Thread: A step into the past - 寻秦记 - by Huang Yi

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    I don't know, can Shan Rou be killed that easily? She attempted to kill Zhao Mu several times and although did not succeed w/o XSL's help, she still managed to escape with her life. I have a feeling Zhao Ya will kick the bucket soon.

    Darn, option A has no support . Btw, is Tian Dan the guy that masterminded the famous attempt to assassinate Qin Shi Huang by hiding a dagger within a rolled up map?

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    Hmm, got to go with B. Waiting for new chapters heightens the experience.

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    Quote Originally Posted by tweety365 View Post
    Darn, option A has no support . Btw, is Tian Dan the guy that masterminded the famous attempt to assassinate Qin Shi Huang by hiding a dagger within a rolled up map?
    No, he isn't. It is the Crown Prince Dan of Yan that sent the famous guy Jing Ke to assasinate Qin Shi Huang. In the novel, this Prince Dan is also behind a failed ambush during XSL's diplomatic trip to the eastern six states.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xlandhenry View Post
    No, he isn't. It is the Crown Prince Dan of Yan that sent the famous guy Jing Ke to assasinate Qin Shi Huang. In the novel, this Prince Dan is also behind a failed ambush during XSL's diplomatic trip to the eastern six states.
    Thanks for the clarification! All these kings, princes, and marquises can get confusing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Justin13 View Post
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    Its sheer hard work man!! Appreciate your amazing spirit and drive to churn out chapters after chapters...
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    Quote Originally Posted by SkyWalker View Post
    Oh no...not Shan Rou too! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Why can't Wu Tingfang died instead of Shan Rou?! I hope Zhao Ya won't share the same fate.
    Wasn't there some premonition earlier? This book is beginning to sound more like one of the epic tragedies... sigh, everybody dies or falls out with each other... and Xiao Pan becomes the bad-a** Qin Shihuang who actually out bad-a**es everyone that has come before him, even Zhao Mu, Tian Dan and Lu Buwei!

    When power and glory turns out to be dissatisfying, I guess XSL has no choice but to find comfort in his women in some quiet corner, and set up an epitaph for his unit comrades to find in the future, like that show Timeline....
    Man is glue. You are man. How then can you step away from glue?

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    Burned midnight oil to complete this... not likely to post much tomorrow... helping out at a friend's seminar. Enjoy!

    Chapter 01 – Prince Dan from Yan
    After Teng Yi finished listening, he was dazed like a wooden figure and was speechless for some time.

    With her around, everyone has to withstand her tantrums; without her around, everyone is pining for her return.

    Unexpectedly, she met with a tragic ending.

    Shan Rou is a rare person during these ancient times to stand up for female rights. She is strong, brave and determined. As long as she sets her sights on something, she will do her utmost best to accomplish it.

    And she has now sacrificed her life to achieve her biggest dream!

    With both his hands supporting his face, Xiang Shaolong is tearing quietly.

    An attendant came in to report something but was chased away by Teng Yi. He instructed the Guardians not to allow anyone to disturb them.

    Teng Yi reached out and patted Xiang Shaolong’s shoulder, speaking out in a sorrowful voice: “The dead cannot be returned to life. Our most important task presently is to take revenge for her. She is considered my relative so it is two strong reasons we must kill him for sure!”

    When Xiang Shaolong has somewhat calmed down, Teng Yi asked: “Do you think Tian Dan will report you to Lu Buwei or Crown Prince? After all, it is widely accepted that emissaries should not be killed. Qin cannot just watch you kill Tian Dan within their territory.” Xiang Shaolong give a pained reply: “It may be Shan Rou’s divine intervention. Whenever I think of her committing suicide, my mind becomes extremely clear and can identify all the issues.”

    Pausing, he continued: “Even if Qin sends soldiers to escort Tian Dan home, it is limited to Qin territory. Once they left Qin’s border, it will be time to act but we must first find out the strength of his army and whether there is anyone receiving him outside Qin. I must speak to Lord Longyang. He can definitely provide me with some information.”

    After thinking, he sighed: “Tian Dan can be considered isolated from the rest since he did not participate in the combined army. He conspired against King Xiaocheng on his last trip and the people of Zhao hates him to the core. Han is on good terms with Zhao’s Empress Han Jing and will not make it easy for him. Under such circumstances, the only way home is to go through Wei or Chu. Wei is much nearer but is not as safe as Chu. If I am not mistaken, he will travel with Li Yuan. Thus, we can more or less know his travelling route.”

    Teng Yi was startled: “If he is protected by the Qin army in Qin and the Chu army in Chu, when is a good time to kill him?”

    Xiang Shaolong revealed an icy cold smile and plainly state: “For Shan Rou and Second Brother’s revenge, I will do whatever I can to kill this evildoer. First, we must force Li Yuan to leave Xianyang City. Tian Dan cannot leave without finishing his discussion with Lu Buwei.”

