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    Originally posted by andrea7974:
    <STRONG>Then I'm the one who began to confuse <IMG SRC="smilies/thinkingof.gif" border="0">

    Did Andrea the White Robe swordsman fell in love with Goofy or Yellow Rose? <IMG SRC="smilies/typin.gif" border="0"></STRONG>
    hi, andrea.

    how about changing your dialogue there a little so that it goes with the other scenes. <IMG SRC="smilies/idea.gif" border="0">

    but it is a fun story, so maybe it is not that necessary. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/love.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/kiss.gif" border="0">
    "History's third dimension is always fiction."
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    back to Andrea and Goofy scene:
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    "Did you say just now that Floo wanted to kill Wutang?" asked Yellow Rose with panic voice.

    "Yes, and I'm asking you your favor to help me stop her," said White Robe Swordsman.

    One thing disturbed White Robe Swordman's mind. Two years ago when he knew Yellow Rose, she was a kind and gentle woman. Not long after he proposed the girl, the girl suddenly change and she had a very bad habit and she turned to be a cold blood killer. That's how he became to turn his heart to other girls. But deep inside his heart, he only loved Yellow Rose and never be able to stop loving her.

    Yellow Rose seemed panic as she heard that Floo wanted to kill Wutang. Just in a flash she jumped to the roof and dissapeared.

    "Hiya, Yellow Rose!" sighed White Robe Swordsman with sad voice. He felt glad that Yellow Rose wanted to help Wutang. He smirked with cruel smile on his handsome face.

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    Now there is trio Goofy ..... <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0">

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    I am so confused!! <IMG SRC="smilies/rolleyes.gif" border="0">

    should I start demanding triple pays??? <IMG SRC="smilies/rofl.gif" border="0"> :laugh1: <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0">
    "History's third dimension is always fiction."
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    Bwahahahaha...
    <IMG SRC="smilies/rofl.gif" border="0">
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    This story is DEFINITELY very different w/ the Kilin one <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
    So, is Goofy triplets? or quadrluplet?

    I'll post more on Monday. Cya, guys!!!
    back w/ a vengeance ^_^

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    Am i supposed to be a guy? <IMG SRC="smilies/confused.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/dizzy.gif" border="0">
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    It's your pick. I guess you can be a girl who dressed up like a man <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

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    I envy Goofy! <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> Can I be twins too! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
    "Better to write for yourself and have no public, than to write for the public and have no self."
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    Yes you can... <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh.gif" border="0"> Maybe we should change the title to "The Tales of Twins"
    hehehe......

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    At a distant seashore, giant foaming waves crashed mightily against the shoals like a ferocious hungry tiger tearing and digging its way into a prey's first piece of flesh. Roar and swoosh! Roar and swoosh! The waves pushed and curled their way onto the sandy beach dragging away dunes and seaweeds, scattered clam shells and rocks to displace them to a far off land. Unlike most other beaches, the sand here was not white nor tan, but black as coal! Thousands, even millions, of years ago, the constant tides, winds, and other forces were able to carve a crescent corner of this volcano island. Since the hardened lava was dark, naturally then, the sand from which it was grinded down into would be the same color.

    On top the highest peak of the jagged and rocky cliffside overlooking the sandbank stood a silouette of a lone figure, standing tall, contemplating at the magnificent scene of nature's forces below. Her long silky hair and flowing white gown flapped along with the wind like a billowing flag. Through a catch of clouds in the sky, the sun peeped through enough to spy a long gleaming blade reflecting in her slender hands. Its metal just as the dark as the black sand. On one side of the blade was a beautiful carving of a long, slithering serpent sea monster (C Monster <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> ) with its mouth wide open, fangs ready to bite. This was the prized heirloom of WuTang! But what secret does it hold?! A forbidden treasure? A omnipotent martial arts manual? A key to immortality? The ageless young woman shook her head, wondering in circles and in confusion. White Krane has had this sword in her possession for over a decade and she still could not solve the mystery of this mighty sword. "What could it be?!" she cried out against the roaring the tides. "What could it be?!" With maniacal laughter, she gather her deep internal energy and heaved forward with open arms. Kaboom! A magnificent geyser of shot out like a swift arrow into the sky. She laughed some more before climbing down the slopes holding the sword with carefully in her hand.

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    What do y'all think? Couldn't help putting my little 2 cents in this fun piece. After all this time -- we have to see at least see the sword in action, right? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    How's this for originality. Never thought I could take in the form of the sword. <IMG SRC="smilies/evillaugh.gif" border="0"> I am the only one who can unlock its secrets! <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0"> (just kidding) <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Yeah, this scene has its orgins to HSDS with everyone grappling for the Dragon Sabre. Now that our prolific White Krane is up in Canada this week (on vacation), I took the liberty of fleshing her character out a little.

    White Krane -- Since you want to be known as a girl, I made the necessary changes in pronouns.

