Thread: A step into the past - 寻秦记 - by Huang Yi

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    Jean - please please please continue!!!! Thank you!

    You know, I feel like the Black Dragon business has been dragging on for like 6 months - almost on par with real time in the story.

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    Long time reader, first time posting.
    Thank you Lady Jean!!! The last few updates totally made my day!

    Can't wait for the upcoming battle. (^_^)v

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    Quote Originally Posted by balikpapan View Post
    None of your business. Step aside, Lao Ai!!
    If Ali has to be anyone in the story, I was thinking of Jing Jun

    Balikpapan, I live near Huntington Beach to be more exact.

    LOL, how did the discussion shift to my gender? . Kohchun, you are right, I am a HUGE fan of Looney Tunes. Used to watch it every day growing up. I still try to catch an episode on cable whenever I have time.

    Jean, you are awesome! Thank you very much for the update. I don’t like cliffhangers because I can’t take suspense very well. However, if you must end with a cliffhanger, it is better than nothing at all .
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    @tweety365 Yeah. I guess you are right about Ali. He does like to butt in and create troubles How about, act like Jing Jun, with a face like Lao Ai. That will do.

    Huntington Beach. Yes, it is a nice place with Tsunami potential. Maybe you should reconsider my suggestion of moving in with Charlie Sheen? :P You can start by following his tweeter. Haha..

    @Kohchun I know it's a big risk to assume Tweety365 is a femle. She could be an old geezer trying to lure boys and men with a cute username

    @SKyWalker Of course being numero uno is important. It shows that you are a Number One Fan of the story. I heard rumor that you'll get more post count doing that (Ali told me that).

    @Jean Thank you for another cliffhanger. I just need a new laptop, after smashing the last one due to frustation And congrats for another virgin post in this thread, Jean.

    Man, this post sure look familiar like that other social network.

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    thanks jean for the updates.

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    i know its a weekend... just kind of peep through the thread...
    I'd just like to add my thanks to our unending list and heaps of gratitude to the "Lady Jean"

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    start of the week!

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    Xiang Shaolong replied easily, “Don’t worry, Crown Prince. The only chance those rebels have to strike is to take us by surprise during the ceremony when your Highness is paying homage to the river god. But now that we’re aware of this, the whole situation is reversed. I will work closely with Lord Changwen and crush our enemies’ devious plot. I guarantee that not only will no harm come to your Highness, we can also make use of this chance to show those who are involved from the 6 countries our prowess.”

    Xiao Pan looks up upon him like a deity and he exclaimed joyfully, “With Grand Tutor in charge of this matter, there’s nothing for me to worry.”

    Xiang Shaolong replied, “But your Highness must promise to let me have full control of everything tomorrow, otherwise it’ll be difficult to execute our marvelous plan.”

    Xiao Pan chortled, “Then I will be Grand Tutor’s subordinate for one day tomorrow and obey all your instructions.”

    Li Si gave a heartfelt smile as he felt the total trust and sincerity between the two of them.

    The morning court session started with no major upheaval but once Lu Buwei brought up his intention to split the position of Salt and Iron Official into two positions, a fierce debate immediately ensued.

    Xiang Shaolong listened for a long time and could only barely understand the gist of the matter.

    It turns out that before Duke Xiao, almost all the trades in Qin were monopolized by the government. But in order to handle the production in these trades, the Qin government set up government agencies to take charge of the different industries. One of the most important posts is that of the Salt and Iron Official as it affects both the common people and the military.

    But with the expansion of Qin, a few iron producing centers in the east have slowly fallen into the hands of the Qin people. The duties of the Salt and Iron Official are getting heavier day by day and there are also instances of smuggling salt and iron for personal gains. Besides, salt and iron are basically two entirely unrelated products. Therefore Lu Buwei came up with this suggestion.

    The main problem with Lu Buwei’s suggestion is that he wanted his own people in charge of Qin’s economic and military matters, the two most important lifeline of the empire. Therefore Lord Changpin, Li Si and the rest are trying to delay this until the birth of Black Dragon so that they can make use of the opportunity to take these two positions back.

