whew!!!!!!!!!! what a story........... **** good one.
when Are you going to continue the story soon??
I'll tell you guys a secret!!! Yesterday I dreamt the whole story!!!...........oh well a part of it..........hehehe
wouldn't it be great if someone made a movie out of it?? or maybe animated it???
Goofy!! you have a great writing skill.
Can't wait for the next chapter