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    Smile Hey playboy!!!

    Hi everyone

    This is not a new story, I have wrote this about 2 years ago. I just find out this message board and decided to post it here <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
    Hope you like it.

    English is not my first language,please forgive my writting.
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    Main cast:
    Louis Koo
    Jessica Hsuan

    Support cast
    Marco
    Marianne
    Jackie

    Other not important cast

    Wong He
    Anne
    Annie Man
    Frankie lam
    *********************************************

    ***************** CHAPTER 1 *****************

    2 young women sat at the dining room as the take the breakfast. None of the two talks at the were watch the morning news on the T.V

    News
    The multi-billionaire Louis Koo had break up with he's girlfriend, the actress Ada choi after 6 months of dating, rumor said that a third person was the cause of the break up. There was rumored that the third person was Anne Heung, that they were secretly seeing each other while Louis was still with Ada.

    Both denied of any relationship between them, but they were caught by one
    of our reporter last night at the L.K hotel.
    They show a Anne and Louis entering the hotel with an arm wrap around Anne's shoulders.

    “Wow! That Louis Koo has a new girlfriend" said Marianne "Wait, isn't she's the first lady role in the serie that you are in?"

    Jessica doesn’t cares much: “So?…he’s known as the worst playboy we
    have in H.K, he’s changing girlfriend as often as he change he's shoes. A 2 timer this time. He broke he's personal records...I wonder if anyone had mention him about Aids?" Jessica made a funny face. "I don't know why he seems to be
    attracted to actress."

    Marianne: “So, when’s your turn?”

    Jessica didn’t know what she’s talking about: “My turn of what?” she
    pick up her cup of coffee.

    Marianne: “Go out with him of cause, since you said he is attracted
    to actress. So I guest he will come to you one day.”

    Jessica almost spat out the coffee: “Are you crazy! me and that ugly pervert?
    in he’s dreams. I will never go out with him even if he’s the only man
    left in this world.”

    Marianne: “He’s not ugly, in act he’s pretty good looking for not to
    say gorgeous. And I like he’s tanned skin.”

    Jessica: “Thanks, but not thanks, you go out with him if you like him
    that much”

    Marianne sigh: “I would if I don’t already have Jackie, and beside he’s
    not only nice looking but also VERY rich”

    Jessica pouted her lips: “You are annoying me with that none sense talking.
    Are you coming to the studio today?”

    Marianne: “Nope, I’m off today…by the way, when will you finish filming
    the *A family matter*? (I just created a name for a film that Jessica is
    filming)

    Jessica: “Today, it should be the last scene thanks god, and I have
    2 weeks off afterward before I start a new series. Anyway, see you tonight.”

    Marianne: “bye”
    ************************************************** ********************
    At the studio

    Jessica was playing with her crystal key chain, jumping it on one hand
    to the other, she suddenly misses her catch and the key chain falls on
    the floor. She immediately bend down to pick it up, her hand was only
    2 inches away from the key chain when a big large foot steps on it, a broken sound was heard.

    Jessica: “Hey!” She tried to pushes the damn foot off.

    The man looks down: “Uh? What are your doing down there Miss?”

    Jessica looks up at the man: “You are stepping on my key chain Mister…move!”
    she gives him a big hard slap on the leg to make him move.

    “Hey!” the men stepped back.

    Jessica picks up her key chain, it was broken: “See what you did? You'v
    broke it”

    The man frow at her “You slapped me just for a stupid key chain?”

    Jessica saw red “That’s not a stupid key chain ok!! I love it very
    much and it has sentimental value on it”

    The men grab hold of Jessica’s hand and shove a few bills in her hand:
    “That should do it”

    Jessica was speechless; mouth dropped and just stares at the bills.

    Man with an ironic smile on he’s face: “You can buy more than a key
    chain with that”

    Just than, Anne calls out: “Louis!! You came to see me?”

    Louis: “Yea, sort of…aren’t you happy to see me?

    Anne smiles at him: “Of cause I am, what a silly question!”

    Jessica was very pump up, still holding the bills in one hand and her
    broken key chain in the other; he didn’t even said sorry that moron! She
    clenches her fist, and walks toward the couple. If he thinks money can
    solve everything, he’s dead wrong!

    Without a word she throw the bills in Louis face and walks away.

    Anne: “Hey! What’s wrong with you?

    Louis: “Never mind it, Anne”

    Anne: “But she’s so impolite…what’s gone over her?

    Louis: “It’s my fault, just forget it”
    *

    Hei: “Ok world, everyone to there position…Julian, this is the scene
    where you have to choose between Jessica and Anne, and you choose Anne
    of cause.

