode ahead towards the long street.

    In this moment, he is full of confidence when dealing with Lu Buwei.

    Because no one can change history, including Lu Buwei.

    So this evil man will pay the price for playing with fire.

    No one can change history. The only problem is – he doesn’t know his own fate!

    The next day, at dawn, Li Si led a huge group of palace guards and the Imperial Edict to Wu Residence. Representing Xiao Pan, he officially appointed Xiang Shaolong as the General in charge of the Imperial Cavalry. Teng Yi and Jing Jun are appointed his assistant generals. They were presented with appointment letters, bows and arrows, official swords, army uniforms and emblems, as well as five hundred personal escorts. This shows that the King has been generous with them.

    Xiang Shaolong is certain that this arrangement is planned by Li Si and is perfect. After receiving the Imperial Edict, Teng Yi personally selected five hundred men and got them to change into military uniforms. Together they rode towards the palace.

    At the giant courtyard before the main palace, Xiao Pan has just finished the morning court session. With Zhu Ji by his side, he led both Premiers and his officials up an altar where he prayed to Heaven. The procession is impressive and majestic.

    On this day, Xiang Shaolong and his men are exceedingly busy but joyful. He has to take over the Imperial Cavalry Command Centre east of the City and inspect his army. Later, he has to tie up the communication channels with the other ministries and even prepare for King Zhuangxiang’s funeral tomorrow. The list is endless.
    Fortunately, Xiang Shaolong enjoys support from the military leaders and Lu Buwei pretended to support him so everything went on smoothly.

    Jing Jun is the grandest looking. Officially appointed at the assistant general of the Imperial Cavalry, he is in high spirits.

    On the same day under Tao Fang’s arrangement, Wu Guo and Lord Longyang’s Ning Jia left for Daliang with five hundred elite warriors, determined to bring Zhao Ya back.

    At night, Xiao Pan summoned Xiang Shaolong into the palace. Meeting him alone at the inner palace, he was infuriated: “Have you heard about Lao Ai?”

    Xiang Shaolong sighed: “Empress is involved with him right?”

    Anxious and angry, Xiao Pan cursed: “The late king has yet to be buried and Lu Buwei this traitor brought this gigo1o to be a fake eunuch and seduce Mother. I wish I can tear him to pieces.”

    Xiang Shaolong has to admit that Lao Ai has his way with women to seduce Zhu Ji in such a short time. Feeling bitter himself, he is disgusted with Zhu Ji for not monitoring her own behaviour. However, Zhu Ji has been lonely for some time and is a passionate woman. As a result, she cannot resist the seduction of Lao Ai the Casanova.

    Xiao Pan is so mad he began to pace up and down the room. Xiang Shaolong could only accompany him in pacing.

    All of a sudden, he stopped and stared at him furiously: “When I left Mother and you alone that day, I wanted you to comfort her. Of all the men in the world, I will only accept you being close to her.”

    Xiang Shaolong can only look back at him helplessly.

    He understood Xiao Pan’s thinking. Just like only he is good enough to be Lady Ni’s lover in the past, Xiao Pan has regarded Zhu Ji as his mother and hoped that he will be Zhu Ji’s lover as well. To a certain extent, he is Xiao Pan’s ideal father.

    Xiang Shaolong sighed: “If I do that, I will not be Xiang Shaolong.”

    Xiao Pan was astounded for a while. Then he nodded: “I understand. But now my heart is full of anger and hatred. I have this urge to barge into the back palace and give Lao Ai a heavy beating to vent my frustration.”

    Pausing, he continued: “Ai! What shall we do now? Before I am officially crowned King, everything must be approved by Mother. If Lu Buwei controls her, I will face further constraints. This afternoon, Mother summoned me and wanted me to replace the head of the palace guards An Gu with Lu Buwei’s Guan Zhongxie. I violently objected and after quarrelling for two hours, she retracted her suggestion. She proposed to make Guan Zhongxie the Imperial Infantry Commander instead and I had to agree.”

