Hi, everyone! I'm new to this forum. I'm going to write a story called Unexpected Enemies and I hope everyone will enjoy it. If you have any suggestions, please tell me.This story is basically about Gilbert whose mom was killed by his evil grandpa. He grew up in an orphanage and later he was kicked out off the orphanage. He was taken in by a cop and grew up to be one himself. His own father tried to kill him because of a misunderstanding. What happen next you have to read to find out.