The Missing Chapters of TYMYD, the Real Identity of Gongzi Yu

[Vic_Viper]

Whether or not this is real, the writing style and standard seems to be very Gulong, this is absolutely unlike other imitations of Gulong.

The so called "Missing Chapters of TYMYD" reveals the real Gongzi Yu...

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Ye Kai!

A must read for Gulong Fans. Sorry if it has been posted.

Original link http://tieba.baidu.com/f?ct=33567539...%FA#4452962159

据说这是古龙的原稿，出版时被删去了。
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傅红雪道：“你若敢站起来与我一战，若能胜我，我就将这一生卖给你，也无怨言。”　

　　他冷笑，接着道：“可是你不敢，”
他盯着公子羽。他的手里有刀，眼睛有刀，话里也有刀。
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公子羽又笑了，笑得两眼眯成了一条缝。“你当我真会被你激怒？”

傅红雪道：“我不必激怒你，因为我已必胜。”

公子羽咪着眼，慢慢的道：“你已败过一次，何必再来求败？”

傅红雪也慢慢的道：“我知道白家的魔刀，已经胜过了李家的飞刀。”

公子羽突然睁开双眼，道：“你知道的比我想象中更多。”

“你我今日之战，已不可免！”

公子羽随随便便的站在傅红雪面前。仿佛一个不会武功的常人。

但明眼人看来，他的姿势已经把傅红雪所有可能的攻击都已封住。

看起来他根本不把傅红雪当作敌人，却好像是一个多年的老友。

“你出招吧！”

他的眼里放出奇异的光芒，看来他已怀有绝对的自信，相信傅红雪绝不可能战胜他。

是什么给了他这么大的信心？

傅红雪慢慢的拔刀，自从他开始学习武功，从来没有这么慢过。

白家魔刀素来以出刀至快出名，傅红雪怎么会如此慢？

难道公子羽眼神里的异光，已经击垮了他的斗志？

然而公子羽的脸色却慢慢的变了。

他的姿势还是那样随便，但他的肌肉已开始收缩。

如同一头准备扑食的豹子，骠悍而敏捷。

傅红雪仍然慢慢的拔刀。

杀气从露出的刀上溢出，整个房间都为之凝固。

“叮”的一声轻响，魔刀已经出鞘！

瞬间，公子羽的手中有一道亮光闪起！

这道光就像天上的闪电，夜幕里的流星。

亮光一闪即逝，接着又是“叮”的一声！

傅红雪的手中，似乎也有淡淡的光芒闪出。

公子羽出道以来，从未败过一次。

即使是傅红雪，也一样败在他手下过。

所以他有足够的自信，这次定可击落傅红雪从不离手的魔刀。

果然有一把刀落在地上。

一把三寸七分长的飞刀！

是小李飞刀！

傅红雪依然好端端的站在那里。

他的刀已入鞘！

公子羽的身体却已变得僵硬。

一张薄薄的人皮面具，从他的脸上落了下来。

公子羽原来也是易过容的。

面具飘落，露出了公子羽的脸。

傅红雪很熟悉这张脸，很久以前就已经熟悉，那时这张脸上还经常带着阳光般的笑容。

但现在这张脸只剩下惊愕和失望。

傅红雪道：“叶开，你本不该让如意大师来的。”

“如意大师一伸手，我便知道她是丁灵琳。”

卓夫人居然还能说话：“你从那时才怀疑他是叶开？”
　
傅红雪道：“从昨夜。”

“叶开虽然易了容，但有些东西是无法掩饰的。”

傅红雪道:“一个人可以把面容变得连他的亲人也认不出来，但双眼的距离是不会改变的。”

他又转身对卓夫人：“你是上官小仙？”

卓夫人道：“你真是个聪明人。”

傅红雪道：“其实我早该想到的”

“若没有上官金虹的财富，公子羽怎么会那么快称雄江湖。”

卓夫人道：“还有魔教的财富。”

傅红雪道：“他是魔教公主的儿子，自然能找的到魔教的财富。”

卓夫人道：“那也有我的一份力量。”

傅红雪道：“魔教四大天王自相残杀，最后败在叶开手上的事，我也有耳闻。”

卓夫人道：“其实叶开就是四大天王的碟儿布”

傅红雪道：“这我早就知道了。”

“十几年前，我在长安城外遇到一个人，名叫韩贞”

“他当时已经奄奄一息，因为他中了叶开的飞刀”

“他告诉我，叶开是魔教的天王。”

“然后他就死了。”

“我早就知道叶开喜欢易容改扮，他以魔教天王的身份出现，也不是什么了不得的事。”

他又道：“我知道你是当年的布达拉天王，但是人们都说你战败后已经遁迹江湖。”

卓夫人道：“决斗是给外面的人看得。”

“丁灵琳既没武功，也没智慧，怎么配得上叶开。”

“我们互相发现对方的魔教身份后，便决定联手称雄江湖”

“但是叶开这个名字已是正义的化身，当然不可能做一些不光明正大的事。而上官小仙的名字又太刺眼，只好换一 个身份了。”

