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    is there any romance in it ?

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    Quote Originally Posted by vladvlad748 View Post
    is there any romance in it ?
    Yes. It has a strong romance subplot in the early volumes, but it doest impact on the story much at all in later ones.

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    Is the universe he's in related to coiling and stellar?

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    How srrong does luo feng get?

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    Does Qin Shuang ever show up in this story?

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    Is this relateed to the Stellar universe or the Coiling dragon Universe?

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    later his gonna create his own skill sets, hopefully he can start is own group.
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    Book 2 Chapter 11 Nuance/Subtle Level

    In the closed town killing continuously is carrying on.


    Some Prospective Fighters for their first time killing and injures presses the button of communication and pray for rescue and choose to quit. Some Prospective Fighters turned pale and scared after killing monsters. There are some Prospective Fighters after killing monsters are crazily excited , very excited.


    In the next town not far in a large closed building, a large monitor screen monitor everything that occurred in the town in all sides.


    "What an immature method" In this building room, a military officer just and tall and a burly man/strong man sit together and drinks together , the large screen on the side wall is broadcasting the killings on that small town is having , the tall and strong guy said after a sigh. " Look at these young people and the monsters they killed i still remember the past when we were still young at that time!"


    "Um they are mostly over 20 years old, the youngest age when they are the most innocent." That military officer also sighed. "Lao Wang, we brothers aged really fast. Initially we are the stars of southern city now we are in charge of the Thunder and Lightning Dojo. and also the Chiefs ha ha."


    The Tall and Strong Guy laughs: " Iron Monkey, you do not have to mix/mess at least this step? (don't really know how to translate this one)


    "Um?" The military officer looks surprised looking to the screen, and looked startled, " You Lao Wang"


    On this screen, it monitors a small town and the video recording of various places because a lot of cameras are taking videos in the camera, therefore this screen will show a video will change to another stream.


    "Cut?" The military officer grabbed a nearby telephone and immediately told " Lock the accurate moment Prospective Warrior No.21 video to me focus the filming to him."


    "Yes" a deep and full voice came out of the phone


    Tall and Strong Guy Wang Heng has doubts and looks to his brothers: " Iron Monkey in the end did you see?"


    Lao Wang you wait for the next you part to know. The officer smiled.


    On the screenshot presents the image that got photographed a moment ago. and they see in the middle of the screenshot an image of five shadow cats attacking a Prospective Warrior constantly, Shadow Cats are H-Level Monsters but the Prospective Warrior is armed with a Hexagonal Shield and Ghost Swords an looks very young, it was Lou Feng!


    "Huh?" The Strong Guy's eye lit up.


    "Gee.This young fellow is fierce" The military officer exclaimed. "This fellow actually using Prospective Fighter Combat Assessment Exercise as a free training exercise!.... Did you see his speed/agility is extraordinary"



    "Nuance/Subtle Agility Level"


    "Nuance Level/Subtle Level" The Strong Guy eyes shine and looked at the five shadow cats attacks Luo Feng,Luo Feng dodges and do small movements , moreover Luo Feng skillfully avoids/dodged the attack of each shadow cat. The state of the boring courtyard strolls has conquered these two big power houses completely!


    His Agility is extraordinary, even if many of them are strong this you cannot achieve this kind of level easily.


    "His Agility, has reached Nuance/Subtle level. Incredible, incredible!" Strong Man gasped, " He's 18 years old, Agility is different from the Physical Fitness if the talent is good then the Physical Fitness will be stronger/powerful. But Agility is acquired/got from fighting experience and has a solid foundation and train hard to get to that kind of level slowly.


    "How do you know that he is 18 years old?" The Military officers nearly jumped " Do you know him?"


    "His name is Luo Feng and was recruited by the Limit Dojo ahead of time" The Strong Man didn't like what he heard. "Limit Dojo really did everything on transporting?(don't know what it means), This Luo Feng is at peak year is only 18 years old , not only his Physical Fitness is very good but never thought his agility is this amazing/astonishing! Nuance/Subtle Level this young man's agility has reached that level his future is so frightening.


    Notice/Note .....


    In the General Combat Level not many achieved this kind of level of Agility of Nuance/Subtle level. One can imagine that this level of Agility is really frightening.


    Real Combat Experience , Physical Fitness is just one thing , Agility , Blade/Knife Skill and Mental State/Consciousness is a very important aspect.


    "No!" (Put Table Flip Meme here!)


    The Tall and Strong Guy pounds on the table fiercely " I cannot let such talent be snatched to us by Limit Dojo! Luckily I come and drink with Iron Monkey to see this video."


    "What are you planning to do?" The Officer said it with a smile


    *don't really know how to translate this one
    "Do? Digs the human! (see told you can't trans this maybe he is saying dibs?)
    The Tall and Strong Guy stares " Digs his corner! Perhaps now the Limit Dojo had not realized that the Agility of this young man is so amazing. I dig the first human! Isn't it money? Ahem! Really lucky, luckily this wave/generation, this fierce boy was born with him - Compare to Luo Feng to Wan Dong is like comparing a far away galaxy.


    The military officer smiled


    "Iron Monkey, turns head give me a copy of this recording to me" The Tall and Strong Guy said.


