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    Hi,

    Due to creative differences, CC and I have decided it would be best for us to branch off the Ultimate RPG and continue the story in our own vision.

    We will be writing about Eunuch Lin, Black-Faced Buddha, Taoist Priest 9 Wings, etc according to our visions of the characters and the story.

    We would like to incorporate the established "main" characters such as Fang Wudi, Zhuo Jiali, and Ling Jun Yan into this story. We would appreciate it if the owners of these characters kindly let us use your character.

    Please stay tuned.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    PRELIMINARY DISCUSSION

    To CC:

    we need a working title. anything in mind?

    also, where in the story should we continue from?
    I haven't read anything past post #135.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    Is Fang Wudi going to be the main character? lol

    Sure, feel free to use my character. And shouldn't you post the beginning of the story here first? I would love to help you edit it.

    EDIT: You know what? I think you guys should restart the whole story with the characters we have now. There's just too many players who only contributed once to the story. Their characters seem out of place.
    Last edited by Tom; 03-16-08 at 02:03 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogeyman View Post
    Is Fang Wudi going to be the main character? lol

    Sure, feel free to use my character. And shouldn't you post the beginning of the story here first? I would love to help you edit it.

    EDIT: You know what? I think you guys should restart the whole story with the characters we have now. There's just too many players who only contributed once to the story. Their characters seem out of place.
    I'll like to do that. But would need to see whose characters we can use first. So far, no one replied except you.

    The plan would be to start from the 1st post and edit everything.

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    Quote Originally Posted by PJ View Post
    PRELIMINARY DISCUSSION

    To CC:

    we need a working title. anything in mind?
    The Peak of Perfection?

    OK it has not meaning with regard to the story thus far but I can't think of anything else.

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    Titles...

    武林英雄传 [Wulin Yingxiong Zhuan]?
    无敌英雄传 [Wudi Yingxiong Zhuan]?
    or maybe...
    林公公的宝贝...

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    Feel free to use my character if you want.

    You may want to reveal more of your story's basic plot outline so people can suggest a title more suited to your story.

    Alternatively, you could go for a more generic title as what Bogeyman had suggested.

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    Quote Originally Posted by CC View Post
    The Peak of Perfection?

    OK it has not meaning with regard to the story thus far but I can't think of anything else.
    I would like to propose a spin-off of CC's suggested title.

    Dongfeng.
    (not Dengfeng)

    东峰

    The Peak.
    (slightly different English translation, because it is artistic to do so)

    The peak of what? Is Dongfeng Hong more than meets the eye? Readers will need to read the story to find out
    Last edited by PJ; 03-23-08 at 02:32 PM.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    Quote Originally Posted by CC View Post
    The plan would be to start from the 1st post and edit everything.
    I don't think I would like to rewrite the whole thing. Because I really like the story lines that have already been setup. I think we can continue from where it left off.

    What does CC think?
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    In the spirit of JY, we should rewrite the things to remove some slapstick and maintain some consistency. Some of the stuff was rather OTT.

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    Look @ it this way,

    if you don't rewrite it then how are new readers going to understand? Plus, the story in the RPG thread is rather awkward, considering half of the players' characters disapeared.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogeyman View Post
    Look @ it this way,

    if you don't rewrite it then how are new readers going to understand?
    Let me see, provide a link to the RPG story thread?

    Plus, the story in the RPG thread is rather awkward, considering half of the players' characters disapeared.
    They can be ELOCs/
    Last edited by PJ; 03-23-08 at 03:03 PM.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    Quote Originally Posted by CC View Post
    In the spirit of JY, we should rewrite the things to remove some slapstick and maintain some consistency. Some of the stuff was rather OTT.
    It would be nice if you can take care of most of that. I would rather focus on writing new material.
    忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」

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    Quote Originally Posted by PJ View Post
    Let me see, provide a link to the RPG story thread?
    http://www.spcnet.tv/forums/showthread.php?t=22941

    BTW, are you guys going to write in JY or GL style?

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