very similar to rens fan fiction story. Arctic Wolf
Its a little better writen then Arctice Wolf, but i think arctics wolfs plot and speed are a little better.
I would have to say rens plot and charecter selection are genuis. just his writin work dosent quite flow like jin young or a gu long. But the plot and veriety of charecters would be of standerd capable fo chalanging the greats.