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    Thanks, foxs. I enjoy your translation very much.

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    Quote Originally Posted by foxs View Post
    The two boys were stunned. Beautiful Shifu must be mistaken, Kou Zhong said, I am afraid you and us are not on Madame Dong Mings welcomed guest list.

    original place, the owner will not know that the flies have been seen by others, now that would require not only outstanding skill,
    I am afraid you and us... should be I am afraid you and we... For example, I am afraid we are not on Madame Dong Mings welcomed guest list. Flies should be files.

    Your translation notes provide an added dimension to a deeper and richer enjoyment of this story. The author skillfully weaves historical facts and legends to his books (Step into the Past). Terrific job for recalling and crediting Faerie Queenes work.

    The boys are blatantly sensing that they are being used. Ironically, they greatly benefit by using the Jukun Bang in the end.

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    Default Book 2 - Chapter 10, Part 3

    Sleepy, HPC, Jaya, Zlack, Anh, you are welcome. I am glad you guys like it. Jiu Long, thanks for the correction. Too lazy to scroll back, but I did correct my source doc, so that when we have our unabridged thread in the future, it will have the corrected version. Here is the end of Chapter 10. There is one more week in January, I will try to finish Book 2 by next week or at least the beginning of the following week. We'll see ...


    Seeing their Beautiful Shifu was not present, and thought that she must be with that Li Gongzi, the two boys felt extremely disappointed; its just that they could not resist the temptation of food, so they replied perfunctorily with some polite remarks, and then sat down to gorge themselves, pushing all unpleasant thoughts to the back of their minds.

    Bu Tianzhi was not talkative either; he spoke one minute and was quiet the next. He only asked the two boys past experience. Kou Zhong gave him some made up stories, yet he seemed to be very satisfied.

    At the end of dinner Bu Tianzhi beckoned his subordinate to fetch an embroidered case, opened the lid, and took out an exquisite looking book. The cover was embossed with Dong Ming Pai insignia, which was of the same pattern as the embroidered flag of the Floating Fragrance Flagship.

    The two boys looked at Bu Tianzhi in astonishment.

    Bu Tianzhi did not say anything; he simply opened the first page. They saw the page was densely packed with small characters, written in black, ink stick, and vermillion, ground cinnabar ink. On one side was the type of weapon and its quantity, written in black, on the other side was the amount of money paid, written in vermillion; to their surprise, the unit of currency was gold, the highest amount reached three thousand taels of gold, which was more than enough for an ordinary person to eat for more than ten lifetimes. There was also a note on the date and place of delivery.

    The most shocking was that written at the top was Li Clan the First of Longxi, six characters [long xi li fa di yi], but there was neither signature nor seal.

    Kou Zhong pretended to be confused. The letters recognize me, but I dont recognize them, he said, What does it say here? he pointed to the top.

    Bu Tianzhi turned to the second page, but it was blank.

    Bu Tianzhi turned back to the first page and said, What we are asking two Xiao Xiongdi to steal is precisely this account book. When you open the book, the first page will look exactly like this. You must remember it carefully, dont make any mistake.

    Xu Ziling probed further; pointing to the character yi [one/first, which is basically a dash (-)] of the Li Clan the First, he said, I know this is character yi, but I dont know the rest. What does it say, actually?

    You dont need to worry about anything, Bu Tianzhi said, This yi character simply indicates the first page. By the time you leave the ship, I will show it to you again.

    The two boys were getting even more suspicious. But since they still need to learn Ol Chens great stealing skill, they did not have time to think about it too much; whenever they had spare time, they would practice secretly inside their bedroom.

    Five days later after passing through the mouth of Yangtze River, they dropped anchor and tarried over for four days, but the two boys were not allowed to come ashore.

    After that they continued northwards. That evening during dinner they found out that Yun Yuzhen has returned, but they did not see Bu Tianzhi.

    Yun Yuzhen was in high spirits, it was as if her beauty had spread all over her body and made her glowing. But since Kou Zhong and Xu Ziling already knew that she did not trust them completely [orig. baring her heart into their keeping], they did not see her with the same longing as when they first saw her. Because she was definitely not another Fu Junchuo or even Susu.

    Where are we going, actually? Kou Zhong asked.

    We are now heading north toward Huai River, Yun Yuzhen replied, After that we will head west to Zhongyang. At that time we will plan your mission.