    "OK" the military office nods with a smile


    At Dawn, in the middle of a closed monster town , in the middle of ruined residential district, Luo Feng encounters three(3) Tiger Mastiffs , Two(2) Shadow Cats and Two(2) Iron Wool Boars. The lane causes the seven monsters to attack, Luo Feng has also consumed a lot of strength to lure/attract these monsters.


    "Very well"


    "Come again/attack again"


    "That's it"


    Luo Feng is calm and steps one step left , step right and sometimes backwards and forwards like he is just walking from time to time he wriggles his body and sometimes bows... (huh?)


    Such subtle movements make the seven monsters unable to hit Luo Feng's body.


    "Roar ~~" Luo Feng behind the corner of his eye noticed the Tiger Mastiff attack while around the same time the other four monsters attack, according to the current situation his foot turn and make a certain movement.


    "Well, almost" Luo Feng's heart skip a beat.


    Seeing the sharp claws of the Shadow Cat will soon hit Luo Feng, Luo Feng find it strange that his body automatically move five centimeters and avoided the attack.


    "Legend/Fabled Nuance/Subtle Level Agility - to learn it is really difficult " Looked like Luo Feng had avoided all the attacks moments ago, but in fact he is very clear.... Luo Feng , should got hit by the attack and lost , Because he read the action of force through the spirit at the last minute on the six corners of the shield on his left arm had a surge of force!

    ---> basically his body automatically move (because he thinks he is a spirit reader) and he automatically countered the attack by using his shield an the shield caught the attack while his body moves back 5 cm


    Because of this force out of thin air, Luo Feng moved 5cm!


    In combat, Agility is very important , so almost all night Luo Feng trained his agility. According to common sense..... Agility training first must have a solid foundation , generally it takes ten(10) years of painstaking effort/hard work. Then fight monsters for several years , formed various types to dodge in the consciousness will gradually skilled(?) and achieved a conditioned reflex that picks up conveniently

    ----> maybe it says that training agility will automatically make you dodge attacks like nothing and do this automatically without thinking like it just reflexes



    With solid foundation you can get that skill easily!


    This is regarded as the three initial levels of agility. Above this three levels ..... is the Nuance/Subtle Level?


    Nuance/Subtle Level the user have extremely subtle control of strength and body, makes the skillful dodging with minimum movements. Various dodging seems like a computer calculations like! Nuance Level Agility is difficult because of the small movements when you got careless you will easily get hit by monsters you either be wounded or dead.


    Nuance Level Agility Training, monsters weaker than the trainee even with a lot of them don't have much effect.


    Luo Feng will suffering from seven monster attacks, actually his strength and speed is already at 100% but the seven monster attack and Luo Feng dodging it and monsters unable to hit him is quite difficult.


    "Is my level already in a Nuance Level now?"


    "I also use the subtlest movement to dodge, of course sometimes there will be errors" Luo Feng was a bit tired mentally the hand where the Ghost Blade is moves rapidly , immediately the leader monster sends a roar of pain , blood spout one after another , the five monster has been killed violently with the seven monsters that Luo Feng killed a while at the scene, another two see it as a potential time to escape.
    ---> Luo Feng killed the 5 monsters and the 2 monsters saw it and escape


    "No matter how....."


    "After that night training my Agility , at least compared wit the past i'm at least 2 times stronger than the past. "
    "Luo Feng shows a hint of smile , no amount of practice in the past , how can we catch up and close to fight these monsters? In general killing monsters how could it compare with the limit movement training?

    Only physically challenging the limits will know where their dodge limit is.

    That night of training Luo Feng is at peak

    Luo Feng knows that one H-Level Tiger Mastiff , Shadow Cat , Iron Hair Boar are strong , But seven of these monsters attacking can still kill a human, after all , the punch can be issued over 3000 KG of boxing ability, but the monster is more than 2000 kg of impact force can still knock Lou Feng vomiting blood.

    ---> i think Luo Feng punched a monster but the monster suppressed the 2000kg of his 3000kg punch and still hit Luo Feng and Luo Feng vomits blood.



    Even the genius " Wan Dong"don't do this kind of training!


    Otherwise , believed it was seven monster to cut into pieces
    --> other fighters will just cut them up not punching them


    But Luo Feng dare to try it!


    Because he has the spirit reading , he can avoid mistakes and will immediately use his spirit force on the shield or ghost blade and give Luo Feng an added strength. and dodge again


    Unfortunately his spirit force can be used on inanimate object, once approached the human body of direct drilling(?) Luo Feng shook his head, spirit reading strength is unable to control the human body and animal , and can only control metal, wood and so on. but the spirit reading ability he has gave a big surprise to Luo Feng.


    At least he can do ..... a Nuance/Subtle level of escape.


    of course it is a variation of the Nuance/Subtle Level because once he make a mistake it's up to the spirit to move and he can escape and it's better than the normal Nuance/Subtle Level and what's more it's strange!


    "Hum hum ~~~~~~hum"


    The whole town resounds with an intermittent grating sound suddenly and simultaneously the vigorous sound resounds through the entire town by the load speaker " Times up all Prospective Fighters leave the town immediately"


    "Does the Warrior Combat Assessment ended?" Luo Feng smiles.


