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    Andrea,

    Great to see that you're continuing with your story. Waiting to see what's going to happen to Li Qing. Hope that she'll be able to get away from Madame Flower.
    There's a friend that sticks closer than a brother.

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    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">Originally posted by eeyore:
    <STRONG>Andrea,

    How come Li Qing called out for Hai Lung instead of Levi? or is it just cause she knew HL martial art much better than Levi? but if you in danger would you call out for person you most intimate with without thinking to help you?

    He,he,he,he.. I wish the ending wil be the way I like it. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"></STRONG></font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

    Li Qing did that since she knew that Hai Lung had a better martial art skills. Or perhaps she thought: "I don't want Levi to be hurt by Madame Flower. Let Hai Lung help me, since I don't care if he got hurt!" <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Eeyore, care to tell me what kind of ending you like? <IMG SRC="smilies/naughty.gif" border="0">

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    I wish Li Qing will end up with Hai Lung. I always prefer people found their mate with same nation and background. he,he,he... Can't help it....
    Spring Summer Autumn Winter.
    Pair ducks nest fly together.
    Clemencies. Summer life, feather winter white.
    Green meadow in spring, before the autumn bite.
    Watching the red gown.
    And none else, alone.

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    Just then, a long sword stabbed at Madam Flower's back.

    Madam Flower heard the movement behind her back and swooshing sound, so she immediately turned around, sending her palms toward the new assailant instead.
    “Don’t” shouted Li Qing as she saw that it was Micha who attacked Madame Flower.

    Madam Flower's Thousand Flowers Palm was released with strong force and hit straight into Micha's chest. The next second, he fell on the ground. His sword made a clang sound as it fell from his hand and hit a rock.
    Madame Flower laughed so hard as she saw that the person who intended to help Li Qing was not a good kungfu fighter and that the man could easily defeated by her.

    She rushed toward Micha, no longer care of her own safety. She propped Micha up and tried to transfer her inner power to Micha, but her energy was not strong enough to counter Madam Flower's deadly palm.

    “Micha,…I’m sorry!” cried Li Qing. “You should not sacrifice your life to save me…!”

    Micha smiled as heard Li Qing’s word. He grapped Li Qing’s hand and hold her hand firmly.

    “As long as I can see you alive, then I’ll be happy!” said Micha with low voice.

    “You should not …die for me,” Li Qing sobbed. She felt guilty that because of her Micha had to loose his life.

    “You know…Yacov and I are best friends since we were kids,” said Micha still holding Li Qing’s hands.
    Li Qing nodded her head as she ofter heard from Levi and Micha how their relationship was more likely brothers than just friends.

    “We always share a lot of things together…. Since we were kids until now we always face a lot of things together and share a lot of things together,” said Micha again. “But the only matter that both of us don’t want to share…is you!”

    Li Qing cried as she heard Micha’s word. It’s now clear that Micha sacrificed his life to save her life because he loved her. That made Li Qing felt more guilty.

    “Levi and I…love the same woman..and she is..you!” Micha smiled as he said that.

    “Come on..don’t cry like that! I hate to see female’s tears!” said Micha still smiled although his breath ragged.

    “Hey Li Qing, will you do me a favor, before die?” asked Micha.

    “I’ll do anything to you! Tell me what it is,” said Li Qing. “No matter how hard it is I will do it for you!”

    “It’s not a big deal….just…..let me kiss you before I die!” said Micha grinned. Li Qing laughed in her cry as she heard that.

    “I know that someday you will marry Yacov….okay..I’ll let Yacov win. But let me be the first man who kiss you…what about that?” asked Micha.

    Madame Flower was still standing and watching the two people. She saw and heard all of the conversation. And she didn’t realize that her eyes became teary as she saw how Micha was willing to die to save the girl he loved.

    Li Qing smiled and nodded her head while her eyes were teary. She closed her eyes and put her lips closer to Micha’s lips. She felt Micha’s hand caressed her cheeks and his lips on her lips.

