And finally Yu Lianzhou is dead.
Now Black Faced Buddha can finally claim his prize...
But what skill is this prize? A prize stronger than 6MSJ...should we make it land in the hand of our heroes?
Hey PJ! We are out of sync!
You posted after my last post!
Major hole in the space time continum!
Its BIxie Jianfa Gawdammit you guys!!!!
Damn! CC and PJ posted near the same time...different fates for Black Faced Buddha...
resynching in progress...
忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」
don't worry, despite all the suspense, the buddha isn't really resurrected.
It will make more sense in my next update.
忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」
Ehh...PJ, the first part you posted shows him having joy...change that. What joy is there to have discovered a !@#$ of manual.
Uhh...damm...what happened to SPCNet for 2 hours?
BTW PJ...your part of the story is getting more out of sync...he didn't reach the Palace after killing YLZ? That doesn't make sense because he died after going to the palace. And if he reborned then he should be leaving from the palace and not going to the palace.
The great thing about my little-by-little contributions to the story, is that it leads you to the wrong path
There's always more than meets the eye.
忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」
I really hope so...
Okay here's what happened so far in CC's post:
BFB kill YLZ
He goes back to Palace
Gets the MA Manual
Finds out its BS and die
PJ's part:
Walking towards Palace in happiness
Meet someone that is a cripple
Explains that he got revived
And how does Eunuch Lin know he is revived and meets a cripple?
AHH I'M DYING!
Here is a sequence of what happened:
CC
1. Blacky killed Yu Lianzhou
PJ
2. Blacky sprinted back to the palace to get his prize
3. On the way, he was intercepted by 6 Heroes of Wudang (this is our fiction, so Zhang Cuishan and the others are still alive)
By the way, the cripple is Yu Daiyan.
4. Blacky is defeated by the Zhenwu Formation, but managed to escape and run back to the palace
(some of his scars that CC incorporated were actually from Zhenwu Formation)
CC
5. Blacky fire deviated and died.
(When he was handed the prize, he told Eunuch Lin about what happened above, so that's why Eunuch Lin knows)
PJ
6. Eunuch Lin told Blacky's story to the officials, hiding the part about how Blacky really died.
忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」
Ohh...so in the end he really did die? But the average reader won't know that if they don't read this post of yours. Could you and CC work it out and fix the sequence in the Story Thread? BTW, I liked how you put it. But in your first post (post81) you said Blacky wasn't injured during his mission but in CC's post he was. And what about the whole returning from the dead in post 82?
Last edited by Tom; 01-27-08 at 08:21 PM.
It will be clarified more LATER in the story.
I just chose not to reveal all of it in the story at this time.
But I wanted to make it clear in the discussion.
You're right. I'll fix that.But in your first post (post81) you said Blacky wasn't injured during his mission but in CC's post he was.
Strictly there to intensify the suspense.And what about the whole returning from the dead in post 82?
Note that I never did say that he got resurrected. I just wrote a bunch of "could it be?"s
Last edited by PJ; 01-27-08 at 09:32 PM.
忽见柳荫下两个小孩子在哀哀痛哭,瞧模样正是武敦儒、武修文兄弟。郭芙大声叫道:「喂,你们在干甚麽?」武 修文回头见是郭芙,哭道:「我们在哭,你不见麽?」
Thank you PJ. One last thing, maybe you should write "What happened before Black Faced Buddha's Death..." at the top of post 81 to 85 so not to confuse others.
And I'll post the aftermath of YLZ's death now...
The narrator sighed.
Just because it wasn't heard, doesn't mean it didn't happen!
Get me a better assistant next time.
( and not one that asks 100 questions about every trivial detail! )
Anyway, back to the story...
Now that PJ has well and truly broken the 4th wall, would members mind if I continue along this line? Or try to be more contemporary and serious?
Its BIxie Jianfa Gawdammit you guys!!!!