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    Hello, i just felt like writing something. I hope it can interest you. If you read it, please leave a short message so i know. THanks.

    It was a very fine morning in LILI elementery school. The sun was shining out high in the sky and the clouds seemed to be transparent. The 1st graders were playing heartily in the school yard.
    "Look overthere," pointed Mei towards outside the fence. "That's the new kid in our class. He never talks and only came to school on the first day. Do you remember?"
    "Why is he so depressed?" asked Zou.
    "Who knows," said Mei walking away.
    "Time to go inside." Ms. Wong yelled to everyone.
    Zou took one last look at the new kid. His depression seemed to fill her heart. She really wished that she could help him in some way, make him happy. She started walking slowly towards the building.

    The next day, Zou saw him again in the same place. Watching the gloomy shadow of his back, she couldn't stand it anymore. Walking towards him, she simply scooped up the front of his shirt and said, "You're coming with me," as she dragged him to the teacher.
    "Teacher," she said, "I brought him to the class."
    All he did was look at her with no expression in his eyes.
    Many days passed. The same thing happened every morning. Zou would always pick up him in front of the fence and drag him to school. They never talked and didn't know anything about each other. One day, Zou, again went to pick him up. She saw him crying.
    "Why are you crying," she asked. "WHy are you always like this. Don't you want to make friends? Don't you want to be happy."
    "I have no friends. I'm an unwanted child. That's what my mother told me."
    "Nonsense, nobody's unwanted. Everybody has a friend. You know what, i'll be your friend. I'll never let you be lonely again. I will always be by your side. If you have anything to say, you can say it to me. First, tell me your name."
    He looked at her. The words "no thank you," almost came out but as he looked into her friendly eyes, he couldn't stand the temptation.
    THinking to himself, "Can I? Can i really have a friend?" Then he lifted up his head and simply said, "Liu Lei"
    She smiled.
    A month passed. Lei turned into the exact opposite of what he was before. He made friends with everybody and came to school everyday. Zou kept her promise and became his best friend. Even though they both had other friends, they were the most important to each other. To them, he alwasy had her and she always had him and no matter what happens, none of them would be alone. One day, after watching a happy couple get married on TV, Lei said, "When i grow up, I'm going to marry Zou."
    "Okay." she said.
    Even though it was only one sentence, it stayed in Zou's heart for 9 years.

    "Li Zou! Li Zou!" the teacher screamed angrily. "How many times to i have to tell you not to daydream in class? Read the next paragraph."
    "Yes sir." Zou started reading, but her mind was still drifting far away in her childhood memories. She is already 16 years old and parted with Lei for 9 years after he moved away, but still, she rememebers that today is his 16th birthday.

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    Will Lei keep his promise? Update soon.

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    Hi, coming to chapter two. hope you're enjoy it.

    "Still Daydreaming?" asked Mei. "You better focus yourself more on education."
    "I know, i know," Zou replied hastily. "It's not my fault. I hate math."
    "See ya." said Mei.
    Zou continued walking. Suddenly, someone bumped into her.
    "I'm so sorry. Are you ok?" he apoligized and helped her up.
    "I'm all right," she said as she got up. She took one look at that guy and froze.
    "Lei?"
    "Huh? You know my name?"
    She hesitated for a second. "My name is Zou."
    "Oh, a, hi. Nice to meet you. How did you know my name? Have we met before?"
    (Smiling) "No, i saw it on your paper. Liu Lei, right? Nice grade of yours. Looks like you're pretty smart. Bye. Nice to meet you too." Finished talking, Zou quickly ran away. She couldn't make out her feelings in that moment. "Well, it was just a silly talk anyway. How could i be that stupid." (giggle)
    During lunch time, Zou had no appetite.
    "What's the matter?" asked mei. "You don't look right."
    "Ah, it's nothing."
    "Oh, you know right... the thing about Lei. So are you very excited?"
    "Lei?"
    "Yah." Mei said as she twirled a strand of her long hair. "He was in my Social Studies class. I almost couldn't recongnize him. He changed so much. And he's so cute too. You mean you didn't know."
    Not answering the question, Zou asked, "Did he recongize you?"
    "Doesn't seem like it. I didn't even talk to him yet. He seems like a whole different person. It's hard to believe that he's the one that was sitting in a little corner crying out of school. If it weren't for you, he'd still be like that. He must be very happy to see you."
    "Nah, all he needed was a friend. Anybody could have been that to him. And no, he didn't even recongnize me."
    "Oh, a... are you ok. For the last, how many years? You've been..."
    "Of course i'm ok. I have such a good friend like you." Zou went around and gave Mei an exaggerated hug. "Who needs Liu Lei or was it Zhou Lei or whatever. I have such a good friend like you already."
    "Do you want me to..."
    "No, no... you're taking it way too seriously. I'm all right." With that, Zou ran away. She was afraid that her tears would come out.
    "Stupid Lei!" she cried out as she banged the wall. "Does he have memory loss or something or does he... or is it that... i really mean nothing to him?" She slid down against the wall and started to cry.
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    the story is getting interesting, update soon!!!

