Aftermath of HSDS2003

[wkeej]

First, let me congralute all of the writers here. i admire everyone.
second, let me apologize while i like to write, i am a very poor writer.
third, let me say that i deliberately decide to post here as it will give me some negative reinforcement to write.

any comments are most welcome.
i shall start with what i have written. my sincere apology if you have read it. thereafter i will start writing the second episode.

[wkeej]

The Mongols are defeated. The Ming fighters triumphed in happiness. However, a Mongol general stood up, fired an arrow in the direction of zwj. zzr saw it and dashed forward. she was shot and tumbled backwards a few times. yang xiao threw a dragger at the Mongol general whom fell to the ground.

Lying down on zwj's arms, zzr said, "with this arrow, whatever I owe you I think I have paid you back. before dying, can zhiruo ask you a question? Has wuji ge ge ever loved zhiruo before?"

Grief-stricken and with tears rolling down his cheeks, zwj answered with emotion, "got. got. got. please do not leave wuji. You can't leave me like that. We have not finished our wedding vows."

zzr smiled and fainted. wudang zsf arrived to treat zzr. zsf noted that as the poison in the arrow has penetrated zzr's all six internal organs, whether zzr survived will depend on how much she love zwj now.

zwj took good care of zzr, sponging her forehead very now and then. miracleously, zzr woke up in the middle of the night, held zwj's hand and asked whether what he said earlier was true. zwj held zzr's hand tightly and nodded his head. he added, "please rest. when you are fine, we will proceed with our wedding". zzr then asked zwj to rest too. zwj dozed off sitting on the grass.

the next morning, zwj was awaken by yang xiao. yang xiao remarked that he was not able to stop zzr and the other er-mei disciples from leaving. zzr also wanted yang xiao to pass a message to zwj - please do not chase after her. she has decided to be a nun.

zwj was shaken. bat king said, "leader, do not worry. with my qingong, i believe i will be able to find zzr soon". off he flew and followed by the others.

bat king located zzr and the disciples and stopped their path. he sent up a signal and soon zwj and the others arrived.

seeing zzr, zwj knelt down and begged her not to leave. zzr did not relent, adding that it's better for her not to get hurt again.

at this juncture, zsf and the others also knelt down. zzr knelt donw immediatley.
zsf said that being so old, he has only two regrets in life. One was the failure to save his favourite disciple cuishan. the second was his mistake to send zzr to er-mei and hence resulted in her much suffering. he hoped that he will never has a third. he then asked zzr to forgive zwj, noting that he does not want zwj to suffer the same fate as wuji's father and his favorite disciple zhang cuishan. he added that so long as he is alive, he will make sure zwj will not bully zzr.

tearfully, zzr said that she is forever grateful to zsf and has never blamed zsf for sending her to er-mei. she then held zsf up. zwj dashed forward and hug zzr tightly.

a wedding ceremony was soon held. fan yao jokingly asked where he stopped the previous time. yang xiao gave a knock on his head. after exchanging vows, zwj added that he and his wife have something to announce.

zwj noted that yang xiao will take over ming sect. zzr then added that since she is now married, he has to follow her husband. she hence appoint her da shi jie to be the next er-mei leader, gave her the manuals for the nine jing claws + dragon skills and advising her to practise the skills correctly. moreover, she has plans. the cheeky bat-king remarked, "to have little wuji n zhiruos is it?"
that night, zwj held zzr's hand tightly, promised that he will take good care of her and then consumated their wedding.

the next morning, zwj woke up and realized that zzr has disappeared again. zwj decided to retire from the pugilist world, in search of zzr. for days, he walked and walked, asking people about whether they have saw zzr. one night, he reached the tavern. looking inside, he was surprised to see zzr. he rushed forward, gave zzr a hug and remarked, "for two months, i have been looking for you. now that i have found you, i will not let you go again".

zwj took a look at the table and was startled when he saw two wine cups. then, zm appeared. zzr held zwj's hand and zm's hand and put them together. she remarked that, "anyway, both of you are actually one pair".

zm replied, "i do not know whether we or you are lucky. zhiruo jie jie and i have decided to go persia to bring back xiao chao. thereafter we will then go and find you. u are really a hopeless man, we always have to make decisions for you.
on hindsight though, it is good as there will be another pair of hands to look after wuji didi and zhiruo mei mei".

after some thinking, that useless zwj then realized that zm was talking about his offspring. he leaned forward and touched zzr's tummy. zzr nodded her head.

zm then added, "now we can only hope that our future offsprings will never be like you, always hurting people's hearts. for males, the best is to have xiao chao's character - always take good care of people. for females, she should have zhiruo's jie jie beauty." zzr said, "and zm's mei mei's adorable".

holding each girl's hand, zwj, zzr and zm left the tavern in search of xiao chao.