    Teng Yi frowned: “Let’s talk about forcing Li Yuan later; how did you know that Lu Buwei and Tian Dan are still in discussion?”

    Xiang Shaolong answered: “It is called intuition. Last night, they are busy whispering into each other’s ears. In addition, he used Shan Rou to blackmail me to do something for him. These are all signs that they are still in discussion. It is useless to continue talking without facts. Let’s get moving. Second Brother shall investigate Tian Dan’s army strength while I look for Lord Longyang and Prince Dan. I may learn something useful from them.”

    Teng Yi was stunned: “Prince Dan?”

    Xiang Shaolong reasoned: “Within Xianyang City, there is no one more concerned about Tian Dan’s life and death other than him.”

    He softly added: “Send someone to inform Zhi Zhi that I do not have any free time today.” At the same time, he swore that he will never tell Zhao Zhi that Shan Rou has come to harm.

    Lord Longyang is delighted to see Xiang Shaolong again. Leading him into a scheduled eastern room within his guesthouse, he listened to his account and consoled him, saying it that there is no point crying over spilt milk. The conversation turning serious, he explained: “There is a horse plague in Qi and I think he wants a few thousand warhorses from you! Naturally, he will not ask you to make trouble for Lu Buwei. In fact, he is more concerned about Lu Buwei than the Qin people. Just by looking at Lu Buwei’s political and military successes within a few years, anyone can tell that he is formidable. If Qin falls under his control, all his opponents will suffer greatly.”

    Xiang Shaolong asked in a deep voice: “Will Lord disapprove of my killing of Tian Dan?”

    Lord Longyang shook his head: “Not only will I not disapprove, I am exhilarated! You are right. Tian Dan will return to Qi via Chu and he has an army of ten thousand soldiers, led by his trusted general Tian Rong, waiting there for him. You must kill him before he meets up with them. Except for Qin, our next greatest threat is Qi. If Tian Dan is killed, everyone in the allied states will be overjoyed. He alone did not participate in the last battle and has incurred everyone’s wrath. Obviously, he is trying to benefit from our losses.”

    Sighing, he added: “It is a pity most of our soldiers are based at the Qin-Wei border and cannot assist you. Moreover, the King may not agree. But I can always send spies to investigate the deployments of the Qi and Chu armies. Their reports are guaranteed to be accurate.”

    Xiang Shaolong is grateful: “That will help a lot. I am sure that with my present forces, I can make him die a terrible death. How many men did Tian Dan bring on this trip?”

    Lord Longyang detailed: “He has a few hundred men within the City. Outside the city is another elite army of one thousand Qi cavalry. With Li Yuan’s forces, their army strength will exceed three thousand. Shaolong must not underestimate them, especially when you are attacking them outside of Qin. If you make a serious mistake, you may be killed by him instead.”

    Xiang Shaolong replied: “Of course I know that he is a powerful foe but I have some tricks that are beyond his imagination.” Lord Longyang can never guess that he is referring to his 21st Century warfare and strategies. Thinking that he has a large army too, he inquired: “Shaolong has official work to attend to; can you leave for a few months?”

    It is hard to explain the special relationship between Crown Prince and himself.

    Xiang Shaolong simply sighed: “I have my methods.”

    After deciding on future communication methods, Xiang Shaolong bade his farewell and left Jifeng and the Guardians at Lord Longyang’s courtyard, walking over to Prince Dan’s guesthouse next door. After he reported his name, Prince Dan came out personally to receive him with a few escorts.

    Temporary putting aside his hatred regarding Xu Yi Luan’s double ambush, he greeted: “How are you doing, Prince Dan? Please forgive me for taking such a long time before paying my respects to you.”

    Staring at him, he was reminded about Jing Ke.

    Without Jing Ke, he would never know of this man called Prince Dan.

    The vibrant looking Prince Dan happily greeted: “General Xiang is an important military figure. I had wanted to visit you but am afraid that General is busy with his new duties and dare not interrupt. I planned to visit you after the hunting fair but since General is here, I welcome you with open arms.”

    Moving forward, he grabbed his hand and whispered: “Honestly, I am so jealous that the stunningly attractive Talented Lady Ji is your wife.”

    Finishing, they broke out in laughter.

    In the midst of his laughter, Xiang Shaolong could start to understand why Jing Ke is willing to assassinate Qin Shi Huang for him.

    These legendary men all possess extraordinary abilities.

    Prince Dan began introducing his men to Xiang Shaolong.

    There are three men who left an impression on him. First, it is Physician Leng Ting. This man is around forty years old with delicate features and eyes that shine with wisdom. He is rather tall, just two inches shorter than Xiang Shaolong, and has long and agile limbs. He is a man of few words but Xiang Shaolong is sure that this man has both brains and brawns.