    He sighed loudly: “What should I do?”

    Scanning his child-like face, Xiang Shaolong explained: “This is your mother tricking you. She knew that you will never change An Gu and proposed an alternative so that you will consent at the end.”

    Xiao Pan was in a daze. Thinking hard, he confessed: “So this is how it is. I still cannot win her.”

    Xiang Shaolong comforted: “Do not lose hope. You are still young and love her deeply. That is why you lost to her. Come! Let’s sit down and think it over and see if we can counter Lu Buwei’s scheme.”

    Like a deflated balloon, a crestfallen Xiao Pan returned to his seat on the sofa and turned his attention to Xiang Shaolong.

    Xiang Shaolong seriously asked: “How did Crown Prince know about Lao Ai?”

    Xiao Pan angrily recounted: “Yesterday morning, Lu Buwei’s men brought Lao Ai into the palace. In front of Mother and I, he read out his crimes, saying he has just castrated him and ordered him to serve the palace as an eunuch. I am already suspicious because Lao Ai still looks full of life despite a recent castration. Only his face is slightly pale. Lu Buwei and Mother spoke in secret after that and Mother brought Lao Ai back to the Empress Palace. I felt that something is amiss and sent someone to investigate. They spent last night together.”

    Xiang Shaolong was curious: “What is so attractive about Lao Ai?”

    Xiao Pan slammed the table and cursed: “D@mn gigo1o!” He added: “Honestly, he is tall, handsome and imposing with some heroic air, similar to you. His skin is much whiter; no wonder Mother was smitten the moment she saw him. Ai! What shall I do?”

    This is the third time he said these words. Zhu Ji’s action has caused him to lose his bearings.

    Xiang Shaolong came face to face with him and whispered: “Have you spoke to Li Si about this?”

    Xiao Pan gave an agonized look: “Except for Master, I would not dare to tell anyone else. In fact, I have to keep it a secret for her.”

    Xiang Shaolong sighed secretly. This is Xiao Pan’s dilemma. With everyone eyeing his position, he is dependent on Lu Buwei and Zhu Ji. Without them, this twelve year-old will be fighting a lone battle. Before he is crowned King, he must protect Zhu Ji and Lu Buwei and consolidate his power. It is a complicated affair.

    Xiang Shaolong shifted his position and looked up at the main pillar support the room. He breathed deeply and offered: “There are two great plans that will help you avoid this present danger and be crowned in the future.”

    Like a lost person who found the way home, Xiao Pan jumped for joy: “Master, tell me quickly!”

    Xiang Shaolong watched him brightening up and was pleased. He explained: “First, we must win the support of the military. They are divided into four main groups. The most powerful tribe is central (Zhong Li) group and they are led by Lu Gong, Xu Xian and Wang Ling. They stand for righteousness and fairness. In a way, they are the most dangerous. If they turn against us, we will fight a losing battle. We can say that whichever side they choose, that side will benefit tremendously.”

    Xiao Pan frowned: “I understand this. The other three groups are Lu Buwei, Lord Gaoling and Cheng Chongqiao. How can we win the support of Lu Gong and his men?”

    Xiang Shaolong almost wanted to laugh: “It is simple. You must prove to them who you are.”

    He proceeded to tell him about Lu Gong and the blood test.

    Xiao Pan was initially dumbfounded and exchanged a strange look with Xiang Shaolong. Simultaneously, they burst out in wild laughter, unable to believe such a ridiculous and funny experiment.

    This future Qin Shi Huang was laughing so hard that his tears are flowing. Panting for air, he asked: “What is the other plan?”

    Xiang Shaolong bitterly laughed: “That is to work with Lu Buwei.”

    Xiao Pan was flabbergasted and exclaimed: “What!?”

