Thread: A step into the past - 寻秦记 - by Huang Yi

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    I work in front of a computer, connected to a LAN - hence the frequent first to post after Justin


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    Quote Originally Posted by ycb5959 View Post
    I work in front of a computer, connected to a LAN - hence the frequent first to post after Justin

    now that ycb is asleep we can beat him/her (?) come on justin, let me be the first!
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    Quote Originally Posted by harihari View Post
    now that ycb is asleep we can beat him/her (?) come on justin, let me be the first!
    Come harihari, judging at the frequency of 1st posting by ycb, I suspect he is at the computer 24/7. Even if he sleeps, he does it in front of his computer.

    CFT, thanks for chipping in with your explanation and translation of that untranslated phrase. Getting a clearer understanding now. I guess you are not that far off.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CFT View Post
    The untranslated part is in classical Chinese so no wonder the modern computer translation does not work. I can't give a 100% accurate translation but I can attempt to give the essence.

    黄帝立明台之议者,上观于贤也;尧有衢室之问者,下听于人也,尧有告善之挂,而主不蔽也

    黄帝立明台之议者,上观于贤也;
    Huang Emperor (Huangdi) appointed (立) advisors (议者) to his state room (明台) to observe from above (上观) the virtuous (贤)

    尧有衢室之问者,下听于人也
    Yao Emperor had inquisitors (问者) to his public consultation room (衢室), listening to the people below (下听于人) [note the "above and below"].

    舜有告善之旌,而主不蔽也
    Shun had a banner (旌) for comments (告善), thus the ruler (主) did not die (不蔽) [i.e. lose power].

    Basically they are referencing the rulers of antiquity and how they took views from the good and the masses.


    thanks CFT. next update in about an hour.

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    Using this break, Xiang Shaolong returned to his room for a nap. After dozing for about two hours, he woke up and discovered that Han Chuang has been waiting for him for some time. He is certain that this ungrateful fellow must be up to no good again. On the other hand, he has to visit Xiang Shaolong sooner or later; otherwise, it would arouse suspicions about himself.

    After he had washed up, he received Han Chuang in the front hall.

    A significantly impatient Han Chuang is already pacing up and down the hall. Noticing Xiang Shaolong, he cheered: “Shaolong is finally awake.”

    Observing that Han Chuang does not display the slightest sign of guilt, Xiang Shaolong was annoyed and coldly hissed: “No matter how long a dream is, one would have to wake up eventually. To think you still have the guts to come and see me.”

    His face turning white, Han Chuang wondered: “What is this all about? Two days ago, Lord Longyang came and tested my loyalty. Today, Shaolong is mercilessly laying blame on me. What offence did I, Han Chuang, committed?”

    Advancing to his front, Xiang Shaolong stared piercingly at him with his shining eyes, accusing: “If you don’t want to be caught, don’t do it. You are the only person who knows that I am going to Qixia College to steal my sabre…” At this juncture, he detected Feng Fei about to enter the hall from the corner of his eye. Gesturing with his hand, he bellowed: “Mistress, please excuse yourself. I am not through yet with this ungrateful fellow.”

    Noticing the two men arguing heatedly, Feng Fei was shocked and her face was completely pale. She hastily retreated from the scene.

    Xiang Shaolong continued: “If not for you letting the cat out of the bag, why would Cao Cuidao know about my burglary attempt and was using me to practice his sword moves?”

    Han Chuang panicked: “This has nothing to do with me. Remember I was advising you not to go? Aye! How did this happen?”

    Xiang Shaolong has to admit that his acting is fantastic. Originally, he wanted to apply the same deceit to Han Chuang, feeding him with lies and fabrications. However, upon seeing this ‘old friend’, he can feel his anger rising and lost control of his emotions.

    Not willing to back down, he countered: “Would you have advised me to go instead? Putting this matter aside, why are you holding secret discussions with Guo Kai over the past few days? And even blackmailed Lord Longyang to get rid of me.”

    His face drained of colour, Han Chuang stammered: “Lord Longyang told you?”

    Xiang Shaolong coldly smirked: “None of your business. If you even try to lay your hands on him, when I get back to Xianyang, I will expose your Zhengguo Canal Grand Plan. The very next day, I will lead an army to raid your nesting place.”

    Han Chuang shuddered excessively: “So you knew about everything; why did you hide it from Yingzheng?”

    Xiang Shaolong sighed with a breath: “Don’t you ungrateful fellas get it? Only by building this canal will the Qin military be tied down and unable to participate in any eastern campaigns for the next eight to ten years. It is against my desires to watch my friends become stateless citizens, which is why I resisted exposing this matter and dealing Lu Buwei a blow. In return, how have you treated me?”