    Next is General Xu Yi Ze. From his name, he must be Xu Yi Luan’s brother. Around thirty years old, he is short and stout with a giant head. He has a figure that resembles a wrestler in unarmed combat. He has a serious look on his face that makes it hard for people to confide in him.

    The last gentleman named You Zhi is a handsome man who is a few years older than Prince Dan. He carries an intimate smile on his face and leaves a good impression on everyone he meets. The moment Xiang Shaolong saw him, he is certain that this man is Prince Dan’s chief strategist.

    After the usual pleasantries, Prince Dan led him into the main hall.

    After everyone got seated, two ladies even prettier than Lu Buwei’s courtesans came forward and served tea.

    Accompanying them are the three men as well as two generals Yan Chuang and Yan Jun who are related to the royal family. The remainder of the guards remained in the outer hall.

    Xiang Shaolong took a sip from his tea cup and went straight to the point: “I wish to speak to Prince in secret.”

    Prince Dan is slightly startled and dismissed the two ladies. He sincerely assured: “These men are my most trusted subordinates. Regardless of what General Xiang wishes to say, you may say it in front of these men.”

    Xiang Shaolong secretly praised Prince Dan for his strong trust in his men. Under the scrutiny of the six pairs of eyes, he casually state: “I want to kill Tian Dan!”

    Everyone including Prince Dan is stunned. Only You Zhi remains calm and aloof.

    Xiang Shaolong stared at Prince Dan, examining his reaction.

    Prince Dan’s eyes shone sharply and exchanged a glance with him. Recovering from his shock, he asked: “I am not surprised to know that General has such an intention but why are you specially telling me about it?”

    Xiang Shaolong energetic eyes scanned everyone before him and slowly declare: “Before I explain, let me first bury the hatchet over Xu Yi Luan’s double ambush. We shall work sincerely from today onwards and do not keep any secrets from each other.”

    With these earth-shattering words, even the collected You Zhi lost his composure. The others naturally reacted even stronger than before.

    Prince Dan will now know that Dong Kuang and Xiang Shaolong are actually the same person.

    There is a strange feeling in the air.

    After a long while, Prince Dan let out a long sigh. Standing up, he bowed and apologised: “Brother Xiang, please excuse me. To save my country, I have done many things against my conscience.”

    Xiang Shaolong hurriedly got up to return his courtesy, congratulating himself for choosing the right partner. If Prince Dan denied everything, he need not bother himself with this man anymore.

    Both men got seated and the atmosphere is much friendlier.

    Leng Ting’s eyes shone with appreciation and nodded: “I finally understood how General can triumph in Wei and Zhao, and even counter Lu Buwei in Qin.”

    You Zhi plainly state: “Does General Xiang know that killing Tian Dan is more difficult than ascending to heaven? Moreover, you should know your status as a general of Qin.”

    Xiang Shaolong knew that he is testing his background. If he wanted to hide in Qin while asking them to kill Tian Dan, these six men will despise him.

    At the end of the day, this is a business deal. The success of the plan is dependent on the potential benefits.

    Xiang Shaolong smiled: “Li Yuan and Tian Dan are committing atrocities all over the country. Li Yuan used his sister Li Yan Yan to give birth to the Crown Prince. If King Xiaolie dies, the newcomer Li Yuan will need to borrow Qi’s forces to counter the incumbent Lord Chunshen. Tian Dan needs Li Yuan’s assistance to attack the allied states and expand his territory. When fighting against Tian Dan, we must not neglect Li Yuan. Regarding the Qin military, I have my ways of dealing with them as long as it does not involved Lu Buwei. Everyone can rest easy.”

    Prince Dan let out another long sigh: “I finally tasted Brother Xiang’s formidability. Since you are so knowledgeable about every state, I will not waste any more words. May I ask how Brother Xiang plans to solve the problem regarding Chu? If Tian Dan and Li Yuan travel together, their strength would increase drastically. When they are nearing Chu, they will be received by both their armies. There is no way we can intercept them. We have such an intention as well but it is an impossible task.”

    Xiang Shaolong smiled mysteriously and official state: “Leave Li Yuan to me. I will make him leave Qin before the hunting fair, disrupting their travel plans. Li Yuan has always been a selfish man. If he is in deep trouble himself, he will not be bothered about Tian Dan.”

    Everyone was confused.

    Xu Yi Ze could not help but asked: “What clever scheme does General Xiang has?”

    Xiang Shaolong spontaneously replied: “Please let me keep this little secret to myself. You will see results within these two days. If I cannot even accomplish such a small matter, I will be too ashamed to face everyone again.”

    Prince Dan concluded: “Great! Xiang Shaolong is worthy of his reputation. If Li Yuan leave Qin before the hunting fair, I will do my best and cooperate with you. Tian Dan that traitor will not return to Qi alive!”

    Xiang Shaolong had expected this agreement.