    Xiang Shaolong analyzed: “Lord Yangquan may be gone by Cheng Chongqiao still remains. There is also Lord Gaoling who is waiting patiently at the side. Both of them are serious contenders for the throne. If we focus on opposing Lu Buwei, both of us will be at a disadvantage and these two groups can seize the opportunity to attack us. They may even work together and force you to abdicate and that will be disastrous. If Lu Buwei still treats you as his son but Lu Gong and his men knows a different truth, you can control both sides and eliminate both contenders first. Then you will turn around and attack Lu Buwei. By then, no one will dare to oppose you.”

    Xiao Pan slapped the table: “This is a good plan but Lu Buwei is a domineering man. If we allow him to do whatever he wants, he will end up with the most authority. If the military leaders are all his men, what can we do?”

    Xiang Shaolong’s mouth curled up in a smile and simply state: “This is called ‘using your own weapon against yourself’. Not only will we not bother about your Mother, we will support Lao Ai.”

    Xiao Pan thought he heard wrongly and exclaimed: “What?!”

    Xiang Shaolong explained: “Lao Ai is a heartless and selfish man, always looking for benefits. If he sees the opportunity, he will leave Lu Buwei’s control. Since he knows the Premier residence well, he will get capable men to defect as well, weakening Lu Buwei. Your mother will support him and use him to counter Lu Buwei’s influence. While they are fighting, you will be the one reaping all the rewards.”

    Pausing, he added: “Unless I am wrong, when your father is buried, Lao Ai will ask your mother for an official appointment. When that happens, you should know what to do!”

    Xiao Pan is totally swept off his feet. At the end, he breathed in deeply and wondered: “Is there anyone in this world who is more scheming than Master?”

    In this very moment, Xiang Shaolong knew that Xiao Pan has fully matured and is not a wilful child anymore.

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    Wow, such a long chapter Thanks Justin!

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    Without them, this twelve year-old will be fighting a lone battle.
    Question, isn’t Xiao Pan 15 and not 12? Or have I got his age all mixed up again?

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    Wow...two new posts since yesterday! Thanks Justin!

    XSL is always saying how no one can change the future, but doesn't he realize that him being there has already changed the future to some extend? Him being placed in the past has already created an alternate universe so he should just stop following the outcome and just do things differently.

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    That's only one possibility in these sort of time travel stories.

    It could just as easily be a stable time loop type of universe where XSL has always had a hand in history being a self-fulfilling paradox.

    The universe could also be the immutable archetype where these minor actions of a single character, no matter how sweeping, cannot change the flow of history and the changes stabilize to what it was before within decades after the character dies.



    Since this story hasn't ended yet, we don't know what type of universe this is. It's possible that XSL has indelibly altered history; it's also possible that, as he believes, history is immutable.

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    Xiao Pan's age got changed between chapters!!

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    >Lowering her head, she described: “I went to the royal temple today to >change the flowers at the late king’s altar. When I was about to leave, I >was waylaid by Premier’s guest-advisor Lao Ai.”

    What does waylaid imply? Does she mean she was accosted or sexually assaulted by Lao Ai? Does this mean she lost her chastity?

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    Quote Originally Posted by bchin22 View Post
    What does waylaid imply? Does she mean she was accosted or sexually assaulted by Lao Ai? Does this mean she lost her chastity?
    Per the dictionary, waylay means to ambush; lying in wait with evil or hostile intent along public ways; intercept unexpectedly.

    So QQ was not physically harmed, but more along the line of Lao Ai lurking about and harassing her.

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    How come Xiao Pan's age got changed to 12? Shouldnt it be 13 (despite numerous references to him being 15)? This is because there are only 8 more years until his coronation at age 21 right?

    But earlier a few years ago, XSL met XP when he was 12 and a scamp in the Zhao court right? What gives?

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    Quote Originally Posted by SkyWalker View Post
    Wow...two new posts since yesterday! Thanks Justin!

    XSL is always saying how no one can change the future, but doesn't he realize that him being there has already changed the future to some extend? Him being placed in the past has already created an alternate universe so he should just stop following the outcome and just do things differently.

    he was already a part of ancient history before he traveled in time. he is only reliving history/ this was proved by the way he could not stop the king being murdered.