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The next day, zm brought zwj and zzr to the harbour. zm has already made arrangements to get the finest ship and 50 seamen to sail to Persia. All were set for the rescue mission to save XZ.

The first two days went fine. As the monsoon was strong, the ship moved swiftly. However, on the third day, zzr, who is two months pregnant, started vomitting. worrying for her health, zwj decided to check with zm whether they should turn the ship back to mainland.

overhearing the conversation, zzr was both happy and a bit - happy that her husband was concerned about her. because zwj has always been like that, asking zm for decision whatever he is in a dilemma. worse still, zzr is also jealous for afterall only she is the wife of zwj now.

seeing zzr in the background, the forever-smart zm shouted at zwj,"for such issues, you should consult your wife". thereafter, zm excused herself and went to the deck.

in his low sweet tone, zwj asked, "zhiruo, are you fine?". zzr gave a sigh and replied, "husband, thank you for your concern. zhiruo is only a little seasick. but not to worry, for zhiruo is the child of sea-faring parents. and zhiruo apologize to husband for causing you so much trouble". zwj used his left hand to touch zzr's tummy and said, "just hope that our child to be as pretty as her mum". zzr then leaned on zwj's shoulder. zwj put his right arm around zzr's waist.

a month has passed. then, one morning, the ship captain, "zm princess, persia is in sight".

zwj, zzr and zm disembarked from the ship. zwj said, "let's find a place to ...". before finishing his sentence, three mongolian merchants (who looked like good fighters) turned up, "princess, everything is ready". sitting in the horse carriage, zwj, zzr and zm reached a big well-guarded house. again, the wilful zm has everything planned out.

after taking their seats, zm shouted, "Report". One merchant stood out, "princess xz, leader of persia ming cult, is currently staying in the blue planet. her room is the third to the left of the main living hall. as this year is the one-hundred anniversary of the persia ming cult, there are many celebrations in the palace. the crowd will give us an advantage to sneak in to resuce princess xz".

zm replied, "good. how's about xz's mum?" the same merchant noted that jing hua por por is living in the first room behind the main living hall. and since coming back to persia, the persia king has separated mum and daughter. zwj sighed, "poor xz"

just then, a mongolian servant came in to inform that a persian general has arrived. zm remarked, "as expected, of course the persians learnt that we are here since we arrived in such a big grand ship".

the persian general bowed to zm and said, "your highness, our great o-mighty persian king will like to invite you and your friends to the blue palace tomorrow morning".

zm acknowledged, "sure, no problem".

the persian general left. zm then said, "this is even better. let's go and ask for xz direct tomorrow morning".

that night, after seeing zzr to bed, zwj decided to take a walk in the garden. he saw a masked person running out of the house and hence decided to give chase. exchanging a few blows, the masked person shouted, "stupid, it's me".

the masked person is zm in disguise. she has decided to recee the blue palace on her own.

reaching the place, both zwj and zm took up prone position against the roof. they noticed that one rm is specially heavily guarded. there are three guards - one is one of the three protectors and the other two guards look a bit strange - one is without a left leg and the other seems to be blind in the left eye.

zm whispered to zwj, "that should be xz's rm according to my scout. no choice - i will try to lure them away so that you can go and rescue xz if possible". zwj replied, "please be careful".

zm adjusted her mask and off she flew into the palace in the direction of the living rm. the protector saw her and gave chase. off they flew out of the palace.

zwj flew to the direction of the xz's rm and easily immobilize the other two guards. it seems that the guards are either very low in kung-fu or refuse to fight. pushing the door open, a voice, which is that of xz come out, "is that master?"

true enough, zwj and xz saw each other face-to-face. xz run forward and give zwj a tight hug, "i know. i know. i know one day master will come and find me ".

zwj replied, "xz, there is no time to waste. let's go".

xz said,"master, i can't leave. mum is still with them. if i leave, they will kill mum". just then, sounds are heard. the protector came back with the other two protectors. xz shouted, "master, leave quick. through this window". zwj did a somersault, gave a smile to xz, "xz, i will be back. wait for me". xz smiled back, "yes, my master. xz believe in you ".

outside the palace, zwj met zm and told her what happened. zm exclaimed, "what a filial daughter".