    Han Chuang promptly broke down and collapsed onto his seat with hot tears sprouting out like spring water. He grieved: “I was forced by circumstances too. Someone has revealed my meeting with you to Guo Kai and he kept threatening me using hard and soft tactics. But I have tried my best and even hinted Lord Longyang to escort you out of Lin Zi. Shaolong, you must believe me! I have been doing everything within my power to obstruct Guo Kai and in fact, I came to see you today to warn you about him.”

    Xiang Shaolong felt that it is impossible for him to trust Han Chuang like before because his acting is simply amazing. He sighed with another breath: “How then, do you explain the sabre theft tip-off?”

    With a mixture of tears and snot on his face, Han Chuang wept: “If I was the one who leaked this information, may I die within a year! I am heavily indebted to Shaolong and no matter how heartless I, Han Chuang, am, I would never stoop to such a despicable act.”

    Xiang Shaolong reflected: Could it be somebody else eavesdropping on their conversation and overhearing this exchange?

    By now, his anger has been appeased and he sat down besides Han Chuang, castigating: “You are a grown man; can you stop crying like a damsel in distress?”

    Using his sleeves to wipe his tears, Han Chuang shook his head in a pitiful manner, wheezing: “Over the past few days, I spent all my waking hours locking horns with antagonists. The pain is almost unbearable. Now that Shaolong has given me a piece of your mind, I somehow felt much better.”

    Patting his shoulder, Xiang Shaolong consoled: “You should go home! Both of us should spend some time in quiet contemplation.”

    Han Chuang cautioned: “There is one thing Shaolong must never underestimate: Guo Kai is in cahoots with Lu Buwei and Tian Dan, going all out to prevent you from ever returning to Xianyang. Qi, after all, is Tian Dan’s playground. If you are negligent, you may fall into his ambush.”

    Xiang Shaolong plainly state: “As along as my friends don’t betray me, I can handle any situation. This matter is far from simple, you had better not get involved or Guo Kai may take you down as well.”

    He then frostily grunted: “It seems like I, Xiang Shaolong, is a pushover in their eyes. Guo Kai this old thief must be tired of living.”

    Han Chuang exhaled a breath of cold air and mused: “I finally had a taste of Shaolong’s unimaginable forbearance and magnanimous attitude. Before your match with Cao Cuidao, Lu Buwei and Guo Kai should be keeping their paws off you. But if you happened to win, the situation will be entirely different!”

    Seizing Han Chuang, Xiang Shaolong pushed him towards the main door and hinted: “Go back and tell Guo Kai, tell him that for the glory of Qin Swordsmen, I will definitely have a go with Cao Cuidao.”

    Han Chuang was immensely shocked: “Aren’t you planning to flee the city before that?”

    Pushing him straight out of the door, Xiang Shaolong smiled in return but did not offer a reply.

    After tearing off Han Chuang’s mask, he felt much more peaceful. Lord Longyang is right. Although Han Chuang is no noble character, his friendship towards him is sincere. Greatly comforted by this fact, he was glad that human goodness does exist in everyone.

    Currently, he can no longer differentiate between friend or foe. Except for Shan Rou and Xiao Yuetan, he would never place his full trust in anyone else, including Li Yuan and Lord Longyang. Who can guarantee that they may not have a change of heart or are simply lying to him from day one.

    This is the first time in his life when he cannot distinguish between his allies and his enemies.

    Barely stepping over the door ledge, he was welcomed by Feng Fei. She quizzed: “What is going on between you and Marquis Chuang?”

    Xiang Shaolong smiled: “It is nothing. It is now sunshine after the rain.”

    Feng Fei slowly and sadly shot him a look, angrily interrogating: “Why didn’t you come over last night? Am I, Feng Fei, not worthy of Great General’s attention?”

    Xiang Shaolong groaned: “It is the exact opposite. I am concerned that after relishing Mistress’s enticing body, I would lose control of my emotions. That will give rise to unforeseeable consequences while we are trying to escape.”

    Putting on an air of disdain, Feng Fei admonished: “Will you stop linking every issue to that? The situation is very clear to me now. Even those who hate you to the core are unable to do anything to you. Since you do not love me, why don’t you simply say so!”

    Xiang Shaolong can instantly feel the heavy thumping in his head. Pulling her sleeve, he led her towards the inner courtyard and changed the topic: “Aren’t Shuzen and the others rehearsing? How can they do a good job with you, First Mistress, giving instructions by the side?”