    I guess hes is living the story as we are reading it
    Quote Originally Posted by bchin22 View Post
    How come Xiao Pan's age got changed to 12? Shouldnt it be 13 (despite numerous references to him being 15)? This is because there are only 8 more years until his coronation at age 21 right?

    But earlier a few years ago, XSL met XP when he was 12 and a scamp in the Zhao court right? What gives?
    I imagine if he were older like 17-18 things would be very different.
    but as long as he is still "childlike" i dont think it maters how old he is exactly.
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    Thank you Justin13.
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    Two apologies.

    Was out the entire day and did not translate at all but was helping three friends with some complicated issues

    Our friend Xiao Pan is 14,15 years old. Huang Yi like to write like this: After killing seven eight men, Xiang Shaolong returned to the forest. I thought it is bad grammer and choose either one to translate.

    Previously, Xiao Pan's age is 14, 15 according to the author. The latest one is my fault. I watched Karate Kid 3 times and somehow inserted Jaden Smith's age, which is 12.

    The actual words are: 只有十多岁的大孩子

    This kid who is ten over years old or ten odd years old.

    XSL kept mentioned 8 years and coronation is 21 years so it should be 13 actually. I'll just take it to be 14, 15 myself.

    My, you guys are great readers to spot this difference! My work has not been in vain!

    Erm, bchin22, I agree with Tweety that she is probably harassed.

    Need to run an errand in town soon and will translate as much as I can before I leave tomorrow night. Cheers!

    PS: Thanks kohchun for all the reposting.


    [COLOR=#FF6666]Chapter 07 [/COLOR][COLOR=#FF6666][/COLOR][COLOR=#FF6666] Deceitful support[/COLOR]

    Before dawn, led by Xiao Pan and Zhu Ji, the royal family, every court official and the various representatives from the six states attended a grand but serious funeral procession. King Zhuangxiang’s corpse is delivered from the Royal temple to the Royal Mausoleum for permanent burial.

    Every single palace guard was activated to maintain law and order. Thousands of items were to be buried together with the coffin and the entire procession stretches over ten miles.

    The citizens of Xianyang City put on mourning clothes and kneeled by the side of the streets, crying over the death of this benevolent ruler.

    Xiao Pan and Zhu Ji cried heavily too. Everyone who heard them will be affected to cry as well.

    Lu Buwei acted his part very well, expressing his deep sorrows and pain.

    Xiang Shaolong, An Gu and Jian Sheng rode ahead and open up the roads for the procession. Jian Sheng is the current Imperial Infantry Commander as Guan Zhongxie is not officially appointed yet.

    After Handan City’s incident, this is the first time he saw Tian Dan, Li Yuan, Han Chuang and the rest. They paid attention to him but does not seem to realise he is Dong Horse Fanatic.

    General Pang is a steady man of average build with a square face and large ears. When their eyes meet, he can see the intelligence shining from his eyes. No wonder he can rise to such a post based on his words alone.

    In his twenties, Prince Dan is the youngest among them. He is of medium build and has a jade complexion, making others trust him. But to Xiang Shaolong, it is a different matter altogether. Zhao Qian and the maids indirectly died under his hands. If he has the chance, he will not let him off.

    Qin Qing was mingling among the royal family and the esteemed guests. Xiang Shaolong waved to her but she pretended not to see him.

    Under the strict and sad atmosphere, the procession has travelled for several hours. They finally reached the mausoleum in the afternoon.

    The Royal Mausoleum is divided into two parts, an exterior and an interior, forming a formation. There is a northern gate, southern gate, eastern gate and western gate. With the typical Chinese arch at the four corners, the mausoleum is heavily guarded with an official in charge.

    The way leading into the mausoleum is lined with burial items such as pottery, furniture, books and clothes. The most important people entered the inner part of the mausoleum and were seated in a resting area while attendants start to move the burial items into the burial chamber. When everything is settled, Lu Buwei went to the front and delivered a eulogy. At the end of the eulogy, the burial process begins.