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    Poor Zou, I hope Lei will remember her. Please update soon.

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    Zou was happy to see that Lei was also in her SCience class. She was even happier to know that the teacher appointed her to show him around since he sat right next to her. AFter their last class, Zou and lei began their tour around the school.
    "And this is the balcony." You can come here on your free periods. It's very quiet and refreshing."
    "Thank you."
    "Are you new around here."
    "Not really, i used to be here when i was in 1st grade but i moved when i was only a little older so i don't have that many memories about here."
    "Did you have any friends?"
    "Well, at first i didn't but then... ya... i had friends, not too many but i was very satisified with them, especially this girl... she's the one that helped me out of my sorrows... but... i seemed to have forgotten her name." he rubbed the back of his head as if trying to remember something."
    "It's zou you idiot!" Zou was thinking to herself. She barely said it out loud. She calmed herself down adn said, "If you saw her again, do you think that you would be able to recongnize her?"
    "No, not really, after all so many years passed. Even if i still remember what her face looked like then, i can't tell how she grew up to look like, right. i don't think that she would remember me either. Ah, life is just like that. Many people walk in and out of your life, but life has to go on."
    "I know that saying too, except... it goes like this 'Many people walk in and out of your life, but only friends leave footprints."
    He looked at her for a second and thought she looked a bit familiar, but he didn't catch on to that trail of thought. "You... seem to treasure friendship a lot right?"
    "Yeah, as long as someone was my friend, i would never forget and would remember them forever."
    "Oh well, then you should remember me forever too." Looking at her, "I am considered your friend, right." He gently tilted up her chin with his finger and looked deeply and playfully into her eyes.
    She blushed, "Uh, well, of course." She turned her head quickly to get out of his sight.(THinking) "my goodness, is this really the same person? Lei can be as outgoing as that? MEeting someone and saying that that person should remember him forever. He sure changed a lot, at least he's not the lei that i know. He turned into a real player." SHe looked at that face of his while he was looking down the balcony again. Yes, she could recongnize that face anywhere even if it had grown 9 years older. The whole expression of his face changed him too. THat face of his no longer has sadness lurking behind. It was so sunny, like the bright sun and playful."

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    That player Lei <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0">, look like he won't keep his promise even if he remember Zou. I feel so sorry for Zou, that promise stay in her heart for 9 years <IMG SRC="smilies/frown.gif" border="0">

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    "SO, what about it." he asked. "I really want to be your friend."
    "WHy?" She blurted out. "BEcause you think it's funny, right? Having fun? I thought that you were... you so disappoint me."
    "You... what's the matter with you... why are you so angry as if someone really important to is... yeah, i'm a player but i don't know you, no i mean i want to but dont yet. WHy are you so angry?"
    "Can you please tell me why you're like this? You weren't like this before."
    "Huh? Before?"
    "Yeah... i'm a little physic or at least i can tell personalities of people. If i'm not mistakened, you should be the type that is very, very, and i mean very miserable before but turned a little better later on because of the girl you were talking about. You shouldn't be like this."
    "well then i happy to say that you did guess my past very logically. Yeah, i wasn't like his before. So? Nothing in this world is defenite. Anything can change. Say that girl, yeah, she was my friend, but... after i moved, she didn't even call me once. I did give her my phone number but she didn't bother to call even once. I hate her. She gave me light and then left me all alone in the dark again. I still remember that fake smile of hers and those fake words of hers like 'It doesn't matter where you are, i'll alwasy be by your side.' It sounds nice, but its fake. Out of sight, out of mind. I so believe this saying. OR probably she was just playing with me in the beginning. IF she could play, so could i."
    Zou shivered. "I, I... don't believe that that girl would forget you. I believe that to her... the saying should be Absence makes the heart grow founder. She must really miss you too. ANd plus, i don't think that you have the right to criticize her. You don't even remember her name and..."
    "Zou, it's Li Zou ok! HAppy?"
    "WHy did you say..."
    "Cause that's your name and i feel... i don't know... i don't want any misunderstandings between us like you thinking that i'm a little player making up a heartouching little story with your name in it or something and... you look so much like her. You make me want to... you resemble her so much except..."
    "Except what?"
    "except that you're defenitely not as pretty as her, you're not as gentle as her either (even though she could be rough too),and..."
    "I sorry!!! I'm sooooo sorry that i'm so worthless compared to that Zou of yours!!!"
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    Oh, very interesting. Now I don't hate him anymore but feel sorry for him. Wonder what will happen next. Update soon.

