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    danielle: hi! congratulations! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> you must be a very good player. you play the flute? cool! i wanted to learn flute but haven't got the time. mel has updated in winglin. and it's another great chapter, i tell you. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0"> check it out! <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
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    Eeyore: Welcome to the story! I hope you enjoy it and continue to leave me feedback. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    FanFan: Hi fanny! <IMG SRC="smilies/wave.gif" border="0"> Yeah, I will try to work Sean and Margie into the plot again, if possible. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

    Picket: Tell you the identity of the person in black? Let me think... No. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Go read chapter 10, you lazy bum! It will only take a few minutes! <IMG SRC="smilies/eh.gif" border="0">

    Danielle: Hi! Of course, I still remember you! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Welcome back and congratulations on your solo ensemble winning! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Click here to go to my story's winglin site. (This link is also the link in my signature.)

    Cherrie: Hi! Glad you like the latest chapter! Hold the rotten vegetables. I'll try to update weekly, if possible. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Tweety: I forgot to answer your question regarding how Chan Yuk Lin stays slender after having 5 children. Well, you see. She has been running, flying, and kicking villains during the last 25 years or so. That's her secret to eternal beauty. Heh...

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    CHAPTER 22 --- TWO TIGERS IN ONE CAVE

    Chapter 22 is currently being revised. Please check back for updates. If you wish to be notified about updates on this story or on my other story (Legendary Book - The Prequel), please go to Cloud Manor and choose the "follow blog" option. I also welcome comments, gentle nagging for quicker updates, etc. Thank you for reading.

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    lol chi chi is so funny! ok she's my new fav character after sui han of course..
    thanks cherrie! it was terrible though they ran out of medals so they said they would send it to you. <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0"> and how long is that? last year it took two months!!! and my friend li and i played bouree, its a really good song,actually- ok gotta shut up now. oh and i changed my icon because that calm and peaceful looking person (my old icon) is really not like me at all, i'm really kinda cuckoo and REALLY clumsy (i can't wait till i get to design my own icon, but i need 500! postings, and i got like 34 <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> i lost my old username so i had to start over- i know, big difference thats only like 20 more postings) <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> man my sis is right i have GOTTA stop being so talkative and i'm not even talking im TYPING!) <IMG SRC="smilies/disgust.gif" border="0"> i'm having a conversation with the computer now is it? gosh i really NEED that march break! <IMG SRC="smilies/drool.gif" border="0"> no school...

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    Wow, you continue to amaze me with your writing. I love your descriptions of the storm in the forest! Chi Chi is so hilarious! I can't wait to find out who the two that found Sui Han are.

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    So is this Ka Wing guy going to be paired with Chi Chi? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> And the hero who saved Wai Sun and Tin Lok sounds like....me... <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Hurry up and reveal me!

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    Yay!!!! A story about Gilbert Lam and Annie Man. Thank you so much, Melanie. I adore this couple so much ever since I watched Heroine of the Yang I and II. They had so much chemistry in there and i was praying that they would end up together. I believe that i woudl have fly to Hong Kong and chop up the producer' s house if they had not end up with each other in part II. A little bit obsessive, i know.
    Anyway, after much ranting, <IMG SRC="smilies/rant.gif" border="0"> I am very much looking forward to read your fanfic. I have a break ahead of me so very much looking forward to burning my eyes out. Will be back to comment on your undoubtedly fabulous story, only have a chance to read your first chapter, which was truly wonderul.
    Well, i am off on my journey of reading. <IMG SRC="smilies/read.gif" border="0">
    Will be back,
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    Though I am old with wandering
    Through hollow lands and hilly lands,
    I will find out where she has gone,
    And kiss her lips and take her hands;
    And walk among long dappled grass,
    And pluck till time and times are done,
    The silver apples of the moon,
    The golden apples of the sun.
    William Butler Yeats

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    Hey Melaine... this is Wuji Gege from wuxiaworld... u got a good story happening here... keep it up...
    Looking into the future.... memories of the past, what will become of life??