    Feng Fei giggled with a ‘Pu Ci’. She chuckled: “You ah… Your best skill is skirting issues whenever they become too hot for you to handle. Now that I do not have a lover, I may lose control one night and slip underneath your blankets while you are in bed. When that happens, I want to see how long you can hold out.”

    Aroused, Xiang Shaolong smiled: “Didn’t Mistress say your heart is dead? Why are you suddenly so passionate again?”

    Curling her cute little mouth, Feng Fei coquettishly stared at him, censuring: “It is all your fault, trying to seduce me while acting gentlemanly, hugging me when you feel like it and giving me deep kisses whenever you are in the mood. Even your words are amorous and ambiguous. Feng Fei is just an ordinary lady and would naturally seek your love and attention after being stimulated by you on multiple occasions.”

    Xiang Shaolong can feel his own urges rising but reminded himself that this rare beauty Feng Fei is better left untouched. Fortunately, all his desires for her would vanish straightaway whenever he thinks of her past affections for Han Jie.

    He is no longer the same Xiang Shaolong who arrived in this era years ago. Growing out of the age of one night stands, he would now consider the consequences of his actions.

    Suppressing his agitation with all his willpower, Xiang Shaolong solemnly explained: “Isn’t our present relationship perfect? Once we are physically involved, the gameplay would be totally different and in the future, you would abhor me for being a heartless man.”

    By now, Feng Fei has arrived at the stone steps leading to her chambers. Halting her footsteps, her eyebrows tightened slightly to form an indistinct frown. Seconds later, she displayed a smile, acknowledging: “Great General is right. Once you have obtained my body and yet do not marry Feng Fei, Feng Fei would certainly be resentful despite promising earlier that there are no strings attached.”

    Seeing that she is so understanding, Xiang Shaolong was thrilled: “Why don’t we just limit ourselves to hugging and kissing, Ouch!”

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    FIrst... thanks Justin

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    thanx for another quick update..

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    Thanks Justin!

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    I really hope it isn't Xiao Yuetan who told Cao Cuidao; that XSL was going steal his saber back. I really like Xiao Yuetan too.

    Thanks Justin!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Disbol View Post
    I really hope it isn't Xiao Yuetan who told Cao Cuidao; that XSL was going steal his saber back. I really like Xiao Yuetan too.
    My thoughts exactly. I am sure that xiao yuetan will never betray XSL. But he lied about 10 strikes deal only 2 rise XSL confidence. If xiao yuetan is the one who informes cao cuidao, i cant understand which reason does Huang yi gives 2 make sure xiao didnt betray XSL. Filled with plots without a leeway.

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    Thanks Justin.

    This is very intriguing. If the betrayer/informer is not Han Chuang or Lord Longyang or Li Yuan or Xiao Yuetan. Who else can it be?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Justin13 View Post
    Seeing that she is so understanding, Xiang Shaolong was thrilled: “Why don’t we just limit ourselves to hugging and kissing, Ouch!”
    Thanks Justin!
    I am more worried about this last sentence..
    I just hope that it is not XSL got pricked by that poisonous ring of Feng Fei...

    I don't think XSL will spend a night with someone just before the duel.. he must have known about the after "effect"..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Disbol View Post
    I really hope it isn't Xiao Yuetan who told Cao Cuidao; that XSL was going steal his saber back. I really like Xiao Yuetan too.

    Thanks Justin!
    in the story early on when XSL is disappionted that people can see through his disguise. If Xiao Yuetan was a true friend he would eather do a btter job of disguising him, or let him know the disguise is to weak. eather way Huang Yi hints that somethng is wrong here
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    Thanks Justin.

    I say again, how many times has Xiang Shaolong not been the same as the one who arrived in the past era, swearign to forsake all relationships? I'd really be impressed if he doesn't touch Feng Fei.

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    Thanks Justin

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    Ahh... can't wait for the duel. Just cut out this romance crap, and go straight to the fight.

    Anyway, thanks a million, Justin. Here have some of these

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    Thanks Justin.

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    Quote Originally Posted by balikpapan View Post
    Ahh... can't wait for the duel. Just cut out this romance crap, and go straight to the fight.
    Totally agree! The romantic relationships in this story are very weak. What keeps me coming back are the plot twists and fighting. Plus, XSL has grown on me.

    Thanks Justin

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    Quote Originally Posted by balikpapan View Post
    Ahh... can't wait for the duel. Just cut out this romance crap, and go straight to the fight.

    Anyway, thanks a million, Justin. Here have some of these
    CHEERS! and 8 more chapters till the showdown... anyway.... more twists and turns coming up!




    Shoving him away with a push, Feng Fei glared at him viciously before breaking out into a sweet smile and proceeded to climb the stairs to the upper deck.