    Naturally it’s easier to delay than to object and in the end, there was no determined outcome. Xiao Pan gave the orders for this to be future discussed and the morning court session ended.

    Xiang Shaolong returned home and Teng Yi and Jing Jun are already waiting for him to scout the route that Xiao Pan will be taking tomorrow morning.

    Xiang Shaolong asked, “How’s the situation?”

    Teng Yi replied, “Guoxing just reported that Wu Guo had accompanied him to visit the various leaders. According to him, there’s not much headway regarding the assassins.”

    Jing Jun added, “I’ve discussed it with Lord Changwen. He said we can just find some excuse, for example some guard has stolen items from the palace, then we’ll seal the city and search each and every household. Ever since Shang Yang’s reforms have been put in place, those who do not report crimes are guilty of the same offense so it should be easy to find any suspicious people. But if these people are hiding in some general or senior officials’ residences, it’ll be more difficult.”

    Xiang Shaolong replied, “You must not act rashly. We must pretend that we know nothing at all about this and tell Guoxing not to investigate so that we won’t put them on their guard.”

    Teng Yi smiled, “Third Brother seemed very confident about the Crown Prince’s safety tomorrow?”

    Xiang Shaolong gave a slight smile and summoned Zhao Da. After giving him instructions to inform Lord Wenchang and Guoxing, he left with Teng Yi and Jing Jun.

    They left the city of Xianyang and walked towards River Wei on the official road. Along the way, they only saw endless grassland and knolls. They can’t help but feel energized as they enjoyed the scenery, almost forgetting the purpose of their trip.

    The emerald lake, the luscious green grass with rays reflecting off them is simply enchanting.

    Once in a while they will see shepherds with their herds with cows, goats or horses on the grassland and such a scene added a sense of life and energy on the land.

    Teng Yi pointed to a small hillock which was overgrown with trees and said, “If someone hides up there with a strong bow, he’ll be able to shoot any target travelling on the official road.”

    Xiang Shaolong was jolted awake from the mesmerizing scenery and he instructed Jing Jun to note down on his scroll all the possible locations that the assassins can make use of.

    Although it’s noon, but when they travelled through a densely forested segment of the road, the morning fog has yet to disperse. The air is moist and vision is little hazy. Teng Yi paled as he said, “From the looks of the weather, there will be heavy fog tomorrow. It’s extremely to our disadvantage.”

    Xiang Shaolong replied calmly, “I don’t think it’s entirely to our disadvantage. At least we know our enemies will choose the time when the fog is the heaviest when we are going there to strike and not strike on the return journey. Secondly, the heavy fog is even more favorable to the birth of Black Dragon.”

    Jing Jun said in awe, “Third Brother is obviously very confident.”

    Xiang Shaolong asked happily, “My two good brothers, have you every heard of the story of ‘Attacking the wrong carriage’?”

    Teng and Jing replied concurrently in confusion, “Attacking the wrong carriage?”

    Only then did Xiang Shaolong remember that ‘Attacking the wrong carriage’* incident happened after Xiao Pan became Emperor Qin, when Zhang Liang and his strongman attacked the wrong carriage with the iron hammer. He hurriedly tried to cover his mistake and said, “That is what will happen tomorrow. As long as the Crown Prince is hiding in another carriage, we can lure our enemies out without worry and annihilate them.”

    * Note: Zhang Liang’s assassination attempt on Emperor Qin during one of his inspection tours. He found a very strong man and forged an extremely heavy hammer for the strongman. During the ambush, Zhang assumed that the most ornately decorated carriage in the middle is Emperor Qin’s carriage and the strongman hurled the hammer at the carriage, killing its occupant. However, it turned out that Emperor Qin was not the person in that carriage.

    Teng and Jing both exclaimed the ingenuity of the plan. By then they are no longer in the mood to survey the areas along the route and after making some plans, they went to River Wei to meet up with Ji Yanran, who is in charge of masquerading as Black Dragon, before returning to the city together.