    Li Qing cried as she knew how much Micha loved her. She felt Micha’s lips kissing her lips and how Micha exhaled his last breath in her lap, while he’s kissing her.

    Li Qing laid Micha’s head slowly. Micha’s face looked like he was sleeping. His handsome face with his smiling face appeared on his eternal sleep.


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    Hi again!
    Aww, Michi risked his life for Li Qing, how heart wrenching! Very sweet though, good job! At least Michi died happy! <IMG SRC="smilies/crying.gif" border="0">
    I wonder if Madame Flower had something similar happen to her in the past.
    Update soon! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
    g2g now!
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    Thanks for reading Danielle

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    “Rest in peace, my friend. I swear I will take revenge for you,” said Li Qing. She turned her head and looked at Madame Flower with angry and hate eyes.

    “No need for you to keep me here. After I take his body back to his troupe, I will find you and settle this blood debt with you!” said Li Qing again.

    Madame Flower said nothing. She remained silent as she’s busy with her own mind.


    “Shu Huan, just leave me here! Go away…she only wants to kill me and not you!” cried the young woman waving her hand to tell the young man who tried to help her to go away.

    “Ying Ying, she treated you like this. Although she’s my fiancé, but I can’t let her do this to you!

    “Shu Huan, this blood debt is not your concern. You and Xiang Mei..she’s your fiancé. If you help me today, it will ruin your relationship with her. Just let me settle this case alone with her!” said the young woman insisted.

    “This time Xiang Mei is too much. Although your parents and her parents are enemies, but she’s not supposed to treat you like this!” said the young man again.

    Suddenly a shadow flashed and a young woman wearing fresh flower as hair decoration appeared in front of the two people.

    “Xiang Mei…. Please let Ying Ying go!” said the man again.

    “Shu Huan, are you in love with her that you want to protect her?” hissed the young woman.

    “Xiang Mei, even if she’s man I will not let you kill her. She’s innocent and I don’t want you to kill anyone for no reason! Leave her alone and forgive her!” said the man again.

    “Yang Shu Huan…who are you that you dare to instruct me?” hissed the woman angrily and she slapped the young man’s cheek. “I’m your fiancé, but you protect her and dare to against me!”

    “Xiang Mei, if you ever kill her…than our relationship shall be over! I don’t want to marry a cold blood killer like that,” said the young man with serious mimic.

    “Huh,” pouted the young woman. She knew that her fianceé loved her so much and she’s quite confident that her fiancé wouldn’t leave her no matter what.

    “I’m serious with what I said!” said the man again.

    “Try it if you dare!” said the young woman. Before she finished her word she already attacked the wounded girl who sat on the ground.

    “Xiang Mei! Don’t!” shouted the man as he saw his fiancé attaked the wounded girl.

    Too late. The girl was hit by Hoa Xiang Mei. The girl vomited blood from her small lips. The man ran to her and tried to save her life.

    “Shu Huan, come here! Let her go! If you still intend to help her…then you shall not see me again!” shouted Hoa Mey Xiang with loud voice. She felt angry and insulted as her lover tried to save her enemy.

    The man said nothing and just looked at Hoa Xiang Mei with angry eyes. He checked the wounded girl’s pulse and found out that she still could be able to be saved. He carried the girl and left his fiancé to save the girl.

    Aftersince, Hoa Xiang Mei, and her fiancé, Yang Shu Huan never met again.

    Hoa Xiang Mei became more and more brutal and cruel after Yang Shu Huan left her and marry the wounded girl, Lin Ying Ying. Actually Yang Shu Huan didn’t love Lin Ying Ying at all. Many years after he left Hoa Mey Xiang he decided to marry Lin Ying Ying who devoted her life to serve him as a master since he saved her life once.

    Madame Flower sighed as she remembered the event that occurred thirty years ago. Because of her ignorant, she lost her loved one. And because of it, her only daughter Hoa Li Hoa never had a father who gave her a name.