    Qi and Yan are neighbours and have always been irreconcilable like water and fire, eyeing each other’s territory. Yan had invaded Qi but was repelled by Tian Dan, causing heavy losses to Yan. Everyone in Yan hated Tian Dan to the core and would not hesitate for an opportunity to kill him.

    To them, Li Yuan plays a crucial role.

    If Li Yuan is killed too, it is equivalent to offending two states that are stronger than Yan and it is not something to laugh about.

    But if they can ignore Chu’s issue and even push the blame to Xiang Shaolong, it will be even better.

    Xiang Shaolong shook hands with Prince Dan to seal their agreement and he left in search of Lu Gong, proceeding with the next step in his grand plan.

    Ever since the return from his last mission, this is the first time he is approaching a task with such enthusiasm.

    He finally know how deeply he loves Shan Rou.

    The minute he sat down with Lu Gong in a private hall, Xiang Shaolong began in a deep voice: “I want to kill Tian Dan.”

    Lu Gong was shocked and checked: “What did you say?”

    Today, this is the fifth time he is saying he wants to kill Tian Dan. First, he said it to Tian Dan, followed by Teng Yi, Lord Longyang, Prince Dan and finally to Lu Gong, the number one head of the Qin military.

    To openly kill an earth-shaking figure like Tian Dan is setting a new precedence in history.

    Full of confidence and persuasion, he explained: “This is the only way to prevent Lu Buwei from dominating Qin politics.”

    Lu Gong was puzzled: “What has this got to do with Tian Dan?”

    Xiang Shaolong simply state: “The eastern states have recently attacked us but why is Qi not involved?” Lu Gong’s expression became thoughtful and replied after a short while: “Is Shaolong referring to Tian Dan and Lu Buwei’s secret collaboration?”

    Xiang Shaolong positively explained: “In the past, Lu Buwei did not have any military accomplishments. Now, he has conquered the three eastern provinces and solidified his position. When the combined armies taught him a serious lesson, he focused on his present status and put aside any plans to mount another eastern campaign. What he plans to do now is to increase his power in Qin and the Zhengguo canal is the first step in his grand plan.”

    Lu Gong was agitated upon hearing this.

    For the past two days, he himself has been complaining to Xu Xian, Wang Ling and other military leaders, cursing Lu Buwei for having an ulterior motive and wasting manpower and resources over the canal. This will weaken the country and interfere with plans to unite the world.

    Xiang Shaolong is sure that he is disturbed and egged him further: “Therefore, Lu Buwei is now in league with Chu and Qi, isolating Yan and the allied states. This is to safeguard his external interests and focus on internal issues. He can then focus on building up his influence. If he is successful, our state of Qin will land in the hands of this outsider.”

    His latest words have an even greater impact that the last sentence, stunning this strong advocate of Qin race superiority. Lu Gong thought for a while and raised his head, his eyes shining with energy and stared straight at Xiang Shaolong, asking in a deep voice: “Before we continue further, I need you to clear something up. Why are you so certain that the Crown Prince is not Lu Buwei’s illegitimate child?”

    Xiang Shaolong was secretly glad that Lu Gong is moved and therefore asked such a question. If he can assure him, the discussion can continue smoothly.

    He sincerely looked back at him and revealed: “It is very simple. I have my own suspicions as well and questioned Lu Buwei’s confidante Xiao Yuetan about this. He swore that Crown Prince is indeed the late king’s flesh and blood because when Zhu Ji became pregnant, the only man she is sleeping with is King Zhuangxiang.”

    Lu Gong frowned: “I know this man Xiao Yuetan and he is someone who should know the truth. But since he is Lu Buwei’s trusted subordinate, he may continue to conceal this secret for Lu Buwei despite his own death.”

    Xiang Shaolong’s eyes reddened and intimately disclosed: “When Xiao Yuetan died, not only does he declare himself free from Lu Buwei’s control; he even hated Lu Buwei to the core. It is all because the man who killed him is Lu Buwei.”

    Lu Gong was not horrific at this news. Stretching out his hand, he grabbed Xiang Shaolong’s shoulder and nervously asked: “Do you have any proof of this?”

    Xiang Shaolong shook his head in grief.

    Lu Gong released him and remarked: “We have investigated this matter on our side but those who came back alive did not know what happened. Qu Dou Qi and the others have disappeared so there are many suspicious points but there is nothing we can do to Lu Buwei. When you came back and hurriedly retreated to the farms, we know that something is amiss.”

    Sighing, he added: “I believe Shaolong is telling the truth. I guess we need not carry on with the blood test.”

    Determined, Xiang Shaolong shook his head: “No! The blood test must still be conducted. Only this way can we fully verify that the Crown Prince is the late king’s flesh and blood.”

    Lu Gong stared at him solemnly and inquired: “I like the way you handled things. Yesterday, Du Bi came looking for me and told me you said something to the late king on his deathbed. The late king then passed away peacefully. What did Shaolong say to him?”

