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click to show/hide spoilersEven the commandos can felt that unbearable.
→ Even commandos would find that unbearable.
Xingan, Lin Qing thoughtthat she could never see Teng Qing Shan again.
→ thought that
"Thank you, Teng uncle
→ uncle Teng
Xing Yi Quan posture was transfer without hesitation to Five Elements Fist-"Ice Fist",
→ Xing Yi Quan posture changed without hesitation to the Five Elements Fist-"Ice Fist",
Normal people who are learning martial arts will be really shocked to watch his action. He kept transfering constantly from Xing Yi Quan to Five Elements Fist. Obviously he got his supreme power with the Five Elements Fist.
→ Normal people learning martial arts would be terrified watching his actions. He kept on changing from Xing Yi Quan to the Five Elements Fist. Obviously he got his supreme power from the Five Elements Fist.
Then Teng Qing Shan returned to his first posture of Xing Yi Quan, slowly breathed out.
→ ...slowly exhaling.
There were some historical people who could achieve its ultimate level. However, its not that easy to find someone who masters it in today's life.
→ There were several historical people capable of achieving its ultimate level. However, nowadays it was very rare to find someone able to master it.
Teng Qing Shan got back to his room, changed another set of clothes, brought along his things, then quietly left the An Yi County in the dark night.
→ Teng Qing Shan got back to his room, changed into another set of clothes, packed his belongings and then quietly left the An Yi County in the middle of the night.