    Madame Flower was a cruel woman. Yet she’s a woman who had a feeling. Having seen how Micha sacrificed his life to save Yang Shu Huan’s daughter remind her of how she met Yang Shu Huan.; the only man she loved for the rest of her life.
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    that's how Li Qing's face is a little bit similar to Madame Flower's daughter's face

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    “Where is Li Qing and Micha?” asked Levi as the battle over. With the help of Hai Lung and Qi Lan and because only small amounts of bandit attacked, the Yutai could defeat the bandits easily. There’s no Yutai men killed that night, and only a few of them got wound.

    “I just notice it now!” said Hai Lung. He started to worry since the last time he saw Li Qing, the girl was fighting Madame Flower, the devil woman.

    “Listen..someone is coming,” said Levi as he heard a horse galloped towards the camping ground.

    “Li Qing..” said Hai Lung and Levi at the same time. They were surprised and could guess what happened as they saw Li Qing with teary eyes riding a horse carrying Micha’s body.

    “Brother…my brother!” cried Tavita as she saw Li Qing stepped up from the horse and carried Micha’s body.

    Li Qing laid Micha’s body on the ground and started to cry.

    Levi approached Micha’s body and check his heartbeat. He lowered his head and shed his tears as his best friend died.

    Tavita cried so hard mourning for her brother’s death. Some girls tried to calm her down but she still cried hysterically.

    “Tavita…I’m sorry… he died because of me!” said Li Qing with low voice. She tried not to cry, and she stood up and tried to walk to approach Tavita. Just two steps she walked, she got fainted.

    The desert wind blew harshly that nightfall. The sunset scenery and the snow made Li Qing stopped from her horse to enjoy the beautiful sunset.

    Suddenly she felt sad as she knew that from now on she wouldn’t be able to watch the sunset with Micha, one of her best Yutai friends.


    “Hey, what are you doing? Come…let’s go!” a male voice laughed and patted Li Qing’s shoulder. Li Qing turned her head as she recognized the voice.

    “Micha, is it…is it really…you?” asked Li Qing with disbelieved voice. She couldn’t believe what she just saw.

    “Off course it is me,” said Micha laughed.

    “Micha….,” said Li Qing and extended her hand to touch Micha’s hand. “Micha…I thought that you’re dead. You made me worry Micha!” said Li Qing almost cried because she’s happy and glad that Micha was not dead.

    “Silly girl!” said Micha and he caressed Li Qing’s hair.

    “Micha…please…don’t die…. You are a nice man and you deserve everything the best,” said Li Qing and she crossed her hands on Micha’s neck and hold him tight.

    “Li Qing, Li Qing…wake up!” said Levi shaking Li Qing’s shoulder. Li Qing had been unconscious for almost two hours.

    Li Qing opened her eyes and saw that it was Levi whom she had hugged, and not Micha. She was just dreaming.

    “Micha…he died on my lap! He died because of me!” cried Li Qing.

    Levi wiped Li Qing’s tears and soothed her. “Please don’t cry. If you sad and ill like this, Micha will be sad!” said Levi with low voice. Deep inside his heart he also felt the pain of losing his best friend.

    Li Qing said nothing. She attended the burial ceremony without saying anything. Tavita, who lost all of her family during her journey to China didn’t blame Li Qing at all, but Li Qing still shocked since Micha died on her lap.

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    “Elder Lo, so far we’ve never met any bandit from the Black Scorpion Sect or Huang brothers henchmen. Do you think that they can’t trace us, or they are planning strategies to catch us?” asked A Yung to Elder Lo.

    “I don’t know. I think that they won’t let us go easily. Just hope that Ma Wing Sun and Yu Siu Fung are fine, since they are the main target, and not us,” said Elder Lo.

    “Huh, that immoral woman!” pouted A Yung. “Honestly I won’t feel pity if Huang Man Siu catch her and punish her for her betrayal!”

    “Hey A Yung, what do you know? You’re still young and it is not good that you judge people like that!” said Elder Lo.