    After sizing them up for half a day, she laughed and said, I am sure that after two years you will be dignified, handsome and imposing men. Right now after you have your beard shaved, your hair tidied up, you are already a lot more impressive than before. How old are you this year?

    I just turned eighteen, Kou Zhong replied, And he is a year younger.

    Yun Yuzhen cheerfully said, I heard from Grandpa Chen that you guys managed to master any trick as soon as you learned it; you did not fail to live up to my expectations at all.

    Xu Ziling asked, If we are successful in stealing the account book, how are we going to leave the ship?

    You dont have to worry about that, Yun Yuzhen replied, I will have my people teach you how to use the light signals to communicate with us. At that time I might personally come to the ship to pick you up. I guarantee it will be foolproof.

    Kou Zhong asked, Dong Ming Pai came to the Central Plains, why would they stay this long?

    Yun Yuzhen replied, Every three years they would come to the Central Plains for a period of time, to accept new orders and collect payments. As for the delivery of goods, they have other vessels transporting the weapons. This, you dont need to mind.

    Xu Ziling asked, Are there any new developments on the outside world?

    Yun Yuzhen unenthusiastically replied, Du Fuwei still occupies Liyang unchallenged, several times has he repelled the Sui army. Four months ago Dou Jiande proclaimed himself as the King of Changle, his prestige is actually above Du Fuweis. Recently several new people emerged; among them is Xu Yuanlang, another one is Lu Mingyue. These two are Wulin characters who hold the balance of power. But in term of sensation, no one surpasses Yingyang Pais Liang Shidou and Liu Wuzhou who together raised an army against the Sui. Both of them were originally Sui generals; therefore, their rebellion has significantly weakened the Sui forces.

    She suddenly sighed before continuing, These two men have close relationship with the Tujue. Liang Shidou recently did obeisance to become a disciple of Tujues Wu Zun Bi Xuan [see Book 1 Chapter 5] school. With Tujue peoples involvement, I dont know how this mess is going to be cleaned up.

    The two boys recalled Liang Shidous son, Liang Shunming and Shen Tianquns beautiful daughter Shen Wushuang; momentarily they were lost in thought.

    Xu Ziling was concerned over Susu, he asked about her master, Zhai Rang.

    Yun Yuzhen was indeed well-informed of the current situation; she calmly replied, Zhai Rang and Li Mi are concentrating their forces in preparation to attack Xingluo Warehouse. If they succeed, Sui Clan will be in danger. Speaking about character and prospect, among the militia the Great Dragon Head [or simply Big Boss] Zhai Rang has the biggest fame and power, but he achieved his fame and power relying on Li Mi. Sooner or later there will be a problem.

    And then she curiously asked, You seem to also know a little abut this aspect?

    Du Fuwei told us all of these, Kou Zhong said.

    The two boys were worried about Susu, they hurriedly finished their dinner, and went to the Ol Chen to continue their training. By the time they returned to their room, it was already the third watch of the night [between 11pm 1am].

    The two boys pretended to lie down on the couch to sleep, but they were talking it over under the bed curtain.

    Kou Zhong said, Our Beautiful Shifu is beautiful on the outside, but the scheming in her heart is not too good. She clearly wants to exploit us to steal something to harm others.

    Xu Ziling said, She must want to blackmail the Li Clan people just like she blackmail us. We simply must not become her accomplice; we might as well slip away and be done with it.

    Kou Zhong sighed and said, Do you think I did not want to leave? Problem is, if Beautiful Shifu really wants to treat us cruelly, she would broadcast our whereabouts to the world, so much so that she might make our portraits, and then we certainly wont be able to move a single step. Therefore, we must come up with a proper escape plan.

    Xu Ziling said, When we really see Madame Dong Ming, we can tell her everything, and then beseech her to take us to Ryukyu. Its just that by doing this, we wont be able to avenge Niang.

    And we wont see Li Dage and Susu Jie either, Kou Zhong added.

    After being silent for half a day, Kou Zhong said, Have you noticed that the situation on the ship these days is a bit peculiar?

    Xu Ziling nodded and replied, Ever since Beautiful Shifu is back, the ship suddenly become very tense, from time to time it changes course as if they are guarding against the enemy.

