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    Default Haiku and poems and other stuffs including the secret JFK files

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    Haiku is a Japanese verse form that relies on brevity and simplicity to convey its message. It is usually three lines of five, seven, and five syllables, and frequently includes natural images or themes. It is believed to have been first written in the seventeenth century and is based on a Zen Buddhist philosophy of simplicity and the idea of perfection that excludes the extraneous.

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    City mocking birds
    Sing the tunes of car alarms
    and gangster whistles

    Spring has now arrived
    Everything is now blooming
    saw two birds humping
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    I have no idea
    What you are saying
    But it's funny

    Please explain further
    What Haiku is
    I'll be waiting
    I am a pessimist, but I think people like me!

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    Quote Originally Posted by shen diao xia View Post
    I have no idea

    What you are saying
    But it's funny

    Please explain further
    What Haiku is

    I'll be waiting
    LOL...not quite bro.

    You need 3 lines.
    1st. line 5 syllables
    2nd. line 7 syllables
    3rd. line 5 syllables

    *note: my previous post, is 2 haikus Try it, it's fun!!!
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    Ok now I get it
    Let me try giving it a shot
    When I have free time

    K, now I get it
    I'll try to give it a shot
    When I have free time

    (Now it's correct, phew!)
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    Quote Originally Posted by shen diao xia View Post
    Ok now I get it

    Let me try giving it a shot

    When I have free time
    kekek...almost bro. Your 2nd line has 8 syllables i believe.
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    What is the hell with
    this thread that is silly and crazy
    but is still so so funny

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    Quote Originally Posted by bliss
    I think they're probably at the same level as or one level below Ah Qing, which is about the level of a 2nd or 3rd generation Quan Zhen disciple.
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    A new addiction
    Has surfaced at this forum
    Haiku is the name

    Shen diao xia tried twice
    Han Solo took a stab too
    I'm the third victim


    Ok, that's really bad, but did I get it right? =P

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    Wow I am impressed
    You got it quite right first time
    Change I'm to I am
    I am a pessimist, but I think people like me!

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    Morning has arrived
    The baby woke up and cried
    Waiting to be fed
    "You can't make the world come out right just because you want it that way."

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    Music heals away the pain
    The sweet melody echoing in my ears
    Is none other than you

    Is this right? I don't want to exercise my brain too much.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bellamia View Post
    Music heals away the pain

    The sweet melody echoing in my ears
    Is none other than you


    Is this right? I don't want to exercise my brain too much.
    Syllables, not words .
    I got caught the first time too.
    Try it out again
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    Some of you guys have great poetic skills...unfortunately your counting skills are not so great.
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    Quote Originally Posted by shen diao xia View Post
    Syllables, not words .
    I got caught the first time too.
    Try it out again
    OK, got it now. How about...

    Music heals the pain
    The melody in my ears
    none other than you

    I like this game...

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    I got it wrong once,
    Till i got my haiku right,
    I will try again.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bliss
    I think they're probably at the same level as or one level below Ah Qing, which is about the level of a 2nd or 3rd generation Quan Zhen disciple.
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    Ha ha ha ha ha
    What interesting reading
    After a long day.

    Jin Yong's Ode to Gallantry [侠客行].
    Quote Originally Posted by atlantean0208
    what about SPT, I need my SPT fix ASAP, pretty pleaseeeee...
    Soon ... SOON!

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    Quote Originally Posted by shen diao xia View Post
    Wow I am impressed
    You got it quite right first time
    Change I'm to I am
    But if I change that
    It becomes six syllables
    Hence breaking the rules

    Hey OGaKirA
    Can we contract words, such as
    From I am to I'm?

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    I haven't written Haiku ever since junior high, I must admit this is fun.


    She slumbers in peace
    How I yearn to sleep like that
    to be free of stress
    "You can't make the world come out right just because you want it that way."

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    Your tender whisper
    Is the sweetest lullaby
    I will never know

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jilly View Post
    Hey OGaKirA
    Can we contract words, such as

    From I am to I'm?
    My darlin Jilly
    Usage of contracted words
    Are fine in my mind

    Wow some of you guys are naturals!
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