“结果他成了公子羽，我成了卓夫人”

“韩贞当年是我的手下，他图谋背叛，和杨天联手对付我”。

“杨天被我打败，我也消耗了许多功力，韩贞随后出现向我挑战，我已不是他的对手。”

“这时候叶开用飞刀救了我，韩贞的武功也真了得，中了飞刀居然还能逃走。”

“韩贞狡猾无比，他让另外一个人改扮成他的样子，在金钱帮里看管丁灵琳。”

“他自己却改扮成墨九星的样子去挑战我，这样即使输了，也可以把罪名栽到墨九星头上”。

“当时我真得被他瞒过，后来我的人在长安城外发现了他的尸体。”

傅红雪道：“我记得已经掩埋了他。”

卓夫人道：“你埋他的时候，碰巧我的一个手下在附近。”

“此后我们决定，把长安城的事结尾以后，就重新开始新的生活。”

“我们安排了一场假决斗，然后天下人都知道上官小仙战败归隐。”

“丁灵琳也被我们骗过。”

“不久叶开也绝迹江湖，人们都说他和丁灵琳一起归隐了。”

“然后公子羽就出现了。”

“公子羽就是羽公子，暗示他就是白天羽的儿子。”

“他自然不能再当李寻欢的弟子，所以就改称沈浪传人。”

“叶开化身为公子羽，丁灵琳只好去当如意大师。”

“萧四无的飞刀是叶开教的，当然他既不知道公子羽是叶开，也不知道叶开藏私，所以他只能做到形似 。”

　傅红雪道：“难怪我对叶开的感觉总是很奇怪。”

　公子羽忽然道：“奇怪什么？”

傅红雪道：“奇怪为什么你帮我复仇，最后却又阻止我杀马空群。”

公子羽道：“因为我想复仇，又想有个好名声。”

傅红雪道：“那时候我还太年轻，不够冷静。”

公子羽道：“那时你如果象今天这样冷静，一定能看出其中的破绽。”
“因为我总在适当的时候出现救你，在你不知就里的时候指点你。”

“当飞剑客拿我师父的话来指点你时，他是希望你就此罢手的。”

“但我却拿话逼住你，使你不能停止。”

傅红雪道：“你欠下的债，必须用你自己的血来还，这事是绝不容别人替你做的。”

公子羽道：“你的记性很好。”

傅红雪道：“你这句话，是希望我杀了他。”

公子羽道：“如果不是飞剑客在，你一定已经杀了他。”

傅红雪道：“这句话和你后来对马空群的所做所为完全矛盾，易大经要血债血还，马空群却可以活下去，这真是很 荒谬。”

“易大经除了梅花庵那件事，可以说没有什么恶行，而马空群的罪恶却很多，即使没有梅花庵的事，他也足够死十 次。”

公子羽道：“所以我才放了他。因为他的仇人太多，很快就会被别人杀死。”

“我既有了宽恕仇人的名声，又能报复仇人，岂不是很美妙的事。”

“我知道你看不出来，因为你知道自己的身世后，一定会有很长时间失去理智，想不通任何事。”

“等你想通了，这一切都已既成事实。”

傅红雪道：“你真的是我见过最聪明的人，也是最恶毒的人。”

公子羽大笑。

傅红雪等到他笑完了，才盯着他的眼，慢慢的说：“可是你已败在我刀下。”

公子羽的脸色变了。

虽然他曾经将傅红雪玩弄于股掌之上，可他还是败了。

他本来自信飞刀无敌于天下，事实也从未败过。

但今日一战，他的信心和勇气都消失了。

傅红雪道：“当年上官金虹可以令李寻欢的飞刀无法出手，但他的龙凤双环，无论如何也不是以快成 名的武器。”

“因此我就猜想，要击败小李飞刀，必须从慢和稳着手。”

卓夫人道：“你说的不错，家父当年的龙凤双环，的确是以稳胜。”

只有慢，才能稳。

因此以快出名的飞剑客和荆无命，始终无法战胜小李飞刀。

上官金虹因为想赌，败在李寻欢手下。

而傅红雪并不是好赌的人。

所以他胜了。

公子羽的脸色越来越白，他突然跃起道：“你再接我一刀！”

刀光闪出，依旧是那么灿烂，如同天上的闪电，又如划过的流星。

傅红雪这次没有出刀，他只是出手。

三寸七分长的小李飞刀，不知怎么已经到了他的手中。

公子羽已站不住，跌坐在床上。

傅红雪道：“你的刀已无威力可言，因为现在你的心也死了。”


“我会保守叶开的秘密，因为我可怜你。”


“还是那句话，你敢站起来和我一战，我仍给你机会。”

“我给了燕南飞机会，也给你机会。”

“你不敢的话，公子羽从此消失。”

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他盯着公子羽。他的手里有刀，眼睛有刀，话里也有刀。

公子羽果然没有站起来。是因为他真的站不起来?还是因为卓夫人的手?她的手已按任了他的肩。

博红雷已转过身，馒馒地走出去。

公子羽看着他走出去。

他走路的姿态，还是那么奇特那么笨拙，可是别人看着他的时候，眼中却只有崇敬。

无论谁看着他时都样。

他的手—直握紧着刀柄，却没有拔出来。

—我不杀你，只因为你已是个死人。

[kyss of the sword]

can some one translate this , please.