    I got it! Kou Zhong slapped his thigh, Those people might come for us. For example, Haisha Bang, or perhaps our Ol Die Du Fuwei. You can plant spies in other peoples organization, why cant others use the same trick to deal with you?

    Xu Ziling smiled wryly, What kind of bird trick is that? he said, Captured by the Ol Die or Han Pudi, Id rather stay here. At least we get polite hospitality.

    The know-it-all Kou Zhong said, Mountain people have brilliant scheme, well launch the move escaping by death; we will appear to be killed, but actually well escape without a trace.

    Its easier said than done, Xu Ziling dejectedly said, But how do you do it?

    Kou Zhong said, If we are elsewhere, or our skill is as useless as before, naturally it is impossible. But now, as long as we pretend to fall into their trap and fall into the sea, and spurt some blood, and then walk secretly at the bottom of the sea, everybody will think that we are swallowed up by the sea. Wont we be able to regain our freedom then?

    Where can we get the blood from? Xu Ziling asked.

    Kou Zhong made a gesture as if he was grabbing something. And then he laughed and said, Every day we have a large chunk of chicken meat entering our belly, evidently they keep quite a few chicken in the kitchen; you got that?

    Xu Ziling was dismayed, Problem is we dont know exactly when the enemy will strike; if we take the blood prematurely, it will coagulate into a hard lump. Supposing that when we fall into the sea and then lumps of chicken blood emerge, wont the enemy laugh until their big teeth fall off?

    We can knock the chicken out, Kou Zhong said, We are the experts in that kind of trick in stealing chicken. After stealing it, we keep it under our bed. If the enemy has not come yet, well replace the chicken with two others. This will work.

    While Xu Ziling was still hesitating, Kou Zhong sat up and said, Its time to test our lightness skill and Ol Chens stealing technique.

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    Is it my imagination? There is a nice flow to your translations these days compared to when you first started (which was already good). I think you have thoroughly immersed into this novel. Thks foxs.

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    Default Book 2 - Chapter 11, Part 1

    Jaya, Sky, HPC, Anh, you are welcome. DongBin, it's definitely your imagination. But thanks for the compliment.


    Book 2 Chapter 11 As Poisonous as Vipers and Scorpions

    Kou Zhong pressed his ear against the wooden door, applied his energy to listen, and after making sure that there was no one in the hallway, he pushed the door and stuck out his head to look, and then darted out.

    Xu Ziling followed closely behind. If he said he was not nervous, then he was lying.

    The kitchen was located at the aft; hence they had to go through the hallway, going up the stairs, and across a zhang or so of deck, before they could reach the entrance to the galley.

    There were two wind lanterns hanging on either end of the hallway, one toward the bow, the other toward the stern; in between these two lanterns, the hallway was dimly lit. At this time of the day, other than the crew on duty, most people were sound asleep.

    The two boys channeled their qi to lighten their body; like a ghost they flitted toward the stern. To their shock, as they reached the stairs leading to the deck, they heard voices coming from upstairs. More shocking, it was Yun Yuzhens tender laughter.

    The two boys were so frightened that their soul flew away and scattered; because the distance would not give them enough time to sneak back to their room. In their panic, they did not care which way to take, they pushed the door to the big room where the Ol Chen imparted his skills, and slipped inside.

    Only here they could hide temporarily.

    Familiar with the layout of the room, they hid themselves under a cabinet on the corner of the room leaning against the outboard wall, closest to the sea, while praying in their heart that Yun Yuzhen was not out to look for them.

    Squeak! the workshop door was pushed open. The two boys were happy and scared at the same time.

    Happy because obviously Yun Yuzhen came to this level not to look for them, scared because Yun Yuzhen might find them. So the two boys shut their qi while circulating their energy, to move their inner breathing.

    If it were other people, even if their inner power were deeper and purer than the two boys, it would still be difficult to hide from a martial art master of Yun Yuzhens caliber.

    But since the Secret to Long Life was the Taoist schools highest cultivation technique, its focus was on maintaining good health in the deepest and most mysterious way. During the energy circulation, the body functioned like animal in hibernation, the breathing became as if it was nonexistent, the essence of qi vanished. Plus Yun Yuzhen was not intentionally trying to find them, hence her senses did not detect the two boys presence.