    Julian looks around: “Where’s Jessica?

    Surprised, they all looks around and couldn’t see her anywhere.

    Jessica came out of her hide out and walks toward them: “I’m here” she
    has read eyes like if she had cried.

    Hei: “What happen to you? Get someone work on your make up”

    Louis surprised: “She’s an actress too?”

    Anne: “Yes, she’s new around”

    Jessia gives Louis a nasty look while a woman fix her make up.

    5 minutes later
    Hei: “Ok, everyone in place, no time fooling around”

    They all get to there position

    Hei: “And ACTION!”
    ****

    Julian: “You know I love you with all my hart” He’s holding Anne in
    he’s arms, looking in each other’s eyes.

    Anne smiles sweetie at him: “I love you too”
    They kissed

    Jessica saw all that in the entrance, tears in her eyes. Slowly she
    turns around and left.
    “Whish you best luck”

    Hei: “CUT! Ok good take”
    Everyone cheers; it was the last scene for their new TV series. They
    have worked over 3 months on it and was very happy it finally finish.

    Jessica walked off stage and walks past Anne and Louis, she purposely
    steps hard on Louis foot. He didn’t beep a sound; just give her a warning
    look. Jessica pouted her lips and walks away happily.

    Anne pull on Louis’s arm to get he’s attention: “We’ll have a party
    ball next week to celebrate the filming of this series, would you comes?”
    Louis: “I’ll see, depending on my schedule”

    *************************************
    2 days later

    Jessica and Marianne walk out of a fashion shop with hand full of bags.

    Jessica: “Brrr…I should have dress up more warmly, this winds is so
    cold”

    Marianne: “Me too…let go home than”

    At that moment some reporter pop out of no were and started to ask question
    and take pictures, Jessica and Miriam tried to back off, they walk faster
    almost running.
    Suddenly a strong wind blow up Jessica’s dress, revealing what it shouldn't
    be revealed.
    Jessica gasp and drops her stuff and tried to hold her dress down. Marianne
    saw a taxi and wave a him, the taxi driver stopped next to them, they urge
    in and close the door behind. After the instruction was given, the taxi
    driver drove off.

    Jessica looks behind; the reporters don’t seem to following them.

    Jessica: “Do you think they caught me and this stupid dress in picture?”

    Marianne nods and giggles: “I’m pretty sure they have”

    Jessica cover her face with her hand: “Oh no! It’s going to be in the
    news paper and all the world will know…how am I going to face all those
    people now?”

    [ November 03, 2002: Message edited by: chromia ]

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    petty good even though english isnt your 1 language <IMG SRC="smilies/clap.gif" border="0">but it was mainly thetitle tatattracted me

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    Hello chromia,

    Just would like to comment that the plot sounds pretty good, despite English isn't your first language <IMG SRC="smilies/clap.gif" border="0">

    I see that you have written a story based on the lives and occupation as a star themselves in real life. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Like Danielle, the title is very striking indeed <IMG SRC="smilies/naughty.gif" border="0">

    Keep up the good work <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

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    The story seem interesting so far, so please update soon. Not to put you down or anything so don't be mad at me but Anne Heung just doesn't look right with Louis Koo. It's just my opinion, I still like the story, though. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    [ November 03, 2002: Message edited by: jeh ]

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    are you finishing the story? i read int on winglin you didnt to seem to of finished it
    <IMG SRC="smilies/confused.gif" border="0">-danielle
    ps cant wait for an update

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    I love your story, could you please finish it? I can't wait to find out what happens. Please keep it updated.
    where art thou prince? i want to wake up!

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    Hi there,
    Thank you for reading my story. And sorry for taken so much time to post more chapters. I promise to post the complet story by the end of this week.
    PS. By the way, I am currently working on a new story and it seems doing pretty good.

    Bye for now.
    Chromia <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
    chapter 2

