Hi everyone. I'm new here, but I've been a lurker for quite a few years. I wanted to share a story I've been writing lately. In English it's "The Disappearing Needles" and in Chinese it's 消失的针(xiāo shī de zhēn).
The main characters are Leng Xiaohan (冷潇晗) and Wen Xuan (雯轩).
I just wanted to make a disclaimer before beginning. I don't claim to be a great writer, and I realize that this is probably not the most innovative story. In fact, it is blatantly inspired by Gu Long. The reason I did this is because his style is quite opposite from my usual writing style, and I thought it would be interesting to do something a little bit different. I wrote this story for fun, and figured some others might enjoy it. The story is not that long, but I will post it a bit at a time (actually I still have a few more pages to write hehe).
Also, although I am studying the language and really enjoy learning about the culture and history of China, I am no expert. So if I make some mistakes in that regard, I apologize in advance.
Well, enough blathering, here is the story: