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    Episode 1

    Opening Song: Tian Shang Ren Jian by Leo Ku

    The story and final installment of the 'HZGG series' begins during the 30 year reign of Qian Long. The Qing Dynasty is at conflict with the kingdom of Burma and Yong Qi and Er Kang are sent to lead the soldiers into battle. Along side them is Xiao Jian, who knows the region much more than YQ and EK.

    Scouts are sent ahead into the plains to await for any noise or movements. Elephants are heard, and the scouts look up a tad bit too late to see a battalion of Burmese soldiers and dozens of elephants lead by the Burmese king and prince Mu Sha. The scouts are all crushed and strangled to death, and the battle begins.

    The Qing forces starts rushing into battle as well, and soon Er Kang and Mu Sha fight each other. Yong Qi and the Burmese King battles each other. After lots of bloodshed and deaths, Mu Sha's men starts shooting arrows, which pierces EK's armor. More arrows come, and he falls. Xiao Jian yells his name...mean while YQ is kicked around by the elephants and in an instant he looks to see an elephant standing on its hind legs, ready to crush him...

    .............

    **The story then flashes back to three years earlier, during the time of New Year**

    The entire palace is full of joy and laughter, everyone ready to enjoy the spectacular dances and fireworks to bring about happiness. Qian Long and rest of his court are all seated, and the celebration begins. Dancers dressed in red starts moving towards the performance area with a pair of lanterns each. In the middle is Xiao Yan Zi, who introduces herself (to the audience) and quickly moves to the spectators. She presents a lantern to Qian Long and introduces him (to the audience as well). she does this for Zi Wei, Ching Er, Lao Fuo Ye, Huang Hua, Ling Fei, YQ, EK and Xiao Jian. Soon everyone starts hanging all the laterns up to bring good luck, etc.

    A few days later, Qian Long, Ling Fei, XYZ and Yong Qi, and many servants, etc walk through the garden, and QL brings up the subject of books molding. Ling Fei is assigned the task of having all the books to be placed in the sun. XYZ volunteers to take care of business, and YQ tries stopping her. saying that it is a big task. He in turn is stopped by QL who says that XYZ must not be protected, and it is good for her to have responsibility. YQ volunteers to help as well and bring everyone too.

    Later on, XYZ, YQ, Zi Wei, Er Kang, Ching Er, and Xiao Jian are all present to sunbathe the books. XYZ leaves the sorting out to the more knowledgeable people and decides to use kung fu to throw all the books down to them. Well, the others start flying up to catch all the books and soon everyone is having a good time. EK mentions to YQ that its still unbelievable how they completed the task within a day, when it usually takes several days before.

    Everyone takes a break, and someone says that the difficult part is actually organizing all the books again, as XYZ just threw everything down at the same time. Just then thunder clap is heard. Everyone is dumbfounded, looking up at the sky....Soon storm clouds begin to appear and begins raining instantly. Everyone frantically tries to get all the books, but the rain is pouring very hard. In a mere instant, XYZ rushes to carry a stack of books in but slips and falls badly on her back, and knocks all the tables of books down as well. YQ and the others rush to her, and she tells them that she's afraid she won't be able to make it, having such a terrible stomach ache.

    Back at YQ and XYZ's residence, Lao Fuo Ye is furious about XYZ's carelessness and fault for not being more proper...especially when she's pregnant.

    Ling Fei, Zi Wei, and Ching Er comes out to deliver the news that XYZ had a miscarriage. Huang Hua is also there and tries to ease LFY by saying that they're still young and will still have more children later on.

    LFY says it's strange why they need an outsider (Xiao Jian) to attend to palace duties. Xiao Jian is also furious, but Er Kang intervenes saying that he was given special approvals by the Emperor, and that he's very worry about XYZ as well. LFY doesn't care, and then leaves with Ching Er. Moments later, Huang Hua also leaves.

    The scene then shifts to YQ and XYZ. He asks why she didn't let him or anyone else know about good news. She says that she didn't know anything about it, being as how she never had a mother to learn from...

    .............................

    **Three years later**

    It is now the time of Qian Long's 30th year as emperor and they are all watching a special Mongol performance to commerorate the event. He asks why XYZ isn't present and YQ replies that she's not feeling well. LFY takes it that she has good news and asks YQ. Huang Hua says that Zi Wei should know since they are sisters, but ZW replies that it is better to ask YQ. He pretends to be oblivious to the question and Ling Fei asks again. He then laughs and tells them to enjoy the show instead.

    Er Kang leads the Mongol performers into the 'arena' and the men starts flipping over the a row of eight camels or so.
    Soon a much smaller figure (named Zi Yan Xiao) is to perform. The king and everyone laughs saying that it would be impossible for the such a tiny person to successful jump over all the camels.

    ZYX attempts the jump but instead starts sliding towards the camel....

    Ending Song: Zi Jun Bie Hou by Chen Si Si

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    *blinks*

    Confused.

    It starts on the battlefield, then flashes back to three yrs ago, then flashes forward back to the year of the battle?
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    i think it's like the other 2 where they like foreshadow or like give a preview of wat's gonna happen then go into the story..like in hzgg 1 they showed zw gettin' beat up after seein' xyz (i think) and in hzgg 2 when they showed zw and xyz headin' off for execution
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    yep, the sequence of events starts like the previous two.

    The remainder of the series occurs during QL's 30 year reign.

    more ep summaries later on...i have to rewatch it

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    thanks chungieboy..hehe..i guess i'll just read ur episode guides and see if i should watch it then
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    Episode 2

    XYZ tries doing flips over a dozen or so camels, lined side by side, but instead of doing it gracefully, she is standing on the humps of two camels..then they start to move away from each other, making her do the split. She manages to pull them together, and successful reach the ground. QL and the others are laughing very hard and practically have tears in their eyes. XYZ then tries the stunt again, but this time she slides under the camels' bellies. As she gets up to bow, she bumps into one of the camels, making it lick her.

    This is when it gets all crazy. The camels start chasing after XYZ, trying to eat her clothes, and she is forced to climb up a pole. They follow and try knocking the pole over. She then runs up the pole to where the spectators are, and is pulled up by YQ. Everyone realizes it is XYZ and QL gives her a good luck necklace for the laughter she brought.

    The royal court then move along to a garden rest area where QL tells XYZ to give him a good luck poem. YQ and ZW tries to intervene, but is stopped by QL. XYZ makes a poem for QL and each person in turn create a good luck verse for someone else, etc. Just as they are done, two men bring a good luck charm to present to QL, who is overjoy with the good omens, ect and gives it to ZW.

    .................................................. .

    Later that evening, the celebration continues with everyone watching fireworks by the pond. QL asks YQ and EK about the plans for traveling throughout the provinces. With everything ready and in order, QL is excited. However, LFY says she will not go as she is too old. QL then says that if she doesn't go, he won't go either (what a baby!). She then agrees to go. Next Ling Fei declines as well because Xiao Ar Ge is still young....this makes QL mad and asks "Isn't there momos (mamas), nannies, enuchs, etc in the palace?" and so Ling Fei agrees to go. Huang Hua is asked to go as well but she declines saying that it is better to have someone watch over the palac.e....QL is even more upset.
    XYZ then says that she and ZW need to go too, as they are his hands..QL agrees, but ZW doesn't want to because Don Yi is still young. Seeing QL upset, EK says that ZW will of course go since XYZ is going....

    As everyone moves to the performance area to watch more entertainment, XYZ stops Ching Er from going w/ Lao Fuo Ye. She tells her that Xiao Jian is now waiting for her over in the flower garden....

    As the EK and the others go guard, Ching Er and XJ gets the chance to talk to each other. Seeing as how it is becoming more and more difficult for them to see each other, XJ suggests that they have two ways to go about their relationship. One is asking LFY to wed CE to XJ. They both agree that that is near impossible, and XJ opts for the second choice. That while they are traveling, for the two of them to runaway to Dali. Ching Er is reluctant to go in fear of hurting LFY. She tells him to wait for a better opportunity, but he says he HAS been waiting for 4 years already...XJ believes she places the old woman higher than him in her heart, and is mad. CE is saddened, and XJ tells her not to worry..

    XYZ and YQ sees LFY, HH and Ling Fei walking towards the flower garden, and tries to stop them. XYZ looks up at a tree and say that someone is up there. She flies up but is frighten by a parrot, and falls. YQ tries to catch her, but is not fast enough (*its weird how he couldn't catch her, since YQ in HZGG I and II, rescued XYZ so many times)...almost scared to death by XYZ, Lao Fuo Ye brings up the issue of XYZ not being responsible. She is having plans to find another wife for YQ....

    ............................................
    *At YQ/XYZ's place*

    XYZ is mad that there are plans for YQ to wed someone else, but he assures her she is the only one. She is still worry however, and tries to recite more poems. She eventually succeeds in learning one, but YQ says that they have an even more important homework....XYZ is shocked "WHAT HOMEWORK??!!" and YQ whispers in her ears and they start kissing on the bed

    ............................................

    *At the home of Er Kang's family*

    Don Yi (ZW and EK's son) is playing with his grandma, as his grandpa watches. He then tells her to carry him. They're extremely proud of this grandchild of their....

    ............................................

    *At Huang Hua's place*

    Yung Mama is trying to persuade HH to go on the trip, seeing how the emperor was nice enough to invite her along. She is worry about causing more faults and thinks it is better if she is back here. But YMM finally gets her to agree to go. HH is going because she wants the people to see that QL has a complete family, with no problems. ....

    ..........................................

    *Back at EK's place*

    ZW ane EK returns home and EK starts talking to his parents about QL being upset since ZW didn't want to go.. The parents say that she should go since it shows that QL loves her very much, etc.

    Back in their room, EK starts joking w/ ZW saying that she doesn't care about anyone else except Don Yi. She says that he is vulnerable and doesn't have much, whereas Huang A Ma has so many things and ppl to attend to his every need. EK says that he believes he is no longer her most important person. she puts DY on the bed and starts cuddling with him, etc

    .............................................

    The next day, QL followed by LFY and everyone else begins to board the wagons. QL decides to sit w/ LFY and tell ZW and XYZ to come sit there as well. Just then XYZ runs off to get some stuff she forgot....

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    Episode 3

    XYZ runs back to her room to get some forgotten items....Yong Qi runs after her to tell her everyone is waiting. She then finds her whip under the pillow and places it in her sleeve. YQ asks, "That's what you're looking for??!!"..XYZ said "something else..."...and she then takes out a box, and inside is the Golden Badge, that was given to her by QL in HZGG II. She tells YQ that something might happen while on their trip, and this will save some lives... YQ says that its the first day of the trip and she's thinking of unlucky things already...so they both hush together.

    Running back to the front of the gateway, XYZ boards the carriage with Zi Wei, Ching Er, Lao Fuo Ye, and Huang A Ma....

    The trip then begins, with the palace guards, maids, everyone wishing "Longitivity" for everyone going....

    ...............................................

    During the beginning of the trip-- Inside the carriage, Lao Fuo Ye comments on how refreshing it is to be outside, and ZW says that if they went at a different time, the trees/flowers would be much more beautiful. Ching Er looks out the window and Xiao Jian looks back..their eyes meet. He then gallops to the other side. XYZ and ZW then tell Ching Er to switch seats with them. She doensn't want to and LFY asks what is the matter with her today. She says ask XYZ, whose reply was looking for butterflies or bees (something like that )

    ................................................

    Time passes and suddenly we see a group of men galloping towards the group. Everyone is now dressed in non-palace clothing...Er Kang, his father, YQ and XJ are surprised and alert...wondering what's going on. EK goes over to the group of men, who are now kneeling, and ask what they wanted...The lead man by the name of Fang Sik Chau says they have enter their province, and they are here to welcome the emperor and Lao Fuo Ye, etc. EK then brings him to see QL, and the journey begins again..

    As they enter the town, the commoners are all kneeling and bowing their heads in respect to QL, LFY and the royal court. Everyone is happy and waving, when a man runs out towards the middle of the road, and towards the emperor, shouting "Huang Shan, I something important to give you"... he is holding a piece of paper as well.

    Everyone is startled again, not knowing what to expect, when Fang Sik Chau motions to his men to stop the messenger. As the guy run towards the king, his head is cut off by FSC's men. Everyone is horrified, and XYZ shouts how dare FSC do this in front of LFY. and without hearing what the man had to say first.

    She then takes her whip and hits two of the men. Again, FSC hints for his men to take care of her. Soon YQ, EK and XJ are fighting with his men. The paper that the messenger was holding was almost destroyed by one of them, but Er Kang intervenes in time. Seeing that their cover might be blown, FSC tells his men to stop and beg forgiveness. He apologizes to QL for not better training his men, and would kill them..but QL says "that's one killing too many already, and in front of LFY"..... he then tells them to continue the procession.

    ..............................................

    Later that night, QL looks at the paper but finds it blank. Everyone is befuddled, and ZW says to try two methods, heating it or soaking it in water, and the text might show. They try both but still nothing.

    ZW then says she'll read the paper to them---"forgot what she said exactly" but everyone is impress with her ability to give the paper a meaning.

    As everyone is dismissed, QL stops ZW and tells her that he knows she doesn't want to be here, but his main purpose on this trip was to bring them to visit her mother's grave, especially since they have been through so much together.... ZW hugs Huang A Ma...

    .................................................. .....

    The next day, everyone w/ the exception of LFY, Huang Hua, and Ling Fei are at Zi Wei's mom's grave, paying their respect. With them are FSC and his men. as well as a dozen monks blessing the spirit as well. QL speaks about the past, and that he believes that death cannot end their love for each other. and that he has brought ZW back to see her. ZW then tells her mother that she is now extremely content, having a husband and a son now. Er Kang then introduces himself to her, and thanks her for giving him such a wonderful woman. He vows to love ZW for all eternity.

    Xiao Jian, Ching Er, YQ, and XYZ are touched by his words. and XYZ asks YQ why he never said those things to her. He then says that he will love her for all eternity as well, but she isn't touched, saying he only knows to copy EK.

    One of the monks then tells QL that it isn't fair how they're offering food to the dead, when the living aren't even getting enough to eat. Fang Sik Chau tells his men to stop the monk, but is intervened by XYZ and the others. QL then tells the monks to speak up and not be afraid. They are notified that a large number of the people have been at the mountainside digging up rocks and roots to eat. QL then asks them about the money that was distributed to each province last year, and they are clueless. He then questions FSC, who says that he didn't bring up the problem because he didn't want to alarm them.

    QL decides to check it out for himself, and tells EK's dad to take FSC back to their residence, and look after LFY.

    .................................................. ..........

    At the mountainside, QL and the others are shocked by what they see----people digging up uneateable and potentially toxic things to eat. XYZ stops a woman from digging for more, and tosses her basket. She then tells them that they no longer have money or food, and this is the last resort.

    Ching Er and Xiao Jian unload several bags and containers of steamed rolls, etc and tells everyone to come get some. As people start stampeding over, a woman with a baby falls. and she bites her finger to give her child her blood. Even more people run out of nowhere and everyone is fighting for the food.

    ..........................................

    It is lunch time, and LFY asks where EK and YQ are. and she is told they are doing some business. Ling Fei pours some soup for QL but he rejects it, saying he doesn't feel well. LFY tells Yung Mama to get the "Tai Yi" but is stopped by QL. He then says everything is ok, and picks up his bowl. Meanwhile ZW and XYZ aren't eating as well. LFY questions them and thinks that ZW misses her mom. Ling Fei then tells XYZ to eat as well. But then XYZ says she really can't eat, and that she isn't feeling well like Huang A Ma. QL then wants Fang Sik Chau to be brought to him.

    Just then EK and YQ bring back a whole bunch of ppl from another part of town, and all are starving as well. They are allowed in, and then seeing all the food, runs over and invades the table.

    Everyone is taken back by this, and QL tells LFY the truth. XYZ then runs out to catch FSC. and after fighting and defeating FSC and his men, they are brought back to be punished......
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    Haha, I THOUGHT Zi Yan Xiao was XYZ...

    *smiles sarcastically*

    I wonder why? I'm sure it WASN'T obvious, right?

    o.O SECOND episode and there's ALREADY plans for MARRIAGE?!

    How many episodes does this have?!
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    40 eps.... yeah the story moves pretty quickly...

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    Dude...must be action packed...

    *blinks*

    Had some other questions to ask, but forgot them...

    Haha, I do believe XYZ is getting smarter...not believing YQ because she knew he was copying EK...lol.
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    yes one of the things I really liked about this XYZ is her fighting skill. she can definitely kick major ***

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    That's good.

    I felt bad about her inability to in the other ones.

    LOL...so she's so much better that YQ can't catch her?

    Tsk tsk...
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    Episode 4

    Fang Sik Chau is captured and brought back to await punishment. He is then beheaded in front of the public. YQ and the others are there to witness the execution as well. After his head is axed off, the crowd cheers.

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    The following day, all of them began traveling again. In the carriage, LFY talks about how bad this FSC was and asks XYZ if there are any other people in her family besides her brother. XYZ tells her that only the two of them are left, and that her parents were killed by bad people. Surprised to hear about this, both QL and LFY questions more about the incident, but before XYZ says anymore, Zi Wei grasps her hand and hints for her to not say anything more. ZW then says that they shouldn't be bothered talking about the unhappy past and changes the focus on where they would be staying for the next couple of nights.

    QL then says at his good friend's home. LFY then begins to brighten up thinking about the four girls **(names to be added later)

    Its night time and everyone has arrived at the Chan residence. the servants are pouring tea for the guests and the four Chan daughters make their entrance...and greets LFY. She looks happily at all four of them but most of all at how Zhi Hua has grown up. LFY remarks that they have raised such high quality girls that even bests the ge ges. The parents are humbled and say that their girls cannot be compared with the ge ges. QL then says true that Ching Er and Zi Wei are excellent and educated.

    LFY then tells ZH to come to her side, and asks her age. Zhi Hua is 17 and all three of her sisters are betrothed already. And LFY decides to make her marriage her personal task, and asks if her parents would mind. They say that having LFY's interest in Zhi Hua's future is their fortune. They then ask where she intended for ZH to be married off. She says that an educated girl like her deserves to be the wife of a prince. Everyone is surprised by this... XYZ is now worried and angry.

    .................................................. ...

    Going back to their room, XYZ becomes really upset and yells at YQ saying that he can go marry Zhi Hua, since she's leaving. YQ then gets mad as well saying that she is being ridiculous and that she haven't improved whatsoever eversince they met. Zi Wei and Er Kang tries intervening but doesn't help much. XYZ then runs off, and they send YQ after her. He slowly follows her.

    XYZ is now at the pond area and YQ tries to make up with her. She tells him how worry she is and he reassures her nothing will happen as she's the only one for him.

    Back in the room, ZW and EK discusses what LFY has her mind set on doing. EK tells ZW that no one can protect XYZ since she has no babies yet...and that is the way of the palace. ZW then questions whether or not he would marry someone else if she didn't have Don Yi. EK laughs and her hug, adding to his earlier promise to love her always.

    .......................................

    Later that night, XYZ pulls Ching Er to go see her brother. Ching Er is reluctant to go as they might get in trouble. as the two runs, they bump into Huang Hua, Chan fu yan, and her daughters....Huang Hua asks is LFY sleeping, and XYZ says that they wanted to check out the flower garden. Chan fu yan says that they too are just heading over there and it would be best for the two ge ges to accompany them, as they have lanterns. Ching Er then agrees to go with them and so XYZ too had to go..... leaving Xiao Jian waiting the whole night.

    He then starts to playing his flute "Ni Shi Feng Er.." while Ching Er listens back in the room.

    ............................................

    The next day, everyone visits the "Lion Garden" and XYZ says she doesn't see any lions at all. LFY agrees, but Zhi Hua then explains that many of the rock formations in the garden resemble lions in various ways, etc. XYZ still says a rock is a rock...

    QL then tells the youngsters to make up some poetry for all to hear. EK makes up a phrase, and ZW completes it. Ching Er then follows w/ Xiao Jian. YQ then makes one up and encourages XYZ to answer, but Zhi Hua answers first. YQ then tries again, but XYZ still doesn't get it. she then makes a "Pei Pei" rhyme and everyone is impressed (except LFY)

    .................................................

    Following is a performance by the four Chan daughters... the three older ones are playing the instruments while Zhi Hua dances and paints four paintings simultaneously. Everyone is impressed by her talents, and the final product of her paintings are unbelievablye professionally done (really fake...you know she didn't do it )

    LFY is now whole-heartedly fond of this girl and walks to her praising her skills. Ching Er then says that it looks like LFY has found someone she is more fond of now then her. LFY laughs and says CE is jealous??...but not to worry for they are her hands (just like ZW and XYZ are QL's hands)

    Zhi Hua then says her skills are nothing compared to Huan Zhu Ge Ge and asks for a demonstrations. XYZ burns up and is ready to go do it, but is stopped by Zi Wei....

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    Zhi Hua gives me the impression that she's faking her goodie-goodie attitude. Must have a reason why she's still not bethrothed! >.<
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    argh! so mad...i finished writing Ep 5 and submitted it, but then something happened, and well, lost all of it. so now writing a new one....just had to let that at


    Episode 5

    XYZ sees Zhi Hua's words as a dare and accepts...but is pulled back by ZW. She says that instead of dancing and drawing, XYZ and YQ should perform their swordskills and paint at the same time. Meanwhile, Xiao Jian and ZW will play their instruments. Everyone agrees and XYZ and YQ begins...after a while, YQ makes a move to paint, by using the tip of his sword to get the brush and draw. XYZ decides to help finish his drawing of "sky" by painting the "ground". Everyone makes painful facial expressions... next XYZ helps out again, but YQ stops her. She uses her sword to stop him but it ends up flying towards the Chan sisters (no one is hurt). She then goes to get more paint for knocks the servants over the table, and paint is splattered all over the third scroll. Everyone is too shocked to utter any words. XYZ makes a move for the last scroll, but steps on a brush and starts sliding. YQ catches her in time, but she has made a vertical line down the paper already.

    ZW and EK then goes to correct the mess by adding poetry to each of the scrolls. Everyone is impressed by the results and applauds.

    ..................................

    YQ arrives at LFY's room, with QL, Ling Fei, Huang Hua present. Ching Er shakes her head, hinting that it is not good. YQ worries that it was about the paint incidents earlier, but LFY says it's about his opinion of Zhi Hua as a wife. He says that he doesn't want to burden her, and LFY asks Ling Fei if she has been burdened. LF says no. YQ then says he is more worried that XYZ is burdened, but LFY again stops him by asking Huang Hua is she is burdened. "No." YQ then looks to QL for assistance, who says that it is better to not rush into this things until they get back to Beijing and that XYZ has really improved. YQ tries adding words, but is stopped by LFY.

    Ching Er then brings up a story to help out as well, but LFY tells everyone to not say another word. She then looks up at Ching Er's tears and goes to grasp her hand, saying that she is more important than Zhi Hua or any one else, and that she hopes Ching Er will not disappoint her.

    ........................

    YQ goes back to his room furious, but softens up as he sees XYZ practicing her drawing skills. She tells him that she has to do all that it takes to be equal to Zhi Hua. YQ replied that everyone have their difference and that she is already great. He also tells her she has paint on her face. XYZ tries rubbing it out but ends up having a bigger spot, and she laughs saying it looks like a lion.

    Ching Er then enters giving XYZ a letter for Xiao Jian, and says that he should forget about their being together. she then leaves with tears in her eyes.

    ...........................................

    Xiao Jian reads the letter and is upset. He then tries to leave but EK and the others stop him, saying that they will be here for him, as he had for them in the past.

    He then gives them the letter to see for themselves, and YQ tells them that it must have something to do w/ LFY earlier. Xiao Jian is reassured that he will get a chance to straighten things out with Ching Er as they reach their next destination

    ...................................

    The next day, all the stuff is packed, and everyone is ready to be on their way. Zhi Hua accompanies LFY to her carriage, and tells her that she has made a special dish just for LFY to enjoy (and no one else).

    As Ching Er enters her carriage, Xiao Jian looks at her. EK tells him to be patient...

    ......................................

    Their next destination is Hong Chau, a beautiful city by a large lake. As everyone boards their boats, for the next week or so, EK and his dad gives orders to the magistrate from that region to have the entire place secure with guards. They must make it safe and not have a repeat incident of FSC.

    Later that night, the court men from that region are with QL to welcome him to their city. )Its not everyday you see a king you know), thus they have food, music and dancers. QL is impressed by dancers dressed in Indian styled garments and asks EK's dad where Yong Qi and EK are...that they should also be enjoying this... He replies that they are all accompanying LFY...and so QL decides to not summon them. The host then tells him that these dancers are still not what Hong Chau is most well known. He informs QL that there is a maiden here named Xia Ying Ying who is the most beautiful woman in the region, but she didn't want to come tonight. This intrigues QL..

    ..................................

    Meanwhile on LFY's boat, Ling Fei and Ching Er are with her eating, and LFY is curious about all the commotions going on in QL's boat. Ling Fei tells her that the men who work for the kingdom don't get to see the emperor often, so they must take this time to spend with him. LFY then commends Ling Fei for knowing QL so well, and that it is not wonder she has been a favorite of his for so many years.

    Just then, the servants announce the arrival of Huan Zhu Ge Ge, Ching ER rushes out to greet her. XYZ then greets LFY and Ling Fei. LFY asks where the others are, and XYZ tells her that everyone is playing riddles and that she is outsmarted by the others...that's why she is here to ask for LFY's permission to let Ching Er go help her out. LFY then tells them that good thing XYZ and ZW were able to find husbands, but Ching Er is still single, and its highly inappropriate for her to be with them...hinting at her dislike for Xiao Jian.

    Ching Er then decides to not go, and as XYZ says goodbye, the two of them goes outside. XYZ then hands Ching Er a note, saying to meet them later tonight...

    ...................................

    After the coast is clear, Ching Er sneaks off to meet the others in a small boat with a straw hut. Xiao Jian and Yong Qi helps her on board, and EK starts rowing. Then all of them gather inside and as Ching Er and XJ are reunited, the others began lighting dozens of candles...revealing a romantic dinner for two. Ching Er is touched by all of this and ZW holds her hand telling her to be strong for love and that XJ and her will have their happy ending too.

    Soon the boat flows to another part of the huge lake....and the others depart...leaving the two lovers to talk and be together.
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    I agree with Guo Xiang. I feel like Zhi Hua is acting nice. *shrugs* But we could be wrong.

    I'm sorry Chungie. It's happened to me before. Did you know that you could either try pushing back button and submit again, or just click refresh? That usually works.

    Hehe, now I wanna know what happens next! update update!

    Haha...but when I read the episode guides, I still imagine AV. Like, it all of a sudden struck me that I was seeing Alec, Vicki, Ruby, and Zhou Jie's image, and I was like "no no, it's only Zhou Jie who's the same!"

    >.<

    It's really hard to imagine otherwise, hvaen't not seen the series.

    And it's even harder to imagine LEO as YQ.
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    *spoiler* don't expect ZhiHua to be nice - she have her evil claws behind that nice and innocent image.

    I must agree that Huang Yi did an excellent job in her fighting scenes. She can really fight and I bet she can take out that ZhiHua character in 1 second!

    I love my XZY - Huang YI dearly!!!!!

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    Originally posted by CrazyLilAngel

    Haha...but when I read the episode guides, I still imagine AV. Like, it all of a sudden struck me that I was seeing Alec, Vicki, Ruby, and Zhou Jie's image, and I was like "no no, it's only Zhou Jie who's the same!"

    >.<

    It's really hard to imagine otherwise, hvaen't not seen the series.

    And it's even harder to imagine LEO as YQ.
    Me too! The change of cast has totally dampened my mood. I don't think I will be watching it ever so I'm stuck here reading the episodes guide instead.
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    finished end to ep 5....

    Episode 6

    "Ching Er"....and the two hugged. Xiao Jian asks her about the letter, that she really wants for them to break it up? that she has chosen LFY? these past days, all he has been thinking about is her.

    Ching Er then says she doesn't have any solutions. LFY is like a god to her, there is no way that she can hurt her.

    The others rush up the stairs to a bridge that overlooks the entire place. They laugh and EK says that it is now up to Ching Er. YQ asks is the placed secured?. EK says that all the guards have been assigned to insure the safety of Huang A Ma and LFY... and that there shouldn't be any problem.

    Xiao Jian asks if she still has him in his heart? She tells him that would she be standing here if she didn't, that she will forever place him in her heart. XJ then tells her to runaway with him like Xiang Fei and Meng Dan.... since LFY will never approve of him. Ching Er asks whether the others suggested this, and XJ tells her that he just thought of it right now.

    Ching Er tells him to wait for a better way, that he should accept QL's offer, and that afterward, they can ask LFY again. XJ gets mad saying that she only wants someone with a high position and recognition...she tells him that she only wants happiness like Zi Wei and EK...
    XJ tells her that its impossible for him to accept the offer, and that if she wants to be a *** Chun, go marry a prince

    Hurted, Ching Er says she shouldn't have risked coming here, that it would have been better not to have seen and be hurt. and that she can't believe that he thinks of her as such a selfish person... She then calls for the others to take her back, but XJ grabs her hand, trying to keep her from going.

    The others notice the boat rocking and ZW wonders if they're fighting. XYZ says that its Ching Er they're talking about, and that they wouldn't fight, seeing as how its so difficult for them to meet.

    Ching Er pulls her hand away from XJ and loses her balance...but XJ rushes to hold her and the two kiss...

    All is happy, but EK notices a line of red lights quickly surrounding the entire area.... EK then sends ZW to the boat to tell XJ to take her and Ching Er to safety. the others will handle the guards...

    ................................

    The guards come up the bridge and asks who they are. and what are they doing at this time of night. YQ asks him who is their commanding officer, but the guard says that his name is not for them to call. EK tells them to lift the laterns higher to see who they are. The guards stubbornly refuses and say for them to come back withh them. The others tell them who they are, but the guards say that Ar Ge and Ge Ges would not be wearing such clothings and sneaking around in such a shabby boat.

    XYZ starts hitting them, saying no need to say more with them.... as the others fight, Xiao Jian runs across the water to help fight as well...EK tells him to go back to the boat and guard ZW and Ching Er. XJ replies that its better that none of them are injured and then they can go back to the boat together.

    Ching Er and ZW worries about having the guards spot the boat, and so they starts blowing all the candles out, but there are too many, and they knock each other over....Ching Er's leg is hurt, and the flames began burning everything in site. ZW helps Ching Er to the front of the boat. CE cries to XJ for help, saying that she doesn't know how to swim. ZW tells EK to hurry and save her as well.

    EK tries to tell the guard to stop fighting and that there are two Ge Ges in danger...but they don't listen.

    ZW then tells Ching Er that they have to jump or else it would be too late. Both of them jumps into the water just as the entire boat explodes. XYZ then pulls out her Golden Badge and everyone stops. They tell the guards to go and save ZW and CE now.... XJ and EK jumps into the river and soon the guards follow.

    XJ manages to find Ching Er unconscious and carries her out of the water..."Hurry and wake up Ching Er" they all cry out. YQ tells more guards to go help EK and ZW in the water. Moments later, Ching Er wakes up and she throws up all the water.

    EK then resurfaces w/ ZW, and the guards help bring them to shore. Now, everyone calls for ZW to wake up. EK tells the guards to bring dry clothes to cover her. Ching Er cries blaming herself. Seeing that calling her name isn't working, XJ suggests to pump the water out...EK then takes over as the guards watch. They order for a fire to be build quickly, and carries ZW next to it. Everyone is also rubbing various areas of her body for more body heat. EK then says Don Yi is calling for her..that she is needed by the two of them...ZW then wakes up

    EK tells her that he is scared to death of losing her...everyone is overjoyed, but Ching Er's face begans to pale, and she faints.

    Then EK's dad arrives with more guards asking what is going on...even Huang Shan has seen the explosion... EK says they have to go back to the boats first....

    ............................................

    ZW wakes up in bed w/ EK by her side, and she asks if Ching Er is ok. EK says she is with LFY right now. The others are being questioned by Huang A Ma. She wants to know more, but he tells her that she must finish her soup and medicine first and then he will tell her. Right now, she is the most important thing...

    ZW tells him that is is not only them, but that they now have Don Yi as well. She wants him to promise to love Don Yi if one day she...but is hushed by EK. They both agree that they will live till their hairs are white. She also reassures him that she is much stronger now since giving birth. EK then begans blowing spoonfuls of soup for her...

    .............................................

    QL is walking back and forth...XYZ is the first to open her mouth and tells him the entire story...then out of nowhere, she is able to say a four word phrase about the incident... QL doesn't seem too please, and XYZ apologizes, and says to forgive XJ and Ching Er.... and since things have already happened, to let Ching Er marry XJ. QL refuses... Xiao Jian then says that this is all his fault so if he wants to throw him in jail or kill him, its his choice...but if QL doesn't want to do either of that, then please let him and Ching Er go.

    Xiao Jian then says no matter what their decisions are, he will still take Ching Er away. QL says that even if Ching Er was a servant, XJ wouldn't have the power to take her away.... and that just because he is XYZ's brother doesn't mean he can do as he pleases. that he can be beheaded....

    XYZ intervenes saying that she has the Golden Badge and that will protect her brother... QL then tells her to give it back to him. XYZ refuses, saying things given can't be taken back. Ling Fei tells them to not say anymore.... trying to calm things down. YQ apologizes again, but QL tells them all to leave. XYZ hopes he will sleep well, but he says that w/ her around, that's impossible...

    ......................................

    Huang Hua and Yung Mama are w/ LFY taking care of Ching Er. They tell her to go rest and come back tomorrow, and wait until she gets well to ask her questions...LFY says Ching Er has disappointed her...

    CE then begans coughing, and Yung mama is ready to give her medicine, but CE sits up crying out "Xiao Jian" and knocks the bowl over, burning herself. LFY says that it will now be hard for her to find suitors if she continues acting this way...but Ching Er falls off the bed and bows her head, begging LFY to let her and XJ be together. LFY continues to oppose, saying that she doesn't know all about his background.

    Ching Er asks her to accept Xiao Jian like she did XYZ, but LFY says she accepted XYZ only bc of the circumstances... Ching Er then tells her that she is not only a god to her, but also her parent...being there for her all her life..

    Yung Mama then helps her up...and a Tai Yi is sent for.

    .................................


    XYZ and XJ asks YQ news about Ching Er....YQ says Yung mama and Huang Hua has just left. XJ wants to go see her but is stopped by YQ...saying that its highly impossible right now.

    XYZ thinks its HH and YMM's fault again...and rushes to their boat asking if they were the ones who told LFY....she tells them that they lied to her again saying that they would start anew eversince they saved their lives. YQ and XJ stops XYZ...

    Huang Hua and Yung mama says that they haven't involved themselve in other people's business eversince their lives were spared.... Yung Mama adds that even though they saw her and Ching Er that night at the Chan's residence, they kept it to themselves...

    YQ apologizes to Huang Hua, and tells them to rest... Yung Mama tells XJ that it is important to get LFY's approval or else Ching Er will be torn btw the two of them.

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    Episode 7

    Xiao Jian is extremely mad...YQ doesn't know why he won't accept QL's offer, but XJ says that he will never accept.. YQ says that isn't Ching Er so important to him, that he should accept the job...and it's not like QL wants to behead him. XJ angers up at this and says he doesn't want to be near such a king..YQ gets mad, but EK intervenes... ZW and XYZ rush to them, giving them news that Ching Er is in a really horrible state, and LFY is crying beside her. XJ then takes XYZ to go see something...and tells the others to not follow.
    .......................................

    XJ shows XYZ a temple that used to be their family's residence...and that he had promised himself never to go back to Hong Chau because of the pain. But because of her and Ching Er, he was willing to go. And that is why he really wants to take her back to Da Li....