    Later on, the same day around 5pm, in Louis’s office
    Louis presses the intercom to he’s secretary: “Annie, before you leave for the day, can you get a hold to Marco, I want to see him”
    Annie: “No problem, I just saw him 2 minutes go, I’ll send him to you”
    Moment later, a nock at the door…
    Louis:” Come in”
    Marco: “You wanted to see me?”
    Louis waves him to sit down: “I wanted to know if you have found what I asked you for”
    Marco pull a chair and sat across Louis’s desk: “No, not yet, it seems that was a promotion item and was out of print over 2 years ago…I will some need more time to look for it”
    Louis: “Fine, just keep me in touch…I don’t care how much does it cost, I just want it!”
    Marco nods and gives Louis a magazine that he was holding: “I got an inner scope of tomorrow’s publication of this magazine…I thought you might want to see this”
    Louis’s eyes went wide as he sees the picture on the magazine, he angrily throws the magazine on he’s desk: “I don’t want this out! You hear me? Do what ever you can to stop this publication”
    Marco nodded and stood up: “I won’t disappoint you”
    Louis smiles at he’s friend: “I know you won’t”
    Marco walks to the door, he look over his shoulder and say: “Mom had made your favor dishes. She will get mad if you don’t show up for super”
    Louis smiled: “I’ll be there…I wouldn’t want an angry mother on my back would I”
    After Marco left, Louis pick up the magazine, a smiles on he’s face.
    Louis said to himself: “Well Miss, you own me a favor”
    *****************************************
    In Jessica & Marianne’s apartment the next morning 7 am in the morning, Julian is with them. Jessica called him 5h30 this morning. Even Julian and Jessica is good friends, he wasn’t in a very good mood when she calls him that early in the morning and pulls him out of bed.
    Jessica: “Are you sure?”
    Julian sighed: “For the 5th and last time Jessica, yes I am sure”
    Jessica was puzzled, why haven’t they published it out? What games are they playing?
    This just worries her ever more, it’s not like them, they never miss a chance to publish a star’s news, especially when the stars loose face like this.
    Marianne yawning: “Don’t worry it that much…let’s go to bed”
    Jessica: “That’s easy for you to say…you’re not the one that got caught”
    Julian with his eyes close: “Marianne’s right…don’t let this go over you…we’ll deal with it when time comes”
    Jessica nods, not like if she has any other choice.
    Julian yawns and stood up: “I’m leaving, I’ll come to pick you girl tomorrow night at 7pm for the ball”
    Jessica/ Marianne” “Ok,”
    Jessica walks Julian to the door: “Thanks for coming so early”
    Julian jokes: “That’s ok, but the next time you decided to call me that early in the morning, make sure it’s not before another 10 years or so ok?
    Jessica laughs and closes the door behind him.
    *****************************************
    The next day at the ball
    Julian, Jessica and Marianne arrived late at the ball. Julian’s car broke down and they all arrived in cab, they were quite a shame to arrive in cab while everyone else was in limousine. Good thing the reporter were all went inside when they arrived and they manage to sneak in without being seen by the reporters.
    Marianne: “Wow! There are so many people in here”
    Reporters came to them and took some pictures. They created quite a commotion, reporters were gathering around them as they were surprised that the main male lead of the film didn’t come with the main female lead, instead he came with Jessica, the support cast.
    Meanwhile…
    Annie and Louis were chatting with some friend.
    Annie’s friend point out at the reporter: “Julian has arrived”
    Annie: “Looks like he came with Jessica”
    A third friend: “Do you think they are dating? Cause they seem to be together all the time”
    Louis looks over and spots Julian an arm around Jessica’s, reporters taking the pictures.
    Annie saw them too: “Maybe they are…they do look cute together”
    Louis didn’t know why, but he doesn’t like seeing them so close together.
    Some reporter asked Anne to joint them in the picture, she and Louis headed toward them. Louis was glancing at Jessica and she notices it. She turns her back on him, completely ignores him, still not forgiving him for stepping on her key chain and breaks it.
    Julian greeted them: “Anne, you look gorgeous tonight”
    Anne smiled sweetly: “Thanks, you look good yourself”
    Jessica gives a peek at Louis over her shoulder and blush and as she notice he was still staring at her she quickly turns her head away.
    ***************************************
    Later on TVB heads (this ball is held by TVB and they are all TVB stars) send Julian and Anne on the dance track as the first couple to dance. They made it like that because they were main cast in the series and wanted to make more publicity out of this ball. While Jessica was watching them, Louis stepped next to her; she ignores him like if she doesn’t know him.
    Louis bends down and whispered in her ears: “I see you are still mad”
    Jessica stepped away from him and rubs her ears, giving him a nasty looks.
    Louis smiled: “At lease I thought you would be grateful after all”
    Jessica raises an eyebrow: “Grateful Of what? for breaking my key chain and insulting me with our money?”
    Louis smiles was replace by a frowns: “It was an accident”
    Jessica pouted her lips: “Not even a sorry afterward”
    Louis rolls he’s eye, what a stubborn girl she is he thought. He took out an envelope from inside of he’s jacket and shove it into Jessica’s hand.
    Jessica grin at him: “What is it? More money”
    Louis looked annoyed: “This belongs to you”
    Jessica give him a speciously looks and opens the envelope, she took out some photos. She immediately recognized them and quickly put them back in the envelope, and looks around if someone else have saw them.
    Jessica hesitating: “So..you stopped the publication?”
    Louis nodded, a smile pop up in the corner of he’s month and he crosses he’s arms on he’s chest like if he was waiting for something.
    Louis: “Grateful now?”
    Jessica: “Just even”
    Louis all smiles: “Care for a dance?”
    Jessica looks at he’s foot, the one she stepped on 2 days ago: “I said *even*, we are not friend….beside are you sure you can dance with that foot?
    Louis laughs out softly: “Stubborn”
    Jessica protested: “Hey…don’t say that playboy”
    Louis frowned, all smile vanished from he’s face: “Don’t call me that again” and he walked off, leaving a puzzled Jessica behind.
    Jessica: “What’s with him?”
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    Great chapter <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">Please update more, I can't wait. By the way, I see that you're working on a new story. Can't wait until you post it up.