    By the time they returned to the Wu Residence, it’s already dusk.

    As soon as they stepped into the main door, Tao Fang informed that Wu Fu had just arrived and waiting for him in the East Hall.

    Ji Yanran said in half-seriousness, “Someone is here to fish for news but don’t follow him to Drunken Breeze Loft. Don’t forget that you have not accompanied us for two nights. If you don’t get an early rest, let’s see where you’ll find the energy to deal with those assassins.”

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    Simply the best.

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    My heart is all aflutter! thanks Jean!

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    Awesome! It's getting exciting again.

    Many thanks for the translation Jean!

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    this is a short chapter... so here's the rest of it!


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    Xiang Shaolong snickered, “Even if I have enough energy, I won’t waste it on those women. I already have the whole world. Other than my pretty wives, nothing else in this world will be able to tempt me.”

    Ji Yanran smiled sweetly and let him go.

    When he arrived at the East Hall, he saw that Wu Fu was behaving restlessly and secretly thought it amusing. He went up and said, “Master Wu really should not be here, what if it raises the suspicion of Lao Ai and Lu Buwei’s men?”

    Wu Fu had already prepared his speech as he replied humbly, “Master Xiang, do not worry, I will be extremely careful.”

    After they sat down, Wu Fu asked quietly, “What was the Crown Prince’s reaction after he found out about that matter?”

    Xiang Shaolong was secretly amused as he replied calmly, “Of course he was furious, but because of the Empress Dowager, he can only be on his guard secretly until he finds evidence. By then he’ll be able to settle scores with Lao Ai and let’s see how the Empress Dowager can protect him then.”

    He paused and added, “The Crown Prince admires your loyalty very much and was considering how he should reward you.”

    Wu Fu was ecstatic, “As long as I can be of service to the Crown Prince and Master Xiang, I am satisfied. I’m not concerned about rewards.”

    Xiang Shaolong said deliberately, “Otherwise we can create an official post for you to enjoy, but someone else will have to take care of your Drunkard Wind Loft because no official can ever open a brothel as a sideline. And it won’t look good either if made known. Anyway, you’ve earned more than enough!”

    Wu Fu was thrilled as he replied with a wide grin, “That’s a minor problem. Master Pu had always wanted to buy over my Drunkard Wind Loft. If the sale is successful, I will give half of the proceeds to you. I know that such a trivial amount is nothing in Master Xiang’s eyes but it represents a little token on my part.”

    Xiang Shaolong secretly thought that this gift is considered quite substantial.

    He suddenly had a thought. This Wu Fu is actually trying to cover all bases so that no matter which side gains the upper hand, he can still enjoy advantages.

    Once he had this understanding, he realized that this person can be made used of.

    Especially when the Black Dragon is about to be born tomorrow, it will certainly shock the kingdom, and the rise of one group will mean the decline of the other. Once Xiao Pan’s reputation soars, people like Wu Fu who sees where the wind blows should know who they must side with.

    Wu Fu furrowed his brow, “If Master Xiang is interested in that lady from my loft, just a word from you and I’ll send her over to serve you. Even if it’s Meimei, I’ll have a way.”

    Xiang Shaolong was surprised, “You’re not afraid of Lu Buwei?”

    Wu Fu sighed, “I’ve no choice even if I’m afraid. Meimei is now using her life to threaten me and she refuses to become Lu Buwei’s concubine. Of course, if I have Meimei’s beauty, I wouldn’t want to marry into Zhongfu Residence as well.”

    Xiang Shaolong was very surprised. So Dan Meimei is with Lu Buwei because she fear his power and not because she’s willing. His hatred for her diminished immediately and a sense of pity rose up instead as he asked, “How is Lu Buwei handling this matter?”

    Wu Fu laughed, “What can he do? He can only try to pressure and bribe me but poor me is threatened by Lao Ai as well. I’m sandwiched in the middle and have not had a good night’s sleep. Master Xiang, just take a look at me now and you’ll know.”