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    To all my readers: I have discovered that writing in novel format allows the story to flow more smoothly. Hence, I will be revising my story from script format to novel format, so please be patient while this process is underway. No changes to storyline will be made. Hopefully, you all will find the novel form of this story a more pleasurable read. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Danielle: Ha! I never realized you could talk so much. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> You were really quiet and reserved when you first commented on my story many months ago.

    Tu Vi: Wow. I can't help but be flattered that such an accomplished wuxia fanfic writer is reading this story. Thank you. <IMG SRC="smilies/bow.gif" border="0"> I am also a crazy Annie and Gilbert fan. Believe me, I am many times more obsessive than you. You should see me talking to myself in the Gilbert Lam thread. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Anyway, I look forward to hearing from you again. Please do not hesitate to offer me suggestions on how to improve my story. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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    Wuji Gege: Have you succeeded in cornering Jin Yong outside his mansion yet? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Honestly, you have great stalker potential! Hahahaha! <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0">

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    Lol... the last time i tried travelling to Toorak (the most expensive suburb in melbourne, and also where Jin Yong lives), the road was blocked for construction reasons!!! gr... well... i'll try next week!
    Looking into the future.... memories of the past, what will become of life??

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    I will not be discussing the characters’ backgrounds, but only my analysis of the characters. Here it is in a nutshell:

    The first thing about Melanie’s fan fiction, Legendary Book of Sun-Moon Swordplay, which amazed me, was her writing. Her word choice made it easier for the readers to visualize the story. This story has everything, comedy, love, good versus evil, pride, suspense, all the elements for a great prose. When I first read this, I thought the dialogue format was awkward, but after reading several chapters, I became accustomed to it. I prefer the novel type format because it bestows the prose professionalism, but this is a fan fiction. Melanie's writing is so good that a novel type format would definitely display her true potential. Nevertheless, the story is very well planned out and organized, a truly laudable work. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0"> Keep up the good work, sweetie. <IMG SRC="smilies/kiss.gif" border="0">

    Lam Tak Wah- This character is a typical “xia” in wuxia stories. A character that holds superb honor and pride, one that is out for just and good. Lam Tak Wah serves a similar role as Kwok Jing in ROCH. In ROCH, Kwok Jing is wiser and a settled man. Both men are lovely husbands and fathers, whom calmness and maturity shine out, showing their wisdom. As evidenced, Lam Tak Wah is willing to give it all for love. Like most wuxia heroes, he does not want powers; avarice will only lead to a tragedy.

    Wong Seung- This character has only appeared a few times. A powerful, noble king, who let go of the woman he loved the most because they weren’t meant to be. It’s interesting how Wong Seung will fit into the story and how Wai Sun and Wong Sueng would react to the truth of their relationship.

    Chan Kwai Fei- A faithful wife and a loving mother. She epitomizes what an ancient woman, and modern, should be. She possesses the elegance of a lady and amplifies the importance of listening to the heart through her departure with Lam Tak Wah. I especially love that part when she and Tak Wah were in a boat; the antics between the two were very heartwarming, revealing their everlasting love.

    Wai Sun- There is no swordsman that can suppress love. The quote, “A man who fears nothing loves nothing,” proven to be true. Wai Sun holds a very serious, mature personality before Sui Han came into his life. He becomes paranoid and worries lovingly about her. To me, Wai Sun is a little cocky of his prowess. He doesn’t give me the impression of a “xia”. A “true” swordsman is confident and calm but never gloats.

    Sui Han- This character is a mystery. I am very eager to find out about her past. I got the impression she is a fragile, powerless lady, but she is definitely tough. She must have gone through many hardships in the past to react such a way like she did when seeing the master about to kill the baby. I think she’s really fragile inside, all girls are. <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0"> They want to be comforted and loved and cared for.