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    "I'm sorry. I'm not trying to be offending or anything. It's just that no one is better than her. I mean no one. Everybody likes her and wants to be friends with her. She's just too great. Maybe that's why she forgot me."
    "You... like her?"
    "Excuse me, are you a little too slow over here?" he pointed at his head. "I've tried to overcome my sorrow of parting with her for so long. I've tried so hard. So hard that i changed myself. If she sees me like a player now, she would probably belittle me."
    "You said you gave her your phone number?"
    "I gave it to her friend called... well i don't know. It's her second best friend besides me if she was really serious with me."
    "Would you please stop talking in that tone." (thinking) "is he talking about MEi?"
    "You're lonely without her right?"
    "...."
    "WEll then... then... then... GO OUT WITH ME."
    "WHAT?"
    "I don't mean exactly that but i'm just saying that i could be zou... i don't me take zou's place but you said that i look like her, have the same name..." WIth that she stopped. (thinking) "So, is it a coincidence that i'm so like her, even same name and identity. Who's the one that's slow over here." She continued, "I could be you're friend, teach you how to have fun, etc, etc and maybe... maybe one day... you might think that i'm as good as your zou.
    WIth that, she ran away.

    The next day
    "WHAT?" MEi exclaimed, "He said all of that but you didn't say that you're the zou he's looking for? ARe you stupid or..."
    "Calm down, calm down..." ZOu looked carefully at mei for one second. According to lei, she was the one that didn't give her hte phone number and supposedly still forgot after such a long period of time, but MEi wouldn't do such a thing like that.
    "What are you looking for?"
    "Ah, nothing. FIne, i'll tell you. I didn't tell Lei who i was becasue... because... i don't know how to say it. He doen't even notice or seem to care about the me now. Maybe the only reason he would look at me is becasue i look somewhat like how i looked in 1st grade. According to him, i've grown ugilier. THat's not hte point. I've changed so much over the years.I just want to say that i want him to love the me now, not the me 9years ago. do you understand?"
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    Please update soon, this story is very good.

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    In the next few days, Zou and lei could always be seen together. Zou wasn't sure exactly about their relationship, but to the whole school, they were known as boyfriend and girlfriend.
    "Zou, do you want to go to my house?"
    "Ok"
    Zou was really excited. The last time she went 9 years ago, she rememeber that Lei's house was very large and elegant... and cold, both phsically and emotionally. She could almost understand why lei was alwasy so aloof and paranoid. Living in such a big house with only servants and no one else cold make someone go crazy. <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0">
    Now, she was there again.
    "Is there anyone else?"
    "Yeh, my mother comes back twice a week and sometimes, my father comes hom once every few months. Nice, huh? so free and independent."
    "That's not what you want."
    "Huh, what else do i need. I'm rich, i have all these people to do stuff for me, i get money whenever i want, i'm popular in school, my parents don't restrict me from doing what i want... I don't need them. They don't care about me, i don't care about them either. WHat else do i need."
    "No, no, that's not what you want. you love them, and you wish that they would love you too."
    "Stop trying to be like Zou!!!Don't try to act like you know me. I hate people who do that. Only Zou understands. No one else. If you want to stay near me, i warn you, don't try to represent zou in front of me. She is the most important person in my heart. No one can be better than her."
    "Zou is that important to you?"
    "..."
    "How important?"
    "SInce the day i got in contact with her, since the day she said she would be my friend... i was thinking, i would live for her... she is the most important to me... if, if... if... by any chance... she would need me, she would also feel that my presence is important... i could live on with my life... if it means a lot to her... if it could help her. That's the thought that has been supporting me to go on with life for 9 years. My parents don't care about me. I don't have real friends. Zou is the only psycological dependence that i have, even though it's not that likely that i would ever see her again... Huh, why are you crying?"
    "oh, nothing. I think i have to go now."
    Zou hastily ran away
    (Thinking) "Oh, what should i do? I've changed so much, the way i talk, the way i think is not the Zou 9 years ago anymore. I'm not as strong or helpful anymore. As i grew older, i've become more quiet and less popular, less helpful to others. Supporting others? i need other's to support me!!! I've become so helpless and worryful. I'm not the zou anymore. I told mei that i wanted Lei to love the me now, but actually... i just want lei to have the memories of the Zou 9 years ago untouched and perfect. I don't want to break my reputation in his heart. I could see... the me now doesn't attract him at all. He probably only would look at me because i still have my looks. If i met him like this 9 years ago, i wouldn't mean a thing to him. I still wish that he could love me now... but i want him to always think that the zou he knows is the one that he imagines and likes. never mind. He only likes the before me. He would never like the me now. In a few more years, he would meet another girl that is nice enough to make him even forget the zou before and give him happiness and support but for now... i'll just support him, as a friend."

