Comments on Epilogue:
1. I dont think you need "Love is in the air," which seems too cliched and kinda redundant. The previous statements already said enough.
----quote: Yu Peiyu was not an eloquent man when it came to expressing his feelings, he now gazed into her eyes and gave her a deep kiss on her lips. That was his way to show his feelings for her, actions over words.
Love is in the air.
2. Hmm. I imagined Parrot is like "Old Urchin"/ChowBokTong of LOCH/ROCH. Oh well.
----quote: Reverend Chuchen said:"Many years ago Shaolin and Wudang faced a rather difficult situation and it was this old sir who aided us in our times of need. So when we heard that he requested us not to interfere here, abbot Tianyun and I obliged."
3. I do not detect any characters/events that conflicts, so I'm in awe by your epilogue. congrats! Really dig the tiny details/wrap-up of all characters that have a fair amount of screen/book time. ie. Yu Xuan of Hainan School. I'm also glad u included Lin Daiyu.
4. Since the only book I finished so far is Moinllieon's Book1 of Lu Xiao Feng and that has a surprise that leads to Book2, I cannot comment on the Gu Long-ness of this epilogue.