    Xiang Shaolong took a close look at his face and indeed he looked haggard with dark circles under his eyes. He said with a smile, “If you knew this would happen, why do it in the first place? Lu Buwei has no feelings at all yet you helped him trick me. Aren’t you just looking for trouble?”

    Wu Fu was stunned at first, then he paled as he stuttered, “I don’t understand what you mean.”

    Xiang Shaolong smiled, “Even Mo Ao couldn’t trick me, so how do you think you fare when compared to Mo Ao?”

    Wu Fu threw himself to the ground and exclaimed in fear, “Master Xiang have misunderstood me, if I lie…”

    Xiang Shaolong interrupted him, “Please don’t make any life or death vows, otherwise I may really decide to punish you in Heaven’s name just like what you wished for.”

    Wu Fu cried out, “Please believe me, I really…”

    ‘Swish!’ The precious sword that has been through hundreds of battles left its sheath.

    Wu Fu was so terrified he scrambled away, cold sweat as large as peas filled his forehead as his face turned deathly pale.

    Xiang Shaolong placed the precious sword nonchalantly on the table next to him and said off handedly, “I won’t hide it from you. I have spies with Lu Buwei and Lao Ai, so I know everything. If you utter one more word of untruth, I will chop off your head with this sword and parade it at the market square. Of course the offense will be deceiving the ruler.”

    Wu Fu was stunned for a moment before he replied dejectedly, “I concede!”

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    Jean...awesome...many thanks

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    You are a beauty, Jean.
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    Thank you Jean ^^.

    Finally we`re close to the black dragon appearance. It takes a full book and i`m expecting more side story before the black dragon appears at maybe the final chapter? lol
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    great job as always jean

    btw a question

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    Does the crown prince loose his crown temporarily like in the tv show which causes him to become bit twisted and evil?
    "The mystery of life isn't a problem to solve, but a reality to experience."
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    Thanks Jean!

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    balikpapan: I hope you did not stalk the wrong person!

    yongbifan: I have no idea, I'm reading as I translate as well.

    Anyway, new chapter.... and a HUGE cliffhanger. Now aren't you guys glad it's only the middle of the week?

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    Book 19, Chap 10 – The Dragon rises from River Wei

    Spring Festival.

    Before the sun rose, most of the citizens of Xianyang city have already changed into new clothes, as if it’s a market day and headed towards the upstream of River Wei to take part in the grand Spring festivities.

    Although the roads were crowded, everything was in an orderly fashion.

    Under the orders of Teng Yi, Jing Jun and Guo Yu, 200,000 cavalry were out in full force maintaining order along the way.

    All the high posts along the way which can be used for ambush are guarded and security is tight.

    If there are assassins, they can only make use of the woods on the sides of the roads as cover in order to execute their assassination attempts.

    Zhu Ji, Lu Buwei and a group of higher ranked officials went to the Palace to meet up with Xiao Pan before the sun rose. They first paid their respects to the late King at the ancestral shrine before leaving in carriages.

    Under the protection of Lord Changwen and a group of elite imperial guards, Xiao Pan went according to plan and did not travel in the grand imperial carriage. Instead he is dressed as one of the imperial guard and set off undercover with the main team.

    Inside the imperial carriage was Jing Shan who was pretending to be Xiao Pan. This person’s dexterity is comparable to Jing Jun and is really the best person who can deal with sudden changes.

    Xiang Shaolong was still worried that something will happen to him and specially reinforced the walls of the horse carriage with steel plates, just like the bullet-proof vehicles of the 21st century.

    The huge entourage left the palace gates and traveled along River Wei once they left the city.

    The commoners were cheering along both sides of the road as a show of their support and love towards the ruler.

    Each of the two teams has about a hundred odd imperial soldiers with ferocious dogs doing a sweep of the heavily forested areas along both sides of the road to prevent the enemy from hiding in the woods to shoot at them.