    At first they only heard Yun Yuzhens barely audible footsteps, but the two boys sensed that there were two people entering the room, because Yun Yuzhen was already inside the room when they heard the door being closed.

    Yun Yuzhens alluring laughter was heard, Ce Ge [big brother Ce]! Come in quick! This is Floating Fragrance Flagship model; we lost three martial art experts to obtain this information. How are you going to reward us? Surprisingly, her voice was extraordinarily foxy, charming, tender, and coy.

    And then they heard Yun Yuzhens soft groan, followed by her panting and the rustling of clothes rubbing against each other.

    The two boys felt very embarrassed; they had never expected that Yun Yuzhen, who ordinarily treated them in cold and inviolable manners, was now sounded like a sex-kitten.

    On the other hand, they were greatly terrified, because this mans footsteps did not create any noise at all; apparently his martial art skill was above Yun Yuzhens.

    Then a chipper young voice said, Yuzhen, you look fuller now. Look! Such a firm and round body.

    Gasping for breath, Yun Yuzhen said, How about you come back after our business is done? Are you afraid I might fly away tonight?

    Hearing this, the two boys heart was burning with hatred; this Beautiful Shifus standing in their heart has just taken a thousand zhang drop.

    Obviously the man released Yun Yuzhen, since the latter said, Why havent you lighted the lantern?

    The lantern was lit. Yun Yuzhen said, Shan Mei Xianren Madame Dong Mings [see Book 2 Chapter 5] power has reached perfection; fortunately I knew that in the next seven days she is at Pengcheng [lit. Peng City] to meet Li Yuan. Her return trip will take at least ten days. That will be our only chance to steal the account book.

    The man said, Are those two little demons any good? They still have Dong Ming Pais little princess and the law-protector fairies on the ship; all are first-class martial art masters.

    Yun Yuzhen laughed and said, Those two kids are as smart as ghosts; the only problem is that they did not master Yuzhens Crow Crossing Technique; otherwise, with intention can be considered without intention. This matter will be ninety percent sure. At that time, I might pretend to attack the Floating Fragrance Flagship, to lure their martial art experts out, so that they can make their escape. There shouldnt be any problem.

    The man laughed and said, Each time you, this coquettish fox, mention those two kids, you always have your brows raised in delight and your eyes laughing. Are you thinking of tasting their virginity?

    Yun Yuzhen laughed and swore, With you, this big-headed ghost, would I look at those two little ruffians whose smell of mothers milk has not dried yet? Its just that they can still be considered rising star [the original was darker: delight of a girl trafficked into a brothel to work as prostitute]. Because the matter this time is of grave importance, we had to ask you, the new generation martial art expert of the Dugu Clan, to come and personally receive the goods. At that time we can easily kill them to shut their mouth. Others are making an all-out effort for your sake, but unexpectedly you said such thing about others. Ah oh

    The two people were making out again.

    But to Kou Zhong and Xu Ziling, it was as if they heard thunder from a clear blue sky, their heart was completely broken; turned out the truth was this cruel. All those sweet speech and honeyed words from Yun Yuzhen were nothing but lies.

    At the same time they suddenly saw the light.

    Jukun Bangs backing was actually one of the four powerful clans, the Dugu Clan. Plus this matter was actually Dugu Clans plot against the Li Clan or perhaps the Yuwen Clan.

    Then they heard Yun Yuzhens voice; moaning and gasping for breath she said, Do you want me to go back to my room? Do you really want to tease me to death? These two nights should be peaceful and safe, but as soon as we enter Huai River, I cant guarantee anything. I dont know how Du Fuwei got wind that the two little demons are on my ship. At that time, I will have to rely on your, Dugu Ces Bi Luo Jianfa [sky-blue fall sword] to deal with his Xiu Li Qiankun [universe in his sleeve].

    Dont worry! Dugu Ce arrogantly said, Er Ge [second (older) brother] has personally prepared martial art masters to provide support to us; we can easily slaughter Du Fuwei. At that time only Fu Gongyou left with Huai River army; not enough for us to fear.

    Yun Yuzhen said, When your Dugu Clan obtain the world [tian xia] in the future, dont forget me, Yun Yuzhen!

    Dugu Ce lowered his voice, Are you sure that those two kids really dont know the secret of Duke Yangs treasure trove?

