thank u all for ur support and comments <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
CrazyT, great observation. thats my own critique as well. I guess it is because I model some of the characters in the story from people I know. That's the only way for me to dig deep into their psyche. But u r right, the convo is rather modern. I guess it is a wuxia tale with a "modernish" twist <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0">
kinda like those TVB ancient series made in the 90s that are influenced by modern stuff (like Journey to the West for example). But I think I'm going to keep the characters that way...So some people can relate to the characters since they never lived in the ancient ages. i'll see where approach brings me <IMG SRC="smilies/smile.gif" border="0">
<font size="1">[ June 08, 2003: Message edited by: Ganryu ]</font>