    [ July 19, 2002: Message edited by: C Monster ]

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    aiya! C monster! Why did you have to pull me underwater?! I meant...pull me into this too? I'm a girl! for goodness sake! Somebody change me into a girl dressed in guy clothes!! AIYA! I can't stand this someone had to pick on me before I go! <IMG SRC="smilies/frown.gif" border="0"> *whines* Okay I'll add something...
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    White Krane traveled to and settle down at a tavern where she met Southern Crane, her Si Hing(older marital brother).

    In the courtyard of the tavern...

    "Aiya, Mui Mui! Why are you dressed up like a man again? Who would want to marry a girl who dresses in man clothing?" said Southern Crane.

    White Krane smirked and said," I don't care! I stole this sword fron Wutang and for ten years I have not found the secret behind this! The reason I dress like this is to hide from Wutang's men. He will never suspect that a beautiful girl has disguised herself as man!"

    "Bak Hok mui, you were always so stubborn, I thought after ten years you'd change your mind about your revenge on Floo.." Southern Crane sighed.

    "Why would I change my mind about avenging my family? All the twenty-two years of my life, I hold only one desire! To Avenge my family's death!"

    With that White Krane took off on a white horse and on her way to Hangzhou province, she went under a another alias as White Rain...
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    Wells that's all I can come up with and until I get back. NO ONE is allowed to torture me okay! <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0">

    [ July 19, 2002: Message edited by: WhiteKrane ]
    I just love how you Captivate My Mind

    Self reminder - Update blog more often and continue editing/writing for TOV fanfic.

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    Hope you have a great time in Canada, White Krane! As you can see, I made the changes already to my post.

    It would help if there are more guys here willing to participate. Come on. This is a wuxia fanfic, we need some more drama and action, blood and guts spilling. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0">

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    Good add, C Monster. How about visiting legend of Kilin too? If you don't want to read previous chapters, you can always read on posts that discuss about the plot. Things getting thickened there as well. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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    At that moment, shower of fragrant flowers scattered above Little Crystal Moon (shirley) and her victim. The intoxicated aroma overwhelmed them, and they both felt weak, unable to breathe. Sword fell from Little Crystal Moon's hand, and its owner collapsed senseless to the ground. A shadow swooped down and picked up one girl then floated away as quickly as it came. Only the flower petals surrounding one body on the ground showed evidence of the coming of Flower Granny.

    Yellow Rose's twin sister felt strangely peaceful. She felt that she was flying through the air as if she were a bird. All the while, she inhaled the rich perfume of an unidentified flower. Ah! That was exactly like Yellow Rose had once described to her about the journey with her granny. Yellow Rose's sister smiled and dreamed on.

    A shadow with the unconscious girl alit in a garden carpeted thickly with green grass. Numerous flower plants scattered orderly in the area. Many blossoms were in bloom, trying to show off their colorful petals or their enticing scents.

    A lady in red fabric turned around from tending a flower plot and smiled at the newcomers. She dressed in sheer silk robe, embroidered in gold threads. She was breathtakingly beautiful, and her face was ageless. Her black hair caressed her white elegant neck, in contrast with her ruby lips. Her eyes were like a dark pool, full of wisdom and love. She greeted her sister.

    "Sister, are you bringing a new disciple?"

    Her voice was soft but rich. One could have smell the sweet aroma of flower from her words.

    Flower Granny (Spcnet) nodded. She laid the girl on the thick grass gently and spoke to her sister.

    "I have found Yellow Rose's twin at last."

    Despite her name, she still looked youthful with the beauty that could only rival her younger sister. However, her eyes housed no gentleness or benevolence like those of the other's.

    Flower Granny's sister, Xiu Lan (Jennifer), raised her eyebrows. "So, is this one of the five elements we are searching for? If so, then why we still let Yellow Rose live all this time?"

    Her harsh words were in contrast with her loving smile and her caring voice.

    Flower Granny frowned. "I want to make sure that she is the one we need. I only let Yellow Rose live because I think she and her twin sister could be a key to the secret of the sword one way or another."

    She recited, "The Sea Monster (C Monster) Sword is formed from five elements, earth, water, metal, wood, and fire. We need young people of those natures together as a key to the secret. We are the only two that know the method."

    She laughed shrilly. "Let those fools kill one another over the mysterious sword. It is not hard to get the sword, but I need to find my five elements first."

    She pointed to the sleeping girl. "Xiu Lan, I will let you care for her. Make sure you train her well for the coming task. Don't let her become a mistake like Yellow Rose."

    Xiu Lan nodded. She touched the girl's cheeks gently. "I shall name you White Jasmine."
    "History's third dimension is always fiction."
    -- The Glass Bead Game, Hermann Hesse

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    Hey this sounds fun - can I add my little intro piece?

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    Far away, there lies an island on the other side of the great ocean where the cliffs are white as snow, harsh waves beat against them constantly and the rain falls for all but 3 days a year. A girl, looking young for her years studies hard in the ways of the martial arts with one wish - to leave the island and venture out into Wulin to seek her destiny in life. She is known only as Em.

    Every day for ten years she has dreamed the same dream - she must seek the one who is called Flower Granny, for she holds the secret to unlock her inner strength.