    They enter one of the rooms, and inside is a altar with the names of their parents (and probably other relatives of theirs as well). XYZ walks around the entire room, taking everything in, and how their lives might have been in the past: where the table was, where their parents would teach them words, etc. She wants to know more about the past, but XJ avoids answering, saying he was too young to remember.

    XYZ then asks if they're going back to the boats now, but he tells her to say goodbye to Ching Er for him. He leaves, and she follows yelling at him.
    ...........................................

    XJ reach the stable and is about to leave, but EK, ZW and YQ happens to run there in time....and tries stopping him as well. He gets on the horse, but YQ then starts fighting with him...for Ching Er's sake. EK tries to intervene, as ZW runs off.... thunder clouds began appearing...

    Zi Wei arrives at LFY's boat, and rushes to tell Ching Er that XJ is trying to leave...the two rush out the door. LFY tells her not to go since its raining hard, but she doesn't listen. Ling Fei says she must let QL know

    Rain is pouring down hard, and XYZ cries for all of them to stop fighting....now both EK and YQ are fighting to stop XJ. They're at a standstill, and XJ then tells them to move or else he will use his sword. YQ says he can go only if he wins him, and XJ begins using his sword...he then gallops off as Ching Er arrives. she runs after him in the rain, and soon slips and fall down the side of a hill. She pleads for him to not go, that she has chosen him. He doesn't stop, and CE continues running, but falls again. This time, she begshim to take her w/ him, that she doesn't want her life anymore...he goes back for her

    Ching Er tells him that she takes back everything she had said before. Now she will follow him. He tells her she shouldn't be in the rain, w/ a fever and all. he then agrees to never part from her, and that he will go back. EK arrives in time, and help bring her back.

    ....................................

    Ching Er is in her bed, looking up at XJ as ZW and XYZ cool the soup. XYZ then thinks about the past events, and wonders if its time for another poem (that's all she has on her mind now)....
    They leave the two alone...he gives her some soup and then holds her hand, saying that he's sorry. She say she's the one who is sorry, that its her fault that he can't leave and can't stay...and that she truly will follow him. XJ then promises to accept the offer and be with her. He will also tell her about his past. She asks if he's telling her about a wife or something, but he says nothing like that. They then embrace...

    just then, LFY arrives...hearing that, the two part. XYZ and ZW accompany her into the room, saying that they brought Ching Er back to their room since her clothes were wet. Ching Er tries to bow her head again but falls off the bed. XJ wants to help but stops himself, as LFY glares at him. Ching Er apologizes and is brought back to the bed. LFY then says that she has accepted their being together, and that their marriage will be organized once they get back to the palace. Everyone is happy, and they thank her for agreeing.

    ........................................

    Everyone is in QL's boat, and he's lecturing them..saying that they should not cause anymore trouble and no one is allowed to runaway. and that once they get back to Beijing, XJ and CE will get married...as for XJ's background, he still doesn't know...but will talk more after they return.

    XYZ then says Huang a ma is the greatest this and that....and that everything bad is theirs, while all the good qualities are his. but then say that they also have great qualities as well like loves their friends the most, etc.
    ...........................................

    Later that evening, EK and ZW are standing in front of their boat, talking about how much they've overcome once again...and that all is fine now. They take in the beautiful scenery and said that if everything was as it is right now, then it would be perfect. ZW asks what his heart is thinking about right now, and he says for both of them to say it together...."Don Yi"...ZW is overjoyed that EK loves Don Yi as much as she does...he says "of course, he's my son. I keep thinking about him...has he gotten bigger, fatter, sleeping well..etc"

    Then music starts...a lovely voice is heard singing..gradually getting clearer and louder, as a mysterious boat appears...they wonder where it came from. Inside is Xia Ying Ying singing "Zi Jun Bie Hou" as her girlfriends play the instruments.... QL also hears this, and stops the dancers..saying that he wants to hear where the sweet melody is coming from...EK's dad gets mad that a boat can come in this area, but QL stops him...the song continues, and QL wants to know where its coming from.

    The leading officer Man Tai Yan says its Xia Ying Ying....and is ready to tell them to leave, but QL tells Fu Lun to go invite her over. HE then says if they're not willing to come over, then he will go to them

    ZW begins to worry while EK says its nice, but still not as good as Zi Wei's singing. ZW and EK is about to go check it out, but sees his dad going on the boat.

    Ying Ying arrives on QL's boat and apologizes that the music has disturbed him. She is asked to look up, and QL is amazed at her beauty and more so that she resembles Xia Yi Hau (ZW's mom). They then asks her to sing a song for Huang Shan. He asks if she will sing that song to him again, but she says she doesn't want to. She tells him that the environment is different and so the music can't be the same.....everyone else is sent away. Ying Ying is about to leave, but QL asks her to stay. She tell him that she is spending time w/ her 'sisters' tonight. QL then invites them over here as well.

    She then agrees to sing a different song ( Xiao Qiao Liu Shui) for him, written after she had a dream.

    Just as she is about to finish, one of the strings break....QL grabs her hand and says that she's not Ying Ying, but Yi Hau. ZW is extremely worry about the string breaking as well. EK tells her to not bother Huang A Ma...since the xiang fei incident....but ZW asks if he believes Ghost spirits roam this earth...that her mom heard QL's words at the grave....

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