    I am sure, Yun Yuzhen replied, Once I intentionally mocked them that they did not the treasures location, while I paid close attention to their reaction and facial expression. I knew that Fu Junchuo did not tell them. The fact is, Fu Junchuo has always been Gaoli people, how could she possibly spill the secret to Han people? Come!

    The door closed. The sound of footsteps moved farther and farther away. The two boys breathed a sigh of relief, but still felt extremely lost.

    Kou Zhong whispered in Xu Zilings ear, There will come a day we will vent our anger to her.

    Xu Ziling said wryly, Looks like it wont be too late for us to steal chicken when we get to Huai River.

    Kou Zhong sighed and said, Lets go back to bed!

    That night they did not sleep well. When dawn came, they woke up and went to the deck to enjoy the ocean view, and their mood improved a little bit.

    A flock of seagulls hovered behind the ship; the two boys watched with rapt attention how the seagulls flew in arcs; a comprehension grew in their mind, momentarily they had their eyes only on the seagulls and forgot about everything else.

    Suddenly Yun Yuzhens voice came from behind, Why woke up so early today? she asked.

    The two boys intentionally did not turn their head around, Kou Zhong only mumbled incoherently in reply.

    Yun Yuzhen stood next to Xu Ziling. Havent you seen seagulls before? she asked in astonishment, Why are you so enthralled?

    Xu Ziling gave her an indifferent look; recalling that last night she said it with her own mouth that she wanted Dugu Ce to kill them to shut their mouth, and that he has finally seen her salacious nature, a sense of loathing bubbled up in his heart. Turning his gaze back to the seagulls, he said in heavy tone, Naturally seagulls are a lot more enthralling; at least live a carefree live, without any fear of being harmed by their own kind.

    Kou Zhong was afraid Yun Yuzhen might grow suspicious, he laughed and said, Xiao Ling has always been a helpless romantic. Beautiful Shifu must not blame him.

    How could Yun Yuzhen know that the two boys have discovered her secret? With a charming smile she said, Young people always have their minds filled with fantasy. Just enjoy the view for a moment longer, and then come down to have breakfast with me! I will tell you more on the details of your mission. Finished speaking, she gracefully left.

    Three days later, the ship finally reached the water where Huai River met the ocean, where they turn west to travel along Huai River.

    The people on the ship grew tense again. Yun Yuzhen even issued a strict order for the two boys to stay inside their room at all times.

    That evening, while other people were focusing their attention to the enemy outside, Kou Zhong sneaked into the galley to steal three chickens and brought them back into their room, where they waited patiently.

    The two boys were fully dressed, with their weapons tied behind their back; and then they separately stationed themselves by the window and by the door to listen to the activity outside.

    By the third watch of the night [between 11pm 1am] there was sound of footsteps in the hallway, coming straight toward their room. Horrified, the two boys jumped onto the bed, pretending to be asleep.

    There was a knock on the door, followed by the door being pushed open. Yun Zhis voice was heard, Get dressed quickly, Ill come back to take you out later.

    Without waiting for any response, she closed the door.

    The two boys jumped out of the bed in fear. They hastily slaughtered the chicken and collected their blood, which they put into four empty stolen wine bottles, and divided the bottles into two halves. When they were just hiding the bottles into their pockets, Yun Zhi returned. She beckoned them to follow her.

    Right that moment the hull suddenly shook violently, the ship was making a hard turn, and sailed in high speed back to where they were coming from.

    Kou Zhong and Xu Ziling concluded that not only the enemy has come, they were coming in full force and posed a real threat to Jukun Bang, putting them in a rather difficult situation. Only the two boys did not know what went wrong.

    The hallway was full of people going back and forth, there were a lot of people that they had never seen before but now making their appearance. They all seemed to be very tense, just like the tension before a giant storm.

    Kou Zhong quickened his steps to ask Yun Zhi, Whos coming?

    Yun Zhi lost her usual composure; rudely and impatiently she said, Dont talk!

    Kou Zhong fell back to Xu Ziling and said in a low voice, Little ruffian will always be little ruffian.

    Naturally Xu Ziling understood what he meant. If it were not they accidentally came across the Secret to Long Life and the Duke Yangs treasure-trove, Jianghu people would definitely look down on them and dismiss them as nobodies.