    Later i will continue to try and practice this Nuance/Subtle Level Agility Training until one day, i will not need to read the spirit of strength and reach Nuance/subtle agility level. Luo Feng cut the left ear of the five monsters and put it on the backpack and quickly moves toward the door to exit the monster town



    -----Chapter End-------

    Nuance ---> A subtle or slight degree of difference, as in meaning, feeling, or tone; a gradation.

    so it means LUo Feng use a little movement to dodge that means less energy used...

    sorry for the translation not being perfect but at least it's understandable
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    Thanks kid

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    I've also been reading the google translate version, there are some things that I couldn't understand: Shoubing level, royal class. any idea what they mean ?

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    Great update. Made my night. Thanks Kidopitz27.

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    Book 2 Chapter 12 Lightning and Thunder Dojo Invitation

    *(?) --> it means i don't know what it means

    Monsters town entrance, Prospective Fighters walked out of the town. Almost every prospective Fighter who has bloodstains, perhaps monster blood, or their own blood. There are some Prospective Fighters who are helped their friends to come out.


    "Beep, beep -"


    Shrill voice sounded, a heavy truck from the town came out, this heavy truck are filled with monster corpses.


    "Hey, these are the bodies of those Prospective Fighters." There was heavy truck parked beside another truck a lot of dead bodies lying, and even some parts of the body are incomplete/missing, apparently eaten by monsters in half. The truck unloads bodies of these Prospective Fighters directly pouring down on the side of the ground.


    "Ah!"


    "Ah Gan!" (I think someone saw his friend in a pile of dead bodies)


    "Little sound!" – (maybe a crying sound?)


    Suddenly many Prospective Fighters came out, some even went directly on the corpses and starts crying.


    "Crying?" A Military officer Leng Li voice sounded, causing some Prospective Fighters to look angry at him, but the Military Officer’s icy-gaze he looks at the surroundings, "If you fight and kill a monster of course there will be dead fighters! You choose to embark on this road as a Prospective Fighters, then you must be ready to face death! Humanity give us privileges, why? Not for us to enjoy life, but because you have to kill a lot of monsters, it’s just a means to pay us, that’s why they gave us privileges. "


    "Your position, your power ...... Everything depends on you!"


    "These test are made to give you the weakest monsters, and it’s not yet a group activity, if you cannot pass this test and enters the wilderness, can you survive?" The officer's remarks, all prospective Fighters are quiet, They all know that for a lot of monsters.


    Monsters, who gave fighters such headaches are the ‘Group Type Monsters’, such as canine monster the 'Tiger Mastiff', that moves by groups, even mid-level human warrior class are afraid to provoke them . ------ > Luo Feng did the opposite last chapter


    "Two monsters left ear, his left arm wounded, Next!."


    "Lu Fang? Ah, three monsters left ear, good, the next one."


    In the small town next to the entrance, each Prospective Fighters that came goes to the military officers to show monsters left ears, in order to prove that they hunted the number of monsters.


    "Look, Feng Luo came out."


    "is it the same Luo Feng that the Limit Dojo recruit early?."


    "I want to know how many monsters he hunted”


    "Physical fitness cannot represent hunting monsters you also need to be fierce." (?)


    A lot of time had passed and Prospective Fighters eyes are now focused on the Prospective Fighter that came out of entrance and that is Luo Feng. Luo Feng, Wan Dong Ma knows that there are three (3) Prospective Fighters that were recruited ahead of time. 20 out of 100 passed and in this group all of them knows that Luo Feng is one of the three.


    "Ah?" one just came out, he was staring at a large number of Prospective Fighters, Luo Feng was surprised.


    "Luo Feng? Would you show us how many left ears you got." Sitting in the front are three military officers, two officers are using a laptop one of the officer looked at Luo Feng.


    "Yes."


    Luo Feng nodded, takes off his backpack. A large number of prospective Fighters eyes for a time are completely focused on the Luo Feng backpack, they are curious...... how many monsters Luo Feng killed.


    "Whish!" Luo Feng dumped the contents of his backpack directly to the bin and a large monster ear falls next to a metal pot these metal pots are nearly half full.


    "That many?"


    "How many monsters does this guy killed?" A Prospective Fighter watching in the distance was surprised.


    The military officer started to count the left monster ears one by one after counting the military looked at Luo Feng and smiles: "Luo Feng, a total of 36 monsters left ear until now, you are this group that got the most kills and still not injured. "


    "Next." Officer turned around to see the people below, Luo Feng laughed and walked.


    "I passed the Prospective Fighter Exam I’m now a real Fighter/Warrior." Luo Feng’s mind is now relaxed.


    Luo Feng is standing in the crowd, watching one person to show the monster left ear, and has no injuries, but most of them sustained minor injuries if they didn’t train maybe they will have major injuries.


    "Yang Wu, um, good, three monsters left ear, minor left arm injuries. Next one."


    Yang Wu also returned safely.


    "Yang Elder Brother." Luo Feng shouted from the crowd.


    "Madman/Lunatic." Yang Wu laughed while running towards Luo Feng, "There you are how many monsters did you kill?"



    "Thirty-six." Luo Feng and Yang Wu went to the side of the corner.


    "Thirty-six? You madman/lunatic you’re a monster. Those monsters, are hard to kill." Yang Wu stare, "especially that of Tiger mastiff, its speed faster than me, let alone the power! Same level of Monsters, power generally stronger than human Warrior. I just went all out just to kill three. "


    Luo Feng smiles, H-class monster cannot be underestimated. Even middle-class warrior, facing seven-eight H level monsters is very dangerous.