    One day, she decides the time has come. The skies are clear for the first time in months and she pulls her little raft onto the water, ready to ride the waves across the realm of the C Monster.

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    Where is everyone? I think everybody get confused <IMG SRC="smilies/rofl.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/rofl.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/rofl.gif" border="0">

    I'll make a short synopsis...

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    Floo, Goofy and WuTang are childhood friends. WuTang has a family heirloom -a sword, C Monster- that contains wu-lin's biggest secret. WuTang is in love with Floo, but unfortunately, Floo was asked by her si-fu (the devilish WhiteKrane who secretly hate Floo) to kill WuTang, as WK has stolen WuTang's sword 10 years ago.
    On the other hand, the innocent Goofy has a relationship w/ a scoundrel named Andrea. Alas, one day she was kidnapped by her own twin, Yellow Rose, whose intention is also to get WuTang's sword.

    One day, as WuTang tried to sneak into WK's house to stole his sword back, he was kidnapped by No Shadow (Charby) and Crystal (Shirley). At almost the same time, Goofy was kidnapped by Flower Granny (SPC) and her/his si-mui, Jennifer.

    In an island, a girl named Em is having a strange dream about SPC...

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    OK, I'll try to continue...
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    Rain poured softly. A beautiful girl walked slowly in the mid of LuoYang. Despite her busy surrounding, her face seemed sad and her shoulder drooped.

    "Hmmm... beautiful girl... Since you are even more beautiful that Goofy, you must be her childhood friend, Floo..." Suddenly a white shadow appeared in front of the girl.

    Although startled, Floo didn't lose her calm composure, "And you must be Andrea, seeing from your red boots," she replied calmly.

    "Bwahahahaha.... you are not making the devil WK embarassed to be your teacher!!" Andrea laughed out loud. "Although... she'll be greatly embarassed upon knowing that you have failed to kill WuTang, again."

    "Oh, please," Floo rolled her eyes. "Now you are getting annoying. OK, what do you want, or should I just kick your @ss?"

    "And very arrogant. Goofy that I know is a very innocent girl. Hmmm... maybe you are closer to Yellow Rose, instead?" Andrea laughed again.

    "Now, now, I'm not here to annoy you, pretty face. I want to offer you an opportunity. What would you say if we work together to find WuTang?"

    Floo scoffed, "Everyone is begging me to help them find WuTang. Do tell me, why should I? At this very moment, I dont even want to see his face again. Ever!!"

    "There's no need to be defensive, Floo." Yellow Rose, who suddenly showed up, sneered back. "I can't believe it! You have WuTang's heart, and now you're trying to flirt with this playboy?"

    "Hey, watch your mouth!" Floo quickly drew her sword and aimed it at Yellow Rose's neck...

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    Goofy..... Andrea.... pls continue...
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    Me? Andrea is a scoundrel and a playboy? <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0"> no way man..I'm a nice and a faithful young man although I wear red boots <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/batman.gif" border="0">

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    Andrea, the White Robe Swordsman knew that Floo would not kill or attack Yellow Rose carelessly. No matter what they were friends when they were kids. He got an idea to break up their relationship.

    "Floo don't be careless. Once you told me that you won't kill Yellow Rose as long as I agree not to have any contact with Yellow Rose again. And now after you totally have me, you still want to kill Yellow Rose. I won't let you do anything to harm her!" said Andrea with serious voice.

    Yellow Rose was very surprised as she heard that. Two years ago Andrea proposed her to marry him. But later on Andrea left her and rumors said that he had another girlfriend. She never thought that Andrea's new girlfriend was Floo, her friend when she was a little girl.

    "Floo, how could you do that to me? I thought that we were friends!" said Yellow Rose with angry voice. "You know that he was my fiance, didn't you?"

    "Yellow Rose, don't trust him!" said Floo stuttered. "I only meet this scoundrel today!" said Floo try to convince Yellow Rose.

    "Floo, how can you say like that to me?" said Andrea with bitter voice. "You're the one who told me that you won't kill Yellow Rose as long as I don't make any contact with Yellow Rose.But now you said that you only meet me just now?" said Andrea again. "You are very cruel, Floo!"

    Yellow Rose and Floo were very angry to each other. They both drew their swords and ready to fight until one of them died.

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    Come on Floo, Wutang, Goofy <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0"> !

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    short one b/c I don't have much time. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Yellow Rose wielded her sword with one hand, another was in her pocket, reaching for secret projectiles and a chance to throw them at her opponent.

    Floo exectuted sword move skillfully. Her moves were elegant and fast. Yellow Rose countered the opponent with a thin sheet of sword. Her movement was different than that of Floo's, slow yet deadly at each thrust.

    The two women exchanged thirty moves, and Yellow Rose suddenly saw an opening. She tricked Floo into defending her face, leaving her upper body a target.

    She then cast a shower of fragrant needles that had been dipped in poison. The needles lodged themselves on Floo's chest and shoulders. Yellow Rose then followed with her final stab.

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