    “It is true that she is immoral woman. A virtue woman won’t left her legal husband like that,” replied A Yung with loud voice. He really disliked Yu Siu Fung since she was Huang Qi Lan’s mother.

    “I also disagree that she left Huang Man Siu like that. But I’m not totally blaming her!” said Elder Lo. “She was forced to marry Huang Man Siu. Huang Man Siu is a pervert man who loves pretty women and also pretty young men. I guess every woman will be depressed if she has to marry that kind of man!”

    “Haha….” Laughed A Yung. “I heard that Huang Man Siu often kidnapped handsome young men to fulfill his disgusting passion!” said A Yung remembering how Huang Man Li teased Wen Hai Lung and intended to kidnapped that young man as a gift for Huang Man Siu.

    “That’s right!” said Elder Lo.

    “You seems not really blaming Yu Siu Fung for her leaving her husband. But you also don’t really like her to be with Ma Wing Sun. Why is that Elder Lo?” asked A Man who was just listening all the time.

    “Yu Siu Fung and Ma Wing Sun were lovers when they were young. If only that Ma Wing Sun were single, then I don’t think that it is wrong if Yu Siu Fung left her pervert immoral husband to be together again with him. But Ma Wing Sun is married and has children also. That is the reason why I think that they are immoral,” said Elder Lo.
    “I agree with you Elder Lo!” said A Man.

    “Anyway, what will you do if you were Yu Siu Fung? Will you just accept your destiny and live with immoral pervert husband like that?” asked A Yung to Elder Lo.

    “If I were Yu Siu Fung, then I will leave my husband, take away my child, and I will live alone. I will not disturb Ma Wing Sun again, since he’s only part of the past. Ma Wing Sun has his own life with his wife and children. It is not good to disturb someone’s family!” said Elder Lo.

    “Agree!” said A Man with happy voice. He liked Elder Lo since that old beggar was a principle man yet very flexible.

    “I think that is the best solution! That will not make Yu Siu Fung immoral since she’s not leaving her husband because she run away with another man, but that will release her from her pervert immoral husband also!” said A Yung.

    “Ma Wing Sun’s wife, is the sister of Sie Hian Kiat, the leader of the Black Scorpion Sect,” sighed Elder Lo.

    “So what?” asked A Yung with nonchalant voice.

    “That means: Huang Man Siu and Sie Hian Kiat will work hand in hand to catch those couple and kill them to save their face!” said Elder Lo.
    “That serious?” asked A Man.

    “That serious!” replied a man wearing a blue gown. He seemed to have a high martial art skills that made Elder Lo, A Yung and A Man didn’t realize his coming.

    “Who are you?” said A Yung with his mouth wide open as he saw the man was very ugly. The man’s face looked more like a monkey than like a man. If not because of his good martial art skills, then probably A Yung already laughed so hard seeing that kind of face.

    Elder Lo surprised as he saw the newcomer.

    “What make one of the Five North Devils come to this place and want to talk with a humble beggar like me?” asked Elder Lo with careful voice. Elder Lo knew that Five North Devils were not easy to be handled, that’s why he didn’t want to get involve with this man if he didn’t have to.

    “Elder Lo, I’m sure you know why I come here to see you,” smiled the man with his ugly monkey face.

    “What is it? I don’t really get your point,” replied Elder Lo.

    “I’m sure you know that you are one of the people who should responsible for ruining the Full Moon Meeting in Huang Brothers headquarters two months ago!” said the man with serious voice.

    “Ah, yes.I remember that now. That meeting was intented to gather martial art fighters to work for the Jin Empire,” said Elder Lo. “That has nothing to do with you, huh?”

    “Mr. Wanyen wants to meet you. You have to go with me to meet him now!”

    “Ah, seems to me that now Five North Devils have become one of Wanyen Hao’s dogs! What a pity,” said Elder Lo shaking his head.

    “Who dare to insult Five North Devils?” a man’s voice appeared with four flash of bodies landed in front of Elder Lo, A Yung and A Man.

