Dynasty love

What happen when a Mongolian princess love a Chinese warriors who want to overthrow her country? Dynasties love is a romance story during the Yuen dynasty, it about a princess who truly nice to Chinese people was kidnapped by a Chinese warrior who she fall for. How will the Mongolian princess handle her complicate between her lover and her people?

REVIEW:
Title:10/10
The title is a real attention catcher.

Creativity and originality: 10/10

Wow your story has so much originality.

The story does have some creativity.Good job^^. Writing Style:10/10

You'r writing style is diffrent from others.

And thats not a bad thing it's very good.

The Pace: 9/10

The story was long.But worth reading.so dont worry.^^

The Plot:10/10

Very good.It made me more interested in reading.

Grammars:8/10

I saw a quite a few errors.I think that threw out the story the biggest problem was the grammer.But it wasnt that bad.

Spelling:10/10

Wow your a very good speller.If their was a prize for best speller you would win first place.

Characters: 10/10

You had good cheracters,but Lok was a confusing it sounded like look.

Total: 78/80

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