    Xiang Shaolong is certain that Du Bi learnt about this from Lady Xiuli. Without hesitation, he divulged: “I told the late king that if he is murdered by someone, I will do whatever I can to avenge him.”

    Of course he made some changes to the words and purposely left Lu Buwei’s name out.

    Lu Gong stood up and his eyes shone with determination. Looking up to the sky with agony, he took some time to recompose himself. Finally, he barked: “Fine! Shaolong, what can I do to help you?”

    Xiang Shaolong quickly stood up to match him and respectfully state: “Lu Buwei’s influence is growing day by day. To stop him, we must first destroy his alliance with the outsiders. If we can kill Tian Dan, it will not only help in uniting the world, it will also force Lu Buwei to spend some effort against foreign attacks and protect the three eastern provinces. We can then slowly erode his power within Qin.”

    Lu Gong shows signs of anger and grabbed Xiang Shaolong’s arm, leading him to the rear garden. His face tight with emotion, he gritted his teeth: “Why don’t we command our army and attack his residence, annihilating every single person related to him? As long as the Crown Prince nods his head, I can accomplish this easily.”

    Xiang Shaolong lowered his voice, saying: “You must not do this. Lu Buwei has gained the loyalty of many officials. If this matter is leaked out and he strikes first, it will be disastrous and may even cause the death of Crown Prince and Empress. Even if we succeeded, Cheng Chongqiao and Lord Gaoling will immediately vie for the throne. If Qin deteriorates to such a condition and the six states adding fuel to fire, our country may be split into three factions just like in the past.”

    Lu Gong’s face changed colour and he softly held Xiang Shaolong’s shoulder and asked in a low voice: “Tell me how I can help you?”

    Xiang Shaolong is mad with joy. With Lu Gong’s consent, Tian Dan is almost as good as dead.

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    Justin, words cannot express my appreciation for all your laborious efforts

    XSL can be so very persuasive

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    This story is so good. I've never been so gripped by politics! My high opinion of the traditional wuxia stories by Jin Yong and Gu Long are getting eroded by the this amazing translation.

    (People have told me that in Chinese Huang Yi's writing is infinitely inferior and tawdry, but reading the stories in English, Step Into the Past plots are far superior.)

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    Thanks for the update Justin!

    Death is knocking on Tian Dan's door. Looking forward to his demise.

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    Default I really enjoyed reading this

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    Thanks Justin13, you really an incredible translator. I check this site 3 times daily, and how I miss you during yr last (and next) holliday ....

    If there is a vote for the best translator, I sure you will get the trophy .... and then, let's the party begin ...

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    Wow! Thanks for all the appreciation. I am very touched.

    Chapter 02 – The stubborn Qin lady
    Leaving the Lieutenant General’s residence, Xiang Shaolong galloped non-stop. Fortunately for him, Qin Qing’s residence is along the same street leading to the palace. It is separated from the palace by twenty over residences belonging to other Marquises and Generals.

    He wanted to keep a low profile and rode alone on an ordinary horse. Jifeng and the Guardians have all been sent back to the Cavalry Command Centre.

    To make it easier to walk, he has removed his heavy armour and is dressed in a warrior suit. However, his imposing stature is hard to remain unnoticed but at least it makes him feel more at ease.

    The sun is gradually setting in the west and there are hardly any passersby on roads. Xiang Shaolong was reminded about Shan Rou and could not help but feel dejected.

    He can only lessen his pain by working hard to avenge her!

    A group of loud galloping sounds can be heard.

    A group of ten odd riders rode towards him.

    Xiang Shaolong has a high sense of awareness and scanned them carefully. He was shocked at what he saw.

    Unbelievably, it is a cohort of female riders. Dressed in different colours of warrior suits, they resembled a colourful rainbow flowing down the long street.

    They seemed to be competing among themselves on their horse speed and horsemanship. They speedily overtook every chariot and horse in front of them. In the blink of an eye, they are almost upon him.

    Xiang Shaolong recollected Lord Changping’s sister Ying Ying and her female army. Curious, he looked closer at them.

    The leading rider is a young lady in a yellow and white warrior suit. As beautiful as an angel, she is even prettier than Lu Niang Rong. Riding her horse with gusto, she looks even more young and lively.

    She has long legs like Zhao Zhi and is as charming as Wu Tingfang. Her snowy skin is comparable to Ji Yanran’s. Adding that to her slender waist and full chest, it was a mesmerizing sight. It is a body to die for.

    Xiang Shaolong could not help but praise her figure secretly.

    The other riders paled in comparison.

    The most unique thing is that she carries a proud and satisfied smile on her face, as if all the men in the world are only good enough to be trodden by her horse. Interestingly, every man who saw her lowered their gaze and dare not look straight at her.

    Xiang Shaolong is almost sure that this beauty is Ying Ying herself. When she saw him, her pretty eyes lit up like the stars at night.