    With her grand prestige as the trusted maid of the clan leader, naturally Yun Zhi would never regard them as anybody important; simply because she received Yun Yuzhens order that she treated the two boys with fake respect and addressed them as Gongzi this and Gongzi that. Now that they encountered emergency situation like this, her patience was gone.

    Yun Zhi led them to the main deck. The two boys took the opportunity to look around. They saw five big ships about two li upstream, coming toward them at an amazingly high speed.

    The deck was full of Jukun Bang warriors; everybody looked tensed and alert, ready to fight the enemy.

    Yun Zhi kept walking toward the bow, where about twenty people gathered, including Yun Yuzhen and the deputy clan leader Bu Tianzhi, whom they have not seen for a long time.

    The other people looked different from each other; about seven or eight were women, each one was as beautiful as a flower. When they saw the two boys, their beautiful eyes were shining with curiosity.

    Although the deck was in total blackout, the two boys were not in the least bit bothered by it.

    Standing next to Yun Yuzhen was a man who looked to be at the same height as Kou Zhong, approximately twenty-five or twenty-six years old. His face handsome, his bearings serious, his clothes was a tight-fitting warrior suit. He and Yun Yuzhen looked to be a perfect match. Its just that his face was even more gaunt than Xu Ziling, plus there was a hint of paleness from excessive drinking and womanizing, so that he could not be compared to Xu Ziling in terms of natural elegance; however, he did have the maturity that Xu Ziling lacked.

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    Can't wait to read if the two dragons can steal the account book and if they'll make it their own. Nice update.

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    Default Book 2 - Chapter 11, Part 2

    Anh, HPC, you are welcome. Jaya, I am afraid you'll have to wait for a while for that part. Here's the end of Chapter 11. Chapter 12 is a bit shorter, I'll try to post it on Saturday (my time).


    If this man was indeed Dugu Ce, then in terms of status and martial art skill, this man far surpassed the two boys.

    Yun Yuzhen stepped forward to meet them and said, The enemy is too strong, we must immediately escape to the shore.

    Bu Tianzhi and that man, whom they suspected was Dugu Ce, also came to either side of Yun Yuzhen. The latter was staring at the two boys, sizing them up.

    Kou Zhong pretended to be surprised as he stared back at Dugu Ce curiously.

    Yun Yuzhen cleared her throat and made the introduction, This is our Gangs martial art master protector of the law. He and Bu Fu Bangzhu will personally protect you.

    Dugu Ce laughed and said, Two Xiao Xiongdi need not be scared; leaving the ship is just a tactical matter, not that we are afraid of the enemy.

    As soon as he spoke, the two boys recognized his voice; he was indeed Dugu Ce.

    Whos the enemy? Xu Ziling asked.

    Yun Yuzhen replied, Du Fuwei has just taken the two large towns along the river ahead; he blocks the route to Zhongyang, hence we must change our route and go different way.

    Kou Zhong smiled politely to Yun Zhi, who was standing to the side, Look! he said, Bangzhu treated us with a lot more courtesy than you did.

    Yun Zhi glowered at him for a moment, but then she hung her head and did not dare to say anything.

    Yun Yuzhen also glowered at Yun Zhi, but right that moment someone came to report, Bangzhu! We will reach Leigong [lit. god of thunder] Gorge soon.

    The two boys looked ahead, and saw the river narrowed, both banks were high and steep cliffs; the terrain looks extremely dangerous.

    Prepare to abandon ship! Yun Yuzhen ordered.

    The twenty-something people moved toward the port side of the bow. Bu Tianzhi and Dugu Ce separately came to Xu Ziling and Kou Zhongs sides, and pulled their shoulders toward the edge of the ship.

    Meanwhile, the enemy ships were closing in behind them that they were now only about a li away.

    Jukun Bangs warship was steered toward the left bank. When they were only about three zhang away from the cliff, the twenty odd people soared to the sky across the Huai River, flying toward a dangerous cliff nearby.

    Bu Tianzhi and Dugu Ce wrapped their arms around the two boys waist, and then took them soaring into the air, and landed at the bank.

    Kou Zhong and Xu Ziling did a self-check: if they had to exert their strength and jump across three zhang distance, it would still be beyond their reach. But now everybody, including Yun Zhi, was able to easily do it. Based on this fact alone they knew that these people, at least in term of qinggong, was much better than they.