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    I'm glad you like the chapter Jeh. Here is another one. I will post some more tomorrow.

    chapter 3
    A few weeks past and the film *a family matter* was finally being aired for the first time in Hong Kong. The rating was very good,
    the first week rating was in the top 10 list and it was rated #1 in the new TV series by the end of the second week. It was a huge success for everyone.

    This was Jessica’s first films and she had becomes very fast well known. She quickly gains a lot of fans and fame. Everyone wants her in their movie. When the series A Family matter ended airing. Some people was disappointed of the ending, they think that Jessica should have end up with Julian instead of Anne. Fans want to see them together as a couple in real life.
    ***********************************
    Louis was in he’s limousine and was heading back home; he just got off the plane. Marco came to pick him up at the airport. Louis had spend the last few weeks at Canada for a business trip, he was happy to be back in Hong Kong after all this time, it’s not that he didn’t like Canada; in fact he likes it very much there. He’s thinking of buying a house there some day.

    Louis: “What’s new lately?”

    Marco was sitting in a cross Louis in the limousine: “What do you mean, Business or girls?”

    Louis gives him a sharp looks: “You know perfectly what I mean”

    Marco laughs at Louis; he pulls out a magazine and gives it to Louis: “You might want to read this”

    On the cover in big were Annie and Hei and it was marked in big that Annie was having an affair with Hei.

    Marco search for any reaction from Louis, there was none: “Aren’t you mad?”
    Louis rise and eyebrow: “Is there a reason to be?”

    Marco feels uneasy about this: “I thought you and Annie were going out?”
    Louis gives him an ironic smile but he didn’t answer him, Louis doesn’t seem to care much of the new, he continued to flips on the pages.
    He suddenly tumbles over one page that seems caught he’s attention.

    *READING*
    Jessica & Julian were spotted yet again in a restaurant and were dinning. They seem very close. Rumors said that they are dating secretly after the filming of A family matter, and are planning to get marry soon.

    Louis closes the magazine and stares outside, deep in his thought. He’s mood just dropped below zero.

    ******************************************
    A few days later

    Julian holding on Jessica’s hand in his, he hesitates a little before saying: “Uh…Jessica, would you be by my side when I need you?”

    Jessica smiles sweetly at him: “Of cause I will”
    Julian was surprised of the fast answer: “You will?” he was very happy.

    Jessica: “Sure! That’s what friends are for right”

    Julian mouth drops, she didn’t get it, he tried to get to her another way, he clears he’s throw: “uhm…that’s not what I meant”

    Jessica asked softly: “And what did you meant?”

    Julian rubs he’s chin…wonder how is he going to say the word, he looks strait into Jessica’s eyes: “I mean by your side all the time…and loving you…be my girlfriend”

    Jessica didn’t say anything; she was secretly happy, that he finally said the word that she has long waited for.

    Julian was feeling uneasy of her silence: “Jessica?…will you be my girlfriend?”

    Jessica smiles at him and put her arms around Julian’s neck, and whispered in he’s ears: “YES”

    Hei yelled: “CUT!!!! Ok good tape…that will be all for today”

    Jessica yawned: “Boy, I’m so tire. I had a hard time to keep myself from yawning”

    Julian teases her: “Am I such a bad partner that you feel bore?”

    Jessica tease back: “Well..if you ask me…YES” and she laughs out loud as she sees he’s face.

    ”WHAT” he grin at her.

    Jessica stuck her tong out at him and runs away; she peek over her shoulders at Julian. But that was a BIG mistake, she ran blankly strait ahead and trash into a man and would have fallen down hard on the ground if it wasn’t for the strong hands grab around her waist to prevent her from falling. Smiling, she look up at her savor, slowly her eyes went up and up till they meet he’s.
    Jessica’s mouth made a perfect O and her eyes went wide as she recognized him. He was frowning; he doesn’t seem to be in good mood.