    Lam Mun Lung- At first, I thought he may be a deceiving person. He acted very suspicious when Sui Han was brought home by Wai Sun and he was cold to Wu Hung Yee, the servant. But he is not like I thought; he gives out a stalwart appearance, a hero.

    Lam Gong Yu- She’s one of my favorite characters. Like her mother, she is elegant. The only thing she lacks is a sense of humor. I feel like there is something hidden about her. Her calmness spreads tranquility into the atmosphere while spawning her a sad, lonely look. We see her later on became very afraid when she couldn’t see. I think Ekin’s character, or Ekin himself, would make a good couple with Gong Yu. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

    Lam Chi Chi- A zany, joyous, and fun girl. Chi Chi is the comic relief of the story, and may I say a very cute one. Her role is essential to the story, one that causes conflicts. She brings innocence and a happy atmosphere into the story. She needs a secure, easygoing hero to be by her side, a powerful martial artist. Cheng Ka Wing ‘s, Sui Han’s big brother, encounter with Chi Chi was very cute. He seems to be the caring kind, but Chi Chi needs also intelligence, coolness, and maturity along with that.

    Koo Tin Lok- Jealousy and anger bubble in him, showing characteristics of a tragic character. Even though he acts in haste, he possesses qualities of a true martial artist. He wasn’t willing to lose and he put matters aside when he and Wai Sun encounter trouble. It would be interesting if Wai Sun and him can become friends, but that is out of the question due to his stubbornness.

    Koo Ho Man- The pervert. This guy would do anything to achieve his goal. He’s one to hate. Enough said.

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    Wow! I see I have load to catch up <IMG SRC="smilies/sigh.gif" border="0">

    Now where are you Mel? We need you on our Robin fanfic.

    You wanna see Melanie and the handsome Chan Wai Sun get together, don't you? <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0">

    Now get ur butts to the forum now!!!! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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    WOW, SwisheR, such analysis <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">. Tweety is very impressed <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
    Just wondering, did Mel tricked you into writing her a review like she did with me? <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

    I guess you read more into the story and characters than I did. You managed to put into words what I was feeling toward the characters. Good job! Maybe you should be a movie/story critic. Just a thought. Hehehehe.

    <font size="1">[ April 02, 2003: Message edited by: tweety365 ]</font>

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    <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> hehe. i guess you can say my sister and i are real blabbermouths, of the family. the REST of my family are quiet and reserve. i guess, i'm commenting longer because i'm used to this typing thing. anyway update soon! i want to know what happens next <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> -bya <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1"> </font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>
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    Nice character analysis Swisher I'm impressed but I'm sure Mel is more <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

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    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">Originally posted by tweety365:
    <STRONG>WOW, SwisheR, such analysis <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">. Tweety is very impressed <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
    Just wondering, did Mel tricked you into writing her a review like she did with me? <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">

    I guess you read more into the story and characters than I did. You managed to put into words what I was feeling toward the characters. Good job! Maybe you should be a movie/story critic. Just a thought. Hehehehe.

    &lt;font size="1"&gt;[ April 02, 2003: Message edited by: tweety365 ]&lt;/font&gt;</STRONG></font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

    I promised I would grant 10 wishes for her. This was her second wish. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">Originally posted by SwisheR:
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    I promised I would grant 10 wishes for her. This was her second wish. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"></STRONG></font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

    10 wishes! Wow, how'd she con you into that?.... hmmmmm, only on the 2nd, huh? Well, good luck on the remaining 8. You'll probably need it. <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0">

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    Tweety, I didn't con him into anything. <IMG SRC="smilies/eh.gif" border="0"> Gee, you make me sound like the wicked witch of the west who has cast a spell on him. <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> Swisher gave me those wishes of his own free will. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> By the way, it's back up to 10 wishes, because he said he won't count the other 2 wishes that were used up. <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0">

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    I might as well give you infinite wishes. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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