    Holding them in their arms, Bu Tianzhi and Dugu Ce were still able to handle the butchers cleaver with ease; it was obvious that the two boys could only see the other riders dust and have no hope of catching up. [Translators note: I could very well translate this paragraph as: Holding them in their arms, Bu Tianzhi and Dugu Ce were still able to do it skillfully and easily; it was obvious that the two boys were far inferior. But to me, personally, Chinese idioms are fascinating, and Id like to share it with you.]

    Therefore, under normal circumstances, they basically had no hope of escaping.

    After landing, Yun Yuzhen did not just stay there; they quickly ran into the depth of the mountain and fields.

    After running for a time needed to burn an incense stick, Dugu Ce suddenly shouted, Halt!

    Everybody halted in shock.

    A moment later, they heard the sound of bird cry and the flapping of wings ahead; obviously the enemy is coming their way, startling the sleeping birds away.

    Aghast, Yun Yuzhen said, This way! Taking the lead, she dashed to the right.

    After rushing down a hill, they saw ahead was a big mountain. Unleashing their lightness skill, everybody ran up the mountain at full speed.

    By this time the sky was gradually getting brighter; all around them was desolate forest and mountainous open space that has never seen human footprint.

    Passing through a thick forest, suddenly they were greeted by vast open space with wide panorama; turned out they had come to the edge of a high cliff. Directly across the canyon, peaks of a mountain range still loomed at the distance that they were all horrified.

    Still holding Kou Zhong under his arm, Dugu Ce walked over to the edge of the cliff and looked down. This is a dead end! he exclaimed.

    Kou Zhong craned his neck, he saw the cliff was around a hundred zhang tall, but clusters of old trees sprouted along the wall of the cliff, easing the feeling of danger. Down below was an endless stretch of jungle that extended toward the sloping hill on the opposite side.

    Yun Yuzhen was trying to fins a way down when suddenly there was a long laugh coming from behind them. Hongfen Bangzhu [orig. rouge and powder, see Book 2 Chapter 8], please hold! Du Fuwei of Huai River pays his respect to Bangzhu.

    Everybody knew hard battle was inevitable; they halted their steps and drew their weapons.

    Bu Tianzhi and Dugu Ce put the two boys down and stood in front of them to shield them.

    In order to deal with the powerful enemy, Yun Yuzhen and the rest stood in a semi-circle battle formation to protect them as well. Behind them was precisely the high cliff that could have their body torn and their bones crushed.

    Kou Zhong reached out to grab Xu Zilings hand; taking advantage while Yun Yuzhen and the others had their attention fixed on the enemy and did not pay any attention to the two boys, he whispered into Xu Zilings ear, Well wait for an appropriate time to jump down the cliff. The cliff wall is full of trees and bushes, which will reduce the momentum of our falling. The bottom of the cliff is a forest, I guarantee we wont die from falling.

    Xu Ziling clenched his teeth and nodded his head.

    Meanwhile Du Fuweis tall and lanky figure has appeared ahead, and stopped about a zhang away in front of Yun Yuzhen and the others. Farther down, at the edge of the hill, there were thirty, forty people came out and immediately surround them.

    Du Fuwei still wore tall hat on his head, his vigor was still as before, his gaze fell to the two boys, unexpectedly, a smiling expression, which was very difficult to describe, appeared on his dead-man-like face. He said in tender voice, Children, now that you see your father, why havent you come over to pay your respect and admit your wrong?

    Kou Zhong giggled and said, Die, how are you, Senior? Your children have betrayed our family clan, henceforth father and sons relationship is cut asunder. Die, youd better go home to enjoy live of ease and comfort, dont go around tiring yourself for the sake of your children.

    Seeing Kou Zhong was not the least bit afraid of the notoriously cruel and merciless Du Fuwei, Yun Yuzhen could not help feeling greatly amazed. If it were they, due to Du Fuweis reputation, they would not dare to speak thoughtlessly and thus offending him.

    What she did not know was that Du Fuwei was accustomed to listening to Kou Zhong, hence he still had a familiar feeling in his heart; smiling, he said, It was caused by lack of communication between us, father and sons. Let your Ol Die get rid of these brazen, mad fellows who kidnap people first, and then we, father and sons can sit down and have a nice heart-to-heart chat!

