Originally Posted by
kaister
Make sense. I believe it and I agree with your sentiment. It could be much better.
Honestly, this story does seem more like draft than a complete story, like he has the rough outline of things but not the details. It seemed like he tried to write something at the beginning but just lost steam toward the latter half of the story.
I finally re-read the entire story and I'm trying to think what's my biggest problem with the story. I think it's the fact how little we know about the main character, Ma Rulong. He barely fights, no interesting background/history, no truly interesting relationship with anyone...nothing. Sure, I can fault how incomplete the plot is but really there's nothing that stands out.
I don't know. I mean it's not terrible but I'll recommend this only if people are bored or die-hard fans of Gu Long.