    Xiang Shaolong was terrified and lowered his head, avoiding her gaze.

    Ying Yong whistled once and the entire fleet of fifteen female riders stopped their horses and arranged themselves in a neat formation. They are as disciplined as the Qin army, if not better.

    Xiang Shaolong can see trouble coming. Lowering his head, he tried to slip away and his mind is full of panic.

    Are these female warriors so aggressive that they pick up fights with passerby on the streets?

    With this thought running through his head, he heard swishing sounds. Ying Ying is apparently swinging her horsewhip over her head. Once she has gained enough momentum, she lashed out towards his back.

    Xiang Shaolong was infuriated.

    This stubborn girl is truly overbearing. He did not know her nor have any enmity but yet she attacked him.

    He listened intently for the whip striking down and stretched his hand, grabbing the whip.

    If his opponent is a male, he would continue to pull strongly on the whip, causing the other party to fall down his horse and be embarrassed. But his opponent this time is a young maiden and he could not bear to embarrass her.

    Ying Ying let out a cry and pulled strongly at the whip.

    Xiang Shaolong turned around and pulled the whip strongly too. The beauty is strong as well and the whip is straightened by both their pulling. Both of them exchanged a fierce look. There is a six feet distance between them which is the length of the whip in addition to the length of their arms.

    Everyone else on the street disappeared to avoid getting into trouble.

    The female warriors spread out like a fan and cornered Xiang Shaolong against the wall.

    Ying Ying’s mouth curled up in a satisfied smile and tugged her horse. The horse reacted to her tug and began to step back.

    Xiang Shaolong praised her secretly and released the whip.

    Ka-Ching!

    Every female warrior pulled out their swords and pointed them at Xiang Shaolong and scolded him with vulgar words like ‘b@sterd’ and ‘d@mn your mother.’ These vulgarities are only heard among the scoundrels of Xianyang City.

    Xiang Shaolong can feel a headache coming, knowing that he has run into ‘female hell riders.’

    Ying Ying retrieved her horse whip and was feeling very proud. She rode forwardly slightly and barked to her warriors: “Are you trying to kill someone? Sheathe your swords!”

    Xiang Shaolong and the ladies are all confused. The ladies were puzzled and sheathe their swords.

    Ying Ying’s laughter rang out like a bell: “You are good! Such a fine fellow! Come with me and let me try out your sword skills.”

    Xiang Shaolong was astonished: “Does Mistress know what I am?”

    Ying Ying impatiently retorted: “You did not even tell me, how am I suppose to know which presumptuous fool you are?”

    The female warriors looked at him closely and saw that he is silly looking besides his heroic air. Their hostility reducing greatly, they start to criticise his appearance.

    From her tone, it seems like there is some rift between them. However, he cannot recall any such incident after going through his memory and apologised: “My apologies but I have an errand to run and cannot accompany you.”

    Ying Ying was displeased and curled up her proud and toned lips, laughing coldly: “You do not know what is good for you. Girls! Get him!”

    Xiang Shaolong did not know whether to laugh or cry. The female warriors have reacted to her command with two of them producing a huge net normally used to catch animals. The other warriors re-drew their swords and approached him.

    There are some onlookers a distance away. They may have been bullied by them before and is unclear of Xiang Shaolong’s status and dared not intervene.

    Xiang Shaolong laughed loudly and rolled on the floor right under the nets, and was in front of Ying Ying’s warhorse in a flash.

    The warhorse was startled and raised its front hoofs and was about to step on Xiang Shaolong. Xiang Shaolong somersaulted and was beside the horse in a split second.

    Ying Ying reacted quickly and her whip is swishing through the air towards Xiang Shaolong.

    Xiang Shaolong roared loudly and leapt up, landing behind the horse and avoiding the whip.

    Unexpectedly, Ying Ying’s long boots kicked to the back towards Xiang Shaolong’s chest.

    Xiang Shaolong could not imagine her fighting prowess has reached such a level and had underestimated her. He was forced to retreat a few steps but his left shoulder has been grazed by her boot, leaving a small mark.

    The other warriors cried out in joy and chased after him.

    Xiang Shaolong could see that the situation is becoming disadvantageous. He sped along the chariot lane and squeezed into the crowd of onlookers. The situation became chaotic and he slipped away in the confusion.

    Arriving at Qin Qing’s residence, Xiang Shaolong was greatly amused and began to understand the suffering of the two Changping brothers.

    Housekeeper Uncle Fang received him in the main hall and brought him into the inner hall.

    Qin Qing and Ji Yanran were happily playing a tune on their musical instruments.

    Wu Tingfang, Zhao Zhi, Tian Zhen, Tian Feng and the maids of Qin Qing are gathered at a large garden outside the building. Under the evening sunshine, they take turns playing with Xiang Bao’er who has learnt how to walk a few steps. The air is filled with their cheerful laughter.