(crap to be continued, )

[letalforever]

heh amusing aftermath

[wkeej]

the next morning, zwj, zzr, zm and the three mongolian merchants reached the blue palace.

the three protectors were already at the gate to receive them.
reaching the main hall, the persian king sitting on a large throne exclaimed, "your highness, may i the 7th king of persia welcome you to the land of plentiful".
zm took a bow and replied, "thank you for your kindness, dear old king"

zwj saw xz sitting beside the king and went forward. taking only three steps, six men flew to the direction of zwj. the three mongolian merchants quickly surround their princess zm, giving her protection.
in his haste, zwj used the tai-chi kungfu to push one by one successfully. back to their line, zwj took a glance at them and realized that both of them were the guards yesterday's night. they are all strange-looking, each without a physical attribute - left eye, right eye, left arm, right arm, left leg and right leg. before long, all six attacked zwj again. their skills were very strange and zwj has no choice to use the tai-chi steps again. but this time, it was more difficult as all six are attacking zwj at the same time. zwj was hit a few times and forced to move back a few steps. seeing to their advtage, the six martial experts joined themselves into a human and started hitting zwj. blood is splitting from zwj's mouth. just then, a strong force of qi comes from the direction of zzr, two men fell to the ground. zzr has used her internal strength to break up the human frame. worrying for zzr, zwj ran back to her and asked, "are you ok?". zzr replied, "zhiruo is fine, my husband".

zm then shouted , "my dear persian friends, is this the way you treat your guests?"
the old persian king replied, "six devils, aplogize!!!".
the six devils all took a bow together.

at the same time, xz was taken back that zwj and zzr were married. moreover, she saw that zzr appears to be pregnant too.

the old persian king then added, "your highness, may i know your purpose of visiting persia? it can't be sightseeing right?"

zm noted laughingly, "on the contrary, my dear old king, you are spot-on. we are here for sightseeing."

old persian king said, "and travel all the way from dadu?" he laughed loudly.

after he stopped, the cunning zm started laughing and responded, "my dear old king, you are not only old but also smart". walking forward, only to be blocked by the three protectors this time, zm looked at xz (some form of eye-to-eye therapy) and added,"and to pay xz a visit".

old persian king continued, "only to visit holy maiden xz and no other purpose?" he laughed again.

zwj was about to speak but was stopped by zm. zm replied, "yes, as simple as that".

old persian king said,"holy maiden xz is doing very fine in persia. moreover, her mum is here too. let me organize a dinner tonight for all of you to welcome all of you and meet xz and her mum. but let me warn all of you, if you have any idea, i advise you not too". he started laughing loudly again.

old persian king added, "protector 1, please show the guests to their guestroom, and make preparations for dinner reception tonight. make sure that the guests are well-protected and well treated". hahahaha, the old king laughed again.

back to the guestroom, before zwj opened his mouth, zm said, "i know what you are going to say. why didn't we ask for xz direct right? use your brain. all our skills here is only equivalent to the three protectors at most. now with the six devils, how are we going to win? and didn't you notice there is another top martial expert behind the high chair of xz. he broke your beloved zzr's qi. if the fight continue, possibly we will become deadmeat".

zwj murmured and looked at zzr. zzr nodded her head. zm continued, "i know what you going to say next. let me tell you - i have no answers. now the only thing we do is you bring your beloved to one bedrm to rest. i do not want to be responsible for zhang's offspring. and wait and enjoy tonite's reception".

zwj look a bit annoyed. he is definitely surprised that zm is no more adorable and loving whom he is used too. he then escorted zzr to one bedroom.

zm took a look and sighed, "real hopeless man".


(crap will be continued, )

[wkeej]

All gathered at the reception. zwj saw jing hua por por the first time. he noticed that xz is separated from her mum with the king in the centre. interstingly, he also saw that xz's chair is extremely high. and true enough, there is a martial arts expert behind the chair, with an extremely strong qi.
(to be continued, ...)

[wkeej]

thinking of this ending:
(1) zzr decided to stay back in er-mei to raise her daughter
(2) zm returned back to mongolia as a pact to save her father and brother.
(3) zwj lost his memory after falling off the cliff in the fight with the great persian devil. xz decided to take care of him for the rest of the live.

(to fill in the details from episode 44-50 later. )

[starz_jing]

nice aftermath Looking forward to your future entries

[wkeej]

add in one part about xiao min.
(1) zzr decided to stay back in er-mei to raise her daughter.
(2) zm returned back to mongolia as a pact to save her father and brother.
(3) zwj lost his memory after falling off the cliff in the fight with the great persian devil. xz decided to take care of him for the rest of the live.
(4) zwj and zzr's daughter was named xiao min (in remembrance of xz and zm) by zzr. send xiao min to be trained under yang lady at the age of six. at the age of twelve, have learnt everything from yang jie jie. was sent to wudang. as xiao min is a mixture of xz and zm (that is a very caring cum adorable person), wudang is very fond of her and hence decided to change its tradition of not accepting female disciple. at the age of eighteen, learnt everything from wudang. defeated grand grand master zsf in a friendly duel. became a wandering heroine. went to mongolia to visit zm.
xiao min met zwj and xz when she is twenty. show ended when xiao min hugged zwj and call him "father". zwj seems to understand, with a tear falling from his cheek.