    Dugu Ce and Yun Yuzhen let out a cold snort at the same time.

    Du Fuwei acted if he did not even see them. His gaze swept across the several women in the group; he laughed and said, I often heard Jukun Bang is accustomed to use women to confuse people. Sure enough it is true. This time I, Du Fuwei, come prepared. If fighting breaks, I am afraid not many people will escape alive. The men will unavoidably die on the spot; the women will be difficult to escape humiliation. Does Yun Bangzhu still want to insist?

    With a cold humph Dugu Ce said, People said that Du Fuwei is so arrogant that no one else matters. Sure enough it is true. Whos strong and whos weak, well find out as soon as we fight; why talk too much?

    Du Fuweis gaze fell on Dugu Ces face; his eyes emitted a very cold and sharp ray. May I know this young friends respected surname and great given name? he asked in icy-cold tone, Your tone is bigger than Yun Bangzhus!

    With a charming laugh Yun Yuzhen said, Have Du Zongguan heard Yuzhen speaks? How do you know who has the bigger tone?

    Du Fuwei shook his head; he said, I only know that in these circumstances he can still talk out of turn, I know he is not your subordinate; why would Yun Bangzhu still want to cover him up?

    Yun Yuzhen was dumbstruck and unable to reply.

    Du Fuwei nonchalantly said, Jukun Bang and I have always been without grievance without enmity. I am just trying to get back two naughty children whose inferior character is hard to change. Fighting always damages a good relationship, but if we dont fight, it will be difficult to convince you. How about this! I have a proposal, I wonder if ladies and gentlemen are willing to listen.

    Yun Yuzhen coldly replied, This Bangzhu will listen with respectful attention.

    At this time, even Kou Zhong and Xu Ziling knew that Du Fuwei has completely seized the initiative, while Yun Yuzhens side could only play along.

    Although earlier Dugu Ce did not consider Du Fuweis prestige to be worthy in his eyes, but when he actually met Du Fuwei, it was like the hero suddenly turned into a coward [play on words here: hero yingxiong, coward gouxiong (lit. black bear)]; his nastiness disappeared who knows where.

    Du Fuwei pointed to Dugu Ce and said, Let this mysterious friend have an all-out battle with the Ol Du for ten moves. Supposing I cannot achieve victory, I will immediately turn on my heels and will no longer consider these two inferior kids even exist. But supposing by fluke the Ol Du wins, Yun Bangzhu will immediately hand them over to me so that I could bring them home and give them a good discipline. Yun Bangzhu, whats your opinion?

    And then he added in an icy-cold tone, If Yun Bangzhu does not agree, my party will go all-out against yours. When that happens, please dont blame Ol Du of being vicious and merciless, and totally disregarding Jianghus principle of giving you a face.

    Yun Yuzhens heart shivered in fear; she realized Du Fuweis vision was indeed brilliant. He had seen through that in her side, Dugu Ce possessed the most superior martial art skill, yet he still dared to challenge him for ten moves; thus it was clear how high the opponents confidence in achieving victory.

    All of a sudden, she came to a realization that she had fallen into absolute disadvantage, and that she had no other choice.

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    I like this fight scene coming up ... nice touch there in handling those idioms and phrases....thks foxs.

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    Just making some meager contributions.

    "...hence we must change our route and go different way. should be "go a different way.
    "Jukun Bangs warship was steered toward the left bank." may be "warship steered toward"
    "wrapped their arms around the two boys waist" should be "boys waists"
    "ran into the depth of the mountain" should be "depths of the mountain"
    "Yun Yuzhen was trying to fins a way down" should be "find a way down"
    "have their body torn and their bones crushed." should be "their bodies torn"
    "hill, there were thirty, forty people came" should be "people who came" or "hill, thirty, forty people"
    "Du Fuwei still wore tall hat" should be "wore the tall hat"
    "home to enjoy live of ease" should be "life of ease"
    "If it were they, due" should be "If it were them"
    "Du Fuwei acted if he did not" should be "acted as if he did not"
    "accustomed to use women" should be "to using women"
    Have Du Zongguan heard Yuzhen speaks?" should be "Yuzhen spoken?"
    "How about this!" may be "How about this?!" or "How about this?"
    "his nastiness disappeared who knows where" should be "disappeared to who knows where"
    "giving you a face. should be "giving you face.

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