Icy, I've taken out Mr. Zhou. Wancheng and Runan is for your taking now.
Xiwu is not attacking Ruinan.
So where are they heading next? Would they try to bypass Chibi and attack Yuzhang? Or would they head straight for Jianye? Or...?
OK I changed it to "no news", pending posting.
finally caught up with the story. will be updating tomorrow. i have a long weekend ahead of me with work, so hopefully i will do a sufficient job tomorrow with my posts. =) awesome story so far, guys. loving it even though i am dim-witted when it comes to war.
The final scene at Jianye turned out well and sappier than I thought. This song was playing when I wrote it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CiDSX...eature=related
I thought it matches the mood quite well.
Uhm, okay... so what about Cutie Pie who's still supposed to deliver the battle horses?
I volunteer to write their sex scene.
i've editted post 108 and corrected my error. there's no xiwu general present at the pan camp in donghai. here's the correction to that passage:
"Huo Yuan grabbed his spear and gave it a tight squeeze. After hearing how ruthlessly Xiwu moved in on Xiangyangi, Huo Yuan more than anything wished to overthrow the kingdom of Xiwu. He already suspected that Xiwu had ulterior motives in helping Pan fight against Donghai. Once they get Donghai, what’s to stop them from overtaking Xiang? Time…he needed time to come up with a plan to help Xiang despite Xiang wanting his help. He had long learned to be patient. Perhaps he could recruit Wu Haocun to help him? He turned to look at Haocun and gave him a slight nod."
really? i must have missed that part...can you please redirect me? or maybe haocun was unaware of her death?
anyhow, a second update for the evening so i can finally begin to tie the various subplots. =)
also, the women may love him, but haocun could've been a jerk when he was younger. some women like the jerks.
So it's actually an accepted fact that she's dead.“That’s sad…” The young man sniffed. “What about Lan Mengying and Xingye? What happened to them after Fabulous Four got disbanded? I heard Lan Mengying passed away many years ago…”
“Well… what happened to Lan Mengying was exactly what you knew. Some freak fire accident at Lan Manor… It was such a pity… she was a good-looking young woman who was of excellent character. Had she not died so young, surely her achievements would have rivalled her brother’s!” The old man shook his head.
But it's okay if Old Sexy doesn't know. I mean, I think you are right when you said he's a jerk in his young days, and maybe he still is a jerk to a certain extend. He sounds really self-centred; look how he treated Chen Biyu, who's apparently the person he loved the most. And then he had the heart to kill his best friend. Also notice his lack of feelings when the old man mentioned Gu Yunfeng... it's as though the guy was just a passing thought. :X
I dare not think how he'd treat the girls who's got a crush on him and whom he wasn't interested in romantically.
So given how self-absorbed/selfish he is, it is likely he didn't know... and didn't exactly care too much either.
Gaaah! This woman is everywhere!Seeing how perplexed and worried Feng looked, Wu Haocun pushed open the door and was surprised to face Chen Biyu.