(to fill in the details from episode 44-50 later. )[/QUOTE]

[summersakura]

wow. San quan qi mei de ban fa *thumbs up*

[wkeej]

The Travelling Aventures of Xiao Min
at the age of eighteen, xiao min, daughter of zwj and zzr, had defeated zsf. xiao min is the disciple of yang lady in yellow and the first female student in wudang. zsf exclaimed, "well done, little girl". xiao min nodded her head and smiled back humbly. zsf continued, "however, your kungfu lacks one important aspect - speed. You have possessed great internal strength from the training under lady yang. You have the elegant Wudang sword-fighting skills. However, if you meet someone whose skills emphasise speed, you may not be able to defeat him. In the universe, the person with the highest level of skills in speed is the so-called Sweeper Monk in Shaolin. While he is dead now, he must have transferred his skills to the Shaolin disciples. Make a trip to Shaolin. At the same time, pay a visit to grand xie xun." xiao min nodded her head again. kneeling and bowing to zsf and all the wudang masters, xiao min said, "thanks for teaching me everything. xiao min will remember everything you taught in my heart". zsf said, "travel safe and be careful in journey. must remember to visit us again". xiao min nodded and started walking down the Wudang mountain.

Xiao min reached shaolin. Paying respect to the abbot, xiao min introduced herself as the daughter of zwj and zzr. Out of a sudden, the abbot knelt down. Consequently, all the shaolin disciples also knelt down. The abbot sobbed, “I will always remember your father for saving my life and others at the Fire Pagoda. At that time, I am only a little errand boy. But your father treated everyone to be equal and prepared to save all of us using his life. I have regretted all my life for all even saying a word of thanks to your father”.

Xiao min quickly took abbot’s hand and brought him up. The other disciples stood up accordingly. Xiao min added, “I will like to pay Grand Xie Xun a visit”. The abbot said, “Grand Xie Xun is in the mediation temple which is at the end of shaolin. You can visit him anyway with Old Uncle Sweeper Monk’s permission”. Xiao min thanked the abbot and bade the others goodbye.

Reaching mediation temple, xiao min felt a strong force of qi. Looking ahead, she saw an old monk of about 80 years old sweeping the floor. Xiao min greeted old monk politely and noted that she will like to pay Grand Xie Xun a visit. Sweeper monk gave a short laugh and said, “Anytime, provided you can defeat this broom”. Xiao min replied, “In that case, pardon me for my impoliteness”.

With her Wudang sword, xiao min flew towards Sweeper Monk. Combining the skills of the Seven Dipper which her grandfather Zhang Cuishan is well-versed, xiao min fought with old monk. Sweeper monk defended well with his broom. Xiao min realized that she is moving in circles, along the circumstance of the circle and sweeper monk was able to block all her sword fighting moves.

After some 30 sword-broom exchange, sweeper monk said, “I think it is now my time to attack”. Xiao min flew backwards. Reaching the ground, she used her right leg to form a circle and then divided the circle with a “S” sign, signifying the division of yin and yang, the tai-chi symbol – the skill she has learnt from great zsf. Like a tiger in prey, Sweeper monk ran forward swiftly. Xiao min stayed in position, using all parts of her body to block the broom. On the other hand, xiao min realized that her circle is getting smaller while sweeper monk’s circle formed by the broom is getting larger.

Xiao min is moving backwards. Almost reaching the exit of the mediation temple, xiao min took a forceful stance and said, “I think I am using to use my palms”. Forming the movement of the dragon on her right palm and phoenix on her left, xiao min threw the dragon-phoenix palm skill towards sweeper monk. Old monk quickly threw up his broom horizontally to block. There was a thunderous sound. The broom broke into two and everything became dust.

Sweeper monk gave a loud laugh, “What strength and skill. Looks like everything in life is impermanent. Even this 300 year-old broom is gone. Need to use a new broom”.

Xiao min apologized for destroying the broom. Sweeper monk said, “Looks like there is no winner today and hence you cannot see Xie Xun. Come back tomorrow. You can stay in the room outside the mediation temple for today. Xiao min thanked the sweeper monk, bade him good night and off she went away.