    Luo Feng trained his agility and also used his spirit reading to dare that kind of feat.


    "Wan Dong!"


    "It’s Wan Dong the Prospective Fighter Lightning and Thunder Dojo recruited early. We don’t know how many monster he killed compared with Luo Feng who is the strongest and who is weaker."


    "Comparing Wan Dong and Luo Feng"


    Front crowd are discussing, Luo Feng hides following Luo Feng, Yang Wu is surprised and said: "That Wan Dong just came out, it is said Wan Dong Physical fitness is no way less than you, I didn’t know how many monster he killed.


    At this time standing in front of the Military officers, Wan Dong starts to unpack his backpack. And in the back some of the Prospective Fighters starts to listen in.


    "That’s a lot of monster ears."


    "It seems a lot."


    Suddenly came in front of a noisy sound, followed by the assessment officer's voice coming out -. "Wan Dong, a total of 51 monsters left ear you are now this group that got the most kills you surpassed Luo Feng"


    "51?"


    "Even more that Luo Feng got?"


    "Wan Dong killed 51 monsters? That’s really frightening."


    A Prospective Fighter exclaimed.


    "Wan Dong got more monster kills than you." Yang Wu exclaimed.


    "Killing a lot is it worth it?" Luo Feng didn't care at all and just smile, the main focus yesterday night is to train his agility, If I really want to kill the H- Level Monsters I can just use my strength and kill a lot using a sneak attack and can even kill more than hundred.


    "Luo Feng”


    Luo Feng turned around and looked and saw a bearded officer smiled and said: "Come with me, my friend wanted to see you, in front of the lounge."


    "Oh?" Luo Feng has some doubts......


    See me?


    Luo Feng did not hesitate, directly following this bearded officer walked over, before entering the lounge, Luo Feng took off his blood stained clothes, changed to a clean and fresh clothes before entering the lounge.


    In the Lounge, a Strong Man sat there, eyes closed, suddenly he opened his eyes, eyes look as if lightning hit Luo Feng.


    "Is he?" Luo Feng was surprised.


    The man he knew, was the man in charge of the conversation before and Zhuge, is one of the four giant lightning martial arts in the southern base of the city.


    "My name is Wang Heng, Chief of the Lightning and Thunder Dojo." The Strong Man smiled, "Luo Feng, sit."


    Do one and this manager sit facing each other? (?)


    Luo Feng is surprised….


    He is now very clear how high the status of these executives, it can be said that a total charge of Hall, on the position of War-God (?) can match the strong level! They have amazing powers, it can be said, at the southern base of the city, in front of the burly Han almost be said to be hand-eye sky.(?)


    "Why are you not sitting are you afraid that I will eat you? The Strong Man laughed……
    Luo Feng smile, sitting in front of the Strong Man said with a smile: "Mr.Wang, I do not know why I’m here"


    "It's simple."


    The Strong Man smiled, "I checked your family situation, you’re from an ordinary family background, his father was an ordinary decoration worker, mother a guide in a supermarket, you don’t have a good living condition but you come very far at 18 years of age that is very rare”


    Luo Feng gives a hint of smile, it’s indeed a lot of effort to come this far.


    "I like you, I think you’re very promising."


    "I formally invite you Luo Feng to join Thunder and Lightning Dojo!" The Strong Man looked at Luo Feng.


    "I had already signed the contract with the Limit Dojo." Luo Feng shakes the head to say with a smile..


    The Strong Man shakes his head and didn’t care: "Since the contract is a contract, you can just break the contract pay the penalty in accordance with the Laws of the Warrior, the maximum penalty is not allowed more than three million I think you are worth far more than the price?!.! We the Thunder and Lightning Dojo will pay the penalty! "


    "Moreover, after you join, I will arrange and give you top grade training contracts from Thunder and Lightning Dojo!" The Strong Man laughed, "in the whole world Prospective Fighters who receive top training contracts are no more than ten! Each is the absolute great talent. This year more than half a year has gotten down, my thunder and lightning dojo also just issued three top grade training contracts, one is only 20-year-old high-level soldier level military in European ally. A talent of South America, he is the spirit reader teacher! Third is my Huaxia country capital 'Jinghua Base city '16-year-old intermediate soldier level military. You are fourth!"


    Luo Feng was surprised.


    Those three people are powerful. 'Wan Dong' although he was recruited in advance didn't qualify to get this top training contracts.


    I’m I really qualified?


    In fact, Luo Feng's Physical Fitness, is not qualified to get this contract. But on this basis, if coupled with a - already comprehend nuanced/subtle level of agility! This is enough to make Luo Feng obtain top training contracts. After all, 18 years of age with a nuanced/subtle level agility, is incredible.


    "As long as you join the Thunder and Lightning dojo, I'll give you a contract. Send you to train in other Lighting and Thunder Dojo worldwide and can even have the opportunity to be trained by the Lightning God himself. The Strong Man said smiling at Luo Feng. I formally invite you to join our Lightning and Thunder Dojo”


    ------ Chapter End-----

    These are just rough translations and still waiting for Mathew's translations

    again sorry for some of the parts where even i cannot understand what it mean
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    Book 2 Chapter 13 Limit Home


    The Conditions Wang Heng proposed is higher than what the Limit Dojo proposed, and he's looking forward on Lou Feng’s answer.