    Xiang Shaolong was grieved as he recalled King Zhuangxiang’s generosity and hot tears begin to flow down his face

    When the coffin is finally brought into the mausoleum, Zhu Ji fainted. Thinking about the past two nights she spent with Lao Ai, Xiang Shaolong still find it hard to forgive her.

    To a certain extent. He could sympathise with her behaviour. First, she lost this man who has treated her so well and even made her the Empress of Qin. Secondly, she knew it was Lu Buwei who poisoned him but could not take revenge. In such a helpless scenario, she reacted irrationally.

    Even with this understanding, he still feels uncomfortable with her situation.

    Back at the Wu residence that night, he had insomnia. The moment he woke up, he got his men to fetch Ji Yanran and the other girls back to Xianyang City. He really needed them by his side. Teng Yi naturally wishes to have Shan Lan around too.

    As long as he is the Imperial Cavalry Commander, Lu Buwei dared not attack him rashly.

    Three days later, the population of Xianyang City removed all signs of mourning and everything resumed as per normal.

    Xiao Pan had not attended his coronation yet but he is now the King of Qin.

    Except for Xiang Shaolong and the farsighted Li Si, no one will expect this kid to break centuries of deadlock and lead Qin to victory over the six states.

    Back at the East Gate Command Centre, Xiang Shaolong was in a conference with Teng Yi and Jing Jun when Lu Gong came to find him.

    Generals are the highest ranked positions in the military.

    There are many different general ranking. Xiang Shaolong’s Imperial Cavalry Commander is considered a lower ranked general and his army size is limited to fifty thousand men. But as he is considered half a City Commander, his status is slightly higher.

    The highest ranked is Imperial General, which only Lu Gong ranks. Others like Wang Ling, Xu Xian, Meng Ao and Du Bi are only Great Generals. Thus, Lu Gong is considered the military chief.

    Teng Yi and Jing Jun excused themselves while Lu Gong got seated at the chair of authority, smiling: “I came here to discuss something with you and to give you support as well. Now, everyone will know that I am behind you and will obey your command with question.”

    Xiang Shaolong hurriedly presented his thanks and appreciation.

    Lu Gong’s face became serious and revealed: “Are you aware that during the morning court session, Lu Buwei made another recommendation?”

    Xiang Shaolong is not permitted to attend morning court yet. Frantically, he asked: “What are the changes?”

    Lu Gong angrily detailed: “Lu Buwei made an exception and recommended a family warrior Guan Zhongxie to be the Imperial Infantry Commander instead of Lord Changping. Xu Xian and I objected strongly but were put down by Empress and Lu Buwei. Luckily, the Crown Prince got An Gu to guard Hangu Pass and made Lord Changping and his brother Lord Changwen the new leaders of the Palace guards, preventing a military protest. Hng! Lu Buwei is getting more and more out of hand! He keeps promoting outsiders as if Qin has no talented men!”

    Xiang Shaolong sighed with relief, glad that Lu Gong has treated him as a Qin native.

    He felt some regrets not having his buddy An Gu in the palace anymore. But Xiao Pan’s decision is the best given the circumstances. It must be Li Si who advised him to promote another person from the Qin military.

    It will help to convince Lu Gong that Xiao Pan is not on the same side as Lu Buwei and Zhu Ji.

    Lu Gong lowered his voice: “I have spoken to Xu Xian and Wang Ling. We have unanimously decided that the blood test is the best plan. Look!” From his bosom, he retrieved a special needle that has a sharp point but a wide base. He proudly explained: “This needle has a small opening. Once inserted into the flesh, blood will flow and accumulate at the base. When it pierces the skin, it is as painless as a mosquito bite and the bleeding will stop after it has been removed. If you are quick enough, the person being pierced may not even notice it.”

    Xiang Shaolong received the needle from him and scrutinized it closely. Realising that it is probably the origin of acupuncture, he praised this invention and asked: “When do we act?”