    Unfortunately, all Xiang Shaolong could think of is Shan Rou. The sight before him only adds to his pain.

    He went to the garden and greeted Wu Tingfang and Zhao Zhi, taking time to cuddle his son Xiang Bao’er. He then returned back to the inner hall and joined them at their table, ignoring all the usual boundaries between him and Qin Qing.

    Qin Qing was delighted: “Bao’er has been playing the entire day but did not take his afternoon nap. I am amazed at his stamina.”

    Xiang Shaolong stared at the window and can still hear the ladies playing with Bao’er. Feeling emotional, he vented: “A child’s imagination is the richest. Everything that they see will be exciting, enriching and extraordinary. In the ordinary stuff that we see as adults, it is endless fun for them. Regrettably, when they grow up in the future, everything will be replaced by cold and harsh reality. This is the price to pay for growing up.”

    Both ladies exchanged a look and were deeply moved by his enlightening words. For a while, they were speechless. Xiang Shaolong turned his face and looked at them and was swept off his feet.

    They resembled two blossoming flowers but did not suppress each other’s beauty.

    Ji Yanran is charming and glamorous while Qin Qing is elegant and classy. They are the best there is.

    Qin Qing’s delicate face turned slightly red and lowered her gaze, gently mentioning: “Mister Xiang is finally able to come and visit your wives and kid.” Finishing, she realised that she had a slip of the tongue and her jade face became even redder.

    Ji Yanran gazed lovingly at Xiang Shaolong and whispered: “Why does hubby seem to be troubled about something?”

    Xiang Shaolong sighed but did not reply her.

    Qin Qing took the initiative and excused her and joined them at the garden, allowing them to speak in privacy.

    Xiang Shaolong inquired in a deep voice: “Do you recall the letter Lord Chunshen wrote to Zhao Mu? Can your family warriors duplicate a copy?”

    Ji Yanran answered: “No problem. They are skilled in forgery. What shall be the content?”

    Xiang Shaolong detailed: “It will be a secret letter from Lord Chunshen to Li Yuan, informing him that the King of Chu is gravely ill and commanding him to return to Chu immediately. At the same time, instructing him to keep this a secret from Qin or Qin may take advantage of Chu’s political instability. You can add whatever else you think is appropriate.”

    Ji Yanran was astounded: “What is going on?”

    Hot tears begin to leave Xiang Shaolong’s eyes. In a grieved voice, he revealed: “Shan Rou is dead!”

    Xiao Pan received him in his bedroom and dismissed the palace maids. “What has happened?” he questioned in surprise.

    Xiang Shaolong repeated what he told Lu Gong and emphasized on Lu Buwei conspiracy with Qi and Chu.

    Xiao Pan thought for a while and frowned: “But this policy of allying with the far countries and attacking the neighbouring countries has always been our strategy. Lu Buwei is only proceeding according to this direction and I don’t see what is wrong.”

    Xiang Shaolong could tell that Xiao Pan is no longer a kid who can be easily manipulated. He nodded: “Crown Prince is right. But Lu Buwei is a man with ulterior motives. If he has his external affairs settled, he can focus on politics and eliminate all his opponents. If one day, Lu Gong, Xu Xian and the other generals have been killed by him, we will not be able to overcome him in the future.”

    Xiao Pan was shaken: “I am most afraid of him killing Master.”

    Xiang Shaolong had not thought about himself.

    Although his intention to kill Tian Dan is because of Shan Rou, his suspicions of Lu Buwei are not without reason.

    After being defeated by the combined armies, Lu Buwei has overhauled his strategy and focused on building up his political might.

    King Zhuangxiang has lost his usefulness and became an obstacle. This heartless man used poison to remove him and paved way for his own son Xiao Pan.

    He needs to take a little break now.

    If he still wants to engage the six states in war, he will not dare to make changes in the Qin military, such as replacing a huge number of military leaders with his own men who are far less capable and experienced.

    If he can hold the six states at bay and use a few years, he can cultivate a new generation of capable men who can help him control Qin. By then, even if he turns Qin into his own playground, no one can oppose him.

    Against the six states, the allied states are as close as family. Regardless of Lu Buwei’s scheming, it will not work against them. So he ignored them totally and conspired with Qi and Chu. In the future, Yan will belong to Qi, Wei will belong to Chu, Zhao and Han will belong to Qin. With this agreement, he can focus his energies on Qin politics.

    After his lengthy explanation, Xiao Pan was enlightened.

    From this, Xiang Shaolong can see the difference in Xiao Pan.

    In the past, Xiao Pan will listen to his words without question. Now, he is beginning to take ownership of his own decisions, thinking and position.

    He is becoming more and more like Qin Shi Huang.

    By the time Xiang Shaolong arrived at the Lord Changping’s residence, he is already an hour late. This is unavoidable. Given his present circumstances, the fact that he even showed up is already giving plenty of respect to the two lords.