    “Elder Lo, you better come with us to meet Mr. Wanyen. Who knows that he will spare your dog soul,” said another man wearing yellow robes. His face was the same ugly as the first man.

    “My dog soul? Oh, you’re kidding. We are from Beggar Clan, is known by our Dog Beating stick style. If I have a dog soul, then it means dog eats dog. And that is impossible. Only those who challenge our Beggar Clan have dog souls, that’s why we use Dog Beating stick style to beat them!” said Elder Lo with funny voice.

    “No need to talk to him again. Attack!” said one of the men. At the same time, the five men attack Elder Lo with fast movement.

    The Five North Devils saw that A Man and A Yung, both of Wen Hai Lung's servants, didn't seem to have good martial skills, so they didn't pay much attention to those two.

    The Five North Devils formed a kind of formation to besiege their enemies, and Elder Lo who was the only one with good martial arts had to protect both A Yung and A man; therefore, he couldn't move so freely.

    Moreover, each of the Five North Devils used 5 different kinds of weapons aside from excellent lightness kungfu which made it more difficult for Elder Lo to defeat them.

    One North Devil stabbed forth his snake sword, while his pal chopped left and right with both of his flat sabers. At the same time, the third North Devil attacked Elder Lo from the back with his long staff, while the other two North Devils fought with Wen Hai Lung's two servants.

    Elder Lo leaped up to avoid all the weapons. He flipped in the air and kicked down at the one with the sword then quickly did a half somersault and kicked the other one with the sabers while his staff met the other North Devil's long staff with dragon head. Elder Lo moved agilely despite his age to use 'Dog Beating Stick' technique to counter the Five North Devils' strange kungfu.
    The two North Devils that were kicked reeled away for a minute then reattacked at Elder Lo furiously. Elder Lo ducked his head and rolled away as the dragon head staff came toward him. At that time, the North Devils' sword and sabers went forward. As a result, the three weapons clashed into one another and each was thrown away from the force.

    Although Elder Lo can protect himself from the three North Devils, he could hardly attack back and was unable to break away from their formation.

    Meanwhile, A Yung was trying to escape from the fourth North Devil's whip whereas A Man was defending himself against his opponent's short sword.

    "Got you!" The North Devil with the short sword exclaimed. Suddenly, A Man felt pain in his arm and immediately collapsed. The North Devil had just stabbed him and although could kill him did not bother to do. It was as if the Five North Devils only wanted to catch Elder Lo. A Man sat on the ground with bleeding arm and ragged breath. He wanted to get up and fight again but had no strength left.

    The man who just defeated A Man stared at A Man with a cunning eyes. “Young man, better for you not to interfere our business. I don’t want your soul. It is very easy for me to kill you now, but I don’t want to do it. So you better remain there or I will kill you right now!”said the man.

    A Man said nothing. Even if he forced himself to fight again, he already had no power. A Man sat and tried to bandage his bleeding arm when suddenly A Yung was hit and fell near him.

    “A Yung!” said A Man. A Yung was fainted.

    The two men who previously fought A Yung and A Man now joined the other three to fight Elder Lo. All five of them now surrounded Elder Lo and each brandished his special weapon to defeat Elder Lo.

    Earlier, Elder Lo could only manage a tie with the three North Devils. Now that two more joined in, he could hardly move an inch from one weapon before having to dodge the other. Five North Devils moved in unison, creating a net of weapons around their opponent. Everywhere that Elder Lo turned, he would encounter a weapon coming toward him. Elder Lo was getting tired and realized that it was only the matter of minutes before he would have to give up running around.

    Just then, his foot faltered, and the monkey face man thrust his sword toward Elder Lo's leg when out of nowhere, he was covered by a big sack.