    "Sorry." Luo Feng bow slightly, "Thank you lightning and Thunder Dojo, but I already have joined the limit dojo, and I have not thinking of leaving, I’m really sorry"


    Wang Heng was surprised.


    Rejected?


    "Can you consider one more time?" Strong Man said, frowning a stare.


    "No need." Luo Feng stood up bow slightly, "Mr. Wang, is it alright if I leave now?” Luo Feng is very clear, since he has refused to join, perhaps both sides sit together again is also the person increases awkwardly.


    Wang Heng looked at Luo Feng carefully.


    Even faced with temptation, this young man isn't even moved. Wang Heng reigning his composure lets out a sigh, and smiled: "Well I’m not forcing you but in the future that you decided to join my Lightning and Thunder Dojo is always open for you.”


    "Mr. Wang." Luo Feng smiled and leaves.


    When Luo Feng left, Wang Heng’s face turned pale and shouted: “Call Wan Dong over.”


    "Yes, Chief/Manager."


    Outside Wang Heng’s subordinate immediately went to inform Wan Dong.


    "I didn’t expect that Limit Dojo snatched a great talent" Wang Heng rub his chin, his eyes slightly narrowed, "Since 'Phantom War-God' got severe injuries and goes in seclusion in this southern base in the city compared with my thunder and lightning dojo and limit dojo, have been at a disadvantage. Oh!"


    Wang Heng got worried!


    In the world of martial arts is the Limit Dojo and the Lightning and Thunder Dojo are the two largest Dojo! The founders are also the world’s first and second powerhouses! Naturally , the Limit Dojo and Lightning and Thunder Dojo greet each other with a smile but secretly oppose each other and they really want to kill each other!


    Many base cities are under the influence of Lightning and Thunder Dojo that even pressed a limit dojo head!


    However, the southern base of the city, Limit Dojo influence is off the charts.


    "Manager/Chief" Young Wan Dong came.


    Wan Dong’s stare has a surge of self-confidence! Obviously because ranked first and he beat Luo Feng in killing monsters that’s why he is confident.


    "Ah, Wan Dong." Wang Heng smiled, "You are our lightning and Thunder Dojo’s amongst the best new Warrior! But ...... with your current strength, compared with the Luo Feng, still have some gaps."


    "Manager/Chief" Wan Dong was surprised.

    Between me and Luo Feng , there are gaps?


    "Do you doubt my word?" Wang Heng frown.


    Wan Dong shook his head, he knew that the manager/chief in front of him, the past he is a high- level warrior and while being the manager/chief bring various special powers. His status is not even comparable to a war-god level. So why would he lie?


    "I told you explicitly, your physical fitness was not worse than him. But in actual combat Luo Feng is 3 times more powerful than you" Wang Heng said solemnly, "But now you and Luo Feng is a big gap. However it does not mean that you are weaker than him, you must train hard to surpass him.”


    "I've seen a lot of talent, but a lot of talented sadly fallen in!"


    "Fighter/Warrior who is walking on the edge of life and death! Your talent is good, represent you start earlier you are just now become a fighter/warrior ...... this road, you just started! Don’t get careless, first you must surpass Luo Feng and then surpass another fighter/warrior. “Wang Heng’s encouragement” I hope one day to see the birth of a new War-God!”


    Wan Dong said it warm-heartedly.


    Right, Luo Feng is only the first obstacle he must surpass, and he must surpass more people in the future, until he become a war-god!


    "Ah, you should go and get a good nights rest." Wang Heng smiled.


    "Yes, manager/chief." Wan Dong respectfully leaves.


    Wang Heng shakes his head, carries his teacup, and drink a mouthful, over these years as a manager/chief he does everything possible to train talented fighters/warriors some talented fighters/warriors are attracted with money, rare book or so on.


    If he trained those talented fighters/warriors and become a powerhouse. Wang Heng’s status will be more stronger.

    "This Wan Dong, perhaps in the future can give me a pleasant surprise. “Wang Heng smiles, ", but, I did not ask him to be good, can catch up with Luo Feng to be good. ......The 18-year-old Nuance/Subtle, Physical Fitness is also good. What a great talent/seedling" Wang Heng shakes the head to drink tea, no longer thinking.


    Luo Feng or Wan Dong which one is the best seedling.


    Military base in the southern city of the North, Luo Feng and Yang Wu has put his own clothes and chatting.


    "Crazy, Wan Dong is looking at you and it doesn't look right. He said what? ...... wants to race, who will become the warrior class fighter.” Yang Wu said in bewilderment.


    "Who knows what Wan Dong is thinking as if he can match me” Luo Feng is also puzzled what Wan Dong was saying.


    He did not know, after Wang Heng’s encouragement Wan Dong set his target to Luo Feng as his first opponent!


    "Prospective Fighter assessment, may notify my home soon." Luo Feng smiled and remove the phone from his arms, "Yang Elder brother, you also notice it home soon."


    "Ah." Yang Wu nodded smiling.


    Luo Feng and Yang Wu have called his family on the phone.


    Yangzhou City, the southern district moonlight community, one of the eight city within the city of David. (?)