    Xiang Shaolong had to summon every shred of his willpower to prevent himself from following her upstairs. Turning around, he left.

    To avoid getting himself into trouble, Xiang Shaolong chose to spend his whole day within Tingsong Villa. Nevertheless, he could not avoid the provocation of the courtesans. Among his harassers, Dong Shuzen and Zhu Xiuzhen are obviously included and so are Xinyue and Yunniang who kept trying to get into his good books.

    Fortunately, he has already made up his mind to run away from here once he managed to withstand Cao Cuidao’s ten blows. Otherwise, if these harassments were to continue, he may lose his inhibitions one day and fall into this beauty trap.

    In the evening, Xiao Yuetan came looking for him and the two men headed to the garden for a stroll. After Xiang Shaolong described his encounter with Han Chuang to Xiao Yuetan, the latter’s face lost colour: “Shaolong should not have disclosed your knowledge about Zhengguo Canal; this may inadvertently force Han Chuang to kill you.”

    Xiang Shaolong had a big shock: “Are you sure? He was crying his eyes out and his nose was running. It was a genuine display of emotions!”

    Xiao Yuetan sighed: “All human beings are made this way. In the heat of the moment, they would react emotionally but after careful consideration and weighing the pros and cons, they would cast aside all personal relationships for the sake of their country.”

    Xiang Shaolong nodded his head: “Elder Brother’s words always makes the most sense. Luckily, I need not depend on him. Zongsun Long and I are in a mutually beneficial partnership; he should be much more reliable!”

    Xiao Yuetan bitterly smiled: “This is precisely why I came to look for you. Remember Zongsun Heji? He just gave me a fresh update, reporting that Han Jie brought Lu Buwei to pay a visit to Zongsun Long father and son. However, he is not aware about their meeting agenda.”

    Xiang Shaolong was thunderstruck: “Doesn’t Lu Buwei fear Tian Dan’s wrath?”

    Xiao Yuetan coldly sniggered: “Doesn’t Shaolong understand this Old Thief by now? Tian Dan is getting on in years and is no longer the Tian Dan of the past. Due to his early contributions, the royal family is still accommodating towards him. One of the reasons why the King of Qi stripped Tian Sheng of his Crown Prince title is because Tian Sheng approves Tian Dan’s demands unquestioningly. Moreover, Lu Buwei is known for securing his objectives at all costs, even if it includes working together with his past enemies.”

    Xiang Shaolong chortled: “I am conscious that Zongsun Long is no gentleman but presently, I am much more useful to him compared to Lu Buwei. I am confident that he would not switch sides.”

    Xiao Yuetan frowned: “Do not underestimate Lu Buwei. For him to openly approach Zongsun Long, I am sure he has some compelling reasons. All you need to do is wait and see if Zongsun Long would take the initiative to tell you about Lu Buwei’s visit. From there, you can determine if they are still loyal to you or not.”

    Xiang Shaolong was secretly alarmed, recalling Xiao Pan’s identity crisis. If Lu Buwei is using this trump card on Zongsun Long father and son, it is possible that they may switch allegiance to Lu Buwei.

    Another critical aspect is Han Jie’s unique status. With him moderating the discussion and aligning their interests, it is possible for the impossible to happen.

    At the end of the day, Zongsun Long is still hankering after Feng Fei. If he assumes Xiang Shaolong to be simply a paper tiger, this calculative bloodsucker may harden his resolve and commit himself to the unexpected.

    Ultimately, the people of Qi share the mentality of the other five eastern States, regarding Xiang Shaolong as the number one enemy. Years ago, Qin General Bai Qi inflicted catastrophic damages upon them. Now that he, Xiang Shaolong, is widely acknowledged as the Bai Qi of today, who wouldn’t wish to see him dead?

    Based on these fresh developments, his grand plan is no longer viable and he has to reconsider the trustworthiness of his ‘allies’.

    Even if he is all alone by himself, most of his tasks are still accomplishable. The problem is that he cannot abandon Feng Fei.

    Xiao Yuetan’s voice sounded beside his ear: “For the next two days, we must brainstorm and formulate a plan to slip away without anyone’s knowledge.”

    Xiang Shaolong realized that the situation must be really deplorable if even this wise and experienced friend is feeling the same helplessness as him. It looks like the best way out is for him to slip away first while imploring Xie Ziyuan to extend his protection to Feng Fei.

    The golden question remains: Is Xie Ziyuan able to do so?

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    short post to end the long long chapter.... evening update later. btw I appreciate all the comments and thanks. cheers to everyone here, registered or unregistered.

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