[CC]

can some one translate this , please.

I don't think this is official Gulong. Reads more like fan fic. Although the writing style is exactly like Gu Long's, the content seems fishy. Given how GL hypes the Xiao Li Fei Dao mystique, I seriously doubt he would tarnish Ye Kai's flying dagger like that. I don't think GL would write this line : ：“我知道白家的魔刀，已经胜过了李家的飞刀。”

Short summary of the fighting:

Gongzi Yu is revealed to be Ye Kai.

FHX says if Ye Kai will fight, he (FHX) will submit completely to YK if YK wins.

YK stands up, a dagger appears in his hand in a dazzling radiance. But FHX is drawing his sabre very very slowly.

The dagger ends up on the floor.

Why?

Why is it that the fastest swords like Ah Fei and JWM cannot defeat Li?

Because to defeat the flying dagger, one has to be slow and steady.

Shangguan's Dragon Phoenix rings were not fast, they were steady and could suppress Li from launching his dagger. But Shangguan wanted to gamble.

FHX was not a gambler.

YK tried again.

Dagger ended up in FHX's hands

FHX walks off, doesnt kill YK cause YK is already dead.




Doesn't sound like GL right?

[Guo Fu ):]

ok, I have to say,


TL;DR.

[Vic_Viper]

ok, I have to say,


TL;DR.

What does it means?


It has been quite a long time since I'm posting in English, so please pardon for my Wanderful English.

First of all, even if this is Fan-made, it would be so great that it's worth reading, and even translating since the standard is far beyond any Imitation that I have seen by Alot. The plot twist is 100% logical to me, logical than the original, and the outcome is a typical Gulong ending; what appears to be good, it's bad actually.

I'm a Student in SIM now studying Chinese Language and Literature, from what I have learnt and given my low standard in analysing now, plus I have read over 65 of Gulong works, I would have say this whole chunk of Chapters are so Gulong. I really can't find any line that looks more Fan-made than Gulong.

Best parts:
1.Gongzi Yu(羽）= Yu(羽）Gongzi = Bai Tian Yu(羽)'s Descendant [This is the one and only GL's villain whos name is left unexplained or meaningless, please correct me if I'm wrong]
2. Shen Lang left LXH some manuals and LXH was the teacher of Ye Kai, so in Chinese it's not wrong that Ye Kai was Shen Lang's 传人(can't frind the right Eng word for it) which was mentioned in the novel.


Maybe this was submited by Gulong then either Gulong or the publisher made a final decision not to post these Chapters because Ye Kai was such a successful character. And even maybe, it's purely Fan-made.

Anyway I just hope more ppl who are interested in GL's work to read this, because, again, these Chapters have a very high level of "GL Style" and makes sense in every single line.

o btw years ago when I read the original part, I Strongly felt like it isn't right, like it's missing something, and now it might be missing those above, I don't know.

[Extremer88]

GL has a disciple isn't it? Maybe its from him?

[PJ]

I agree with CC. But the fanfic is very well written.

[bliss]

Talk about Scooby Doo endings. In my opinion, this is definitely not Gu Long ... for MANY reasons. The twist just doesn't fit at all. It kind of ignores the whole plot of Tianya Mingyue Dao itself. There's so much forced name dropping to connect the novels just to make it sound legit. The author drags in characters and events from all over, not to mention that he makes references to characters, events and circumstances in Bian Cheng Lang Zi which wasn't even written yet at that point.

[Han Solo]

Agree with CC.

The excerpt does not read like GL at all even in his most drunken state.

ok, I have to say,


TL;DR.

How is this even relevant to the post?

Han Solo

[kyss of the sword]

but later on in the seven weapon series, we know that ye kai had desendents and they were quite famous and shen lang and ah fei had a direct desendent who grew up in the ye family. it's doubthful ye kai died becuase fu hongxue had retired by the time flying eagles in the sky occured and ye kai was still around.

[bliss]

but later on in the seven weapon series, we know that ye kai had desendents and they were quite famous and shen lang and ah fei had a direct desendent who grew up in the ye family. it's doubthful ye kai died becuase fu hongxue had retired by the time flying eagles in the sky occured and ye kai was still around.

Ye Kai doesn't die in this fanfic. Fu Hongxue said that Gongzi Yu was dead "metaphorically" because he had lost his joy for life. Also, Eagles in September occurs chronologically before Horizon Bright Moon Sabre, not after.

[TigerWong]

I agree that this is fan fiction, and not Gu Long, for all the reasons CC and Bliss have mentioned. The passage actually doesn't make sense to me, and goes against so many established themes.

And Shen Lang never left LXH any manuals..