    "Hong Guo, this Warrior combat assessment, your home will be able to cross the border Luo Feng." Luohong Guo, Gongxin Lan Hua Luo couple pushed his son's wheelchair, and a white-haired old man beside talking.


    "This Prospective Fighter Assessment is really that dangerous?" Gongxin Lan could not help but ask, "Xiao Feng said it’s not dangerous, but I looked at the Internet, saying that it’s really dangerous."


    . "it’s still a little dangerous," white-haired old man nodded, "according to my son, this Prospective Fighter Assessment, in general, there are 3% - 5% mortality rate and disability rate- about 5% - 8% That is usually a Warrior combat assessment, to destroy more than one hundred prospective Warrior. "


    The Luohong country and Gong Xinlan looks at each other, in the heart anxious.
    "You're a Xiao Feng will be fine, rest assured." White-haired old man laughed.


    "Ah, ah." Luohong Guo, Gongxin Lan nodded, although on the surface so that the couple can my heart is still very uneasy.


    Hua Lou sitting in a wheelchair without a word, making a fist and grasping it hard.


    Suddenly -

    A cheerful phone rings, mother Gongxin Lan phone out of your pocket to see, even look to the side and said:. "Xiao Feng in the telephone"


    "Meets quickly."Luohong country Lian Dao. (?) - in another translation it says -("whip ah!")


    Luo Hou is also staring at the phone, next to the white-haired old man laughed watching.


    "Hello." Gongxin Lan connect the call, and puts it on speaker.


    "Mom I passed the Prospective Fighter Assessment you should prepare something delicious tonight.


    Lou Feng’s Father laughed, sitting in a wheelchair has been clenched fist Lou Hua finally loosened his fists, and also smiled.


    “Good , good, Mom will prepare something delicious." Gongxin Lan is very excited.


    August 2, evening, Yangzhou City district.


    "Luo Feng’s back again, congratulations."


    "Congratulations, that Warrior combat assessment on Feng Luo are not little difficult."


    Walking in the residential road, Luo Feng smiled and see some of the weapons were greeted number of human society warriors are compared to the number of ordinary people, is much less. Among the district, are able to live in Warrior families, but they also joined Limit Dojo, we naturally have a good relationship.


    "Mom, Dad." Luo Feng glance to see their own doorstep, his parents and maids, have been standing in the doorway.


    "Eat, eat." Father Luohong Guo laughed immediately.


    That night Luo Feng and family is very happy, after all, from this moment, Luo Feng is already a formal Warrior! Legally.


    After 11:00 o'clock at night.

    Luo Feng home on the second floor of the video room.


    "Everybody says that once became a Warrior, will be able to enter the limits of martial arts internal network of the Warrior!" Luo Feng, is excited, some special internal network, needs a certain status to enter. Warriors/Fighters in Limit Dojo are eligible to enter the Limit Warrior's internal network - Limit home!


    The HR Alliance platform, as long as you are a fighter will be able to login.


    "Limit home." Luo Feng keyboard input URL.


    Suddenly audio-visual room side of the wall, emerges out of a full two hundred inches a large screen, the screen immediately enter the URL 'Limit home'.


    "Drip." Luo Feng has confirmed fingerprint.
    Beautiful music sound as if the gurgling water flowing in the audio-visual room which, at the same time that there is a personal page on a huge screen above is a photo of Luo Feng, the following is some information table -


    Name: Luo Feng

    Gender: Male

    Address: Huaxia southern base city

    Warrior Card Number: 426123205608010002

    Rating: Warrior class (junior/primary)

    Contribution value: 0:00

    Currency Balance: 20000000 China currency

    ----Chapter End-----
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jirachier View Post
    I've also been reading the google translate version, there are some things that I couldn't understand: Shoubing level, royal class. any idea what they mean ?
    They are the classes for the monsters, analogous to human fighters ranking.

    Shou bing = animal soldier/warrior => human warrior
    Shou jiang = animal general => war-lord
    Can't remember what the monster equivalent to war-god is.

    Royal class I think refers to monster on the same level as those humans who have gone beyond the war-god stage.

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    Is the Seven Ray Knife, a knife technique or is it a technique to control the cosmic energy ? I'm very confused at to what it does exactly.

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    Book 2 Chapter 14 - The Root of Lou Feng's Headache/Coma

    In a quiet video room, Luo Feng drink a mouthful of brewed tea , He suddenly focus on the huge screen on the wall: “Twenty Million Chinese Currency Limit Dojo’s start-up funding really came” at the top of the page , with the row of buttons.


    A button is glittering/shining and saying “ You have to messages”


    Luo Feng fingers lightly tap on the wireless keyboard, to open the mail box.


    "Whish!"


    The first message is opened, suddenly appeared a video.


    "Hello, Mr. Luo Feng." Appears on the big screen of a middle-aged man dressed in a black suit, smiled and said, “I was Zhuge’s assistant, and in charge of 20 million start funds that the Warriors/Fighters pledged to believe that you saw. As for purchase Agility Blade/knife skill and guiding technique are rare book. You can directly through internet purchase, so long as price is not over hundred million in direct internal network will reimbursed you and will not buckle you a penny. If the price is more than one billion, you need to pay them Mr. Luo Feng. On behalf of the Warriors/Fighters, Mr. Luo Feng Congratulations on passing the Warriors/Fighters Assessment “


    After that. The video ends


    "Limit Dojo, is also quite good for me." Luo Feng Click to open the second message.