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    Aaw, what will Lei do if he find out that the Zou now is the Zou in the past that he love? Update soon.

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    "Hello." Lei greeted Zou with a warm smile. "Uh... sorry about what i said to you yesterday."
    "It was nothing. I've thought about it. Why don't we just be... friends. Friends are the most important things in the world. Don't you think so?"
    A memory flashed throught Lei's head.
    (Back to 9 years ago)
    "Don't worry," said Zou. "IT won't hurt anymore tommorrow. I bet your parents aren't hitting you becasue they don't love you. CHeer up. You have me and the other classmates." Friends are the most important things in the world."
    "Hello! Hello!!!!"
    "Uh... What did you say?"
    "Uh nothing. Oh, there's Xi Men."
    "Whose that?"
    "Oh. He's very popular in this school and he has many qualities like... he is # 1 in sports, he's a patriot (this is the term i use with my friends when we talk about ... so i also use it here.), oh, and he's good in singing, dancing, playing hte guitar, and he get's all A's, he's rich and socially prominent..."
    "Are you finished? Humph. Girls! ARe you stalking him or what. It looks like you know him from head to toe."
    "I don't stalk people. My friend Mei likes to though and she shares her information with me. That's how i know. Huh, there's only one bad thing about Xi men though. He's an absolute player. He changes girlfriends every week. Mei was once his girlfriend."
    "She got dumped?"
    "No, she dumped him on the 6th day to protect her pride. She was the 1st girl to be so smart and honorable. All the other stupid girls just hope to god that a miracle would come."
    "HI!!" Xi men came and put an arm around Zou.
    "I seen you before. You're Zou right. Mei talked about you before. I'm lonely tonight so do you want to go out with me. To the movies, cafe, karaoke, anything."
    "Uh..."
    "Ah, don't be so serious. It's just a game, a fun game. And, i've been stalking you these days and find you interesting."
    "OK." Zou was so surprised that she actually said that.
    Lei gave her a close to murderous look. For some reason, that really made Zou feel good.
    "Ok," Xi men continued "Tonight at 7 o'clock i'll go to your house...oh and, do you have a cell? Give me the number."
    "Yeah, but," zou was a little reluctant to give this stranger her cell number but seeing the look on lei's face gave her a very pleasant feeling. "It's 1354267." (note: i don't know how many #'s cells have.)
    "Ok, I put it on the automatic phone list. Oh, do you have a cell or beeper." He turned to Lei.
    "No, i don't want to be restricted to my freedom."
    "Ah, nice excuse. You're just not up-to-date. See ya Zou."
    Zou forced out a smile. "See you tonight."
    For some reason, Lei just felt that he wasn't in his best mood today.