    The monkey face man turned his body to avoid the sack, but it was too late for him. His body was now wrapped inside the sack and he couldn’t move.
    “Let me go!” shouted the monkey face man angrily. His brother tried to release him from the sack but it was not easy for them since now they were besieged by fifteen beggars. The odds suddenly turned to favor Elder Lo. Now with fifteen other beggars, the Five North Devils' formation soon broke, and Elder Lo was helped out with his friend.

    “Elder Lo, are you okay?” asked one of the beggar. He had a round cute face with a very fat body.

    “Brother Yan, lucky you come to help me. Those devils are not easy to be handled. Your sack is very incredible,” said Elder Lo thumb-up.

    “Hiya, my sack can only be used to catch dogs. Nothing special with my sack,” said the man shaking his head.

    “Are you the Incredible Sack Yan Chung Lau?” asked one of the Five North Devils.

    “No need to flatter me by calling me Incredible Sack Yan Chung Lau. Just call me Dog Catcher Yan Chung Lau,” said the man with his wide smile.

    The Five North Devils knew that now they couldn’t catch Elder Lo easily since now there’s Yan Chung Lau who helped Elder Lo.

    “Mr. Yan, we have nothing to do with Beggar Clan or with you. We just want to bring Elder Lo to meet our master. I hope that you will let me take Elder Lo with us,” said one of the Five North Devils with polite voice.

    “Hmm, what make you think that I will let my brother taken away to meet the Jin dog by rotten scoundrels like you?” asked Yan Chung Lau.

    “Then you should forgive our rudeness if you dare to interfere our business,” said the man again while he started to attack Yan Chung Lau. The other beggars who saw that Elder Lo and Elder Yan were attacked by the men started to help Elder Lo and Elder Yan.

    The Five North Devils who were now became Four North Devils, knew that they couldn’t match Elder Lo and Elder Yan.

    “Strategy number two!” shouted one of the Five North Devils. With that signal, all of the four men took something from their pocket and threw it to the beggars, Elder Lo and Elder Yan.

    It was gas and also secret weapons which were thrown from the four men.

    “Watch out!” said Elder Lo and Elder Yan.

    The beggars jumped and avoided the gas and the secret weapons. Just as the gas appeared, all of the Five North Devils were gone, including the one who was in the sack.

    “Hiya…my sack!” said Yan Chung Lau with a pity voice. “I should make another sack again if I still want to catch dogs!” said the man again with a funny smile.

    “Brother Yan, thank you so much for your help. If you didn’t come in time, probably I’ve already been caught by the devils!” said Elder Lo.

    “I got your message and I thought that you must be in danger. That’s why me and my men are protecting you from behind,” said Yan Chung Lau.

    “Your friends are wounded. It’s better that we go together from now on. More men are better than just three person!” said Yan Chung Lau.

    “Thanks a lot Brother Yan!” replied Elder with happy voice.

    “Anyway, where’s Guo Sing Li? I thought that he joined you?” asked Yan Chung Lau again.

    “He said that he needed to cure his wound and replenish his energy, so we split up and will meet in Bamboo Hills Restaurant next two weeks,” explained Elder Lo.


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    to be continued

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    Hi Andrea!

    Took me a while to refresh my memory and follow the story line. I'm glad that you are still continuing your story. Appreciate your long posting. Keep it up.
    I wonder what happen to Madame Flower.
    There's a friend that sticks closer than a brother.

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    Thanks for still reading Bubeng I always finish everything that I ever started,...so no matter what I have to finish my story. It is just because I'm very busy lately that I can't update it faster

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    It is said that one has to finish what he/she had started That's why I have to finish this story...although actually I have a very little time to update it

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    Wen Hai Lung was taking a walk that winter night when suddenly he saw Tavita was sitting alone in front of a bonfire. Hai Lung took pity on that girl since now the girl had no family after her brother’s death.
    “Tavita, you haven’t slept yet!” said Hai Lung approaching Tavita and sat near the girl.

    “I could’t sleep!” said Tavita with low voice.

    “I know that you feel sad about your brother. But please…don’t make yourself like this… Look at you…you have dark circle on your eyes since you don’t have enough sleep,” said Hai Lung with a very patient voice.