    The Wu family warriors were disguised as common folk and mixed around in the crowd, almost like plain-clothes spies of the 21st century, keeping a look out for suspicious characters in the crowd.

    Xiang Shaolong was riding behind the imperial carriage, constantly giving orders to the imperial guards, putting to total use everything he has learnt in the 21st century.

    With the imperial guards opening the way, the imperial carriage moved right ahead. Everywhere they went the crowd hurriedly gave way, kneeling in respect.

    On both sides of the team of carriages were two rows of imperial guards. The ones on the outer row held long shields while the ones on the inner row were armed with bows and arrows. In terms of defense, it is indeed extremely watertight.

    Xiang Shaolong slowed down to more than 10 horse lengths behind and rode together with Xiao Pan, Li Si, Lord Wenchang etc.

    Xiao Pan looked appreciatively at the horsemen on top of the hills on the left of them who were waving the flags signifying safety and said, “Grand Tutor’s plans are indeed an eye opener for me.”

    Li Si added with a smile, “Even if the assassin is formidable with 3 heads or 6 arms, in my opinion there is no way he can find a window of opportunity to strike and can only retreat in face of such difficulty.”

    Xiang Shaolong looked up. Gazing at the heavy morning fog, he said with a smile, “The enemy must have made careful plans and will surly have ways to deal with sudden changes. If my guess is right, the main attack will come from further ahead. If they can get to the top of the trees, they’ll be able to attack with weapons such as arrows and stones if we are not prepared. And with the support of the assassins who are working undercover among the crowd and with a clear target, they may be able to succeed after all.”

    Xiao Pan, Li Si and Lord Wenchang looked at the top of the trees that is covered in fog and can’t help but feel a cold shiver in their hearts.

    Xiang Shaolong continued, “Right in front there is a forest and it is the most ideal place for both attacking and escaping. If they want to strike, it would be that place.”

    Xiao Pan was thinking all these exciting as his eyes blazed hotly whereas Li Si and Lord Wenchang started feeling nervous, no longer in the mood to joke.

    Xiang Shaolong secretly thought that Emperor Qin is Emperor Qin indeed, for his is braver than most men.

    He nudged his horse and went after Wang Yu.

    The leading troops led the way on the official road to the forest where the rites will be held.

    The fog became thicker and anything more than ten steps away cannot be seen clearly.

    The entourage has yet to arrive but the common folk can already hear the music as they hurriedly went down on their knees on both sides of the road and waited for the carriages to drive past.

    Amidst the cheers and music, Wang Yu drove into the woods.

    The imperial guards have received their instructions earlier and all are on the alert to deal with any sudden events.

    Xiang Shaolong was calm instead. His eyes searched out Wu Guo who was in the crowd and exchanged a look with him. He was not surprised if Wu Guo did not find out anything out of the ordinary.

    If the enemy doesn’t even have a way to disguise themselves, they won’t even come.

    When a group of experts have made a death wish and decided to assassinate a target, they will become a terrible force to reckon with.

    Xiang Shaolong gave out orders to the soldiers surrounding them. Wu Yan and his men spread out a little more, behind Wang Yu. All were on high alert.

    The half mile long forest road feels as long as a century.

    Much to everyone’s surprise, even when they were nearing the edge of the forest and the trees are beginning to thin, there’s still no sign of any assassins.

    The sound of the River Wei gushing ahead could be heard from up ahead.

    Suddenly the road in front opened up and they saw the river gushing. The fog is now just like a thin blanket covering the earth.

    Xiang Shaolong was just breathing a sigh of relief when there was a strange and sudden change.

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    wow. i thought you were joking about the HUGE cliffhanger, but alas it is true. btw thanks.

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    yup. That's one huge Cliffhanger....

    Hopefully your computer,internet, time and your health is well...Jean !!
    Looking forward for tomorrow..

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    Dang it!! late again.


    You're right. That's a killer cliffhanger there, Jean.
    Now need to figure out what to do for the next 24 hr. before the new update coming up

    "Roses are red
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    For Jean's new update
    everything I would do"
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