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The next morning, when xiao min woke up, breakfast was already outside her room door. After a fast bite and wash up, she went to the mediation centre again. Sweeper Monk was already there, sweeping the leaves. With every stroke, xiao min saw that hundreds of leaves ended up in the centre. Xiao min greeted sweeper monk. And sweeper monk replied, “Go back to the room, mediate till noon”. Without hesitation, xiao min did what was told. At noon-time, xiao min went back to mediation centre. Sweeper monk simply passed her a broom and said, “Sweep”. Mediate, sweep, mediate, sweep, mediate sweep … xiao min did this routine constantly for thirty days.

As the days passed, xiao min realized one thing – her area of sweep has become bigger and bigger. Initially, she is only able to sweep three/four leaves to the centre. But now with each sweep, she was able to gather hundreds of leaves to the centre. Her sweep was also swift and furious. On the 31st day, Sweeper Monk noted, “I can see that you are a very fast learner. What I have learnt in the last 30 years you learnt it in 30 days. The cornerstone of speed is swiftness with no escape. You have to be fast in your fighting strokes so that your opponent has no choice but to move backwards. Come, bring out your Wudang swordfighting skills and attack me again”.

Xiao min took a bow, drew out her Wudang sword, flew into the air and attack. With her constant mediation, she realized that her opponent is not Sweeper Monk. It is the broom. She knew that she has to use her sword to cover a circumference such that the broom has no place to move but backwards. Her strokes were swift and furious. Sweeper monk started moving backwards. With the final Seven Dipper stroke in her right hand and coupled with the phoenix movement from her left palm, Sweeper Monk was thrown backwards, opening the door of the mediation centre. Sweeper monk steadied himself in the centre of the mediation centre and exclaimed, “Excellent, excellent”. Xiao min took a bow and said, “Thanks for all the guidance”.

Behind sweeper monk is an old blind man. Xiao min immediately ran forward, knelt down and called, “Foster grand-father”.

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Xie xun was taken aback. For one thing, for more than 20 years, he has not heard a human voice. The only sound he hears every day is the sound of sweeping. For another thing, “foster grand-father” does not ring a bell in him. At the same time, sweeper monk left the place quietly.
Xie Xun replied, “You are?” Xiao min noted, “Daughter of zwj”. Xie Xun was shocked, “And mum is ..”. Xiao min responded, “zzr”. Xie Xun was even more shocked. Nevertheless he smiled and added, “At least my match-making was successful. Hahahaha. So how are dad and mum?” Xie Xun could hear xiao min crying softly. Xiao min has never seen his father since birth and mum since she was six years old. She has missed both of them greatly. Xie Xum understood, stood up, moved to xiao min, gave her a pat on her head and held her hand up. “Come little girl. Come come and tell me more”.

For the next three days, Xiao min stayed with Xie Xun. Xie Xun told her about the history of HSDS while Xiao min updated her life. On the fourth day, Xie Xun asked xiao min, “What are your plans?”. Xiao min replied, “I will like to visit dad, mum and teacher Lady Yang”. Xie Xun advised, “It’s not easy to go Persia. For the trip to be successful, you need very strong ships and sailors. In this universe, the Mongols are the best. You need to visit Auntie Princess ZM. On account of her friendship with your father, I believe she will help you”. Xiao min thanked xie xun for the advice. Xie xun added, “Go go, go and experience the world. But before you leave, remember this – What is in the past is in the past. Never never hate your mother. She has a very heavy burden at her time – because of her past, she has to answer to her three generations of ancestors to revive her tribe and kingdom. Forgive and forget – the world will be more harmonious”. Xiao min knelt down, bowed and said, “Thanks for all the teaching, Grand foster-father. Xiao min will remember everything you said in my heart. Xiao min hoped to visit grand foster-father again. Please take good care of your health”.

Xiao min opened the door of the mediation temple. Outside it is Sweeper Monk, doing what he has done in the past 70 years – sweeping the leaves. Xiao min took a deep bow and Sweeper Monk simply used his right hand to signal her to go.

Reaching the main hall, xiao min informed abbot her plans. Abbot asked xiao min to convey his regards to her father and hope that he will repay zwj’s kindness one day. Xiao min bowed and bade good-bye to Shaolin.

[wkeej]

It has been more than 1.5 years. Wondering if anyone will like to continue the adventures of xiao min to visit zm.

[blurry]

Just finish reading this. Nice aftermath pls continue

[wkeej]

Just finish reading this. Nice aftermath pls continue

Thank you. Mental writer's block over the years. Why not you continue ..