    Jessica tried to release herself from him: “Oh, it’s you…sorry for bumping on you”

    Louis still holding her not at all in a hurry of releasing.: “Watch where you going the next time” he was still frowning.

    Jessica frowns back at him: “I said sorry” putting her 2 hands on Louis’s chest, she tried to push him away, to make him let go of her, but no use instead of letting her go , he tighten he’s grips and pull her even closer. Their faces were very close almost nose to nose…too close for Jessica taste. She turns her head sideway so she doesn’t have to face him. She looked around her; everyone seems to be busy on there own business and doesn’t seem to notice her distress. No help from them for sure Jessica thought. Where did Julian go, weren’t he chasing after her?

    Louis whispered: “What are you looking for. Help maybe?” there were laughter in his voice.

    Jessica didn’t answer him: “You can let go now”

    Louis smile of he’s advantage: “Why such a rush? Didn’t you miss me so much that you literally throw yourself in my arms?”

    Jessica blushes; it would be a lie if she says she hasn’t thought of him in the pass week. But she’ll be damned if she tells him. She grin at him: “In your dream playboy”

    Louis immediately let go of her: “I’ve already told you not to call me like that”

    Jessica was yet again surprised of he’s reaction, but she recovers fast and says with an innocently mockery: “Call you what, Playboy, You are one aren’t you?”

    Louis stares at her severely: “Mock all you want, but you have to pays for it”

    Jessica laughing: “Uh?” But before she could react, Louis give her a kiss on her lips.

    Jessica froze for a sec: “Hey” she rubs her lips and made a disgusted face. "Yurk!"

    Louis look satisfied, a smile of on he’s face: “That should shut your big mouth for a while ” He let go of her and he walks off.

    Jessica stares at his back while he walks off, imagining her throwing poisonous arrow at him. “I’ll get you for that…playboy”

    Louis immediately he’s look over he’s shoulder with a threatening expression on he’s face: “What did you just said, do you need another lesson? I have free time tonight you know”

    Jessica was outraged and yells at him: “I said JERK!!” her face turns red as she know that was not what she just said, but she didn’t had the courage to tell him the truth, she knows if she say that word again, god know what he’ll do to embarrasses her.
    A smiles pop up in the corner’s Louis mouth, he had heard what she said before, he just wanted to test her courage. He was in much better mood after this encounter with that little tiger Jessica, she is so much fun! He walks off whistling, leaving behind him a frustrated Jessica who stuck her tongue at his back.
    *****************************************
    Marianne slams the door of her apartment. She was in very bad mood today. It was a very long day at the studio and she was being yell at all day long, Her mood worst when Jackie called her earlier saying he can’t attend the TVB annual stars award with her tonight, not like she would win anything, she was going just for Jessica.

    **Flashback**
    Jackie: “I’m sorry honey…but we are on an important case and I can’t leave while everyone is working hard.”

    Marianne who was just been yell at by the director was in bad mood enough and gets her frustration on Jackie. She yells on the phone: “That alright, let your job be first! Your girl friend comes second”

    There was silence in the other ends; Jackie was way too surprised to say anything.

    Marianne continued: “we are dating for 2 years and it has been always like this. I had it” and she hangs up.

    **End of flashback**

    Marianne sighed.

    Jessica shouting from her room: “Marianne is that you?”

    Marianne grouching: “Yes, it’s just me, Marianne the insignificant”

    Jessica pops her head in the doorframe: “What’s the matter with you?”

    Mirianne pouted her lips: “Not my day at work…and Jackie called; he’s not coming with us tonight.

    Jessica: “NO?! He’s not?…What’s the matter Mirianne, You look so sad”

    Mirianne shook her head: “I don’t know what is happening with me and Jackie latterly. He always finds excuses and cancel our date…do you think he is tire of me?”

    Jessica come to her friend and wraps her arm around Mirianne’s shoulders: “Don’t be silly! I know he loves you very much, he is just busy at the police station that’s all…don’t let those stupid thought in you brainless head!”

    Mirianne looks at her friend with a surprised: “WHAT!!”

    Jessica laughs and runs in her room and slams the door behind her, still smiling.

    Mirianne runs after her: “Come out of there, you scary cat!”

    Jessica laughing: “Make me”

    Mirianne smiles evilly: “Ok, don’t come out than. If you wins an award tonight and ask why you are not present, I’ll say you are just not interested.” Miriam could hear Jessica’s laughing stopped short. And she laughs of her friend.

    A minute later, Jessica’s bedroom door open a crack, a hand pop out with a white hand clothe like a flag, waving.

