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    Please don't take offense from my previous haikus. In no way am I intending to offend anyone. I just find it a bit weird that you guys are relieving your boredom by writing haikus. But again, everyone has their own interests.

    Here's my shot at a haiku:

    The wind breeze lightly,
    and the moon shines on my face,
    as people die and cry.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bogeyman View Post
    Please don't take offense from my previous haikus. In no way am I intending to offend anyone. I just find it a bit weird that you guys are relieving your boredom by writing haikus. But again, everyone has their own interests.

    Here's my shot at a haiku:

    The wind breeze lightly,
    and the moon shines on my face,
    as people die and cry.
    Well, it's interest and enthusiasm for Haiku, not so much on just relieving boredom. Just like any other creative writings. =) I think you can comprehend since you have enthusiasm on fanfic writing. And, there's a slight challenge for Haiku, that is the rule of 575, which makes it interesting.

    Nice shot of Haiku and welcome.
    What can I say? I'm still standing! No weapon against me shall prosper! I am more than a conqueror!!!

    I don't care to sit by the window on an airplane. If I can't control it, why look?

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    Title changed to Haiku and poems- keep up the good works.

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    I think they're probably at the same level as or one level below Ah Qing, which is about the level of a 2nd or 3rd generation Quan Zhen disciple.
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    Wow! That's cool, Han Solo. Thank you.

    Hurray! Han Solo
    I think this is wunderbar
    But, JFK files? *puzzle*

    Errr...what's that? :P
    Last edited by remember_Cedric; 04-18-08 at 07:56 AM.
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    Thanks, Han Solo. Would you like to share your secret JFK files with us? =P


    When love turns to hate
    Hate ravages inner state
    State of destruction

    Destruction disperse
    Disperse doubt and suspicion
    Suspicion to trust

    Trust your little voice
    Voice to forgive and cherish
    Cherish love always

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    Big Mary and her Little Lamb

    Mary had a little lamb,
    a little toast,
    a little jam,
    a little pizza
    and some cake,
    some French fries
    and a chocolate shake,
    a little burger
    on a bun.
    And that's why Mary
    weighs a ton.


    A DOG SITS WAITING

    A dog sits waiting in the cold autumn sun.
    Too faithful to leave, too frightened to run.
    He's been here for days now with nothing to do
    but sit by the road waiting for you.

    He can't understand why you left him that day.
    He thought you were stopping to play.
    He's sure you'll come back
    and that's why he stays.

    How long will he suffer? How many more days?
    His legs have grown weak,
    his throat's parched and dry.
    He's sick now from hunger and falls with a sigh.

    He lays down his head and closes his eyes.
    I wish you could see how a waiting dog dies


    Between us

    There is the melody
    I can't play for you,
    There is the song
    I can't sing for you.

    Always,
    I want to be with you,
    Sit down and listen to you.

    Between us
    There is the line
    I can't cross.
    What can I say? I'm still standing! No weapon against me shall prosper! I am more than a conqueror!!!

    I don't care to sit by the window on an airplane. If I can't control it, why look?

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    Quote Originally Posted by remember_Cedric View Post

    Between us

    There is the melody
    I can't play for you,
    There is the song
    I can't sing for you.

    Always,
    I want to be with you,
    Sit down and listen to you.

    Between us
    There is the line
    I can't cross.
    I like! I like! Short, simple, and straight to the point. hmmmm...the underlying message...

    ~In memories of MF~

    Early sign of alzheimer is showing
    Memories are slowly fading
    Its simply a matter of waiting
    To be rid of this painful aching
    When the day my world came down crashing
    With news of your passing

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    Quote Originally Posted by bellamia View Post
    I like! I like! Short, simple, and straight to the point. hmmmm...the underlying message...

    ~In memories of MF~

    Early sign of alzheimer is showing
    Memories are slowly fading
    Its simply a matter of waiting
    To be rid of this painful aching
    When the day my world came down crashing

    With news of your passing
    Thank you! Thank you! I'm glad you like it. Underlying message? No disclosure in public.

