Romance in the rain

[chungieboy]

well you guys should post more in the anti leo thread in actors forum... <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

[Amy Li]

The next day, the whole group of people went out to play. Yiping and Che were the merriest. SHu Huan and ruping didn't have any mood to play. Er Hao, du fei and fan yu and mong ping watching them, also lost their motivation.

"Where's yiping and shuhuan."

"Ouch, oh my..."
"SHu huan, are you alright down there?" yiping yelled from above the hole.
"Ouch,"
"Can you get up?"
"I think i broke my leg."
"Huh," a lightning jolted through yiping's mind. "WHat am i supposed to do?" she seemed even more frightend than shu huan. "Don't worry, i'm coming."
"No, wait!"
Thump, yiping fell in. "Ouch."
"aRe you allright."
"Yeah,"
"stupid. why did you come down?"
"If i can't help you up, i might as well come down and take care of you."
"You could have got the others."
"Oh. I'm... sorry."
"I didn't mean to..."
"I know."
"It's all my fault. If i didn't ask to pick flowers, we wouldn't have ended up here."
After awhile, she asked. "How are we gonna get up there."
"No idea."
"is your leg ok."
"Ouch."
Yiping gently touched the bone. She smiled. "It's not broken. Just out of place."
"How do you know? I've seen che do it for others before. here, let me do it for you" sHe reached out and then put her hand back. "or, would you rather a real doctor do it?"
"No, i want you to do it."
Yiping closed her eyes and reached out.

One hour later.
"Shu huan? SHun huan. Wake up." She touched his forehead. IT was burnig hot.
"Ohmigod."
Shuhuan was shivering with cold. Yiping took off her jacket and gently placed it on him. She then put his head on her leg to let him sleep.
"What are we gonna do?" she thought to herself. "Fan yu and the others must be looking for us. But they wouldn't htink that we would go that far. THey wouldn't know that we're trapped in this hole even if they pass this place. Wait..." Yiping took off the necklace that che gave to her and flung it with all her might to hte top of hte hole. It didn't go far enough and landed back. SHe tried again. tHis time she got it. "There," she thought. "now if they by any chance pass here, they could see us and get us out of this wreched state." <IMG SRC="smilies/frown.gif" border="0">

5 hours later
Yiping's legs were close to numb already and shu huan still didnt' wake up.
"Water, i'm so thirsty."
"Water? Where can i get that?" SHe touched his forehead, hte fever seemed to get worse.
"Oh well," she took off a pin in her hai and cut her finger. Seeing hte bright red liquid seek out, she held it to his lips.

[jeh]

That's kind of disgusting, drinking blood. Anyway, hey, maybe Yi Ping will be able to remember. I hope she will. Update soon.

[Someone5]

oh man, i can't believe yiping is stuck with shuhuan. but ohwell, i think she will get her memory back anyways, no hope for che. <IMG SRC="smilies/frown.gif" border="0">

[Amy Li]

i don't know. I don't want yiping and shuhuan to be together but i don't want to change the whole plot of hte story either <IMG SRC="smilies/frown.gif" border="0">

[Someone5]

there is something about shuhuan that i don't like, or is it just because i watch the movie already and leo acted terrible in the movie. i dont' know, but stick to your plot, since if yiping marry che, there might be one day she remember the past and che will get hurt. i don't want to see him getting hurt.

[Amy Li]

I don't know. THese days... i'm thinking about making yiping remember but still choose che. AnY comments. Please help me makes my decision <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0">

[jeh]

I think you should write what you think instead of trying to make it like the actual series. It is your fanfic after all.

[Someone5]

yeah, i agree with jeh

[Danielle Lin]

Yep, what Jeh said! Don't copy the series,unless you really want to. I mean you'll enjoy writing your own creation more, I think... <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0">
Update soon, it was really getting to a interesting point!
Umm, hehe, can you give me a rating I don't care if its a 1, just seems so empty...
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[seventhfairy]

My cousin hates this series. She thinks it's the boringest series she ever watched. She hates when shuhuan always says i love you to yi ping

[seventhfairy]

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[aaren1]

Thats very nice. Keep updating!!

[seventhfairy]

thanks for all the updates!!!

[seventhfairy]

nice updates! Keep it up!