    The Mail is also a video.


    "Dear budding Warrior 'Luo Feng,' Hello, I on behalf of the limit dojo, you are welcome to join our family." One girl looks with sweet smile, "This is the first time you enter the Limit Dojo’s internal network! Limit home by me to introduce you to limit the use of the home. "


    "First, in the limit of home you can purchase various levels of weapon and guiding technique, the agility rare book and attack class rare book such as the knife skill, marksmanship, the swordsmanship rare book, etc., etc., as well as thermal weapons, vehicles, armour, protective gear, communications systems, special bombs, special medical pharmaceutical, genetic medicine ...... even some special material treasures, etc. As long as you have enough money, you can buy them. "


    "Once you pay, the cargo will be delivered within 24 hours."


    "By the limit home, you can even make Warrior class, and even the War-God Warrior class, one on one teaching guide through the network and you Also you need to pay enough money."


    Video of girl smiled, "If you have enough contribution points, then the price of these items will be halved!"


    Luo Feng surprised after hearing it.


    Halved?


    If the price of an item is one hundred million, if their contribution point is high enough, then you only need fifty million buy it? This contribution point’s usefulness is really big. However, my contribution point now is only 0.


    "There are many useful uses contribution point, not just the benefits of buying goods, such as if contributions points reach a certain level/rank, you can transfer to a special division of Limit Dojo and so on." The young girl in the video said it with a smile, the higher the "contribution points on your behalf your position in Limit Dojo will be higher, the greater the power, the better the benefits. "


    "There are two ways to earn contribution points."


    "One is monster hunting, collecting/poaching material/parts on the monster. These important materials are sold to limit Dojo! You can get money and contribution points"


    "Second, to contribute money to the Limit Dojo, the more money you contribute, the more contribution points you can get. Nowadays ratio is ...... if you donate 10,000 Chinese Currency you can get 1 contribution points! The donation system, gets up to contribute by 10 million Chinese Currency, military mostly donates 100 billion. Also through the donation system, you can obtain a contribution limit is 10 million points!"


    Luo Feng after listening gasped.


    His mother? (?) - don't really know this maybe it's a censored word?


    There are donation limits? Up to one hundred billion? So there weren’t a lot limit dojo accept? The one hundred billion China currency ah, it seems nowadays Forbes ranking, Huaxia first billionaires, is now 100 billion assets will speak a little. Forbes ranked the world's richest assets, also 120 billion dollars, equivalent to 420 billion China currency.


    Of course, the Forbes ranking is, as some of the family assets superfamily some clear surface, is more than some of the super-rich. But that is the accumulation of the people of a family ah.


    "Mr. Luo Feng, “I will remind you that killing monsters is still the best method of earning contribution points you can get contribution points and earn money at the same time." The Young Girl in the video said it with a smile, "you now have start-up capital, please do not purchase them yet you can enter information Warrior Forum area, and carefully review some of the basics of Warriors, which use to select books, buy weapons, and it’s very beneficial. "


    "Finally, Mr. Luo Feng we the Limit Dojo wishes that you can reach the highest ranking of warrior.”


    and then the video ends.


    Luo Feng after hearing it was surprised......


    Limit Dojo’s internal network 'Limit Home' is indeed proved very useful, the one thing Luo Feng attracted the most more than the money is that you can even get trained by War-God warriors through the network.


    Although he has twenty million(20) Chinese coins Luo Feng is not on the hurry to buy books and weapons, but wants to familiarize himself with the Limit Dojo Home internal website. There’s a lot of Limit Home’s site features and divided in sections, Quest/Missions, The employer chat, and the donation system.
    However, Luo Feng is only interested on two sections “Warrior Forum” and “Online Shopping Mall.”


    Online shopping mall, which is all-encompassing, all kinds of guiding techniques, rare Agility books, rare Blade/Knife skill book, thermal weapon, cold weapons, gene medicament and so on, every possible strange thing. In a few words Online Shopping Mall is the place to spend money.


    "Warrior Forum."


    Luo Feng click into this forum, and then enter the 'Warrior basics of database' that consists of the Forum, in this sub-forum is no one replies, some just a lot of basic information.


    "Spiritual reading teacher, spiritual reading teacher ......"


    Luo Feng keep scrolling, looking forward to reading about the spiritual teacher's introduction, and finally -


    "Ah? It’s."


    Luo Feng saw a post - 'read a brief description of some of the spirit of division.'

    "Dear brothers, looked at everybody read the teachers know that spirit readers are really few, the brothers I also simply introduced a point. “Sees this first few words, Luo Feng has smiled, the information bank of this so-called Warrior forum, many Warriors write post directly summed together are not regular materials.


    "This spirit reading teacher said, that in the circle of warriors the spirit readers are the most frightening group of people”
    "First of all, even if you practice hard you cannot learn spirit reading each spirit readers have to be awaken to become a spirit reader. If you are not yet awakened perhaps you are just an ordinary warrior. But if you are awakened…… it will be frightening.

    --- > pretty much everyone has an innate ability to become a spirit reader but they are not yet found it, just like Rayleigh saying that everyone can use Haki.


    "How frightening is it?"