    Later in the day.
    "Oh, it's you, the guy that was with zou."
    "Yeah."
    "So, what's up."
    "nothing." Lei looked at Xi men for a second. "Oh, uh... can i have a look at your cell."
    "Hah, you're envy me right. You don't have one. Ok, ok, I, Ximen never rejects anyone, especially girls, but i won't reject you either. Here," He took out his cell and did a graceful swing with his index finger. "You can look at it."
    Lei took over the cell and turned his back around. After a few seconds he turned around with a fake and playful smile on his face. "I'm so sorry Xi men. I accendentally deleted all your automatic phone number links. Oh, can you please forgive someone who knows nothing about cells and is so not up-to-date as me?"
    "OH MY GOD!!!!!!" Ximen screamed and half a hallway turned to look. "Zou's phone number. How am i gonna call her to find out her address. And there is BAi He's phone number, and Julia's, and Kathrines, and MEi's and Fei fei's, and Yi yun's and Ryu's. It took me 3 whole days to get that number from that adultlike and mature 27 year old lady. OH MY GOODNESS. My history... erased." He turns around to Lei "You..."
    "I'm sooooo sorry." he holds up the lollipop that he was eating and sticks it in Ximen's mouth. "My gift of apology." Then, he cooly walks away look back playfully many times.
    Ximen literally froze there for 3 minutes with the whole hallway of people staring at him. Then, as if suddenly awaken from a dream, he disgusted spat out Lei's lollipop and dramatically wiped his lips and sprayed breathcooler until he nearly choked to death.
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    Haha, go Lei <IMG SRC="smilies/biggrin.gif" border="0"> That player Xi Men <IMG SRC="smilies/angrystick.gif" border="0"> I hate players. Look like Lei was jealous. Update soon.

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    Lolz! <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh.gif" border="0"> What look did Lei have? A jealous one? ...Duh! I'm so slow. He just stuck a lollipop in Xi Men's mouth hilarious!!

    I just have the overwhelming urge to slap Lei, on the head for being so slow! But acutally that's the whole point right? Plus it's kinda funny when he just grabbed Xi Men's phone like that! <IMG SRC="smilies/laugh2.gif" border="0">

    Update soon! Sorry, I haven't commented earlier! I had to work on my sister's trigonometry project! (A bit of candy goes a long way!)