    Mirianne laughs ever more, couldn’t stop.
    Jessica peek out and open the door widely, smiling: “At least, I make you laughs”
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    Guest star: Lisa

    At the award

    Jessica & Marianne were sitting in the front row; Anne and Julian were sat next to them.
    For the year 2003 award, Julian won the best actor award and Annie won the best actress award.

    They did not win the best couple award as they hoped. The best couple award went to Gallen Low and Flora Chen. Jessica was getting more nervous by the minutes. There was only 1 award left.

    Lisa: “And we have one last award to give away tonight. Please let’s welcome Mr Koo to present the award for us.

    On hearing that name, Jessica was surprise that they had actually invited Louis to present the award.

    Louis got on stage and stood next to Lisa.

    Marianne whispered: “I didn’t know he was here”

    Jessica rolls her eyes and whispered back: “I wish he wasn’t”

    Lisa: “The nomination for the new comer is…” she names a few names, and when it comes to name Jessica, the fans in the building started to whistled and yells for Jessica’s name.

    Louis took the card out of the envelope: “Uhmm..very interesting…who do you think it may be?”

    The crowds yells Jessica’s name.

    Louis shook he’s head with a disappointing look on his face: “I’m afraid to disappoint Jessica’s fans”

    There was a loud “disappointing OH” from the crowds.

    Louis winks at them and smiled: “The winner of the new comer award is a very stubborn person”

    The crowd laughs out loud.

    Louis continues with a big grin: “And the winner is…there was drumbeat in the back ground…JESSICA HSUAN!”

    The crowds started to screams and whistle
    like madness. The fans were very happy.

    Jessica got on stage, walk pass Louis and stood in between Louis and Lisa. Louis give her a smiles: “Congratulation Jessica” He gives her the trophy bend down to her and gives her kiss on her cheek. Jessica was froze in place, didn’t dare to move an inch. Louis bends to the other side and kissed on the other side of Jessica’s red cheek, she was holding her breath all the time, her heartbeats at 100ph. He almost burst out laughing, as he has never seen someone turn red so fast. He whispered near her ears: “Very soft” before he straitening himself and smiles like if nothing had happen.

    Jessica’s eyes went wide as she realized he was talking about her cheeks. She manages to keep a perfect smile on her face and keep on telling herself that she is an professional and she would be damned if she loose face in front of the crow. She ignores completely Louis and thanks the people that helped her and her fans. Her face was red as a tomato by the time she finish her speech; she feels the urge to rubs her cheeks, where Louis kissed her but of cause she didn’t do it in front of the crowds. After her speech, she walks off stage with dignity of a Queen. On her way down, she purposely stepped on Louis foot the same one she stepped a few weeks ago at the studio, no one could see it because Jessica’s long dress hided everything. She whispered to Louis so no one could hear her: “To wet” (she meant that he’s kiss was too wet) and give him a warning look. The smile never left Louis face, he didn’t even raise an eyebrow nor made a beep when she stepped on he’s once injured foot, acts like nothing had happen, smiles the way.

    Marianne sees there was something wrong with her friend and asked: “Are you ok?”

    Jessica angrily whispered: “I’ll be fine once I get my hand on him”

    Marianne: “What happen?…look at your face! So red…inhale or exhale, but don’t hold your breath like that or else you won’t stay red for long…you’ll turn blue”

    Jessica burst out: “That playboy…Oopsy!” she looks around, she couldn’t tell Marianne here “I’ll let you know at home”
    ************************************************** ******
    Later that night, at Jessica and Marianne’s apartment, sitting comfortably on the couch

    Marianne laughs out loud continually
    couldn’t stop laughing, it was too funny.

    Jessica was annoyed and regret that she have told her friend all about her meeting with Louis till now. She pick up a cushion and throw it at Marianne, it land it on her laughing face.

    Marianne smiling: “Oh my goodness, my tummy hurts of how much I laugh”

    Jessica grin: “haha very funny”
    Marianne looks innocently: “Yes it is funny…he said VERY SOFT!! OMG!!! And TO WET” she laughs again

    Jessica rolls her eyes: “Would you stop that”

    Marianne tried to calm down: “Sorry but can’t…haha.”

    At that moment the phone rings

    Jessica went to answer it since her friend was busy laughing, wondering who it could be this late. “Wei?”

    Jackie clearing his throat: “uh…Jessica? You are back for the award thing…how is Marianne?” he sounded very tire.

    Jessica peek at Marianne who was still laughing: “She is having fun laughing all by herself” She told him with a mocking tone of voice.

    Jackie was puzzled; he thinks she is mocking him: “Can you pass her on the phone?”