    "First of all, Spirit reading is divided into two kinds, one (1) is a spiritual reader that can control inanimate objects! They can control spikes/thorns, throwing blades/knives, for more controlled attack! Spiritual reader that takes control of inanimate objects, are comparable to heavy sniper rifle bullets but more powerful. Sniper bullet line of fire is just a straight line, while the Spirit reader that control weapons, and doesn’t have that kind of law! Apart from control and with the can move in anyway as possible and the lethality is even different “


    "For example, heavy machine guns, heavy sniper rifle, those bullet lethality are limited even Top sniper rifle, will have difficulty in killing a ‘Primary Level Monster’. But for a spirit reader that controls inanimate objects with their enhancement of spiritual force their attack become stronger! And can even kill ‘Lord Level Monsters’ and that is a big gap”


    "Spiritual readers apart from controlling inanimate objects, the second type can control their spirit and use them to attack!”



    "This type is even more mysterious because it can directly attack a monsters soul, if successful the monster doesn’t even get injured it will just fall down dead! (dayum!) “But it’s really difficult to attack the soul, you have to know the law of spiritual attack and very few people can attain this”


    "In addition to ‘Controlling Inanimate Objects' and 'Spiritual Attack', there are legendary spirit readers that even in is not even clear on the website.”


    Luo Feng read every single word carefully.


    "In fact, I am most jealous, the spirit readers speed of training! Spiritual readers, inherently spiritual reading ability is extremely powerful! But their childhood body cannot withstand strong mental powers, so the spirit reader’s power is hidden. When their physical fitness is gets stronger, in certain condition the ability to use spirit reading will eventually shows up!”


    "If the Physical Fitness is stronger the stronger the spirit reading!”


    "Warrior levels - Fighter Level (beginner, intermediate, advanced), Warrior Level (beginner, intermediate, advanced), War-God (beginner, intermediate, advanced), in total nine levels! Physical Fitness and mental state have difference between two levels of reading ability. Compared to a Beginner Fighter, a spirit reader on the same class is comparable to a Warrior level class! Warriors of Intermediate Class, Compare to a Spirit Reader in the same class is comparable to a War-God Class”


    "Spiritual Readers, practice speed are astonishing!"


    "Because they are born, with spiritual reading ability they very strong, but that skill is hidden inside the body! The stronger the body the more powerful the spirit reading. Until the day comes that all of those skills shows up, the practice speed of the spirit readers will starts to slow.”


    Luo Feng after seeing the paragraph, is surprised.


    Originally......


    Spirit readers practice speed is in fact you have to discover and learn those skills by yourself. You need to have a strong physical fitness to withstand the spiritual powers!


    "So the spirit reader’s potential is to discover and learn those skills inside the body and to see how many of those skills are inside their bodies”


    "Latent mental powers, some situations exist in liquid, some liquid, solid situation exists. Still is based on solid form!" (?)


    “Spiritual reading ability groups has highest potential in those group of people. Along with their Physical Fitness in which if have a solid foundation their spirit reading powers will be stronger”


    "Until one day, if all skills are learned. Their speed to enhance the strength of will it end!"
    ------ > Spirit Readers are like in Stellar Transformation’s Divine Beast Hereditary Memories

    Luo Feng can’t hide his excitement in his mind, and constantly reading the entire content, until he reads the end of the post.


    After reading Luo Feng scrolls in database, to find another spiritual concept introduced two divisions.


    "Description are similar, it seems true." Luo Feng nodded, "Well ...... I know the sea of dark golden ball, it should be is a very large mental powers condensed into solid! I'm really lucky, even awakening alive. "
    ---- > he saw this when he was meditating in the prison apparently he form his own dantian


    Luo Feng was surprised


    According to the three posts he saw spirit readers awaken by the constant outburst of spirit energy, making them loose consciousness once they fail to wake up they will stay in coma state or sometimes bleed to death!


    "No wonder I grew up, having a lot of headaches and even faint a few times. It seems that my body is really weak but my spirit powers are really strong so that’s why I always got a headache! Now that my Physical Fitness improved, my headaches are now completely gone.”


    Luo Feng’s headaches, since after that awakening are now completely gone.


    "Dark golden ball, turned out to be condensed into a spiritual force a solid idea."


    "I do not know, how many inherent spiritual skills I got” Luo Feng mind could not help but to feel surprised.

    -----Chapter Ends------
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    ------ > Spirit Readers are like in Stellar Transformation’s Divine Beast Hereditary Memories
    No that's not right. The psychics don't have hereditary memories. Each pyschic has different psychic potential, represented by the state of their "sea of consciousness". Vapour -> Liquid -> Solid. Luo Feng has a solid gold ball within a liquid sea, so his psychic potential is of the highest order. This means that when this psychic potential is unleashed it will propel the training of his physical body. When that potential is used up then there will be no further benefits towards physical training. He will still have the advantages/powers of a psychic however.

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    Wow. kidopitz27. Wonderful updates. Keep them coming. No doubt the translation is rather loose but I am sure the majority of us can comprehend. Even if we cannot, once the regular translations come in, we can get a greater understanding.

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    honestly i was worried about checking the spoiler thread at all, but now i'm glad i did, especially because of the decent quality attempt at translation, not just rough summaries written out of ones own understanding of the original text.

    thanks

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    Thank you for the translations

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