    “Brother Hai Lung, Micha was the only family I had…and now I’m all alone in this new country. I’m scared!” said Tavita.

    “You’re not alone…. You have friends like Hannah, Levi, me, Li Qing, and other people who can help you,” said Hai Lung trying to comfort Tavita.

    “I’m all alone now. Hannah has Levi to take care of her. What about me? I have no one now!” cried Tavita.

    “Tavita, please don’t cry,” said Hai Lung. Tavita didn’t stop her crying and seemed that she really felt frustrated.

    “Rabbi Levi and Brother Levi said they will take care of you as soon as we arrive in Bianjing. Nothing to worry, okay?” said Hai Lung.

    “My brother shouldn’t die like that!” said Tavita with angry teary eyes.

    “Tavita, life and death can not be determined by anyone. It is Heaven’s will that your brother had to pass away,” said Hai Lung tried to soothe her.

    ”Tavita, please don’t be angry to Li Qing because of it. She’s still shocked and sad because of it,” said Hai Lung worried that Tavita would angry and confronted Li Qing to release her anger.

    “No…I’m not angry with Li Qing. Micha had his own choice when he decided to help Li Qing. I just feel angry to that devil woman who killed my brother. May Hashem punish her and make her life miserable!” said Tavita.

    “That woman will have her own punishment. Just wait and see!” said Hai Lung smiled to Tavita.

    Tavita smiled back to Hai Lung and her big bright teary green eyes looked very lovely with her wet eyelashes.

    “Anyway…you’re not a good friend of mine!” said Tavita sulked.

    “Oh, why is that?” asked Hai Lung surprised. He didn’t do anything wrong to Tavita and couldn’t understand why Tavita said such thing.

    “Because you’re not worry about me… You’re worry that I will angry to Li Qing. You only care for her and not for me,” said Tavita again.

    “Silly girl!” laughed Hai Lung.
    “Off course I care for you,” said Hai Lung smiled.

    “Really?” asked Tavita again.

    “I’ve never lied to you!” said Hai Lung. “Look at you! You haven’t sleep these last few days. I can see dark circle around your eyes!”

    Tavita smiled as she heard Hai Lung’s answer and she laid her head on Hai Lung’s shoulder. Hai Lung surprised as he never thought that Tavita would do that. Somehow he knew and understood that Tavita needed someone to replace Micha’s position as her brother. Also Tavita was a frankly speaking girl and more opened compare to the Chinese girls.

    Meanwhile, Li Qing was sitting on her tent with an empty mind. She felt useless as she couldn’t avert Madame Flower from killing Micha, and until now she couldn’t solve her master’s riddle.

    “Li Qing, are you inside there?” asked Levi outside the tent.

    “Oh,…yes. I’m coming!” said Li Qing and she arose from her seat to meet Levi outside the tent.

    It was a Shabat night and Levi just had a prayer ceremony. Levi wore a white robe with his white stole. Li Qing astonished when she saw Levi’s handsome, smart and wise face. Li Qing couldn’t understand why Levi never looked so sad and always looked so peaceful, although she knew for sure that until now Levi was still very sad because of Micha’s death.

    “What can I do for you, Levi?” asked Li Qing.

    “I hope that I’m not disturbing you!” said Levi. “I’m looking for Tavita, is she here?”

    “No she’s not. I’m alone here and Tavita isn’t here since a few hours ago,” replied Li Qing.

    “What if we take a walk and look for Tavita?” asked Levi.

    “Okay,” smiled Li Qing. They walked slowly and enjoyed the moonlight.

    “Li Qing, you become very quiet lately, said Levi. He was a bit worry seeing Li Qing became very quiet and sad after Micha’s death.

    “I feel guilty to Micha! Everytime I close my eyes, I see him…..so close and so real,” sighed Li Qing. “If not because of me, Micha would still alive right now!”

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    Last edited by andrea7974; 12-29-03 at 07:14 AM.

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