    Jessica sighed: “hold on a second, let me see if she’s not dead laughing.”

    she walks to her friend and shove the phone in her hand. “It’s for you”

    Marianne immediately stops laughing and answered the phone: “Hello, Marianne is currently sill mad at Jackie Lui and does not want to talk to him right now…and maybe for ever, if he want, he can leave a message after the beeps. If she is please she MIGHT call back.”

    Jackie sighed tired: “Honey? Please don’t be mad”

    Marianne: “Who is your honey? We have broke up remember?”

    Jackie protested: “I never agreed to broke up”

    Marianne pouted her lips: “I don’t need your approval to do so…by the way, don’t you have work to do? How come you have time for a chat?”

    Jackie’s voice sound very tire: “I can’t leave the station now, I’ll be staying here till tomorrow. But I will come to see you first thing I get out of here ok honey?”

    Marianne can tell he was very tire by the sound of he’s voice, she wasn’t that much mad at him anymore. She was more concern than any other thing.

    Jackie was worry of the silence: “Honey? Are you still there?”

    Marianne didn’t want to give him an easy life so she acts like if she was still piss off with him.” We’ll see about that” and she hang up, a smile on her face.
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    That’s all for chapter 4

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    Thanks for updating your story!!
    I enjoy all your chapters, it was worth the wait. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

    I love Louis and Jessica together, they're my favorite couple.
    where art thou prince? i want to wake up!

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    Guest star: Lisa

    At the award
    Jessica & Marianne were sitting in the front row; Anne and Julian were sat next to them.
    For the year 2003 award, Julian won the best actor award and Annie won the best actress award.
    They did not win the best couple award as they hoped. The best couple award went to Gallen Low and Flora Chen. Jessica was getting more nervous by the minutes. There was only 1 award left.

    Lisa: “And we have one last award to give away tonight. Please let’s welcome Mr Koo to present the award for us.

    On hearing that name, Jessica was surprise that they had actually invited Louis to present the award.

    Louis got on stage and stood next to Lisa.
    Marianne whispered: “I didn’t know he was here”
    Jessica rolls her eyes and whispered back: “I wish he wasn’t”

    Lisa: “The nomination for the new comer is…” she names a few names, and when it comes to name Jessica, the fans in the building started to whistled and yells for Jessica’s name.

    Louis took the card out of the envelope: “Uhmm..very interesting…who do you think it may be?”

    The crowds yells Jessica’s name.

    Louis shook he’s head with a disappointing look on his face: “I’m afraid to disappoint Jessica’s fans”

    There was a loud “disappointing OH” from the crowds.

    Louis winks at them and smiled: “The winner of the new comer award is a very stubborn person”

    The crowd laughs out loud.

    Louis continues with a big grin: “And the winner is…there was drumbeat in the back ground…JESSICA HSUAN!”

    The crowds started to screams and whistle like madness. The fans were very happy.

    Jessica got on stage, walk pass Louis and stood in between Louis and Lisa. Louis give her a smiles: “Congratulation Jessica” He gives her the trophy bend down to her and gives her kiss on her cheek. Jessica was froze in place, didn’t dare to move an inch. Louis bends to the other side and kissed on the other side of Jessica’s red cheek, she was holding her breath all the time, her heartbeats at 100ph. He almost burst out laughing, as he has never seen someone turn red so fast. He whispered near her ears: “Very soft” before he straitening himself and smiles like if nothing had happen.

    Jessica’s eyes went wide as she realized he was talking about her cheeks. She manages to keep a perfect smile on her face and keep on telling herself that she is an professional and she would be damned if she loose face in front of the crow. She ignores completely Louis and thanks the people that helped her and her fans. Her face was red as a tomato by the time she finish her speech; she feels the urge to rubs her cheeks, where Louis kissed her but of cause she didn’t do it in front of the crowds. After her speech, she walks off stage with dignity of a Queen. On her way down, she purposely stepped on Louis foot the same one she stepped a few weeks ago at the studio, no one could see it because Jessica’s long dress hided everything. She whispered to Louis so no one could hear her: “To wet” (she meant that he’s kiss was too wet) and give him a warning look. The smile never left Louis face, he didn’t even raise an eyebrow nor made a beep when she stepped on he’s once injured foot, acts like nothing had happen, smiles the way.

    Marianne sees there was something wrong with her friend and asked: “Are you ok?”

    Jessica angrily whispered: “I’ll be fine once I get my hand on him”

    Marianne: “What happen?…look at your face! So red…inhale or exhale, but don’t hold your breath like that or else you won’t stay red for long…you’ll turn blue”

    Jessica burst out: “That playboy…Oopsy!” she looks around, she couldn’t tell Marianne here “I’ll let you know at home”

    ************************************************** ******

    Later that night, at Jessica and Marianne’s apartment, sitting comfortably on the couch

    Marianne laughs out loud continually couldn’t stop laughing, it was too funny.