    In memory of MF? I'm sorry for your loss. My deepest condolences. Clear expression of emotions in your poem. Short and neat. I like it, too.

    For someone dear to me

    Growing up you were always there
    Each and every day showing me that you cared.

    Spoiling me every chance that you had.
    Letting me know that is okay to be sad.

    Each moment we spent together
    Will be special to me forever.

    Times spent patiently listening to me
    Were as precious as when it was snowing.

    Your kind words soared through the air
    While you taught me how to share.

    More than a decade I kept you in my sight.
    Now all I can do is hold the memories tight.

    The day your soul drifted high
    My heart knew, and all I could do was cry.

    I have spent many years trying to put it in my past
    And now an adult, I have come to peace with it at last.

    A part of my heart left with you.
    The part that told me what to do.

    My love for you, Grandpa, will soon project
    Into the love you will help me use to protect.
    Haiku
    I look up the Sky
    Shining brillant like your smile
    Can't help missing you
    Last edited by remember_Cedric; 04-19-08 at 11:47 PM.
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    What is time?
    Except another pause in our chat,
    Another stop in our walk,
    Another reflection in the mirror of life,

    What is life,
    But another breath of cold air in winter,
    Another taste of your warm breath,
    Another being that we create?

    What is love?
    That unfailing, unkind of all emotions,
    That binds you to me,
    and me to you?
    Is it not selfish?
    To demand one to be yours?

    What is time?
    In this love of my life?
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    Quote Originally Posted by bliss
    I think they're probably at the same level as or one level below Ah Qing, which is about the level of a 2nd or 3rd generation Quan Zhen disciple.
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    Wow, Cedric , Dr. Han , and Bellamia ! I really like your poems!!!

    More please^^

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jilly View Post
    Wow, Cedric , Dr. Han , and Bellamia ! I really like your poems!!!

    More please^^
    Now, Dr. Han is indeed Hidden Dragon, Couching Tiger.

    Thank you, Jilly. And now, you better contribute your creative ideas, too.

    On that very night, on that special day.
    After the party, our group go separate ways.

    Just you and I walk to the train station
    Slightly trembling as I handed you that little token
    Once again, I see your smile shining brilliant

    Tongue-tied to say anything else,
    Again, that awkwardness spells
    So helplessly I keep waving goodbye
    Even though it was not something I want do so inside

    I wonder when will we meet again
    The enthusiaism is beyond words can say.
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    ~ Dedicated to my BFF ~

    You are the one and only
    No one will ever replace you in my heart
    Thatís why being away from you is so hard

    Thank you for being my strength and my rock
    Without you, I would have never gotten through those road blocks
    I love and cherish you around the clock

    Since I canít be by your side to guide you along the way
    Whenever you feel alone or afraid, Iím only a phone call away
    When the sky is cloudy and gray, I promise to make everything okay

    My strength, my confidence, and my fearless heart
    Is everything I have to offer while we are apart
    Until the day when we can come together for a fresh new start

    Through triumphs and through tough times
    The distance is within reach of IM
    Even when we are not near each other
    Our spirits and our hearts will always be linked together.

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    im always in basketball mood
    but somehow im really never that good
    so i just eat food

    i hope thats an haiku

    it goes 5 words first line, 7 words 2nd line, and 5 words 3rd line with all rhymes at end right

    :edit: dang i just read the other ones u guys post up, makes mine look embarassing
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    Quote Originally Posted by LuNaR View Post
    im always in basketball mood
    but somehow im really never that good
    so i just eat food

    i hope thats an haiku

    it goes 5 words first line, 7 words 2nd line, and 5 words 3rd line with all rhymes at end right

    :edit: dang i just read the other ones u guys post up, makes mine look embarassing
    Sweetie, very cute attempt! Though, what you have is not haiku. I did make the same mistake on my first attempt as well, by counting the words instead of syllables.