    Great story Amy Li! Do you have any stories at winglin? Can you leave me the url?
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    i don't have any other stories anywhere else besides this site. And, i have a question. Every time i join something, there's always a place to put your URL or homepage address. What homepage do they mean or what is that supposed to be. Sorry for asking a stupid question, but i really am bad with computers.
    Also, i've been writing a fanfic on Romance in the RAin. Hope you're like it. I'll look out for any of your fanfic's too. <IMG SRC="smilies/wink.gif" border="0">
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    It was nighttime and Zou was waiting impatiently at home for Ximen. It wasn't that she really cared about a date or not a date with him, it's just that she can't do anything while waiting for him. Finally, Ximen's car beeped outside her house and she went outside.
    "You're 1 hour late. "
    "I'm so sorry, it's all because of that Liu..." Ximen stoped himself. (Thinking) "THat really isn't such a honorable encounter. I should keep it a secret."
    "Because of Liu what." (Note: Zou is also a little slow in the mind.)
    "Uh, nothing. my privacy."
    "Where are we going." Zou really just wanted to go quickly aand go back even quicklier.
    "To the cafe. I've set up a candlelight for two dinner."
    Zou swallowed. "Candlelight for two?"
    In the restaurtant, zou really felt uneasy. She had never been in such a elegant and upclass restaurant.
    "Zou," Ximen began. "As i was saying before, i was stalking you these days. For some reason, the light seems to shine on you lately. You look beautiful at school and even more beautiful now. You're as elegant as an orchid that has just bloomed. Even think of you makes my heart warm."
    Zou listened carefully to what he said and was comprehending it slowly. "My goodness," she thought, "When i think of the words that come out of his mouth, i get cold. How could a person be so.... Uh. But... when he says it, for some reason, it sound pretty nice. And... puh, i really want to laugh. He looks so serious and innocent when he expresses his love to a girl. Maybe that's why so many girls, including Mei fall over his shoes."
    "So, my point is," Ximen said, (he had said more except Zou wasn't listening, though she was staring right at him.) "I like you."
    Even though Zou knew he was getting to that, she was really surprised. (Thinking) "OHMIGOD. this is the 1 st time someone proposed to me." She calmed down and said. "XImen, i... don't know how to say this to you, but, i can't accept your proposal. I..."
    "You like someone else?"
    "Yeah."
    "Who is it?"
    "Well," Zou closed her eyes and blurted out, "Well it's not you." She slowly opened her eyes a bit to see his expression.
    He did look pretty gloomy, so gloomy that she even felt sorry for this player.
    "Well, i think you know enough about me." Ximen smiled again. "My rule is, any girl that comes to me, i don't refuse, the most i could do is dump them a week later and any girl that i propose to and doesn't like me, i don't force either." He looked into her eyes and whispered, "I make them love me first."
    Zou quivered a second. She didn't know what that feeling was but it didn't feel right. She felt as if she couldn't move anymore and her body was as stiff as ice. She felt his fingers touch her neck and it felt like electricty to her but she couldn't move away.
    "You're really pretty. I mean it. I want you. No matter how long it takes to get your heart, i will get it. Even though i'll only enjoy it for 1 week. That's my rule for myself. Did you ever CHOU (sound effect for kiss) before? Nah, you're too pure. Let me be the first one to show you t he right way to do it." He slowly and gently tilted her head and pressed down his lips.
    Zou didn't know anything. Her body still felt stiff. she didn't know how to react or refuse to this. A tear dropped down.
    Ximen lifted his head and said, "I could tell that you're really unhappy about this. You're so strange. If you don't like it you could push me away. THat's how all my other girls do it."
    "WHy are you like this?" Zou screamed. "You're so strupid i feel sorry for you. WHat do you mean every girl is only for one week. What do you think girls are? Canned Food? You must have had at least almost a hundred girlfriends already. Is there not one that is worth MR. XImen to really love? did you like any of them?"
    "No," Ximen made a funny and sarcastic facial expression.
    "You're so like Lei when i first met him after 9 years."
    "Uhhum. please do not compare me with certain monstrous and heartless people."
    "Heartless, you're hte one thats heartless."
    "Oh really? Of course i have a heart and my heart is bigger than any other. That's why i can love so many."
    "But your big heart is divided into so many small pieces that the pieces are already microscopic."
    "Ok, why are you invading my privacy? Why do you care about the way i live? Why are you so nosy!" Ximen got angry for some reason.
    Zou thought for a second. Yeah, I've changed so much. These years, I only minded myself but since Lei came back, i fell myself changing back to the zou before. The zou that cared for everyone and wanted to help everyone.
    "Tell me. From my experience with certain people, people like you should have a tragic past. Am i honorable enough to listen to a story?"
    "It's not a story it's my life ok. And, i don't really know you. Why should i tell you?"
    "BEcause i want to help you. And... i think that mei still likes you. I'm gonna change you to a regular person and give you to mei as a birthday present."
    "What!!!" Ximen looked at Zou as if she were a clown. "Birthday present? please... uh... excuse me..." XImen turned around and pretend to cough but zou could hear bits of hiliarous laughters."
    "Hello!"
    Ximen finally turned around. "From where did you get such a stupid thought?" He choked on the drink that he was trying to calm himself down with.
    "Mei's birthday is next week."
    "Ah, a coincidence... i only keep girlfriends for one week."
    "so?"
    "you know what... since you want to wrap me up and give mei a birthday present, i have an idea. i'll give you a chance to change me. You can use any way that you want but under one condition... you have to be my girlfriend for 1 week. Forget about everything i said to you before about being like an orchid and everything. I say that to everyone. I'm interested in you and i want you to be by my side for one week and know me better. this way, i'm happy and you have a chance to show your wonderfull love for friends. Deal?"
    "Well," zou thought, "It's only a week. No harm can be done to me. And plus, lei wont care either. He'll probably feel free without me." "Alright" she said, "Deal." <IMG SRC="smilies/redface.gif" border="0">

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    Very interesting, hope Zou can change Xi Men into a good person. Update soon.

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    Yep, I hope Zou changes Xi Men too! For some reason, I wish Zou makes Lei jealous, he's way too calm and collected.

    My stories? You mean me? <IMG SRC="smilies/confused.gif" border="0"> I wrote one but I'm not sure I should post it here. I'm kinda embaressed about it...

    It's ok, I suck at computers too. I'm a cavewoman in technology. It took me three months to get a aol im. <IMG SRC="smilies/rolleyes.gif" border="0"> <IMG SRC="smilies/tongue.gif" border="0"> The homepage thing means like your own homepage. So you can advertise it, and stuff. Sorry if I'm not helping g2g I have to write a mystery story, about boats in the mid 20's! <IMG SRC="smilies/dizzy.gif" border="0">

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