Snippet of my first wuxia fantasy novel

[luv4xia]

Hello Everyone,

*Note: Administrators, if this is posted in the wrong section, my humble apologies and I ask that you move it to the right place. Thank you.*

A happy and prosperous New Year to you all. I've been absent for a while because I've been working on my very first wuxia fantasy novel, my thesis for my MA Creative Writing degree. In an effort to thank all those who so readily answered my questions, I'm posting a snippet of the story. This is chapter one:
TNWChp1.doc

For anyone who cannot open the file, please let me know and I'll post it outright on the site. Feel free to post your feedback.

Michelle

[whiteskwirl]

Congrats and good luck with your MA and novel.

[charbydis]

Hiya! Good luck with your thesis!

The first chapter looks good. Things are sure moving quick! Meiying seems like a fiesty maiden. Looking forward to seeing what sword they are all fighting about.

I could open the document alright but some more spacing between paragraphs would make it easier to read. Why don't you actually copy an paste intoa thread in the fan-fic section?