    For example: Broken is one word with two syllables (Bro-ken).

    Eyes blue as the sky (5 syllables)
    One look and I'm hypnotized (7 syllables)
    Truly mesmorized (5 syllables)

    PS: I forgot to mention that the ending word does not have to rhyme. Though, I personally like to rhyme the ending word just for the challenge.
    Last edited by bellamia; 04-21-08 at 12:22 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bellamia View Post
    Sweetie, very cute attempt! Though, what you have is not haiku. I did make the same mistake on my first attempt as well, by counting the words instead of syllables.

    For example: Broken is one word with two syllables (Bro-ken).

    Eyes blue as the sky (5 syllables)
    One look and I'm hypnotized (7 syllables)
    Truly mesmorized (5 syllables)

    PS: I forgot to mention that the ending word does not have to rhyme. Though, I personally like to rhyme the ending word just for the challenge.
    i see, thanks for the heads up so i dont further embrass myself
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    Quote Originally Posted by LuNaR View Post
    i see, thanks for the heads up so i dont further embrass myself
    Lun pal, actually... my early attempts were all screwed up. When I finally figured out how it works...I cheated by editing them lmao (my honesty) And there, you see my perfect posts (after multiple times of screw-ups)


    Wow, Bella, BFF? Now, the wabbit is curious. But, your rights are expressly reserved. Excellent poem, young lady. Beautifully worded and very catchy for the heart

    The curious Wabbit
    In this total restless mood
    Not for bad, but good.

    (Must be the overdose of caffeine)
    Last edited by remember_Cedric; 04-21-08 at 10:10 AM.
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    What is with the sig?
    Still tickling you I suppose
    Waste of space, my friend
    I am a pessimist, but I think people like me!

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    I'm counting the day
    As the clock is ticking by
    Loneliness is a torturous way to live
    A torturous way to live is waiting in loneliness
    Trying to make sense of everything
    When everything doesn't make sense

    Maybe one day it'll be forgotten
    Feeling so numb is not so bad after all

    But I want to savor sweet life
    Even if it may turn sour
    If my years are meant for this
    I'll be here waiting
    Counting the day as the clock is ticking by
    Welcoming you into my real existence

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    Quote Originally Posted by shen diao xia View Post
    What is with the sig?
    Still tickling you I suppose
    Waste of space, my friend
    Hey hey hey, my friend
    I like the three responses
    It's so spontaneous!

    Let me take some space
    Sorry for my selfishness
    Just alittle while.

    Jilly, give a smile
    Sun will shine after the rain
    Grey clouds will not last

    Names of the nameless
    I am nobody major
    Me, just a Wabbit


    Poem

    Something's eating me inside.
    A sign of missing someone
    Just wish to hear from you, a line or two
    Telling me how is your day, how are you.
    For my engine, you are my fuel

    Sitting right in front of here
    I feel so completely restless
    Keep refreshing my page
    Hoping to see that one message

    I don't know when did I start feeling this way
    I have tried hard to detach from this mighty sway
    I have no answer but give up and to let it stray

    Iin my head right now, there is only one question:
    Is it just me chasing my tail, or is this feeling mutual?


    P/s: Yeay! It's time for food!
    What can I say? I'm still standing! No weapon against me shall prosper! I am more than a conqueror!!!

    I don't care to sit by the window on an airplane. If I can't control it, why look?

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    ~ Ahjuhshi ~

    Goodbye is the hardest word to say
    If only there are other ways
    Maybe on a different day
    When doubts set aside and my heart may be swayed
    To accept your love and stay
    But to everyone's dismayed
    It’s time to walk away
    Heartless as it is, you won't hear the news on your birthday
    The inevitable can wait, until the 1st of May
    Last edited by bellamia; 09-02-08 at 11:30 PM.

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