    Feeling like an ugly daughter-in-law going to see her father-in-law, he went in with the hideous mark on his shoulder left by Ying Ying’s boot. Led by a servant into the main hall, he had a big fright.

    It is not a question about the number of guests but who they are. Seated on two rows of ten seats, only Lord Changping, Lord Changwen and An Gu are male. The rest are all female warriors.

    When the attendant announced: “Imperial Cavalry Commander Xiang Shaolong,” the noisy hall became as quiet as a grave in an instant.

    Lord Changping jumped up and welcomed him at the door. Holding him, he frowned: “I did not anticipate my sister to bring her female warriors and scared all the guests away. Only An Gu is a true friend. Ai! But if he wasn’t the special guest tonight, he may have slipped off too. Luckily you came to join us, otherwise, Ai! Come! Let’s talk more when we settled down.”

    It is now Xiang Shaolong’s turn to hold him and questioned: “Why are they here?”

    Lord Changping replied: “To see the famous Xiang Shaolong.”

    Xiang Shaolong whispered: “Who are they?”

    Lord Changping whispered back: “They are all unmarried virgins and are all younger than eighteen years old. The best fighters are Sister Ying Ying and Lu Gong’s granddaughter Lu Dan’er. If you cannot please them, you wouldn’t be able to leave tonight.”

    Xiang Shaolong was about to ask how he can please them when Ying Ying’s shrill voice rang out behind Lord Changping: “Big Brother! Are you trying to help Xiang Shaolong escape?”

    Her view has been blocked by Lord Changping and did not see Xiang Shaolong. After she finished speaking, she saw him and her eyes lit up, calling: “So it is you!”

    Xiang Shaolong smiled: “That’s right.”

    Lord Changping is astonished: “Have you two met before?”

    Ying Ying stomped her feet: “He is the assho1e who saved the young man at the market and left without saying his name.”

    Xiang Shaolong was hit by realization.

    The family warrior who invited him the other day is her family warrior. Fortunately, she did not see himself with Tu Xian or it will be catastrophic. No wonder she attacked him today.

    Lord Changping did not suspect her story and smiled: “That’s great. Ever since she came back, she has been thinking about you, but...”

    Ying Ying stood up with her arms akimbo and challenged: “I dare you to continue!”

    Lord Changping was terrified and smiled weakly: “Fine. I will stop. Come! Let’s have a drink. Everything in the past is a misunderstanding.”

    Ying Ying cooed: “Come!” and happily led the way in front.

    Glancing at her beautiful back and her rare long legs, he was slightly intoxicated.

    All of a sudden, he felt that these female warriors are not as scary as they look.

    To a certain extent, he was afraid to go home and see people or things that remind him of Shan Rou.

    After he learnt of Shan Rou’s demise, he has been keeping himself busy to numb his pain, using the most exciting experiences to erode his grief.

    Until Shan Rou’s death did he realised how much he treasured her in his heart.

    This is his next greatest blow after Zhao Qian’s death!

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    Thanks for the translation.

    There seems to be a sudden jarring gap in the translation between the scene of the conversation with qin qing and then with xiao pan - is there any missing parts?

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    Thanks Justin!

    The Qin women are no joke! This Ying Ying is a 13itch!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Han Solo View Post
    Thanks for the translation.

    There seems to be a sudden jarring gap in the translation between the scene of the conversation with qin qing and then with xiao pan - is there any missing parts?

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    ya it was kind of abrupt..

    anyways great work as always justin!
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    Thanks Justin13 for doing all the hard work. Love reading the way you write.


    I have a question, do they really shake hands to make a deal back then? I mean isn't that a modern custom? From watching old tv series, I am imagining that they drink wine or tea together to seal the deal. In those little cups. Also a way to poison each other.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Han Solo View Post
    Thanks for the translation.

    There seems to be a sudden jarring gap in the translation between the scene of the conversation with qin qing and then with xiao pan - is there any missing parts?

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    Nope. i check a few online sources. It is all the same. The entire chapter length is also comparable to the others. I think even Huang Yi did not want to keep explaining her death. I am sick of translating it every time too hahaha.

    PS: Actually I hate to translate bedroom scenes. Quite unrealistic and seems to paint every woman to be perfect.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gqonmars2 View Post
    Thanks Justin13 for doing all the hard work. Love reading the way you write.


    I have a question, do they really shake hands to make a deal back then? I mean isn't that a modern custom? From watching old tv series, I am imagining that they drink wine or tea together to seal the deal. In those little cups. Also a way to poison each other.

    Thanks Gqonmars2. Yes. It was written [SIZE=+1]项少龙与太子丹握手立誓. [SIZE=+1]握手 is handshake. [SIZE=+1]立誓 is making a promise.

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    With your crazy schedule, where do you fit in the time to watch the World Cup?! Quarterfinals starting tomorrow Justin!!!! Go Messi! And Spain!

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