    Lu Gong explained: “According to our laws, ten days after the funeral, we must hold a hunting fair as a show of appreciation to everyone. The royal family, every official, the state representatives will all participate. Even those young men without official appointments will take part too.”

    As the Imperial Cavalry Commander, Xiang Shaolong naturally knew about this but did not expect it to be so grand. He was curious: “Is it very lively?”

    Lu Gong bellowed: “Of course! Everyone is doing their best to display their talents and hope to be noticed by the new king. That year, I was talent-spotted by the late king during the hunt and nobody else received a bigger honour.”

    Xiang Shaolong was uncomfortable with the idea of killing animals blindly for pleasure and not for food. He will never stoop to such a level.

    Lu Gong continued: “This is the best opportunity! I will draw Lu Buwei’s blood while you get the Crown Prince’s. Changping, Changwen and Xu Xian will be our witnesses. Hei! Only Shaolong is brave enough to draw the Crown Prince’s blood. An Gu is a coward and he deserves to be posted out of Xianyang City.”

    Xiang Shaolong was highly amused. After going through the details of their plan, he sent him off respectfully.

    Lu Gong’s estimate is right on the spot. His rebellious subordinates underwent a huge attitude change and were more respectful than before, saving him and Teng Yi lots of time and effort.

    In the evening, Zhu Ji summoned him to the palace.

    Xiang Shaolong knew that it is inappropriate but still went ahead.

    Zhu Ji looks calm and did not do anything extraordinary. She treated Xiang Shaolong warmly and expressed much concern. First, she enquired about his work as the Imperial Cavalry Commander and smiled: “I have warned Buwei that you belong to me. If you lose a single strand of hair, I will not let him off. Ai! The dead cannot come back to life. Will Shaolong see to your duties and do your best to protect Zheng’er, and leave everything else out of your consideration.”

    Xiang Shaolong understood where she is coming from. He secretly thought that this is her own wishful thinking and Lu Buwei is not an easy person to get along with.

    At the same time, he can see the shift in Zhu Ji’s attitude.

    Unless she is happy with her present state of affairs, she will not want everything to stay the same forever.

    He smiled: “I obey Empress’s orders.”

    Zhu Ji wailed: “Don’t give me that subordinate expression! I am able to speak my mind only when I am with you.”

    Xiang Shaolong bitterly smiled: “If I do not act befittingly our positions, there will be gossips.”

    Zhu Ji was irritated: “There is nobody here and who cares about what they say! Who dares to offend me?”

    Xiang Shaolong reminded: “Don’t forget about Lady Xiuli. We are meeting each other privately and if word gets out, Xianyang City will be gossiping about us.”

    Zhu Ji smiled coquettishly: “You can relax. Cheng Chongqiao has been made Lord Changan and will leave with Lady Xiuli to Changan province tomorrow. Now, we do not have to run into each other in the palace. Everyone in the palace now belongs to me. See, I still have what it takes.”

    Xiang Shaolong thought that this is probably to prevent news about Zhu Ji and Lao Ai leaking out instead but he cannot expose her now. He plainly state: “Empress definitely has what it takes.”

    Zhu Ji was slighted stunned and stared at him with suspicions. In a gentle voice, she inquired: “This is the first time you are speaking to me like that. Are you unhappy that I am supporting Buwei? But everyone has their difficulties and must resort to doing certain things against their will. I am able to say this confidently because of what I went through in Handan City.”

    Xiang Shaolong is not sure she is defending Lu Buwei or herself with Lao Ai. After thinking, he replied: “Empress is right. I am feeling so helpless now.”

    Zhu Ji slowly sighed and stood up.

    Xiang Shaolong hurriedly stood up, thinking that she is sending him off. This charming and mesmerizing beauty came face to face with him and looked deeply into his eyes. In an enchanting manner, she offered: “The Xiang Shaolong I loved the most is the heroic man I met at Handan City’s Hostage residence. Full of courage and fearless, allowing a weak woman like me to fully rely on without hesitation. Shaolong! Now that I am freed, why should we be bothered about all the unreasonable restrictions? Let’s rekindle our relationship.”