    Jessica was annoyed and regret that she have told her friend all about her meeting with Louis till now. She pick up a cushion and throw it at Marianne, it land it on her laughing face.

    Marianne smiling: “Oh my goodness, my tummy hurts of how much I laugh”

    Jessica grin: “haha very funny”

    Marianne looks innocently: “Yes it is funny…he said VERY SOFT!! OMG!!! And TO WET” she laughs again

    Jessica rolls her eyes: “Would you stop that”

    Marianne tried to calm down: “Sorry but can’t…haha.”

    At that moment the phone rings

    Jessica went to answer it since her friend was busy laughing, wondering who it could be this late. “Wei?”

    Jackie clearing his throat: “uh…Jessica? You are back for the award thing…how is Marianne?” he sounded very tire.

    Jessica peek at Marianne who was still laughing: “She is having fun laughing all by herself” She told him with a mocking tone of voice.

    Jackie was puzzled; he thinks she is mocking him: “Can you pass her on the phone?”

    Jessica sighed: “hold on a second, let me see if she’s not dead laughing.”

    she walks to her friend and shove the phone in her hand. “It’s for you”

    Marianne immediately stops laughing and answered the phone: “Hello, Marianne is currently sill mad at Jackie Lui and does not want to talk to him right now…and maybe for ever, if he want, he can leave a message after the beeps. If she is please she MIGHT call back.”

    Jackie sighed tired: “Honey? Please don’t be mad”

    Marianne: “Who is your honey? We have broke up remember?”

    Jackie protested: “I never agreed to broke up”

    Marianne pouted her lips: “I don’t need your approval to do so…by the way, don’t you have work to do? How come you have time for a chat?”

    Jackie’s voice sound very tire: “I can’t leave the station now, I’ll be staying here till tomorrow. But I will come to see you first thing I get out of here ok honey?”

    Marianne can tell he was very tire by the sound of he’s voice, she wasn’t that much mad at him anymore. She was more concern than any other thing.

    Jackie was worry of the silence: “Honey? Are you still there?”

    Marianne didn’t want to give him an easy life so she acts like if she was still piss off with him.” We’ll see about that” and she hang up, a smile on her face.
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    wow you're udapting really fast! can't wait to see what happens L & J together are really cute! it's really sad they didnt end up together in dif4 though <IMG SRC="smilies/frown.gif" border="0"> keep up the great work <IMG SRC="smilies/clap.gif" border="0"> danielle

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    I like that way that Louis teases Jessica and gets on her nerves. It reminds me of DIV4 because they didn't get along in the beginning. Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
    where art thou prince? i want to wake up!

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    update soon, the story is really good, not good it's great. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
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    KnOwLeDgE Iz PoWeR
    BuT CoMmOn SeNSe PrEvAiLz

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    S2 from tenshi (jen)

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    update soon please... you have chap 4 posted twice btw.

    Good work, I really like the story he,he,he,he...
    Spring Summer Autumn Winter.
    Pair ducks nest fly together.
    Clemencies. Summer life, feather winter white.
    Green meadow in spring, before the autumn bite.
    Watching the red gown.
    And none else, alone.

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    Hehe, because I saw Chromia hasn't updated since January the 29, the link for the rest of the story was posted on winglin...
    It's at this site: Hey PlayboyThe story is written up to chap. 9, then it stopped continuing.
    But by reading the comments, you can see Lolaw left a comment that said:
    ***lolaw -- 26 January 2003 at 4:31 p.m.
    Hi everyone! I am very glad that there are people still reading this story. This story was post way back (2 years ago) now. And I have forgent the password so I can't update anymore. Please go to http://www.geocities.com/chromia2/playboy3.html to see the rest of the chapters. THANKS ^_^ ***

    <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> I'm sorry if I offended Chromia in anyway. Hehe, and just to be on the safe side, sorry...
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    Thanks Danielle, I finished reading it! he,he,he.. simple, short and funny. Like it!!!

    To chromia, thanks for writing it, and please don't be upset to Danielle, she's just trying to help us finish reading it.

    I'll be waiting for the next one. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
    Spring Summer Autumn Winter.
    Pair ducks nest fly together.
    Clemencies. Summer life, feather winter white.
    Green meadow in spring, before the autumn bite.
    Watching the red gown.
    And none else, alone.

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    OMG! And there I thought she no longer continued this story. But it's great Danielle that you've informed us! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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    Finally, an ending. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

    Thanks Danielle for posting up the link. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
    where art thou prince? i want to wake up!

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