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    Time for my second writing effort.
    This is a wuxia story.
    It will contain references to Gu Long and Jin Yong from time to time.
    As for the time period and other details, you'll just have to read to find out

    p.s. this is by no means a sign of discontinuing my first writing effort. I intend to update them both.

    ::Preface::

    Legend has it that once upon a time, there existed a secret organization. They lived in a mysterious place called the Concealed Citadel of Darkness (幽冥城). No one knew where this place was located. Whenever anyone was brought to the citadel, they were first blindfolded so that they would not be able to later reproduce the path.

    According to legend, the master of the citadel, surnamed Youming (meaning "Concealed Darkness"), possessed supreme martial arts. He once fought the combined forces of leaders from all 7 orthodox schools. The 7 leaders were not able to gain the upper hand. After that incident, everyone in the martial world knew of Master Youming's prowess.

    What was the Concealed Citadel of Darkness? Nobody knew.

    What was their mission? Nobody could say.

    They appear in random fashion.

    The things they do startle us.

    One person has ties with it.

    Lan Yutang.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    I'm pretty sure you can produce a good quality wuxia story if you put your heart at it. Can Fang Wudi make a guest appearance or a mention? Hehe...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogeyman View Post
    I'm pretty sure you can produce a good quality wuxia story if you put your heart at it.
    Thank you.

    Can Fang Wudi make a guest appearance or a mention? Hehe...
    Sure, I can reference him.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    Shouldn't their mission/goal at least be clear? I'd like to know who the bad and who the good guys are. At least I can root for a specific side.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GuGu View Post
    Shouldn't their mission/goal at least be clear? I'd like to know who the bad and who the good guys are. At least I can root for a specific side.
    I like it better than PJ kept it from us for the time being. It would produce that mysterious feeling. But the Citadel probably is something evil or along those lines or why would the Orthodox leaders fight against Youming? I'll leave it for PJ to write out the answer.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogeyman View Post
    I like it better than PJ kept it from us for the time being. It would produce that mysterious feeling. But the Citadel probably is something evil or along those lines or why would the Orthodox leaders fight against Youming? I'll leave it for PJ to write out the answer.
    It could be something similar to SPW, where the orthodox clans are not so innocent. Still I'd like it to be clear on what the goals are.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GuGu View Post
    It could be something similar to SPW, where the orthodox clans are not so innocent.
    Yeah, maybe.

    PJ, how long are you going to make this? Your chapters are quite short (based on your other story) so maybe 100 chapters of similar lengths?

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