    Watching her heaving chest, pretty face and smelling her scent, Xiang Shaolong nearly wanted to embrace her in his arms and make passionate love, forgetting about the world outside and indulge in pleasure between woman and man.

    He will be lying if he says he is not aroused or have feelings for her.

    But with King Zhuangxiang’s image still fresh in his mind, he resisted this temptation. When he was about to say something, heavy steps can be heard from beyond the door.

    Both of them were shocked and hastily retreated a few steps from each other.

    Incensed, Zhu Ji yelled: “Who is it?”

    An attendant from the inner palace came in, kneeled down and kowtowed: “Lao Ai is here to accompany Empress!”

    Xiang Shaolong was stunned and looked over at this handsome man. Lao Ai happened to raise his head to face him as well. His eyes were filled with hatred and pain.

    Scrutinising him carefully, Xiang Shaolong was secretly impressed.

    In terms of looks, other handsome men like An Gu, Lian Jin, Qi Yu and Li Yuan are not too far off. But in terms of overall feeling, Lao Ai stands out.

    His body is as sturdy as a hunting leopard, with every muscle toned. A perfect body coupled with skin as white as snow and hair as black as charcoal. He does look similar to himself.

    But his most attractive part is his wild and playful side. With his eyes burning with passion and emotion, it makes whichever girl that conquers him feel an extreme sense of accomplishment.

    No wonder Zhu Ji is seduced by him in such a short space of time.

    Zhu Ji is apparently flustered at his interruption and is afraid of Xiang Shaolong knowing about their affair. Her face turning white, she scolded: “What are you doing here?”

    Lao Ai lowered his head and calmly replied: “Subordinate knows that Empress does not have any attendant with her and came in to see if you have any needs.”

    Apparently, Zhu Ji has given him some privileges but Xiang Shaolong dare not mentioned it. Zhu Ji ordered: “Get out of here at once.”

    If it was anybody else, he would have been executed on the spot.

    Lao Ai is definitely here to vie with Xiang Shaolong for her attention, showing his hidden agenda. Since he knows that he has made her very happy in bed, he knows that Zhu Ji will not do anything to him.

    He humbly and respectfully answered: “Empress, please don’t be angry. I am only trying my best to serve you.” He appears to disobey her order.

    Zhu Ji was taken aback and peeped at Xiang Shaolong, howling: “Men!”

    Two palace guards came into the room.

    Xiang Shaolong knows that it is time for him to enter the picture. He held the two guards and helped Lao Ai up. Pleased, he commented: “This talented man is truly loyal to Empress. I like him the first time I see him. Empress must not blame him.”

    Zhu Ji and Lao Ai were astounded at his words.

    Xiang Shaolong was amused and continued to exaggerate: “I am a good judge of character and this man is a dragon among men. Let’s work hard together and do our best for Qin.”

    Zhu Ji saw that the two guards are in a dilemma and stood there dazed, she shot: “Get out!”

    The two men knew they had angered her and ran out in a flash.

    Lao Ai has always regarded himself as a dragon among men but nobody has praised him about it before! His hostility towards Xiang Shaolong decreased greatly. In fact, it is Lu Buwei who gave him this mission to sow discord between Xiang Shaolong and Zhu Ji. Otherwise, he dare not barge in like this. Awkwardly, he replied: “Official Xiang is too kind.”

    Zhu Ji was staring at Xiang Shaolong in a daze. Taking this opportunity, Xiang Shaolong bade her farewell.

    Zhu Ji dared not hold him back. Instead, it was Lao Ai who sent him out of the palace.

    At the palace exit, like an old friend, Xiang Shaolong offered: “Attendant, let’s work closely in the future.”

