Legend of the Sword and Saber (Book of Destiny)

[Shirley]

Goofy: I am already glad about your ideas of new castings. I really like Fiona and Deric Wan. I will continue to support your fanfic as long as I am on here. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> About the title, I ws thinking about the series Journey to the West. Maybe you can put the name of the place where's she's heading toward. Journey to ....... or Adventures to.......

Somethin' like dat. Just an idea. <IMG SRC="smilies/thinkingof.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0">

[Goofy]

How about 'The Quest of Heaven and Earth'?

A little word playing on heaven = tian. Then I have to find someone with earth name. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

any advice on changing of words? <IMG SRC="smilies/help.gif" border="0">

[C Monster]

Hi Goofy,

Over the course of this past week, I finally got a chance to read your two "Legend" stories in its entirety, and I have to say its a great piece of wuxia fiction. The story is you write is epic in scope spanning generations. The characters are very real with magnetic personalities. I love the twins and dual identities of Vivian the most <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0"> Very great mix-up scenes... What I also enjoyed is how you incorporate strains of Jin Yong's world and making it your own unique voice. You do this the best when you create the various forms of kungfu and maze formations. Very explosive fighting scenes too. <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

Keep up the great work! I'm starting to read your "Heaven and Earth" saga as well, but will take it more slowly though... since my eyes are turning red from reading too much too soon.

Your devoted fan,

C

[Goofy]

C Monster,
thank you so much for the feedback...

I am at the phrase of imperfection where I can't seem to like my writing. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
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[andrea7974]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">Originally posted by C Monster:
<STRONG>You do this the best when you create the various forms of kungfu and maze formations. Very explosive fighting scenes too. <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0"></STRONG></font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>


Goofy is the best in making various kungfu forms and maze formation <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0">

Keep up the good work Goofy. Anyway...perhaps you should teach me how to make a good figthing scenes <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> since my story is more like a drama than kungfu since I'm not good in making fighting scnenes :shy: