A Legacy of Secrets

[Suet Seung]

Big_Bad_Jon: Hi! Thanks for reading! My fanfic as of now has twelve chapters. Now I have a question for you...what does "wkd" mean? <IMG SRC="smilies/noidea.gif" border="0">

[Sioben]

Hi

don't think that I'm a fanatic fan who 's followering you everywhere <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> But I just cross over this picture and wanted to share it with you and the rest of the Legacy fan

Here's a pic of 'mom' and 'dad' [ when they were 'young']
This give us the feelings on how Much 'Yip Chi Tin' loved his wife 'Chor Wai Sam' <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

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[ August 22, 2002: Message edited by: Sioben ]

[Suet Seung]

Sioben: Hehehh <IMG SRC="smilies/hug.gif" border="0">. Thanks.

Everyone-

Here's my new visual character list. I just redid the whole list and with MYF's help I was able to get the pictures smaller. <IMG SRC="smilies/hug.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/touched.gif" border="0">
http://www.angelfire.com/pa2/storybook/alos/Char.html

[Big_Bad_Jon]

White Krane: Wkd means Wicked. He.. I use it when I'm texting.

Don't you think it will be cool if TVB made a real series out of it?

[ August 23, 2002: Message edited by: Big_Bad_Jon ]

[Sioben]

That will be cool....BUT TVB have to use the original cast! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

[Kara]

Good job with the last chapter White Krane. The fighting scene was well-done and the fighting atmopshere was well created. Your character's are developing really nicely- but i think Louis's character is confusing- is he submissive and stupid person like Kwok Jing was at the beginning of LOCH or a completely different character whom is only submissive to Wai Ming. I think you need to make it clearer-btw i mean no offence
Your story is excellent so far. Have you stopped posting at winglin? I was waiting for your story to be updated there, so i could comment- but i didn't see it. That's why i'm commenting here now.

[Acidbeastonfire]

Wow....good job Whitecrane.
The developments of the characters are very solid. well done.

Fighting scenes could use a tad more fancy descriptions.

Eagerly anticipating the next chapter!

[Suet Seung]

.:Chapter 13: Being Followed:.

Ada Choi as Sui Fa (Yip Wai Ying)
Derek Kwok as Bak Suet Lung
Kristy Yeung as Bak Yim Lin
Noel Leung as Yip Wai Ming
Jackie Lui as Lam Ting Yip

Moonlight reflected upon the soft ripples of the lake, mirroring the image of a young man in his mid-twenties. He stood perfectly still; eyes closed in an expression of perfect harmony, absorbing the evening atmosphere. Not a sound was made except for the humming of crickets in the night. Like a vulture watching it's prey, Sui Fa perched upon a high tree branch, watching him with interest. With a slight sound of a twig breaking in a short distance, the peacefulness was shattered as followers of the White Fox Clan advanced towards the young man and kneeled behind him. The young man sighed and turned to face the followers before him. He did not speak a word, but his eyes stared sternly at the row of men clad in white, filling them with fear.

“Young Master, I mean Clan leader! It was all Miss Bak’s idea; we only followed the orders!” The man, who led the group of followers, blurted out quickly while keeping his eyes lowered, in fear of his young master’s cold stare.

The young man closed his eyes for a moment then opened them again.

“There is no use hiding, come out!” He said in a strong firm voice.

His strong voice made Sui Fa’s heart suddenly beat faster as she thought he had found her out. She moved slightly getting ready to come out of her hiding until Bak Yim Lin came somersaulting over the row of followers, throwing a flying dagger into the young man’s direction. Even so, the young man kept himself composed and caught the flying dagger between his two fingers. Bak Yim Lin still would not surrender, charged forth and tried her poison palm. Rapidly, he caught her wrist and twisted her arm around her back before she could counterattack.

“Suet Lung, you’re no fun! I had those dogs where I wanted them and you had to interrupt my plans!”

Before Bak Suet Lung continued reprimanding his cousin, he dismissed the followers saying he’d postpone their punishment until later. He watched them disappear into the darkness of the forest and returned his gaze on Yim Lin. He then gently released his grip on her arm.

“Now, who is interrupting whose plan? If you had not attacked the people in mo lam earlier than planned I would’ve had more of sect leaders caught and serving us! You had to ruin my plans!”

“Humph! What harm can they do to us? If you saw the fight earlier, we were winning up until...” Yim Lin stopped mid-sentence as if she realized her fault.

Sui Fa who’ve been sitting leisurely on the tree branch above watching the two cousins bicker, smiled as she vaguely remembered she had argued with someone in the past.

‘A sibling? No, Sui Fa you have no family! How can you have a sister or brother?’ thought Sui Fa. ‘But if I did have any family where are they now?’ she continued to ponder.

Below the two cousins had just ended their arguments and parted ways. Bak Suet Lung was the first to leave while Bak Yim Lin stayed behind, cursing and kicking the tree trunk before she left. Waiting patiently until Bak Yim Lin had left her sight, Sui Fa leaped down from the tree and proceeded with following Bak Suet Lung.

Sui Fa started down the path leaving Wah San (Flower Mountain) but there was no sign of Bak Suet Lung.

“He couldn’t have gone that for in such a short time. Where is he?” She pondered.

She then heard a faint noise from behind her and cautiously turned around to see it was he.

In the meantime, a man clad in brown and wearing a straw hat was carrying Yip Wai Ming over his shoulder running speedily down the mountain. She tried asking the man to release her but the man ignored her. When they reached a good distance from Wah San, he gently put her down unto the ground and unsealed her pressure points.

As soon as Wai Ming was freed she swiftly took her sword and charged forth to attack the man. Taken by surprise that she knew martial arts, the man backed away while blocking her moves.

“Wai Ming! It’s me,” the man finally spoke up while unveiling his face.

“Ting Yip gor? Why did you carry me off like that? Now I missed the great fight between the heroes of jiang wu and the White Fox Clan.” She pouted.

“I was only keeping you from danger. What were you doing there anyhow? I thought you were looking for your sister.”

“I am looking for her.”

“Really? I’d think you’ve become distracted from your goals by the looks of things.”

“By the look of things? Have you been following me all this time?” Wai Ming started to look at Lam Ting Yip suspiciously. Wai Ming had sensed someone following her and tried losing him or her many times yet after a while they would always find her again.

“No, I haven’t been following you,” he replied and looked at a different direction.

Wai Ming went around and faced him. “Don’t lie. How were you able to come so quickly to Wah San and knew that I was there?”

She had caught him red handed and wasn’t going to let him get away with lying. She hated it when people lied to her---especially to her face. Ting Yip knew her well and did not want to continue hiding the truth.

“All right! So I did follow you but it was only to protect you. But I guess that is unnecessary too. Who taught you how to fight?” Ting Yip asked as he folded his arms, expecting an answer.

‘Great! I’d rather he asked me anything else. I dislike having to lie to someone I care about,’ she cringed as she thought of a good answer to keep her secret and tell the truth.

“Wai Ming, that’s okay if you don’t want to answer. Right now I’m a little hungry but you know what? You’re not as light as you look,” he said as he slowly ran down the path.

“Ah! Ting Yip gor! You’re so mean!”

The two of them chased each other like a pair like little kids while another couple stood staring wordlessly eye to eye. ‘This is not good. You should’ve been more careful!’ Sui Fa scolded herself.

Bak Suet Lung stared at the girl with interest. Her clothes and hairstyle was nothing fancy like his cousin, Yim Lin. However, there was something in her eyes and determined expression that amused him. It was clear she had received great training for very few people could follow him without detection. His lips curved into a smile as he took a few more steps closer.

“Who are you? Why have you been following me? “ He asked in a smooth tone unlike the rough tone he had used earlier with his cousin and clan.

“Young Master, my name is Sui Fa. Your mother and uncle have asked me to follow behind you, in case you needed any help,” She said, holding her sword up in a respectful manner.

“Very well...Since it is my mother‘s wish, I‘ll allow you to follow me. However, you mustn't follow behind me like that anymore. Instead you should travel along with me,” He said in a gentle tone.

Sui Fa nodded. He then carried on down the path leaving Wah San with Sui Fa following closely behind. Sui Fa was quite surprise that he did not use the same tone as before on her. She had known for quite some time that the Young clan leader of the White Fox Clan was not a simple man. He was a man no one would dare to cross yet he was also someone who judged fairly. Do good things for him, he will return the favor. Yet angry him and never be heard again.

‘So Uncle wants to have me watched huh?...‘ Suet Lung thought cautiously.

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Author's Comments: Sorry for the late update. School had just started for me these pass 2-3 weeks, so I'm sorry if I'm updating even slower than usual. Please leave some comments and elaborate on what you liked or did not like. Anyways, I hope this chapter wasn't boring. I just needed to properly introduce Derek Kwok's character Bak Suet Lung.

Thanks Kara, Acidfireonbeast for your wonderful comments on the previous chapter. I know my ancient fanfic isn't as great as others posted here. But I'm trying the best I can to improve my writing. As for fight scenes, I'm not very good in that area as well so I guess I'll need to study more fighting scenes. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> Thanks, Kara I will work on making Tin Hung's character more clearly defined. But hehe you can't blame the guy for acting a bit submissive or silly around girls...theres not many women on Mt. Mo Dong... <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0">

Terms to know:

Ting Yip gor means Brother Ting Yip--it's sorta like a honorific which is used in respect..not neccessary that the person is your brother...but just for a male whose older than you.

Jiang Wu - Is another word for Pugilistic/martial arts world (Giang Ho in Vietnamese).

P.S. I've also updated the Visual Character list: http://www.angelfire.com/pa2/storybook/alos/Char.html

[andrea7974]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">I know my ancient fanfic isn't as great as others posted here. But I'm trying the best I can to improve my writing. </font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

who said your ancient fanfic is not good? Besides, you improve a lot! <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

[Sioben]

hihihihiihihihi <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0"> hehehehehe

Derek sound cool <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">


One thing I'll like to ask you!
you write somewhere in chapter 5

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1">From now on, Sui Fa will be the personal maid of Suet Lung (Derek Kwok) and myself </font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>

I mean If Ada is Derek's personal maid....shouldn't he know her face? - know who she is?? - in your last chapter Derek ask Ada who she is!

Anyway cool that you have updated!!!
And Derek <IMG SRC="smilies/love.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/love.gif" border="0">

[MYF]

Good chapter krane <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

I like the development of the relationship between Wai Ming and Lam Ting Yip - these two characters seem to play of each other very well.

I agree with Sioben, Mr Bak (white <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> ) seems to be a pretty cool customer.

Update soon! or is it Love Reincarnation next? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

[ September 11, 2002: Message edited by: MYF ]

[Suet Seung]

Sioben:
The reason Suet Lung doesn't know who Sui Fa is because when she is not with Suet Lung's mother, she is out practicing her sword skills with Bak Ying Pui( Suet Lung's uncle). So they only meet on rare occasions and the place where the White Fox Clan is, is very big and also because Suet Lung is the clan leader he can not always know the faces of all his followers and maids. Hehehe

I'm glad you and MYF like Suet Lung...he is sorta cool huh? <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

[Sioben]

<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><table border="0" width="80%" bgcolor="#dcdcdc" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="1"><tr><td width="100%"><table border="0" width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="10" bgcolor="#DCDCDC"><tr><td width="100%" bgcolor="#eeeeee"><font size="1"> Sioben:
The reason Suet Lung doesn't know who Sui Fa is because when she is not with Suet Lung's mother, she is out practicing her sword skills with Bak Ying Pui( Suet Lung's uncle). So they only meet on rare occasions and the place where the White Fox Clan is, is very big and also because Suet Lung is the clan leader he can not always know the faces of all his followers and maids. Hehehe </font></td></tr></table></td></tr></table></BLOCKQUOTE>
ahhhh.... <IMG SRC="smilies/thinkingof.gif" border="0"> I see.........

yeah Derek is cool <IMG SRC="smilies/luv.gif" border="0"> [ I sure don't hope that he's the evil guy in this story.........I mean the really really EVIL guy!!! ]

[ September 11, 2002: Message edited by: Sioben ]

[Suet Seung]

Hi Readers and silent readers and anyone who accidently stumbles into this thread...

I'm a slow typer. Life and school is time consuming so I'm sorry to update so slow compared to the greater writers in this forum. I will try to find time to update on Columbus day. I have to work on another essay for class then the next Saturday and Sunday I have some important events to attend to. So Sorry for the extreme slow update.

Btw, Do you think my fanfic title isn't appealing enough? Ok well..I'll be hitting the books and essay writing thats due later this week. <IMG SRC="smilies/eh.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/nerd.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/dizzy.gif" border="0">

[Kara]

Whitekrane, i know you've been busy so you haven't had time to update this fanfic of yours. However, i've found time to start reading all the fanfiction i like again and i still find your fanfiction appealing. Don't worry, your fanfiction can only be good if you think it is!

Keep up the good work!

[Southern Crane]

Yep! I'm more of a silent reader now, but I come by often just to see if ALOS's been updated. I have to know what happens next! <IMG SRC="smilies/drool.gif" border="0">

Focus on school first, Sis, but just know that fans are anxious to read you work. <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0">

[danielle]

not meaning to bug u, but are u finishing the story? I just fnished your story,(after 2 hrs. non-stop) and I have to say it was a great story! <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0"> Please update more often! <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">

[danielle]

Sorry I just read t comment you had, and I realized you had a lot of stuff to do besides fan fictions... <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> Just ignore my other comment, i tried to change it but it was too late. (dontyou hate it when that happens) Keep up with the great work! <IMG SRC="smilies/thumbsup.gif" border="0">

[danielle]

I'm soo sorry I hvet bug you wthmy annoyin comments, but I liked to say I liked the poster you made... <IMG SRC="smilies/blush.gif" border="0"> G2G -later days-

[jeh]

Hi, I read your story and I got to say it's really good. I like all of your characters. I would like to know more about Suet Lung and Yip Wai Ying aka Sui Fa. So please update as fast as you can. <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">