    Lao Ai was embarrassed: “Official Xiang is too generous. I dare not accept your offer. After all, I am just an attendant.”

    Xiang Shaolong pretended to be angry and promised: “With brother’s talent, why should you subject your will to others. This will not do! I will speak to the Crown Prince immediately and give you an official position. As long as Empress does not object, you will be promoted for sure.”

    Lao Ai was muddle-headed by his support and asked with surprise: “Why is Official Xiang treating me so well? Hei! I am originally from Premier Residence. Official Xiang should have heard of me before. I am sent into the palace as a punishment.”

    Xiang Shaolong feigned surprise: “You are from the Premier residence? No wonder I can see your talent the first time I set my eyes on you. Ai! What offence has Brother committed? Actually, it doesn’t matter to me. With your talent, Premier Lu will seek to restrict you. I am a man who keeps my promises and will take you to see Crown Prince at once. A talented man like you must be put to good use.”

    Lao Ai was amazed but after consideration, he knew that Xiang Shaolong is telling the truth. Lu Buwei is a man who dislikes people who are more talented than him.

    Presently, Lu Buwei is using him against Xiang Shaolong and Zhu Ji. In the future when Empress Ji is favouring him, Lu Buwei may seek to harm him.

    If he can be on good terms with Xiang Shaolong and Crown Prince, it will help him in the future.

    He happily nodded: “Many thanks for Official Xiang’s recommendation.” He became alarmed and asked: “Will Crown Prince be unwilling to see a mere attendant like me?”

    His is ranked the lowest among all the people in the palace. Strictly speaking, he is just a toy for the Empress. No wonder he is having low self-esteem.

    Xiang Shaolong nearly burst out laughing and dragged him along.

    Back at the Wu Residence, Ji Yanran and the ladies have arrived. Even Wu Yingyuan came personally.

    Wu Tingwei’s execution has become a matter of the past.

    Everyone knows that he has been promoted to be the Imperial Cavalry Commander and were jumping for joy.

    Wu Yingyuan got his beloved son-in-law to the back garden for a private chat. He started: “Thanks to Shaolong, our family’s reputation is growing day by day. In the past, applying for an exit permit takes almost two weeks; now, we get it on the spot. This is even better than our days in Handan City.”

    Xiang Shaolong laughed bitterly: “Father-in-law must be mentally prepared that Lu Buwei will become more powerful in the future and things will become more difficult for us.”

    Wu Yingyuan smiled: “By then, we’ll be out of here. Wu Zhuo has sent word that he has discovered fertile land that stretches for thousands of miles. It is right beside Mount Huer Luan (?) and consists of grasslands and rivers. More importantly, there are no aggressive nomads nearby. With a few years of hard work laying the foundation, we can migrate there. I have decided to send another team of men there to start work. When we finally build our own state, our farms in Xianyang City will be insignificant.”

    Xiang Shaolong was happy for him and enquired about Mother-in-law. Wu Yingyuan sighed: “She’ll be fine after a while. She will cry occasionally when she thinks about Tingwei.”

    Xiang Shaolong do not know how to console him.

    That night, Xiang Shaolong and his three alluring wives chatted by the candlelight, telling them everything that has happened over the past few days. When he mentioned Xiao Pan promoting Lao Ai to be an official, everyone was full of praise.

    Absence makes the heart grow fonder. Like fish finding water, they made passionate love.
    Out of the blue, Xiang Shaolong can feel that his entire year of bad luck is finally over. Currently, he is super confident in dealing with Lu Buwei.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Justin13 View Post
    In the past, applying for an exit permit takes almost two weeks; now, we get it on the spot.
    Ha ha, looks like its not only Singaporean men who need exit permits....
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    thanks once gain justin !

    but i need more gimme more..i need a new SITP fix! aaaaaaaaaaaaargh
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    Thanks Justin.

    I wonder if Jing Ke will appear in the novel later.

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    Thank you, Justin, for the quick translations. You're doing the hard work, mate

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    Thanks for the update Justin13.
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